2023-2024學(xué)年初中書面表達(dá)主題分類訓(xùn)練10篇-情感與情緒-教師版

2023-2024學(xué)年初中書面表達(dá)主題分類訓(xùn)練10篇-情感與情緒1.(2023·江西省贛州市·期中考試)正值青春期的你會與父母生氣嗎？你通常是在什么情況下會與他們生氣，你覺得這樣適合嗎？如果不合適，除了文中提到的深呼吸和冷靜幾秒鐘之外，還有其他方式應(yīng)對嗎？請根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀銓ι鷼獾目捶ê屠斫庖约叭绾螒?yīng)對生氣。寫作要點：1）Doyougetangrywithyourparents？2）Inwhatsituationswouldyougetangrywithyourparents？Doyouthinkit'sright？3）Doyouknowsomeotherwaystodealwithangerexcepttakingadeepbreathandbeingcalmdownforseconds？要求：1）短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；3）詞數(shù)不少于80。 【答案】Iget

angrywith

myparentssometimes.（我也和父母生氣）Theyalwaysonlycareaboutmystudy，sotheymakemetakeallkindsofremedialclasses.Theyalsomadealotofrulesforme.Itmakesmeveryuncomfortableandtired.（什么情況下生氣）Iknowmyparentswantmetogotoabetteruniversityandbeabetterperson，soit'swrongformetobeangry.（生氣是不對的）So，Islowlydevelopedsomemethods.First，Iwilltalktomyparentsseriouslywhentheyareinagoodmood，tellingthemmythoughtsandcurrentstatus.【高分句型一】AndtellthemthatifI'mbadinanysubject，I'lltellthemandfindatutorforme.【高分句型二】Secondly，Ialsoneedtorestinsteadofhavingendlessclasses.Finally，Ialsolistentomusictocalmmyselfdown.（如何使自己平靜下來）【解析】【高分句型一】

First，Iwilltalktomyparentsseriouslywhentheyareinagoodmood，tellingthemmythoughtsandcurrentstatus.首先，當(dāng)我的父母心情好的時候，我會認(rèn)真地和他們說話，告訴他們我的想法和現(xiàn)狀。when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。【高分句型二】

AndtellthemthatifI'mbadinanysubject，I'lltellthemandfindatutorforme.告訴他們，如果我哪門功課不好，我會告訴他們，給我找個家教。if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。2.(2023·廣東省云浮市·期中考試)每個人都有生氣、難過或失落的時候，每當(dāng)這時你會如何排解這種不良情緒呢？請你根據(jù)寫作要點及要求用英語寫一篇短文，談一談你如何處理不良情緒。要點：1）Whendoyouhavebadfeelings？2）Howdoyoudealwiththosefeelings？3）Whydoyoudealwiththeminthatway？要求：1）必須包含提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右（結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2）意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3）請勿在文中使用真實的姓名和校名。Thesearemywaysofdealingwithbadfeelings.Ihopetheycanbehelpfultoyou. 【答案】IwouldfeelangryorguiltyaboutthingsIdidordidn'tdo，aboutthingsIcouldn'thave，andalotofotherthings.Itseemsthateveryonehastheirownbadmood.Butguiltandangerwon'thelpus.Overtime，theywillbecomeaburdenonmyshoulders.（什么時候有不好的心情）

Firstly，forgivenessisapowerfultool.Ishouldforgivemyselffirst.Ishouldn'tkeepmybadfeelingstomyself.Ialsohavetoforgivethosewhomakeusfeelguiltyorangry.It'snotalwayseasy.Butwhenwelearntoforgiveourselves，itbecomeseasiertoforgiveothers.

【高分句型一】Secondly，IwilllistentosomemusicanddosomethingIliketocalmmyselfdown.

【高分句型二】Finally，Iwillalsotellthisstorytomyfriendsorparents.（如何處理的和為什么這么做）

These

are

my

ways

of

dealing

with

bad

feelings.I

hope

they

can

be

helpful

to

you.【解析】

【高分句型一】Butwhenwelearntoforgiveourselves，itbecomeseasiertoforgiveothers.但是當(dāng)我們學(xué)會原諒自己的時候，原諒別人就變得容易了。when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投縎econdly，IwilllistentosomemusicanddosomethingIliketocalmmyselfdown.其次，我會聽一些音樂，做一些我喜歡的事情來讓自己冷靜下來。and表并列。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。3.(2023·河南省濮陽市·期中考試)過去的幾個月，因防控在家的人形成了些許疫情心情，如何調(diào)試個人心情，你肯定有個人的觀點，畢竟好心情有助于身體健康，好心情讓我們享受工作和生活，請你根據(jù)表格提示及要求，以"KeepaGoodMood"為題寫一篇英語短文。KeepaGoodMoodCOVID-19severalmonthsago，sonow：getangryWhattodo：smile，helpful…Advantages：keephealthy，enjoyourlifeFeeling：…要求：1）意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；2）詞數(shù)80左右。短文第一段已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3）請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及地名。KeepaGoodMoodNowadays，manyofusoftengetangry.EspeciallywhenwestayedathomeseveralmonthsagobecauseoftheCOVID-19. 【答案】Keep

a

Good

Mood

Nowadays，many

of

us

often

get

angry.Especially

when

we

stayed

at

home

several

months

ago

because

of

the

COVID-19.

