2025屆高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)與測(cè)試專題五應(yīng)用文寫作第一講寫作高分技法

專題五應(yīng)用文寫作[研高考·辨考向]考試年份試卷名稱考查體裁考查類型題材內(nèi)容2024新高考全國卷Ⅰ電子郵件半開放類分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷全國甲卷發(fā)言稿圖表類中國交通的發(fā)展浙江卷1月投稿半開放類推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)2023新高考全國卷Ⅰ建議信半開放類對(duì)外教提出口語分組練習(xí)的建議全國甲卷投稿半開放類介紹中國歷史人物全國乙卷投稿半開放類分享假期學(xué)到的新技能浙江卷1月活動(dòng)報(bào)道半開放類認(rèn)識(shí)我們身邊的植物2022新高考全國卷Ⅰ邀請(qǐng)信半開放類邀請(qǐng)外教參加校廣播站英語節(jié)目訪談全國甲卷投稿半開放類闡述海洋的重要性并發(fā)出保護(hù)海洋的倡議全國乙卷投稿圖表類描述并評(píng)論學(xué)生英語學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)調(diào)查結(jié)果浙江卷6月邀請(qǐng)信半開放類邀請(qǐng)留學(xué)生同學(xué)一起體驗(yàn)圖書館“小組學(xué)習(xí)室”浙江卷1月電子郵件半開放類回憶文化節(jié)活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷[命題特點(diǎn)]?強(qiáng)調(diào)為了處理實(shí)際生活中的問題而寫作，設(shè)置更加貼近真實(shí)生活的交際場(chǎng)景；?注重慣用格式中體裁和話題的靈活對(duì)接，基于體裁，又能根據(jù)話題適當(dāng)展開要點(diǎn)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)；?提高開放性及靈活性，補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)需合乎情理和邏輯，達(dá)成有效交際。[命題形式]提綱要點(diǎn)式，半開放寫作。提綱要點(diǎn)式作文是近幾年高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作的熱點(diǎn)形式，通常把提綱作文與其他常用體裁(如書信、電子郵件、活動(dòng)報(bào)道、通知、演講等)有機(jī)結(jié)合在一起進(jìn)行考查。其特點(diǎn)如下：1．要點(diǎn)明確，范圍具體提綱作文就是把文章的情景和內(nèi)容要求切割成塊，以文本提示、要點(diǎn)提示和圖表提示三種形式呈現(xiàn)，寫作內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生的生活實(shí)際。如有標(biāo)題，則用標(biāo)題指定主題；如有開頭首句，則限定文章的起點(diǎn)及走向。2．寫作思路更加開放為了提高得分檔次，考生要在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全的同時(shí)補(bǔ)充合理的細(xì)節(jié)。該類型的應(yīng)用文寫作要求合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮，靈活地考查英語思維和語言運(yùn)用能力。[解題步驟]第一步審題審題是寫作的前提，是一篇寫作成功的關(guān)鍵所在。確保審題正確，才能保證得到基本分。審題要把握兩個(gè)立足點(diǎn)：體裁和話題。體裁決定寫作的文體、對(duì)象、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)和語氣，將功能性詞句與其適用的格式相結(jié)合；話題通過要點(diǎn)呈現(xiàn)，通過話題詞、語塊、語法結(jié)構(gòu)構(gòu)成完整、準(zhǔn)確、豐富、得體、連貫的語言，實(shí)現(xiàn)豐富的話題意義和生動(dòng)的情景呈現(xiàn)，形成文章的亮點(diǎn)。審題五要素審話題根據(jù)題目設(shè)置的情境，確定文章的中心內(nèi)容審體裁根據(jù)任務(wù)要求，確定文章的體裁，從而使用恰當(dāng)?shù)墓δ苄栽~句審格式根據(jù)任務(wù)要求，確定文章的格式審內(nèi)容根據(jù)題目中所給信息和具體要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行構(gòu)思，包括文字、表格或圖片提示；通過話題相關(guān)的表達(dá)確定文章的話題意義審語言根據(jù)題目設(shè)置的情境，確定文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)、人稱與合適的語氣等基本要素第二步構(gòu)思?三段式結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、清晰的行文邏輯是一篇優(yōu)秀作文的典型特征。確定體裁和話題之后，使用正確規(guī)范的句子，進(jìn)行清晰、合理、通順的表達(dá)，才是滿分作文的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)卷面篇幅及考場(chǎng)效率選擇最佳組合：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)?；趯忣}進(jìn)行謀篇布局，即每部分主要寫什么內(nèi)容，各個(gè)要點(diǎn)如何展開，需要增添哪些細(xì)節(jié)。?功能性詞句結(jié)合其適用格式根據(jù)寫作目的和對(duì)象，結(jié)合各類文體的基本篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，選擇合適的功能性詞句。有時(shí)應(yīng)用文的考查不局限于一種文體，要注意綜合構(gòu)思，靈活選擇。?話題表達(dá)展開要點(diǎn)根據(jù)寫作的主題語境及話題，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~句，尤其是課標(biāo)要求的各類主題語境下的意義表達(dá)詞句，精準(zhǔn)表述，傳遞信息，最終達(dá)成交際的目的。第三步寫作在篇章構(gòu)思的基礎(chǔ)上，組織語言，撰寫各部分內(nèi)容。首先要注意內(nèi)容與主題的密切統(tǒng)一，注重段間、句間的邏輯關(guān)系和語義關(guān)系，運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~匯，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文流暢。第一講寫作高分技法技法1錘詞煉句——精準(zhǔn)表達(dá)，亮點(diǎn)提分語言規(guī)范是滿分作文的特點(diǎn)?？