高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：鄰里間的情誼：從陪伴到+“祖孫”+情

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)鄰里間的情誼：從陪伴到“祖孫”情1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Mydadisatruckdriver,andwhenIwaslittle,hewasgonemostofthetime.Somymomwasalmostlikeasinglemother.MyparentsandIlivedinasmallhouseinBrighton,Colorado,wherewehadabigyard.Wemovedthereonmythirdbirthday.MyfirstmemorywasourneighborArlenehandingmestrawberriesfromhergardenthroughaholeinthechain-linkfence.Sheandherhusband,Bill,livednextdoor.Arlenespentalotoftimeworkinginthegarden,andIwasalwaystalkingtoherfromouryard.Iwasachatter-box.IthinkwhatdrewmetoArleneandRillisthattheynevergottiredoflisteningtomegab(閑聊).IalsothinkArlenesawalotofherselfinme-wewerebothlonely,anxious-andthatmaybewhyshealwaystookthetimetolistentome.Billtoo.Itwasawonderfulconnection.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,myparentsaskedBillandArlenewhetherthey’dwatchmewhiletheywentoutonadate.Thisworkedwellforeveryone,soitbecameasomewhatmonthlything.Infact,ArleneandBilldidn’thavekids.Theyhadaspareroomintheirhouse,whichbecame“myroom”.Ihadacabinetandboxesoftoysandbooksinthatroom.ArleneandIwoulddocraftstogether.Billtaughtmehowtorideabikeandlaterhowtodrivethelawntractorandeventuallyacar.Hewasalwaysfixingsomethinginhisgarage.Iwouldwanderovertotalktohim,andhewouldalwaysstopandlistentome,justlikeArlenedid.WhenIwasaboutfive,Ihadanidea.MyparentswerewatchingTVwhenIspititout:“WhatifIacceptedBillandArleneasmygrandparents?”MyparentssaidIcouldgooverandaskthembymyself.5段首句Paragraph1：Thenextday,Igotupearly,readytovisitBillandArlenefirst.Paragraph2：ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8作者的父親是卡車司機(jī)，常不在家，母親獨自承擔(dān)照顧家庭的重任。他們搬到科羅拉多州布萊頓的小房子后，鄰居阿琳和比爾走進(jìn)了作者的生活。阿琳在花園勞作時，作者常與她聊天，兩人關(guān)系親密。父母外出約會時，會請阿琳和比爾照顧作者，作者還在他們家有了專屬房間。五歲時，作者突發(fā)奇想，想讓阿琳和比爾當(dāng)自己的祖父母。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thenextday,Igotupearly,readytovisitBillandArlenefirst.第二天，我早早起床，迫不及待地想去拜訪比爾和阿琳。一路上，我的心像揣了只小兔子，怦怦直跳。到了他們家門口，我深吸一口氣，輕輕敲了敲門。阿琳打開門，看到是我，臉上立刻露出和藹的笑容。我鼓起勇氣，看著她的眼睛說：“阿琳，我有個想法，我想讓你和比爾當(dāng)我的爺爺奶奶，你們愿意嗎？”阿琳愣了一下，眼中閃過一絲驚訝，緊接著，她的眼眶紅了，一把將我擁入懷中，聲音略帶顫抖地說：“寶貝，我們當(dāng)然愿意，這是我們的榮幸呀?！边@時，比爾也從屋里走出來，他笑著點頭，眼中滿是慈愛，說道：“我們早就把你當(dāng)成自己的孫輩啦?！?0續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：ThenIrealizedthatIshouldencouragemorestudentstotakepart.在往后的歲月里，比爾和阿琳始終全力支持我追尋每一個夢想。當(dāng)我對繪畫產(chǎn)生濃厚興趣時，阿琳為我買來各種繪畫工具，比爾則陪著我去戶外寫生，鼓勵我用畫筆描繪世界。我參加繪畫比賽時，他們比我還緊張，比賽結(jié)束后，又為我的每一次進(jìn)步歡呼雀躍。在我成長的每一個重要時刻，他們都不曾缺席。我從心底里感激他們，他們早已成為我生命中不可或缺的一部分，這份特殊的祖孫情，將永遠(yuǎn)溫暖著我的人生。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextday,Igotupearly,beingfullypreparedtovisitBillandArlenefirst.Ontheway,myheartwaspoundingviolentlyasiftherewasalittlerabbitjumpinginside.WhenIarrivedattheirdoor,Itookadeepbreathandknockedgently.Arleneopenedthedoorandwhenshesawme,akindsmileimmediatelyappearedonherface.Isummonedupmycourageandlookingintohereyes,Isaid,"Arlene,I'vegotanidea.IwantyouandBilltobemygrandparents.Wouldyouliketo?"Arlenewasabitstartledatfirst.Alookofsurpriseflashedinhereyes.Then,hereyesbecamered.Shepulledmeintoherarmstightlyandsaidwithaslightlytremblingvoice,"Honey,ofcoursewe'dloveto.It'sourhonor."Atthismoment,Billcameoutfromthehouse.Henoddedwithabigsmileandtherewasfullofloveinhiseyes.Hesaid,"We'vealreadyregardedyouasourgrandchild."13范文呈現(xiàn)Overtheyears,BillandArlenehavebeensupportingmeinallmydreams.WhenIbecameinterestedinpainting,Arleneboughtmeallkindsofpaintingtools.Billaccompaniedmetogooutdoorsketching,encouragingmetodepicttheworldwithmypaintbrush.WhenIparticipatedinpaintingcompetitions,theywereevenmorenervousthanme.Aftereachcompetition,theycheeredforeveryprogressImade.Theynevermissedanyimportantmomentinmygrowth.I'mtrulygratefultothemfromthebottomofmyheart.Theyhavealreadybecomeanindispensablepartofmylife.Thisspecialgrandparent-grandchildrelationshipwillwarmmylifeforever.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextday,Irosewiththelark,myheartbrimmingwitheagernesstovisitBillandArlene.AsImademywayacross,myheartthumpedwildly,asifatiny,excitedcreatureweretrappedwithin.Uponreachingtheirdoorstep,Idrewadeepbreathandtappedgently.Arlene'sfacelitupwithawarmsmileassheopenedthedoor.Summoningallmycourage,Imethergazeandblurtedout,"Arlene,I'veanidea.IwonderifyouandBillwouldbemygrandparents?"Arlenewasmomentarilytakenaback,surpriseregisteringinhereyes.Inaninstant,hereyeswelledwithemotion,andshepulledmeintoatightembrace,hervoicequiveringwithjoy."Honey,itwouldbeourgreatesthonor."Justthen,Billemergedfromthehouse,noddingwithabeamingsmile,hiseyesradiatingaffection."We'velongconsideredyouourgrandchild,"heaffirmed.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Overtheensuingyears,BillandArlenestoodunwaveringlybymysideinpursuitofallmydreams.Whenthesparkofinterestinpaintingignitedwithinme,Arlenepromptlyprocuredanarrayofpaintingtools,whileBillaccompaniedmeono