Unit-1-單元話題滿分范文必背(牛津譯林版2020)

Unit1Backtoschool單元話題滿分范文必背1．假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，在你班級留學(xué)的美國學(xué)生Bill無法適應(yīng)這里的學(xué)習(xí)與生活，感到苦悶，他寫信向你求助。請你用英文給他寫一封回信。內(nèi)容如下:1.深表同情；2.提出建議并給出理由；(至少三條建議，如:參加學(xué)校社團活動，與朋友交流，做些戶外活動等)3.希望建議能有所幫助。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】DearBill,Iamsorrytoknowyouarehavingtroublewithyourlifeandstudyhere.However,thesituationiseasytochange.Now,I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Firstly,joinsomeschoolclubs,whereyoucanmakesomefriends.Secondly,communicatewiththepeoplewhohavethesameinterestwithyou.Maybeitcanhelpyougetridofyourloneliness.Thirdly,dosomeoutdooractivitiesandtheycanmakeyourelaxed.Bydoingallthese,youcangetusedtoyourschoollifeandlivehappily.Hopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【分析】本文書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信?！驹斀狻康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封書信：假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，在你班級留學(xué)的美國學(xué)生Bill無法適應(yīng)這里的學(xué)習(xí)與生活，感到苦悶，他寫信向你求助。請你用英文給他寫一封回信。內(nèi)容如下:1.深表同情；2.提出建議并給出理由；(至少三條建議，如:參加學(xué)校社團活動，與朋友交流，做些戶外活動等)3.希望建議能有所幫助。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：havingtroublewithyourlifeandstudyhere（在這里生活學(xué)習(xí)有麻煩）；joinsomeschoolclubs（參加學(xué)校俱樂部）；makesomefriends（交一些朋友）；havethesameinterestwithyou（和你有同樣的興趣）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c睛】本文是一封書信，內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。同時文中使用高級句子。Firstly,joinsomeschoolclubs,whereyoucanmakesomefriends.句中where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；communicatewiththepeoplewhohavethesameinterestwithyou.juzhongqwho引導(dǎo)定語從句；另外，However,Firstly,Secondly,等的運用為文章增色添彩。2．假定你是李華，你的外國好友Lily最近成績下降明顯。請你用英語寫封郵件，給她提些建議，內(nèi)容包括：1.保持良好的心態(tài)；2.制定合理的學(xué)習(xí)計劃；3.多向老師和同學(xué)求助。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearLily,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLily,I’msorrytoknowthatyouhavegottenlowgradesrecently.Butdon’tworryaboutittoomuch.Now,letmesharesomesuggestionswithyou.Firstly,Ithinkit’simportanttohaveapositiveattitudetowardsstudy.Besides,youneedtomakegoodplansforyourstudy,whichwillhelpyouimproveyourgradeslittlebylittle.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldturntoyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpwhenyouhaveanydifficultyinstudy.Idohopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua本文是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外國好友Lily寫一封郵件，給她提些關(guān)于成績下滑該如何改善的建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→advice/proposal重要的：important→significant/vital提升：improve→promote/elevate困難：difficulty→trouble2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Now,letmesharesomesuggestionswithyou.拓展句：Now,letmesharesomesuggestionsthatIhopewillhelpyou.【點睛】[高分句型1]Besides,youneedtomakegoodplansforyourstudy,whichwillhelpyouimproveyourgradeslittlebylittle.(運用which引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句。)[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,youshouldturntoyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpwhenyouhaveanydifficultyinstudy.(運用when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句。)3．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。最近你的英國筆友Jim寫信告訴你最近他學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大。請你給他回信并提供一些關(guān)于如何處理壓力的建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和關(guān)心；2.提出具體建議(不少于兩條)；3.鼓勵并表達祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Knowingthatyouhavestressinyourstudy,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Asaseniorhighschoolstudent,noneofusishavinganeasytime,butwestillcandosomethingtosuccessfullygetthroughthenextthreeyears.Themostimportantthingyoushoulddoistotakegoodcareofyourself.Wheneveryoufeeltiredordepressed,sparesometimetohavefunwithyourfamiliesandfriends.Asforstudy,itisessentialtofindoutwhatneedstobedone.Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject.Thatwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.Anyway,don’tpushyourselftoohard.Ihopeyouwillmakeprogressinyourstudy.本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國筆友回信，就如何處理學(xué)習(xí)壓力這一問題表示理解和關(guān)心，給對方提出建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累壓力：stress→pressure建議：advice→suggestion照顧：takecareof→lookafter重要的：essential→important2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject.Thatwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.拓展句：Thenmakeascheduleandsettimeforeachsubject,whichwillensureyouenoughtimetoreview.【點睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouhavestressinyourstudy,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.（運用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）【高分句型2】Wheneveryoufeeltiredordepressed,sparesometimetohavefunwithyourfamiliesandfriends.（運用了whenever引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）4．假定你是李華，你和李明升入高中后在不同的學(xué)校。李明剛?cè)雽W(xué)一段時間，就遇到了一些問題，請根據(jù)他所遇到的問題寫一封回信并提出相應(yīng)的建議。問題：1.不適應(yīng)，感到孤獨；2.學(xué)習(xí)英語有困難；3.經(jīng)常玩手機。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLiMing,I’mgladtohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopingmyadviceishelpfulforyouandmayyouenjoyyournewschoollife.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLiMing,I’mgladtohearfromyou.I’mreallysorryforyourproblemsyouarefacingnow.Infact,IalsogotintosometroublesbutfinallyIwentoutofthem.SoI’dliketosharesomeideaswithyou.Tobeginwith,youshouldbeactiveandmakefriendswithotherssothatyouwon’tfeellonely.Inaddition,tosolveyourproblemswithEnglish,itwillbehelpfulforyoutocommunicatewithyourEnglishteacherorturntoyourclassmatesforhelp.Sinceyouareplayingsmartphonetoomuch.Iadviseyoutoletyourparentskeepyourmobilephonewhenyouarestudyingatschool.Hopingmyadviceishelpfulforyouandmayyouenjoyyournewschoollife.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生就李明升入高中后所遇到的問題寫一封回信并提出相應(yīng)的建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累事實上：infact→asamatteroffact想要做某事：wouldliketodosth.→feellikedoingsth.有益的：helpful→beneficial建議某人干某事：advisesb.todosth.→suggestsb.doingsth.2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,tosolveyourproblemswithEnglish,itwillbehelpfulforyoutocommunicatewithyourEnglishteacherorturntoyourclassmatesforhelp.拓展句：Inaddition,inorderthatyoucansolveyourproblemswithEnglish,itwillbehelpfulforyoutocommunicatewithyourEnglishteacherorturntoyourclassmatesforhelp.【點睛】【高分句型1】I’mreallysorryforyourproblemsyouarefacingnow.(運用了省略關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Tobeginwith,youshouldbeactiveandmakefriendswithotherssothatyouwon’tfeellonely.(運用了sothat引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)5．假如你叫李華，你的英國筆友Alice來信想了解你高一上期的學(xué)習(xí)生活，以及你面臨即將到來的高一下期學(xué)習(xí)生活所做的打算以及你的期待。請你給她寫一封回信，要點如下：1.介紹你高一上期的學(xué)習(xí)生活；2.你對高一下期的學(xué)習(xí)生活所做的打算；3.你對高一下期的學(xué)習(xí)生活的期待。詞數(shù)：100詞左右開頭已為你寫好:DearAlice,Iammorethanhappytoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youaskmeaboutmystudyandlivinglifeinseniorone.Letmeintroduceittoyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAlice,Iammorethanhappytoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youaskmeaboutmystudyandlivinglifeinthefirsttermofSeniorOne.Letmeintroduceittoyou.ThestudyandlivinglifeinthefirstsemesterofSeniorOneisdifferentfromthatofJunior.WhatIwanttomentionmostisthatthelifeoffirsttermismoreindependent,studyismorechallengingandwehavetolearn9subjects.Withthehelpofteachersandclassmates,IwaswellaccustomedtothelifeofSeniorHigh.Withthenewtermcoming,Imakeupmymindtotryharder.Still,Iwillpaymoreattentiontoformingthestudyhabitofpreviewandreview,whichisofvitalimportancetoimprovestudyefficiency.Lastly,IhaveanexpectancythatmystudyandlivinglifeofthisnewsemesterwillbebothamazingandfulfillingandIcanhavesometimetojoinmyfavoriteclubs.Lookingforwardtoyourletter.BestWishes!Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國筆友Alice回信介紹自己高一上學(xué)期的學(xué)習(xí)生活以及下學(xué)期的打算和期待。【詳解】1.