忌跊]有錯(cuò)誤的基礎(chǔ)上，增添亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)。首先，要規(guī)范拼寫，規(guī)避簡(jiǎn)單錯(cuò)誤；其次，詞匯基礎(chǔ)要扎實(shí)，能夠靈活使用高級(jí)詞匯及語塊；再次，語法知識(shí)要系統(tǒng)，確保正確使用各種語法結(jié)構(gòu)。增分亮點(diǎn)1錘詞煉句，地道準(zhǔn)確1．精準(zhǔn)多樣的動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞分為及物動(dòng)詞和不及物動(dòng)詞。精準(zhǔn)的動(dòng)詞能夠有效勾畫交際場(chǎng)景，多樣化的動(dòng)詞能夠增加文章的生動(dòng)性，恰如其分地傳遞信息和態(tài)度。(普通表達(dá))Lastly,theemergenceofnewenergyvehicles,suchaselectriccars,hascausedreducingpollutionandpromotingsustainabledevelopment.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Lastly,theemergenceofnewenergyvehicles,suchaselectriccars,hascontributed/ledtoreducingpollutionandpromotingsustainabledevelopment.(2024·全國甲卷)(普通表達(dá))TheseadvancementsshowChina'sprogressincreatingamodern,efficient,andenvironmentallyfriendlytransportsystem.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))TheseadvancementshighlightChina'sprogressincreatingamodern,efficient,andenvironmentallyfriendlytransportsystem.(2024·全國甲卷)(普通表達(dá))TodayIwanttofocusonsomemajordevelopments,whichincludesharedbicycles,high-speedtrainsandnewenergyvehicles.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))TodayI'dliketoconcentrate/centreonsomemajordevelopments,whichincludesharedbicycles,high-speedtrainsandnewenergyvehicles.(2024·全國甲卷)2．充滿表達(dá)力的名詞靈活使用一些充滿表達(dá)力的名詞，包括抽象意義的名詞、常見動(dòng)詞的同根名詞形式或名詞詞組，能夠出眾脫俗，為文章增色，成為得分的亮點(diǎn)。(普通表達(dá))Thesunlightandthelightwindmadethewholescenecometolife.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Thesunlightandthegentlebreezemadethewholescenecometolife.(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)(普通表達(dá))KnownasaChinesewriterandpoliticianintheSongDynasty,FanZhongyanwashighlyappreciatedbecausehedidalotforsociety.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))KnownasaChinesewriterandpoliticianintheSongDynasty,FanZhongyanwashighlyappreciatedbecausehemadegreatcontributionstosociety.(2023·全國甲卷)3．豐富多彩的形容詞形容詞是用來描述人或者事物的特征、性質(zhì)、屬性或狀態(tài)的修飾性詞匯，最主要的功能是修飾或者限定名詞或代詞。形容詞的恰當(dāng)使用能夠?yàn)槲恼略錾?普通表達(dá))ItwassuchagoodexperiencethatIwouldalwaysrememberitinmymind.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Itwassuchanextraordinary/amemorableexperiencethatIwouldalwayskeepitinmymemory.(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)(普通表達(dá))Ichosetopaintalandscapefeaturingacalmlakesurroundedbylivelyflowersandthicktrees.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Ichosetopaintalandscapefeaturingacalmlakesurroundedbyvibrantflowersandthicktrees.(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)4．靈活多變的副詞副詞指在句中表示行為或狀態(tài)特征的詞匯，主要用來作狀語，修飾動(dòng)詞、形容詞、其他副詞或句子。副詞的恰當(dāng)使用能夠提高得分的檔次。(普通表達(dá))Firstly,sharedbicycleshavebecomeapopularchoiceincities,providinganeco-friendlyandcost-effectivewaytotravelshortdistances.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Tobegin/startwith,sharedbicycleshavebecomeapopularchoiceincities,providinganeco-friendlyandcost-effectivewaytotravelshortdistances.(2024·全國甲卷)增分亮點(diǎn)2豐富表達(dá)，妙筆生花高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的“復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用及較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)”指句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合性和句型的多樣性。