Then

what

can

we

do

to

keep

a

good

mood？First，we

can

smile

often

because

it's

helpful

for

us

to

keep

healthy

and

enjoy

our

life.Second，try

our

best

to

do

something

for

other

people

in

need.It

can

help

us

feel

good.Third，if

we

take

part

in

some

outdoor

activities，we

can

make

new

friends

and

we'll

feel

happy，too.【高分句型一】Last，we

can

tell

others

our

bad

moods，they

may

give

us

some

good

advice.

In

short，keeping

a

good

mood

can

help

us

learn

and

live

more

happily.【高分句型二】（感受）【解析】【高分句型一】Third，if

we

take

part

in

some

outdoor

activities，we

can

make

new

friends

and

we'll

feel

happy，too.第三，如果我們參加一些戶外活動，我們可以結(jié)交新朋友，我們也會感到快樂。條件狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投縄n

short，keeping

a

good

mood

can

help

us

learn

and

live

more

happily.簡而言之，保持良好的心情可以幫助我們更快樂地學(xué)習(xí)和生活。In

short簡而言之。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。4.(2023·廣東省廣州市·模擬題)請你以“ColorandMood”為題提前寫好一份英文演講稿。內(nèi)容包括:(1)簡單描述顏色對情緒的影響;(2)你最喜歡的顏色及原因(原因不少于兩點);(3)號召大家都要做情緒的主人，控制好自己的情緒。作文要求:(1)不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。(2)語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。 【答案】ColorandMood

Lastweek,Ireadanarticleaboutcolorandmood,letmetellyousomethingaboutit.Therearemanycolorsinourlife.Theycannotonlymeandifferentthingsbutalsobringusdifferentfeelings.Forexample,peoplesometimesusepinktodescribeapersonwhoishealthy.Colorbluesometimesmeansthatapersonwhoisblueisverysad.

Ofallthecolors,Ilovewhitebest.Whiteisthecolorofsnowandcloud.Itrepresentsofpurityandcalmness.Itcanmakeabeautifulpicturewithanyothercolors.Itcanoftenmakemefeelrelaxed.

Everyonehashisfavoritecolor.However,nomatterhowcolorschangeyourmood,youshouldlearntocontrolyourmoodandbeabetterperson.【解析】

略5.(2023·吉林省長春市·模擬題)希望中學(xué)近期舉辦英語征文競賽，題目為"Asmallactmakesabigdifference."。請你為其投稿，談?wù)勀銓@句話的理解，并分享一件你自身或周圍的人的故事，以及帶給你的收獲或啟迪。要求：（1）字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。（3）條理清晰，語句通順，書寫工整。 【答案】A

small

act

makes

a

big

differenceASmallActOfKindnessMakesABigDifference.LastmonthIwentthroughaveryhardtime，becausemydearmompassedaway.Iflewtomyhometowntopaymyrespectsandsaymygoodbyes.Havingspentdays

withmyfamily?，Ihadtoheadback.

Afterboardingtheplane?，Ifoundmywindowseattakenbyayoungman.Usuallyit'snotabigdealtome??，butIreallywantedtositthere.Asaresult，hewasaskedtomove.Mymomwasnolongerthere.Ialmostlostcontrolofmyemotions

whentheplanetaxiedtotherunway.?【高分句型一】Tearsfilledmyeyes.SuddenlyIfeltataponmyelbow.Itwasthatyoungmancheckingonme.HeaskedmeifIwasOKandsaidhewasthereifIneededtotalk.?【高分句型二】Afterall?，wehadathree-hourflightsittinginthesamerow.

Iassured

himknowthatIwasn'treadytotalk，buthiswordshadmademefeelbetter.AlthoughIdidn'ttakehimuponhisoffer??，IwastouchedthatastrangerknewImightneedsomeoneatthatmoment.Peopleonplanesoftendoeverythingtheycannottotalktosomeone?，Imean.Butherethismanwaswillingtogivemeallofhistime.??（經(jīng)歷）Thatmomentlastmonthhasmademeactivelylookforwaystoserveandhelpothers.Theymaynotbebigthings?，buttheymaybebigtothatperson.?（感受）【解析】【高分句型一】Ialmostlostcontrolofmyemotions