詞匯積累高興的：happy→delighted幫助：help→assistance習(xí)慣于：beaccustomedto→beusedto必須：haveto→must2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Iammorethanhappytoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youaskmeaboutmystudyandlivinglifeinthefirsttermofSeniorOne.拓展句：Iammorethanhappytoreceiveyourletter,inwhichyouaskmeaboutmystudyandlivinglifeinthefirsttermofSeniorOne.【點睛】【高分句型1】WhatIwanttomentionmostisthatthelifeoffirsttermismoreindependent,studyismorechallengingandwehavetolearn9subjects.（運用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句以及that引導(dǎo)的表語從句）【高分句型2】Still,Iwillpaymoreattentiontoformingthestudyhabitofpreviewandreview,whichisofvitalimportancetoimprovestudyefficiency.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）6．假如你是李華，進入高中后，你覺得學(xué)英語的方式和初中有很大不同，你給自己的英語老師寫了一封信，講述自己的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況。要包括以下內(nèi)容：1．開始學(xué)習(xí)高中英語時，覺得比初中英語難得多，幾乎喪失信心；2．后來認識到英語的重要性；3．每天努力學(xué)習(xí)英語；4．向老師和同學(xué)請教更好的英語學(xué)習(xí)方法；5．現(xiàn)在英語取得了很大進步，對英語越來越感興趣；6．信的開頭結(jié)尾已給出。提示：初中juniorhighschool高中seniorhighschool詞數(shù)：100左右。DearMr.Li,Iamgladtotellyouthat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Li,I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudysinceIbecameaseniorhighschoolstudent.WhenIstartedseniorEnglishinthebeginning,IfounditmuchmoredifficultthanwhatwelearnedinjuniorschoolandIalmostlostheart.Later,IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish,soIgotupearlyeverymorning,recitedEnglishwords,listenedtoEnglishtapesanddidalotofexercises.IalsoaskedmyteachersandclassmatesforbetterwaysoflearningEnglish.Now,I’mimprovingmyEnglishgreatly.AndI’mgettingmoreandmoreinterestedinlearningit.Thankyousomuchforyourgreathelpinyourclass.Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給自己的英語老師寫一封信，講述自己進入高中后的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況。【詳解】1.詞匯積累高興的：glad→delighted開始：start→begin方法：way→method幫助：help→assistance2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thankyousomuchforyourgreathelpinyourclass.拓展句：Thankyousomuchforwhatyouhavetaughtmeinyourclass.【點睛】【高分句型1】I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudysinceIbecameaseniorhighschoolstudent.（運用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和since引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）【高分句型2】WhenIstartedseniorEnglishinthebeginning,IfounditmuchmoredifficultthanwhatwelearnedinjuniorschoolandIalmostlostheart.（運用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句和what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）7．假定你是李華，最近在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了一些問題。你給筆友Allen寫了一封信，希望得到他的幫助。內(nèi)容如下：1.學(xué)習(xí)熱情減退；2.作業(yè)太多，疲于應(yīng)付；3.……注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：減退weaken___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAllen,Howareyou?ThesedaysIamfacedwithsomeproblemsaboutmyEnglishstudy,whichhasconfusedmelong.SoIamwritingthisletterforyouradvice.Firstofall,mywishtostudyhardandgetgoodgradeshasbeenweakenedwithtimegoingby.Moreoften,IfindEnglishsoboringthatIfallasleepinclass.Besides,itseemstohaveendlesshomework,andIhavetocopyothers’tofinishit.What’sworse,Iambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject.IsitnecessaryformetofindatutorwhocanhelpmewithmyEnglish?That’sall.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。假定考生是李華，最近在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了一些問題。你給筆友Allen寫了一封信，希望得到他的幫助。【詳解】1.詞匯積累建議：advice→suggestion首先：firstofall→firstandforemost此外：besides→what’smore無聊的：boring→dull2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：What’sworse,Iambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject.拓展句：What’sworse,becauseIambecomingweakerandweakerinthissubject,