復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、復(fù)合句及含有非謂語動(dòng)詞的高級(jí)句式，能彰顯考生豐富的語言內(nèi)涵。但是，在使用這些句式時(shí)，應(yīng)遵循以下原則：高級(jí)但不造作，多變但不離譜，復(fù)雜但不晦澀?？忌綍r(shí)要注重有意識(shí)地積累和背誦原汁原味的英語句子和文章，有意識(shí)地嘗試使用或模仿。1．非謂語動(dòng)詞，神采飛揚(yáng)(普通表達(dá))TheStudents'Unionwantedtosparktheinterestintheplantsaroundus.LastSaturdaytheStudents'Unionorganizedanactivitycalled“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Tosparktheinterestintheplantsaroundus,lastSaturdaytheStudents'Unionorganizedanactivitycalled“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”．(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語)(2023·浙江卷1月)(普通表達(dá))Iwasinspiredbythefantasticsceneryanddecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spondwhichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.(過去分詞短語作狀語、定語)(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)(普通表達(dá))Besides,China'shigh-speedrailwaynetworkhasconnectedvariouscitieseffectivelyandhasgreatlysavedtraveltimeandpromotedeconomicdevelopment.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Besides,China'shigh-speedrailwaynetworkhasconnectedvariouscitieseffectively,greatlysavingtraveltimeandpromotingeconomicdevelopment.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語)(2024·全國甲卷)2．三大從句，綻放精彩(普通表達(dá))Ipaintedthesceneryoftheparkandintheparkthewillowbranchesweredancinginthebreezeandseveralduckswereswimmingintheriverpeacefullyandhappily.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Ipaintedthesceneryofthepark,wherethewillowbranchesweredancinginthebreezeandseveralduckswereswimmingintheriverpeacefullyandhappily.(定語從句)(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)(普通表達(dá))Weallknowthatchangesintransportationwillbringgreatchangestopeople'slives.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Asweallknow,changesintransportationwillbringgreatchangestopeople'slives.(定語從句)(2024·全國甲卷)(普通表達(dá))WhenIputthedishesonthetable,myparentsgavemeathumbs-up.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))ThemomentIputthedishesonthetable,myparentsgavemeathumbs-up.(時(shí)間狀語從句)(2023·全國乙卷)(普通表達(dá))We'reoverwhelmedwithexcitementtoknowthatanoralEnglishclasswillbearrangedforus.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))We'reoverwhelmedwithexcitementattheknowledgethatanoralEnglishclasswillbearrangedforus.(同位語從句)(2023·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)(普通表達(dá))Itwasverymeaningfulandinterestingandyoucannotimagineit.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Youcannotimaginehowmeaningfulandinterestingitwas！(賓語從句)(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)(普通表達(dá))It'sasimpleandinexpensiveactivityandyoucandoitanywhere,eveninasmallspace.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))It'ssuchasimpleandinexpensiveactivitythatyoucandoitanywhere,eveninasmallspace.(結(jié)果狀語從句)(2024·浙江卷1月)3．妙用it，巧做點(diǎn)睛(普通表達(dá))Oceansplayakeyroleinourworld,soIconsideritisimportanttoprotectthem.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Oceansplayakeyroleinourworld,soIconsideritsignificanttoprotectthem.(it作形式賓語)(2022·全國甲卷)(普通表達(dá))Toimproveyourcoordination,flexibility,andbalanceisalsohelpful.