whentheplanetaxiedtotherunway.?當(dāng)飛機(jī)滑行到跑道上時，我?guī)缀鯚o法控制自己的情緒。when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投縃easkedmeifIwasOKandsaidhewasthereifIneededtotalk.?他問我是否安好，并說如果我需要傾訴，他就在那里。if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。這是一篇提綱作文，題目要求圍繞內(nèi)容寫作。命題既有限制又給予學(xué)生發(fā)揮的空間。寫作時要結(jié)合內(nèi)容對情況進(jìn)行陳述，之后給出自己的看法和建議，看法和建議需要自主發(fā)揮。6.(2023·浙江省舟山市·模擬題)你校EnglishCorner將進(jìn)行"ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem"的成長分享。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容講述你控制憤怒的小故事，并分享你的感悟。WhathappenedbetweenTomandmeWhatIhavelearned...boughtamuch-lovedmagazine......tookthemagazinewithouttelling......feltangry......calmeddownandtalkedmunicatewithothersontime...要求：（1）短文須包括表格所有內(nèi)容（至少補(bǔ)充一條感悟），可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）短文中不出現(xiàn)真實的地名和人名；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）參考詞匯：anger憤怒calmdown冷靜Haveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter？Hereismyexperience. Thanksforlistening.【答案】

Have

you

ever

controlled

your

anger

and

solved

a

problem

better？Here

is

my

experience.（引出話題）

Lastterm，IboughtamagazinethatIhadalwayswanted.IlikeditsomuchthatIwascarefuleverytimeIcarriedit.Butoneday，mybestfriendTomtookthemagazinewithouttellingme.WhenIfoundit，Iwasveryangry.【高分句型一】ButIcalmeddownsoon.IthoughtofhowTomhelpedmewhenIwasintroubleandIdidn'twanttobreaktherelationshipbetweenus.【高分句型二】SoIcontrolledmyangeranddecidedtohaveatalkwithhim.Itoldhimthatheshouldtellmeifhewantedtoreadthemagazine.Afterthetalk，ourrelationshipbecamestronger.（講述控制憤怒的小故事）Fromthisexperience，whenweareangry，weshouldcalmourselvesdownandlearntoreflect.Themostimportantistocommunicatewithothersontimesothatwecansolvetheproblemsbetter.（感受）

Thanksforlistening.（感謝）【解析】【高分句型一】：WhenIfoundit，Iwasveryangry.當(dāng)我發(fā)現(xiàn)它時，我非常生氣。when引導(dǎo)一個時間狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投浚篒thoughtofhowTomhelpedmewhenIwasintroubleandIdidn'twanttobreaktherelationshipbetweenus.我想起了湯姆在我遇到麻煩時是如何幫助我的，我不想破壞我們之間的關(guān)系。wanttodosth表示想做某事。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。7.(2023·廣東省云浮市·期中考試)2022年3月21日的東航客機(jī)墜毀事件和持續(xù)三年多的新冠肺炎疫情告訴我們：人生在世，生命很重要，健康很重要。但是在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，我們會有一些不好的情緒（badfeelings），壞的情緒會影響我們的健康，請以"GoodWaystoKeepHappy"為題，談一談中學(xué)生如何在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中保持愉快的心情。提示詞：listentomusic,domoreexercise,makefriends,smileoften.…要求：（1）語句通順，表達(dá)連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；（2）必須包含所給信息；（3）詞數(shù)70左右。（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）GoodWaystoKeepHappyItisveryimportantforustokeephappy.Becausebeinghappyistobehealthy.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeepushappy？ Ihopeyoucankeephappyeveryday.【答案】Good

Ways

to

Keep

Happy

It

is

very

important

for

us

to

keep

happy.Because

being

happy

is

to

be

healthy.Butdo

you

know

the

ways

to

keep

us

happy？

First,listen

to

music.Musicisveryimportantinourlife.①Ifthere'snomusic,ourlifewon'tbesointeresting.Second,

do

more

exercise.Asisknowntoall,sportscannotonlykeepushealthy,butalsomakeushappy.Third,make

morefriends.②Sometimes,friendsarethepeoplewhoknowusbest.Youcanshareyoursadnessandhappinesswithyourfriends.Finally,don'tforgettosmile.Ifyou'vehadareallybadday,youcanlistentosomefunnystories.Thenyou'llbehappy.

