高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：少年露營(yíng)：暴風(fēng)雨下的困境與希望曙光+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)少年露營(yíng)：暴風(fēng)雨下的困境與希望曙光1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Kevinwoketotheblaringbeepofhisalarmclock.“Can’twaitforthatcampingtrip,”Kevinthought,filledwithexcitement.Ashewasleavinghome,hisdadgrabbedhimbythehandandsaid,“Beforeyougo,justtellmethedirectionsonwhereyouandyourfriendsaregoingtostay.”“Butdad!”Kevincomplained.“Nobuts!”Kevin’sdadadded.“Fine.”Kevintoldhimthedirectionsandleft.4續(xù)寫原文Thethreefriends,Kevin,JayandNathan,hadbeenplanningthisadventureforweeks,packingtheirstuff-tents,snacks,andamap-preparingfora3-dayoutdoorexploration.ExcitementranthroughKevinastheydepartedfortheircampsite.“Thistripisgoingtobeawesome,”Nathanexcitedlyyelledastheysetoff.Butlittledidtheyknowthatnaturehadasurpriseinstoreforthem.Thefirstdayatthecampsitewasgoinggreat,settinguptents,collectingfirewood,andsharingstories.“Man,wenailedthesetents,”Kevinsaid.“Iknowitwaseasyreally,”Nathanreplied.Thefriendswerehappy.5續(xù)寫原文Yettowardsnight,asthedarkcloudsgatheredoverhead,theatmosphereshifted,andasuddenstormeruptedwithunforgivinganger.Rainpoureddownfromtheheavenslikearelentlesswaterfall,transformingthepeacefulcampsiteintoamuddybattleground.Worsestill,ahugetreewasuprootedandcrasheddownwithadeafeningcrackontheironlymeansofescape-theircar.Kevin’seyeswidenedinhorrorashespottedthedamagedwreckagebeneaththefallengiant.“Ourcar!”hescreamedoverthehowlingwind,hisvoiceamixofdisbeliefanddespair.“We’restuckhere,”hedeclared,hiswordsbarelyaudibleagainstthebackdropofthunderandraindrops.Theyrealizedthattheirplanshadbeenviolentlyspoiledbyforcesbeyondtheircontrol.Theoncequietcampsitenowstoodasadesertedbattlefield,thefallentreeservingasapainfulreminderoftheunpredictablenatureoftheworldaroundthem.6段首句Paragraph1:Thenextday,theyfoundthemselvesfacingtheimmediateproblemoffindingwater.Paragraph2:Onthethirdnight,adistantenginesoundbroketheterriblestillness.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9凱文滿心期待著露營(yíng)之旅，出發(fā)前在父親的要求下告知了露營(yíng)地點(diǎn)。他和朋友杰伊、內(nèi)森精心籌備了這次為期三天的戶外探險(xiǎn)，帶齊了帳篷、零食和地圖，出發(fā)時(shí)大家都興奮不已。第一天在露營(yíng)地，他們搭好帳篷、收集柴火、分享故事，一切都十分順利。但到了晚上，天氣突變，一場(chǎng)暴風(fēng)雨毫無(wú)預(yù)兆地襲來(lái)。大雨如注，原本寧?kù)o的露營(yíng)地瞬間變成了泥濘的戰(zhàn)場(chǎng)。更糟糕的是，一棵大樹(shù)被連根拔起，砸壞了他們的車，這讓他們失去了唯一的交通工具，被困在了露營(yíng)地。他們的計(jì)劃被這場(chǎng)突如其來(lái)的災(zāi)難徹底打亂，只能無(wú)奈地面對(duì)這困境。第二天，他們又面臨著尋找水源的緊迫問(wèn)題。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Thenextday,theyfoundthemselvesfacingtheimmediateproblemoffindingwater.第二天，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己面臨著尋找水源的緊迫問(wèn)題。