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Itisalsohelpfultoimproveyourcoordination,flexibility,andbalance.(it作形式主語)(2024·浙江卷1月)4．倒裝句式，更勝一籌(普通表達(dá))Itnotonlyprovidedmewithanopportunitytoconnectmyartisticcreationwithnature,butalsoenhancedmywillingnesstotakeinspirationfromnatureinthefuture.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Notonlydiditprovidemewithanopportunitytoconnectmyartisticcreationwithnature,butitalsoenhancedmywillingnesstotakeinspirationfromnatureinthefuture.(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)(普通表達(dá))FanZhongyanissucharolemodelthathealwaysencouragesmetobeamanofnoblecharacter.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))SucharolemodelisFanZhongyanthathealwaysencouragesmetobeamanofnoblecharacter.(2023·全國甲卷)5．強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，詞若千鈞(普通表達(dá))However,Ihavesomesuggestionsforthepresentgroupingscheme.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))However,Idohavesomerecommendationsforthepresentcategorizationscheme.(強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語)(2023·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)(普通表達(dá))ThroughthisexperienceIhavegainedadeeperappreciationforChinesecuisine.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))ItisthroughthisexperiencethatIhavegainedadeeperappreciationforChinesecuisine.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)(2023·全國乙卷)技法2銜接過渡——構(gòu)建邏輯，完美行文滿分作文的最大特點(diǎn)就是清晰流暢，一氣呵成。巧妙的銜接與過渡就是其中的關(guān)鍵。用過渡銜接詞把句與句、段與段巧妙地連接在一起，文章才會(huì)更加連貫、自然和緊湊，段落或文章的發(fā)展脈絡(luò)也會(huì)更清晰，中心思想也會(huì)更明確。用法過渡詞典例用在段落起始的過渡詞generallyspeaking、tobegin/startwith、firstofall、inthefirstplace、asweknow、asisknowntoall、asisshownin...等Generallyspeaking,onlinelearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.一般來說，在線學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)日益成為人們獲取知識(shí)和解決問題的一種重要方式。用在段落結(jié)尾進(jìn)行總結(jié)的過渡詞tosumup、inconclusion、inaword、inthelongrun、insummary、allinall等Inconclusion,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience,leavingalastingimpressiononallofus.總之，這是一次寶貴而充實(shí)的經(jīng)歷，給我們所有人留下了深刻的印象。用以表達(dá)時(shí)間順序的過渡詞現(xiàn)在：nowadays、now、atpresent、currently等最近：lately、recently等首先/開始：atfirst、firstofall等后來/不久：after、afterwards、lateron、soonafterwards、afterawhile、beforelong、since、soonerorlater等與此同時(shí)：meanwhile、inthemeantime、atthesametime、while等最后/最終：finally、intheend、atlast等Seeingpeopledoingwarm-upexerciseswithgreatenthusiasm,wecouldn'twaittojointhem.Soonafterwards,thesignalfired,webeganourcross-countryrace.看到人們熱情地做熱身運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們迫不及待地加入他們。不久之后，信號(hào)響起，我們開始了越野比賽。用以表達(dá)空間順序的過渡詞ononeside...ontheotherside...、ontheoppositeside、infrontof、inthecenterof、inthedistance、in/downthemiddleof、atthebackof、on/totheleft/right、closeto、nextto、nearby、beyond、behindthetop(s)of、inthelowlandalong...等Downthemiddleofthevalleyrunsaclear,faststreaminwhichonemayfish.Inthelowlandalongthestreamarethefarmlands;beyondthemisthegrassland.Behindthetopsofthefirsthillsarethebigmountains.一條清澈湍急的溪流沿著山谷的中部流淌著，人們可以在溪中釣魚。沿溪而下，低地處是農(nóng)田；越過農(nóng)田是草原。一群小山的山頂后面是一座座大山。