I

hope

you

can

keep

happy

everyday.【解析】【思路點撥】本文是一篇提示性的命題作文，主題是一談中學(xué)生如何在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中保持愉快的心情。寫作時主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱。注意表達(dá)連貫，語法正確。【結(jié)構(gòu)布局】引言：開篇點題，引出下文中心：說明保持愉快的心情的方法結(jié)尾：表達(dá)祝愿【高分詞匯】

①listen

to聽②do

more

exercise多鍛煉③notonly...butalso不僅……而且【高分句型】①Ifthere'snomusic,ourlifewon'tbesointeresting.????????（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）②Sometimes,friendsarethepeoplewhoknowusbest.（who引導(dǎo)定語從句。）8.(2023·浙江省杭州市·模擬題)美國朋友Sam發(fā)來的郵件，請閱讀后以電子郵件的形式回復(fù)。要求：①可適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容讓行文通順、連貫。②字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞。To：LiPingFrom：SamSubject：WhatshouldIdo？DearLiPing，Howiseverythinggoingwithyou？I'mstressedoutthesedays.MylastexamresultsdroppedonceagainandIreallydon'tknowhowtoimprovemygrades.What'sworse，myparentsalwayscomparemewithothersandexpecttoomuchfromme.It'sdifficulttogetonwellwiththem.Iamsoupset.WhatshouldIdo？Pleasegivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourquickreply!Yours，Sam 【答案】Dear

Sam，

I'msorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Firstofall，onetestdoesn'tmeananything.Aslongaswecontinuetostudyhard，I'msureyourgradeswillimprove.Ifyouhaveanyproblems，besuretoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpintime.【高分句型一】Secondly，youcanfindsometimetohaveagoodtalkwithyourparents.Andtheywillsurelyunderstandyou.Finally，youshouldlearntorelaxyourself.Youcanrelaxyourselfbylisteningtomusic，doingrunning，etc.，anddoingsomethingyoulike.Ihopeyoufindthesesuggestionshelpful.【高分句型二】

Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours，Li

Ping【解析】【高分句型一】Ifyouhaveanyproblems，besuretoaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelpintime.如果你有任何問題，一定要及時向你的老師和同學(xué)尋求幫助。if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投縄hopeyoufindthesesuggestionshelpful.我希望這些建議對你有幫助。Ihope+賓語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。9.(2023·江蘇省泰州市·模擬題)成長中的青少年有著豐富的情緒體驗。當(dāng)取得進(jìn)步時，你也許會和人分享喜悅；當(dāng)日記被偷看時，你可選擇冷靜后再面對；當(dāng)傷心時，或許你會運(yùn)動流汗來稀釋悲傷；當(dāng)心中憂懼時，可設(shè)法強(qiáng)大自己……學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英文版在征稿，期待你的分享。請根據(jù)提示，自擬題目，描述一次經(jīng)歷。寫作要點：（1）Whatexperiencewouldyouliketoshare？（2）Whathaveyougotfromtheexperience？寫作要求：（1）用英文表達(dá)，題目自擬；（2）積極向上，言之有理，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，邏輯通順；（3）語言流暢，符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣；（4）書寫清晰美觀，詞數(shù)120左右。 【答案】BetheMasterofYourEmotions

Lifeisfullofupsanddowns，andsometimesthingsdon'tgoasplanned.Whensomethingunpleasanthappens，weoftenfeeldisappointedorevenangry.【高分句型一】Oneofourchoicesistoacceptouremotionsanddon'tletthemcontrolus.

Oneday，itwasourgroup'sturntocleanupourclassroom.Whenschoolwasover，Iwenttotheteacher'sofficetoasksomequestions.【高分句型二】WhenIhurriedbacktotheclassroom，Ifoundthattherewasnooneleft.Ifeltveryangryandwantedtogohomeimmediately.Afterleavingtheclassroom，thesuggestiontocontrolangersuddenlycametomymind.Istartedtocalmdownfrom1to10，andIsucceeded.Finally，Idecidedtoputdownmybackpackandpickupthebroom.Ispentalmostanhourcleaningupourmessyclassroom，confidentthateverythinginourclassroomhadreturnedtonormal，andIamproudofwhatIhavedone.（我的經(jīng)歷）

Isuccessfullycontrolledangertobethemasterofmyemotions.Thisexperiencehasinspiredmetohavethecouragetofacenegativeemotionsinthefuture.（我學(xué)到了什么）【解析】【高分句型一】Whensomethingunpleasanthappens，weoftenfeeldisappointedorevenangry.當(dāng)不愉快的事情發(fā)生時，我們經(jīng)常感到失望甚至憤怒。when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投縒henschoolwasover，Iwenttotheteacher'sofficetoasksomequestions.放學(xué)后，我去老師的辦公室問了一些問題。when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句。能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。10.(2023·陜西省西安市·期中考試)大家都知道保持一份好心情有利于身心健康，也有助于學(xué)習(xí)。假如你是李斌，你的美國朋友Linda近來心情不佳。請你用英語寫一封郵件，告訴她如何保持一份好心情。要點：learntorelax，havehealthyeatinghabits，getenoughsports，getonwell，withclassmates，volunteeractivities...要求：（1）短文應(yīng)包括所給要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）語句通順、行文連貫、書寫工整；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名；（4）不少于70詞（開頭和落款已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）DearLinda，Iheardyo