Iamveryanxiousaboutit.【點睛】【高分句型1】ThesedaysIamfacedwithsomeproblemsaboutmyEnglishstudy,whichhasconfusedmelong.（運用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】IsitnecessaryformetofindatutorwhocanhelpmewithmyEnglish?（運用了it作形式主語和who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）8．作為一名高一新生,你在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到一些困難,特別是與新同學(xué)的相處,為此你有時會感到很沮喪。請你以日記的形式寫下遇到的困難以及克服困難的方法,同時也表達你對未來的學(xué)習(xí)生活的信心。寫作要點：1.學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到的困難；2.如何解決；3.對未來充滿信心。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。【答案】IthasbeenalmosttwomonthssinceIcametothisschool.ButnowsometimesIsufferalot.Imeetwithsomedifficultiesinmylifeandstudyaswell.Inaddition,astherearesomanyexcellentstudentsaroundme,Ifeelextremelyhorrible.However,Iknowit’snousefeelingsadandworried.Idecidetocountonmyselfandtakesomemeasurestochangethesituation.Firstofall,inordertomakegooduseofmytime,Ishouldmakeascheduleinperson.OnlyinthiswaycanIstudyallthesubjectswell.Besides,Ishouldbeactiveinmakingnewfriendsandgettingalongwellwithmyclassmatesandroommates.Itwilldefinitelyfreemefromlonelinessandhomesickness.【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，作為一名高一新生,你在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到一些困難,特別是與新同學(xué)的相處,為此你有時會感到很沮喪。請你以日記的形式寫下遇到的困難以及克服困難的方法,同時也表達你對未來的學(xué)習(xí)生活的信心。寫作要點：1.學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到的困難；2.如何解決；3.對未來充滿信心。第二，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。第三，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為一段。1.學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到的困難；2.如何解決；3.對未來充滿信心。第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語:meetwith，takesomemeasuresto，makegooduseof，inpersongetalongwellwith.第四步：確定較為高級的句子:since引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句IthasbeenalmosttwomonthssinceIcametothisschool.部分倒裝句OnlyinthiswaycanIstudyallthesubjectswell.第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡銜接:Inaddition，However，F(xiàn)irstofall，Besides第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦?！军c睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級的句式:since引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句IthasbeenalmosttwomonthssinceIcametothisschool.部分倒裝句OnlyinthiswaycanIstudyallthesubjectswell.高級句式的應(yīng)用提升了寫作的檔次，整個短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達能力。9．假定你是李華，是一名剛升入高中的高一新生。請你給自己的初中同學(xué)Mary寫一封信，簡要介紹一下自己這三個月的高中生活體會。內(nèi)容要點：1)之前想念過去的老師和同學(xué);現(xiàn)在適應(yīng)了高中的生活2)與同學(xué)相處很好，交了好多朋友。。3)老師工作認真，尊重他們4)一定努力學(xué)習(xí)，三年以后考上好的大學(xué)。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右;2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行為連貫;3．開頭語和結(jié)束語己為你寫好．不計入總詞數(shù)DearMary,Howtimeflies!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,YoursLiHua【答案】DearMary,Howtimeflies!Ihavebeeninhighschoolfortwomonths.NowI’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.Ifeltalittlelonelyatthebeginning,whichmadememissalltheteachersandclassmatesinJuniorHighschool.Butnow,Ihavegotusedtomynewschoollife.NotonlydoIgetalongwellwithmynewclassmatesbutIhavemademanynewfriends.Besides,theteachersherearestrictwithussothatIlikeandrespectthemverymuch.Inaword,I’llmakegooduseofmytimeandmakeanefforttostudywell,becauseitismydreamtogotoagooduniversityafterthreeyears’hardwork.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.BestwishesYoursLiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給自己的初中同學(xué)Mary寫一封信，簡要介紹一下自己這三個月的作為一名高一新生的高中生活體會?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累習(xí)慣：getusedto→becomeusedto與……相處得好：getalongwellwith→getonwellwith總之：inaword→inshort好好利用：makegooduseof→makefulluseof2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Ihavebeeninhighschoolfortwomonths.拓展句：IthasbeentwomonthssinceIbecameaseniorhighschoolstudent.【點睛】【高分句型1】NotonlydoIgetalongwellwithmynewclassmatesbutIhavemademanynewfriends.(使用了部分倒裝。)【高分句型2】Ifeltalittlelonelyatthebeginning,whichmadememissalltheteachersandclassmatesinJuniorHighschool.(使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。)10．假如你叫李華，新學(xué)期開學(xué)一個月了，你的英語老師要求你在英語課堂上用英語和同學(xué)們交流一下你到新學(xué)校后的感受。交流內(nèi)容要求包括以下要點：1.校園環(huán)境和教學(xué)設(shè)施；2.老師給你的印象；3.給學(xué)校的一點兒建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮，要注意行文連貫。Hello,everyone,I’mhonoredtostandheretotellyousomethingaboutmy