用以表示因果的過渡詞because、becauseof、asaresult/consequence(of)、dueto、owingto、thanksto、nowthat、therefore、consequently等Ourprogrammeisdesignedtoenhancestudents'awarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Therefore/Consequently,thetopicofthecomingshowwillbeenvironmentalprotectioninourdailylife.我們的節(jié)目旨在增強(qiáng)學(xué)生們的環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)。因此，即將到來的演出的主題將是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪械沫h(huán)境保護(hù)。用以表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞undoubtedly、certainly、indeed、aboveall、definitely、surely、totell(you)thetruth等Undoubtedly,neverhaveIseensuchanexceptionalcitywithsomanyhistoricsites.毫無疑問，我從未見過一個(gè)如此獨(dú)特并擁有如此多的歷史遺跡的城市。用以表示遞進(jìn)或補(bǔ)充的過渡詞inaddition、additionally、furthermore、also、moreover、what'smore、besides、notonly...butalso...、tomakemattersworse、worsestill、more/mostimportantly、lastbutnotleast等Thisactivityholdsgreatsignificanceasitnotonlyfostersculturalunderstandingbutalsoallowsmetosharemyowncultureandlearnfromothers.這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)具有重要意義，因?yàn)樗粌H促進(jìn)文化理解，而且讓我分享自己的文化并了解其他的文化。用以舉例的過渡詞including、forexample、forinstance、suchas等Therearevariousthemesforustochoosefrom,includingcalligraphy,martialartsandpapercutting.有各種各樣的主題供我們選擇，包括書法、武術(shù)和剪紙。用以表示讓步或轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡詞but、however、nevertheless、although、though、yet、onthecontrary、otherwise、despite、inspiteof、regardlessof、ratherthan、insteadof、unfortunately、nomatter...、evenif/though等Thoughfrustrated,Ididn'tloseheart.Instead,Isoughtadvicefrommyteacherandpracticedmore.盡管很沮喪，但我沒有喪失信心。相反，我向我的老師尋求建議并多加練習(xí)。用以表示比較和對(duì)比的過渡詞like、unlike、inthesameway、similarly、asfor、incontrast、whereas、ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...、while等Tobemoreexact,thosewhomakegooduseofthesmartphonesbenefitgreatlywhilethosewhocannotresistthetemptationgetaddicted.更確切地說，那些恰當(dāng)?shù)乩弥悄苁謾C(jī)的人受益匪淺，而那些無法抵制智能手機(jī)的誘惑的人則會(huì)上癮。用以表示觀點(diǎn)的過渡詞personally、Ithink、inmyopinion、I'mafraid、asIseeit、asfarasI'mconcerned等Inmyopinion,theabsolutemostimportantthatIlearnwhenIplaysportsishowtostaystrongevenintoughsituations.在我看來，我從體育運(yùn)動(dòng)中學(xué)到的最重要的東西是如何在困難的情況下保持強(qiáng)壯。[典例](2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：(1)你完成的作品；(2)你的感想。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。DearChris，I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua?滿分作文第一步：“五定”審題，“三段”謀篇定體裁電子郵件定時(shí)態(tài)陳述過去的經(jīng)歷用一般過去時(shí)；表達(dá)感受可用一般過去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)定人稱第?一□二□三人稱為主定要點(diǎn)、定結(jié)構(gòu)三段謀篇第一段開篇點(diǎn)題表明寫信的目的：分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷；概括介紹這次經(jīng)歷第二段3個(gè)要點(diǎn)缺一不可1.簡(jiǎn)要介紹背景；2．詳細(xì)介紹自己完成的作品；3．表達(dá)自己的感想第三段巧妙收尾表達(dá)希望及期待?滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句，話題表達(dá)成就亮點(diǎn)1．我們被要求畫出給我們留下最深刻印象的東西。(被動(dòng)語態(tài)＋what引導(dǎo)賓語從句)Wewereaskedtopaintwhatimpressedusmost．2．我的繪畫主要是關(guān)于一個(gè)開心的場(chǎng)景，孩子們?cè)诰G草地上玩得很開心。(where引導(dǎo)定語從句)Mypicturewasmainlyaboutahappyscenewherechildrenenjoyedthemselvesonthegreengrass.3．孩子們又跑又跳，臉上掛著燦爛的笑容。(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))Thechildrenwererunningandjumping,withbigsmilesontheirfaces．4．運(yùn)用所學(xué)的各種繪畫技能，我不僅展示了生命的活力，還展示了人與自然的和諧關(guān)系。(動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語＋“notonly...butalso...”