Module 10 A holiday journey-2021-2022學年七年級英語下學期單元話題滿分寫作外研版

2021-2022學年七年級英語下學期單元話題滿分寫作Module10:Aholidayjourney單元話題：假期生活范文11．假設你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游。請根據下面表格中的提示信息，寫一篇題為“AnExcitingTrip”的英語短文。時間上周末參加者你和……地點北海公園（BeihaiPark）活動劃船、爬山、野餐（haveapicnic）、照相、做游戲……感受……要求:1.不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，表達正確；3.60詞左右，開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。AnExcitingTripLastweekend,Iwentonatripwith_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文22．上周你和你父母去四川旅游了，你們參觀了那兒的一些名勝古跡，如：峨眉山，樂山大等，那兒的食物也很美味。請你把你的這次旅行經歷寫下來，適當發(fā)揮，不低于60詞。參考詞匯：MountEmei峨眉山；LeshanBuddhists樂山大佛MytriptoSichuan______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文33．假如你和你的家人去年暑假去了桂林旅游，請根據下面表格的內容寫一篇短文，介紹你的旅游經歷和感受。要求：1.文章應包括所有要點并圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現真實的人名、校名等；3.詞數70詞左右。Howwasyourtrip?Wonderful.HowdidyougotoGuilin?Bytrain.Howlongdidyoustaythere?Forfivedays.Whatdidyouseethere?Greenhills,cleanwaterandsoon.Whatdidyoudo?GoboatinginLijiangRiver.......________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文44．提示：暑假要來了，你有什么旅行計劃嗎？請以“MyTravelPlan”為題寫一篇英語短文。內容可以包括目的地、出行方式、同行伙伴、天氣狀況、攜帶物品、旅行活動等。要求：（1）語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數不少于60；（2）文中不得使用真實姓名，校名，否則以零分計；（3）請將短文寫在答題卡上，寫在本試卷上無效。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文55．假設你是宋剛，你和父母上周末去北京旅游了?，F在請你根據下表的內容提示，給你的筆友Millie寫一封不少于60詞的英語郵件，介紹你們在北京的所見所聞。郵件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。TimeActivitiesSaturdayVisittheGreatWallSundayGototheSummerPalace,visitWangfujingStreetDearMillie,Howwasyourvacation?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,SongGang范文66．假如你是張芳，你收到外籍朋友Lily的郵件。在郵件中她講述了她的一次特殊的旅行經歷，請根據以下提示，給她回一封電子郵件，向她介紹你的一次特殊的旅行經歷。70詞左右。

寫作提示：1.Whenandwheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudoduringthetrip?3.Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?注意事項：1.回復郵件時可適當發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計入總詞數；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及地名。DearLily,Itwasgreattohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thetripisveryspecialtome.Iwanttotravelthereagain.Yours,ZhangFang范文77．假設你是李華，去年你和你的好朋友去參觀了北京，你的英國筆友Tom想了解這次活動。請你根據以下要點，給他以寫一封信介紹這次活動。WheretogoBeijingHowtoarriveByplaneWhentoarriveAt10:00inthemorningWhattodoVisitTian’anmenSquareEatdeliciousfood;watchBeijingOperaGoshoppingonWangfujingDajie補充一個活動談及自己的感受要求：1.必須包括所給信息，詞數70左右；2.緊扣要點，適當發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現真實的人名和校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1．Onepossibleversion:AnExcitingTrip

