專題02-應(yīng)用文寫作(2)-研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達(dá)聚焦2023高考

研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達(dá)聚焦2023高考Part1應(yīng)用文寫作（二）1．（2021·北京卷）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國(guó)好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)歉意并說明原因;2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國(guó)好友Jim寫一封電子郵件，就因故不能赴約而致歉并建議再約?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累通知：tell→inform除此之外：inaddition→besides適合：fit→suit有空的：available→free2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.拓展句：Inaddition,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiParknextSaturday,whenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)2.（2021·天津卷第二次）假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家，他母親Nancy通過電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示感謝并問候；(2)計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；(3)你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearNancy,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearNancy,IamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.I'mgoingtoTian'anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatWall.Inaddition,IwanttogotoQinghuaGardentoenjoytheelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecidedtoregisterforthecomputermajor.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.Beforechoosing,consultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.Onlywithacleargoal,wewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuture,whichwillbemoreefficient.Yours,LiJin【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家，他母親Nancy通過電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：表示感謝并問候；計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累照顧：takecareof→lookafter另外，此外：inaddition→besides→what’smore雇傭：employ→hire既然：nowthat→since2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.拓展句：AstheInternetindustrydevelopsrapidly，thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Onlywithacleargoal,wewillhavetargetedlearninginthefuture,whichwillbemoreefficient.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.(運(yùn)用了nowthat引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)3．（2021·全國(guó)甲卷）假定你是李華。你校計(jì)劃舉辦介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會(huì)，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件給外國(guó)朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1．闡明寫信事由；2．征求建議；3．表示感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris，Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mwritingtoaskyousomeadvice.InordertopromoteChinesetraditionalcultureandpostsomeclassmeetingsonEnglishwebsites,ourschoolisgoingtoorganiseclassmeetings,thethemeofwhichistraditionalChineseculture.Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.I’mwonderingifyoucouldletmeknowwhichofthemyoulikebestandwhichofthempeoplefromoutsideofChinaaremorelikelytobeinterestedin.Thankyouforyourhelp.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.Yours，LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定考生是李華。你校計(jì)劃舉辦介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會(huì)，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件給外國(guó)朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→advice提高：heighten→promote各種各樣：allkindsof→avarietyof選擇：select→choose2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.拓展句：Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,whichincludecalligraphy,martialarts,oilpaintings,papercuttingandsoon.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]InordertopromoteChinesetraditionalcultureandpostsomeclassmeetingsonEnglishwebsites,ourschoolisgoingtoorganiseclassmeetings,thethemeofwhichistraditionalChineseculture..（介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）[高分句型2]I’mwonderingifyoucouldletmeknowwhichofthemyoulikebestandwhichofthempeoplefromoutsideofChinaaremorelikelytobeinterestedin.（if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）4．（2021·全國(guó)乙卷）你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1.分析優(yōu)勢(shì)與不足；2.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目和首句已為你寫好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesandfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加學(xué)校舉辦的英語演講比賽?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累充分利用：makefulluseof→makethemostof擴(kuò)寬，豐富：broaden→enrich各種各樣的：allkindsof→varietiesof影響：affect→influence2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.拓展句：Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcesinorderthatwecanbroadenthehorizon.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,wecan’ttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.（運(yùn)用了形容詞短語作狀語，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficultforusnottobeaffected.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作結(jié)果狀語，it作形式賓語，不定式短語作真正的賓語）5．（2021·天津卷第一次）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿，介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過的地方。內(nèi)容包括：(1)該地方的基本情況(如名稱、地理位置等)；(2)該地方的特色(如文化、景點(diǎn)等)；(3)你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiazhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文，要求給英文網(wǎng)站《最美中華》欄目投稿，介紹介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過的地方?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：說明文時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法第一段是文章的總起段，說明四川省有很多著名的景點(diǎn)；第二段介紹景點(diǎn)九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分說明你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。要求：1.說明四川省有很多著名的景點(diǎn)①四川的地理位置：中國(guó)西南部②著名景點(diǎn)：九寨溝、都江堰灌溉工程2.介紹景點(diǎn)九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程①九寨溝是自然保護(hù)區(qū)②給人印象最深的層層疊疊的瀑布和五顏六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀動(dòng)植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，現(xiàn)在仍然起著灌溉的作用3.你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受：九寨溝的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造會(huì)讓你驚嘆第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）belocatedin；world-famous；placesofinterest；anaturereserve；impressive；multi-levelwaterfalls；haveachancetodo…；rareanimals；scenicspot；datefrom；playanimportantpartin；beamazedby第三步：連詞成句(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇1.表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：whatismore2.表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：however3.表示列舉：suchas,like【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.（what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）[高分句型2]Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）6．（2021·浙江1月高考）假定你是李華，下周有新西蘭學(xué)生訪問你校，你將作為學(xué)生代表致歡迎辭。請(qǐng)為此寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.介紹活動(dòng)安排；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Distinguishedguests,Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,becauseyoucanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇發(fā)言稿，向即將到校的新西蘭學(xué)生致歡迎辭?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累誠摯的：sincere→genuine首先：atfirst→firstofall欣賞：appreciate→admire期待：expect→lookforwardto2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.拓展句：Atfirst,itisofgreatsignificancethatyoucouldfullyunderstandtheschool.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.(運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)7.（2021·浙江7月高考）昨天你參觀了學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國(guó)畫作品展。請(qǐng)給校英文報(bào)寫一篇宣傳稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);2.觀展感受;3.推薦觀展。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertoenrichstudents’after-schoollife,anexhibitionofstudents’traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.Theexhibitionisheldonthefirstflooroftheschoollitrary.Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition，whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsoyouwillbeabletounderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingsbetter.Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,andeverystudentiswelcometovisit.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國(guó)畫作品展的宣傳稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累高度贊揚(yáng)：thinkhighlyof→singhighpraisefor激發(fā)：spark→stimulate欣賞：admire→appreciate探索：explore→detect2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,andeverystudentiswelcometovisit.拓展句：Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,duringwhicheverystudentiswelcometovisit.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition，whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Throughtheex