結(jié)構(gòu))UsingvariouspaintingskillsIhadlearned,Ishowednotonlythevitalityoflifebutalsotheharmoniousrelationshipbetweenhumansandnature．5．這堂美術(shù)課給我留下了深刻的印象，它總是提醒我生活充滿了美好。(which引導(dǎo)定語從句)Theartclassleftalastingimpressiononmewhichalwaysremindsmethatlifeisfullofbeauty．?滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡，完美成篇DearChris，I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearChris，I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.YoucannotimaginehowinterestingitwasandIcouldhardlywaittoshareitwithyou.Afterwearrivedatthepark,theteachergaveabriefintroduction.Then,wewereaskedtopaintwhatimpressedusmost.Mypicturewasmainlyaboutahappyscenewherechildrenenjoyedthemselvesonthegreengrass.Abigtreestoodinthemiddle,castingapleasantshade.Thechildrenwererunningandjumping,withbigsmilesontheirfaces.UsingvariouspaintingskillsIhadlearned,Ishowednotonlythevitalityoflifebutalsotheharmoniousrelationshipbetweenhumansandnature.Theartclassleftalastingimpressiononmewhichalwaysremindsmethatlifeisfullofbeauty.Ihopewecanhavesuchanexperiencetogethersomeday.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours，LiHuaWriting1(建議信)(2024·重慶第一次聯(lián)合診斷)假定你是李華，美國“漢語橋(ChineseBridge)”網(wǎng)上冬令營組織方正在網(wǎng)上征集活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，歡迎網(wǎng)友獻(xiàn)計(jì)獻(xiàn)策。請(qǐng)你給組織方寫一封建議信，內(nèi)容包括：1.你建議的活動(dòng)(至少兩項(xiàng))；2.你的理由；3.你的希望。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearcommitteemembers，I'mgladtoknowthat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion:Dearcommitteemembers，I'mgladtoknowthatyouaremakingacallforeventsforyourChineseBridgeonlinewintercamp.First,I'dliketorecommendyouashortvideoabouttheoriginationoftheChinesecharacters.Fullofgreatfun,thevideowillarouseforeigners'interestinChinesecharacters.Secondly,youcanholdastorytellingcompetitiontospreadChineseculture.Thiscanfurthercampers'understandingofChina,buildingagoodbridgebetweenChinaandtheoutsideworld.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Yours，LiHuaWriting2(投稿)(2024·菏澤二模)你校英語俱樂部正在舉辦題為“AShinySummerforGraduationSeason”的英語征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.畢業(yè)季暑期的意義；2.你的打算；3.對(duì)同學(xué)的建議。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。AShinySummerforGraduationSeason________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:AShinySummerforGraduationSeasonHello,everyone.Soonwewillgraduatefromhighschool.Nextwewillhaveaverylongsummerholiday.Andwehavenohomeworkandnoexamsthissummerholiday.Thismeansthatwecandothingsthatwecouldn'tdoordidn'thavetimetodobeforebecauseoftheheavypressureofhighschool.Readabookyou'vealwayswantedtoread,learntodriveortakeatrip.Iplantofindapart-timejobinsummervacation,andIwilllearnhowtodrive.Afterthat,Iwillgohikingwithamonth'ssalary.Let'sdoit!Afterhighschoolgraduation,itmeansthatweareadults,andweshouldmakegooduseofthissummervacationtoexplorethenewworld.Writing3(活動(dòng)報(bào)道)(2024·天門5月適應(yīng)性考試)假定你是李華，上周五你校英語俱樂部舉辦了“校園好聲音”英文歌唱比賽。請(qǐng)你給校英語報(bào)寫一篇關(guān)于該活動(dòng)的報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和目的；2.比賽的過程和結(jié)果；3.學(xué)生的感受和收獲。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。AnEnglishSongSingingCompetitionCalled“TheVoiceofSchool”_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________