Lastweekend,Iwentonatripwithmyclassmates.At7:30inthemorning,wemetatmyhome.WewenttoBeihaiParkbybus.Ontheway,weweresoexcitedandwesangsongsonthebus.Whenwegotthere,wewentboatingonthelake.Weclimbedmountainsandhadapicniconthemountain.Afterthatwetooksomephotos.Thensomegirlsdancedunderthetreeandsomeboysplayedgameshappily.Wegothomeat4o'clockintheafternoon.Weweretiredbutveryhappy.Wereallyhadagreattime.【解析】1.題干解讀：本題為材料作文。要求根據題目所給要點提示寫一篇關于郊游的英語短文，文中所給要點必須全部包含，并可以適當加以拓展。2.寫作指導：寫作時人稱應用第一人稱；時態(tài)應用一般過去時；按照要點提示，準確表達，內容條理清楚，無句法錯誤；可適當運用連詞或時間狀語從句，使文章內容層次清晰。2．例文MytriptoSichuanTherearemanyinterestingplacesinSichuan.Duringthissummerholiday,IwenttoSichuanwithmyparents.Itwasagreattrip.Wevisitedsomeplacesofinterestthere.WevisitedMountEmei,Jiuzhaigou,LeshanBuddhistsandsoon.Theywereverybeautiful.ThefoodinSichuanisveryspicy,butverydelicious.It’sdifferentfromours.Ilikethetripverymuch.【解析】題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求按照提示介紹四川之旅，包括名勝和食物等。注意要點表達無誤。寫作指導：本文以第一人稱書寫，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時?？梢砸欢谓榻B，采用固定句型Therebe結構，舉例時注意短語的使用。3．例文IwenttoGuilinwithmyfamilylastweek.Wehadawonderfultimethere.Wewenttherebytrain.Westayedforfivedays.Wesawbeautifulgreenhills,cleanwaterandsoon.WewentboatingintheLijiangRiver.Wevisitedsomeplacesofinterest.Manypeoplevisitthemeveryday.ThefoodinGuilinisverydelicious.Peoplearealsoveryfriendly.Guilinisaverybeautifulplace.Ihopetogothereagainoneday.【解析】1.題干解析：這是一篇材料作文，要求寫一篇70字左右的英語短文，介紹去桂林旅游的經歷和感受，要做到要點齊全，可以適當發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：全文主要使用第一人稱，時態(tài)使用一般過去時和一般現在時?？刹捎脙啥问綄懽?，一段介紹去桂林旅游的經歷，另一段說明自己的感受，適當使用短語和句型，為文章增加亮點，同時要做到沒有單詞和語法錯誤。4．參考范文：MyTravelPlanIwanttogoonatripthissummerholiday.IplantovisitHangzhouwithmyfatherandmother.WeplantogotoHangzhouonJuly10thinthemorning.Wewillgotherebyplane.Wewanttostaythereforthreedays.Theweatherthereisalwayssunny.SoIplantotakeapairofsunglasses.Iwillalsotakeamapandacamera.Onthefirstday,weplantovisittheWestLake.Ihopetotakemanybeautifulpictures.Onthesecondday,wewouldliketogoshopping.Onthethirdday,wewillvisitLeifengTower.Iamsurewewillhaveagoodtime.【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“MyTravelPlan”為題寫一篇英語短文；要求包含目的地、出行方式、同行伙伴、天氣狀況、攜帶物品、旅行活動等內容。2.寫作指導：此作文時態(tài)以一般現在時和一般將來時為主；采用第一人稱口吻；可采用3段落格式：第一段：提出自己的旅行計劃；第二段：從時間、交通方式、天氣狀況、攜帶物品、旅行活動等闡述自己具體的旅行計劃；第三段：表達美好祝福。5．Onepossibleversion:DearMillie,Howwasyourvacation?MyparentsandIwenttoBeijingforavacationlastweekend.Wehadagoodtimethere.OnSaturday,wevisitedtheGreatWall.Weclimbeditandsawbeautifulscenerythere.OnSundaymorning,wewenttotheSummerPalace.Wesawdifferentkindsofflowersandanicelake.Itwassobeautifulanditwasjustlikeanexcellentpainting.OnSundayafternoon,wewenttoWangfujingStreetandboughtsomegiftsformygrandparentsthere.Andthenwecamebackhomebytrain.Yours,SongGang【解析】1.題干解讀：本文要求以宋剛的身份給筆友Millie寫一封電子郵件，介紹與父母去北京旅游的所見所聞，寫作時提示要點要寫全。2.寫作指導：本文采用一般過去時；主要以第一人稱為主展開敘述；短文采用二段式：第一段說自己的與誰、去哪兒旅行；第二段敘述旅行的時間，所進行的活動及交通工具等，介紹活動時要詳細具體。在寫作時要做到無標點符號和語法錯誤。6．例文DearLily,

Itwasgreattohearfromyou.Lastwinterholiday,myfriendZhangMinaskedmetoherho