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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習從農(nóng)場體驗到后院耕耘的成長1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwasahighschoolstudent,Ilivedinanurbanneighborhood,whereopportunitiestotakepartinagriculturalactivitieswererare.MyunderstandingoffarmingmostlycamefromwhatIhadlearnedinbooks.Iwasahard-workingperson,alwayseagerforachancetoexploreagriculture.Finally,theopportunityIhadbeenlongingforarrived.EarthDayinthesecondyearofmyhighschool,myclassorganizedavisittoalocalfarmtolearnaboutfarming.Iwasthrilledabouttheideaandcouldn’twaittosharetheexcitingnewswithmyparents.Thenextday,Iwentshoppingfortoolswithmyfather,suchastrowels,wateringcans,gloves,andothernecessaryitems.4續(xù)寫原文Onthedayoftheevent,myclassmatesandIgatheredatthemeetingspotearlyinthemorning.Theweatherwasperfect,andeveryoneseemedparticularlyhappy.Armedwithourtools,wegotintothecarandheadedofftoourdestination.Uponreachingthefarm,weweresplitintoseveralgroupsbyourteacher.Onegroupwasinchargeofplantingtheseeds,oneforwateringtheplots,andoneforweedingandmaintainingthefarm.Attheteacher’ssignal,weallsprangintoaction.5續(xù)寫原文However,itwasthefirsttimethatmanyofushadparticipatedinfarming,sowewereunsurewheretobegin.Iwasamongthem.Fortunately,ourteacherwasaknowledgeablewomanwithexperienceinfarming.Toguideus,theteacherbeganplantingvegetablesherself.Afterobservinghermethod,wealljoinedinandgotourhandsdirty.Innotime,wehadplantedavarietyofvegetables.Ipaidcloseattention,keenonabsorbingeverydetail.Eventually,Ilearnedtheskillsofplantingvegetables.Theexperiencewasnotjustaboutlearninghowtoplant;itwasalsoaboutunderstandingtheimportanceofsustainablelivingandtheroleeachoneofuscanplayinprotectingourenvironment.Itwasahands-onlessonthatmadeasignificantimpactonme.6段首句Paragraph1:Inspiredbytheexperienceonthefarm,Idecidedtoputmyknowledgetogooduse.Paragraph2:Astheharvestseasonapproached,thereweremanyvegetablesinthebackyard.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9高中時,生活在城市的“我”鮮有機會接觸農(nóng)業(yè),對農(nóng)耕的認知多源于書本。高二地球日,班級組織參觀當?shù)剞r(nóng)場,“我”興奮不已,提前與父親購置工具?;顒赢斕?,同學(xué)們分組勞作,雖初次參與,在老師指導(dǎo)下,“我”學(xué)會了種植蔬菜。這次經(jīng)歷不僅讓“我”掌握種植技能,更讓“我”理解可持續(xù)生活的意義。此后,“我”決心將所學(xué)用于實踐,開啟了一段新的體驗。點1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Inspiredbytheexperienceonthefarm,Idecidedtoputmyknowledgetogooduse.受農(nóng)場經(jīng)歷的鼓舞,我決定好好利用所學(xué)知識。我迫不及待地將自家后院改造成了一個小型農(nóng)場。我翻出之前買的工具,挽起袖子,開始挖土。土塊有些硬,我費了好大勁才把它們敲碎、整平。接著,我仔細挑選了各類種子,像紅彤彤的番茄、細長的胡蘿卜,還有翠綠的生菜。每天放學(xué)后,我都雷打不動地來到后院,給它們澆水、施肥,仔細查看有沒有害蟲,天氣不好時,還得想辦法保護它們。盡管過程中困難重重,可一想到農(nóng)場里的收獲,我就充滿動力,把從農(nóng)場學(xué)到的知識都用上。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Astheharvestseasonapproached,thereweremanyvegetablesinthebackyard.隨著收獲季的臨近,后院里長滿了各種各樣的蔬菜。那一顆顆圓潤飽滿的番茄,在陽光下泛著誘人的光澤;胡蘿卜從土里探出小腦袋,看著就十分喜人;還有那一片片嫩綠的生菜,仿佛在訴說著豐收的喜悅。我滿心歡喜,趕緊邀請父母和朋友來分享這份喜悅。大家一起動手采摘,媽媽用這些新鮮蔬菜做出了一道道美味佳肴。那一刻,我們圍坐在一起,享受著勞動果實帶來的快樂。這次經(jīng)歷不僅加深了我對農(nóng)業(yè)的理解,更讓我懂得了付出與收獲的意義,它將永遠留在我記憶深處。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Inspiredbytheexperienceonthefarm,Idecidedtoputmyknowledgetogooduse.Iwaseagertoturnmybackyardintoamini-farm.ItookoutthetoolsIhadboughtbefore,rolledupmysleeves,andstarteddiggingthesoil.Thesoilwasabithard,andittookmeagreatdealofefforttobreakitupandlevelit.Then,Icarefullyselectedvariousseeds,suchastomatoes,carrots,andlettuce.Everydayafterschool,Iwouldcometothebackyardwithoutfail.Iwateredtheplants,fertilizedthem,andcarefullycheckedforpests.Whentheweatherwasbad,Ihadtofigureoutwaystoprotectthem.Althoughthereweremanydifficultiesduringtheprocess,thethoughtoftheharvestonthefarmmotivatedmetoapplyalltheknowledgeIhadlearned.14范文呈現(xiàn)Astheharvestseasonapproached,thereweremanyvegetablesinthebackyard.Thetomatoeswereplumpandshinyinthesunlight,andthecarrotspeekedoutofthesoil,lookingextremelydelightful.Thelettuceleavesweretenderandgreen,asiftellingthestoryofabountifulharvest.Iwasoverjoyedandimmediatelyinvitedmyparentsandfriendstosharethisjoy.Wepickedthevegetablestogether,andmymomcookeddeliciousmealswiththem.Atthatmoment,wesataroundthetable,enjoyingthehappinessbroughtbythefruitsofourlabor.Thisexperiencenotonlydeepenedmyunderstandingofagriculturebutalsomademeunderstandthesignificanceofgivingandreceiving.Itwillalwaysremaininmymemory.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Inspiredbytheexperienceonthefarm,Idecidedtoputmyknowledgetogooduse.Eagertotransformmybackyardintoamini-farm,Iretrievedthetoolspreviouslypurchased,rolledupmysleeves,andsetaboutdiggingthesoil.Theground,beingrathercompact,demandedconsiderableefforttobreakupandlevel.Subsequently,Imeticulouslyselectedavarietyofseeds,includingtomatoes,carrots,andlettuce.Post-schooldaily,Iunfailinglymademywaytothebackyard.There,Iwateredthenascentplants,appliedfertilizers,andvigilantlyinspectedforpests.Whenadverseweatherloomed,Iscrambledtodeviseprotectivemeasures.Despitenumeroushurdles,therecollectionofthefarm'sharvestspurredmeontoapplyeverybitofknowledgegleaned.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Astheharvestseasonapproached,thereweremanyvegetablesinthebackyard.Plumptomatoesglistenedinthesunlight,whilecarrotspeekedoutfromthesoil,exudingcharm.Thetender-gr
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