前一天的暴風(fēng)雨將他們?cè)緶?zhǔn)備的飲用水都沖走了，而周圍的小溪在暴雨后變得渾濁不堪，根本無(wú)法飲用。凱文、杰伊和內(nèi)森站在營(yíng)地中央，面面相覷，心中滿是焦慮?！拔覀儽仨氄业礁蓛舻乃?，不然撐不了多久。”凱文皺著眉頭說(shuō)道。大家都點(diǎn)頭表示贊同。于是，他們帶上僅有的容器，開(kāi)始在周圍的樹(shù)林里尋找水源。他們沿著一條看似干涸的河床走著，眼睛不停地搜索著周圍的一切。突然，內(nèi)森興奮地喊道：“看，那邊有一片潮濕的草地，說(shuō)不定附近有水源?！贝蠹翼樦傅姆较蚺苋?，果然在草地的盡頭發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)小小的泉眼。泉水從地下汩汩涌出，清澈見(jiàn)底。他們歡呼雀躍，趕緊拿出容器接水。在接水的過(guò)程中，他們還不忘互相提醒要小心，不要把水弄臟了。接滿水后，他們小心翼翼地捧著容器回到營(yíng)地，雖然一路上很辛苦，但大家都覺(jué)得很值得，因?yàn)榻鉀Q了水源問(wèn)題，他們就有了繼續(xù)堅(jiān)持下去的希望。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Onthethirdnight,adistantenginesoundbroketheterriblestillness.第三天晚上，一陣遙遠(yuǎn)的引擎聲打破了可怕的寂靜。凱文、杰伊和內(nèi)森正圍坐在篝火旁，又累又餓，聽(tīng)到這聲音，他們一下子跳了起來(lái)?！斑@是車的聲音！”凱文激動(dòng)地喊道。他們順著聲音的方向拼命跑去，一邊跑一邊大聲呼喊：“我們?cè)谶@里！快來(lái)救我們！”聲音在寂靜的夜晚傳得很遠(yuǎn)。不一會(huì)兒，他們看到了一束燈光，一輛車緩緩駛來(lái)。原來(lái)是凱文的父親，他見(jiàn)孩子們一直沒(méi)有回家，心中十分擔(dān)心，便按照凱文出發(fā)前告訴他的方向找了過(guò)來(lái)。看到父親的那一刻，凱文的眼淚奪眶而出，他沖過(guò)去緊緊地抱住父親。父親安慰著他們，然后帶著他們回到了車上。在回家的路上，三個(gè)少年把這幾天的經(jīng)歷一五一十地告訴了父親。父親聽(tīng)后，既心疼又欣慰，他告訴孩子們，這次的經(jīng)歷雖然艱難，但也是一次寶貴的成長(zhǎng)機(jī)會(huì)。經(jīng)過(guò)這次露營(yíng)遇險(xiǎn)，凱文和他的朋友們不僅學(xué)會(huì)了如何在困境中求生，也更加懂得了生命的可貴和家人的重要性。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextday,theyfoundthemselvesfacingtheimmediateproblemoffindingwater.Thepreviousday'sstormhadwashedawayallthedrinkingwatertheyhadprepared,andthenearbystreamshadbecomesomuddyaftertheheavyrainthatthewaterwasundrinkable.Kevin,Jay,andNathanstoodinthecenterofthecampsite,lookingateachotherwithanxietyintheireyes."Wehavetofindcleanwater,orwewon'tlastlong,"Kevinsaidwithafrown.Everyonenoddedinagreement.So,theytooktheonlycontainerstheyhadandstartedsearchingforwaterinthesurroundingwoods.Theywalkedalongaseeminglydryriverbed,theireyesconstantlyscanningeverythingaroundthem.Suddenly,Nathanshoutedexcitedly,"Look,there'sapatchofwetgrassoverthere.Maybethere'swaternearby."Theyraninthedirectionhepointed,andsureenough,attheendofthegrass,theyfoundasmallspring.Thespringwatergushedoutfromtheground,clearandclean.Theycheeredandquicklytookouttheircontainerstocollectthewater.Whilecollectingthewater,theyalsoremindedeachothertobecarefulnottodirtythewater.Afterfillingthecontainers,theycarefullycarriedthembacktothecampsite.Althoughitwashardworkalongtheway,theyallfeltitwasworthitbecausesolvingthewaterproblemgavethemhopetoholdon.14范文呈現(xiàn)Onthethirdnight,adistantenginesoundbroketheterriblestillness.Kevin,Jay,andNathanweresittingaroundthecampfire,tiredandhungry.Whentheyheardthesound,theyjumpedupimmediately."That'sthesoundofacar!"Kevinshoutedexcitedly.Theyrantowardsthedirectionofthesound,shoutingloudly,"We'rehere!Comeandsaveus!"Theirvoicescarriedfarinthequietnight.Soon,theysawabeamoflight,andacarslowlydrovetowardsthem.ItwasKevin'sfather.Hewasveryworriedwhenhesawthatthechildrenhadn'tcomehome,sohefollowedthedirectionsKevinhadtoldhimbeforedepartureandcametofindthem.WhenKevinsawhisfather,tearswelledupinhiseyes.Herushedoverandhuggedhisfathertightly.Hisfathercomfortedthemandthentookthembacktothecar.Onthewayhome,thethreeteenagerstoldtheirfathereverythingthathadhappenedinthepastfewdays.Afterlistening,hisfatherfeltbothdistressedandrelieved.Hetoldthechildrenthatalthoughthisexperiencewastough,itwasalsoavaluableopportunityforgrowth.Afterthiscampingadventure,Kevinandhisfriendsnotonlylearnedhowtosurviveindifficultsituationsbutalsounderstoodthepreciousnessoflifeandtheimportanceoffamily.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextday,theyfoundthemselvesconfrontedwiththepressingissueofsecuringwater.Thetorrentialstormfromthepreviousdayhadsweptawayallthedrinkingwatertheyhadpainstakinglyprepared,andtheonce-clearstreamsinthevicinityhadturnedintomuddypoolsofundrinkableliquid.Kevin,Jay,andNathanstoodattheheartofthecampsite,exchanginganxiousglances."We'vegottofindcleanwater;otherwise,wewon'tbeabletolastmuchlonger,"Kevinremarked,hisbrowfurrowedwithconcern.Everyonenoddedinsolemnagreement.Armedwiththefewcontainerstheyhad,theyembarkedonasearchthroughthesurroundingwoods.Traversingaseeminglydryriverbed,theireyesdartedineverydirection,scanningforanysignsofwater.Suddenly,Nathanexclaimedwithexcitement,"Look!There'sapatchofdampgrassoverthere.Theremightbeawatersourcenearby."Theysprintedtowardstheindicatedspot,andtotheirdelight,attheedgeofthegrass,theydiscoveredasmall,bubblingspring.Theclear,freshwatergushedforthfromtheearth,likealifelineintheirdesperatesituation.Theyletoutcheersofjoyandpromptlybeganfillingtheircontainers.Astheyworked,theyconstantlyremindedoneanothertobecautious,ensuringthatthepreciouswaterremainedclean.Oncethecontainerswerefull,theycarefullymadetheirwaybacktothecampsite.Despitethearduousjourney,theyallfeltasenseofaccomplishment,knowingthattheyhadovercomeamajorobstacleandsecuredavitalresourcefortheirsurvival.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Onthethirdnight,adistantenginesoundpiercedtheeeriestillness.Kevin,Jay,andNathan,huddledaroundthedyingcampfire,wearyandfamished,joltedtotheirfeetatthesound."That'sthesoundofacar!"Kevinexclaimed,hisvoicefilledwithamixofexcitementandhope.Theydashedtowardsthesourceofthesound,shoutingatthetopoftheirlungs,"We'rehere!Comeandsaveus!"Theircriesechoedthroughthesilentnight.Beforelong,abeamoflightcutthroughthedarkness,andacarslowlyemergedfromthedistance.ItwasKevin'sfather.Worriedsickwhenthechildrenfailedtoreturnhomeasexpected,hehadfollowedthedire