高三英語一輪復(fù)習讀后續(xù)寫練習+小小孩童為狗洗澡展責任心

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習小小孩童為狗洗澡，展責任心1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文ItwasahotdayinFlorida.Theschoolyearhadjustendedanditwastimeforsummervacation.WehadjustgottenalittleblackdogwhowenamedOne-Eyed.Wechosethatnamebecausehecouldonlyseeoutofoneeye.Everybodywantedtodosomethingforthedog:feedhim,teachhimtricksandtakelongwalkswithhim.Everybodywassohappytohavethisactive,playfulandfurrynewadditiontoourfamily.Everybody,thatis,exceptmymomandme.4續(xù)寫原文Allmymomsawwhenshelookedatthedogwassomeoneelsetocleanupafter.Shedding(脫毛),messyandmuddy,hebouncedalloverthehouse.AllMomseemedtocareaboutwasgettingthehousecleaned.MymombegantoputClorox(漂白水)inthebathtub.TherewasnomessingwithMomwhenshestartedcleaning,soIdecidedtomoveoutoftheway,whichisamoveI’dbeenpracticingforlong.Beingtheyoungestinmyfamilyhashaditsadvantages.MorethanafewtimesIwasspoiledoreveryonesaidIwasthecutest.Butbeingtheyoungestalsocamewithitsfairshareoftroubles.“You’retooyoung!”“You’llmessthisup!”they’doftensay.IknewthatmyfamilylovedmebutIcouldn’twaittoshowthemIcoulddothingsbymyself.5續(xù)寫原文EverytimeIaskedmybrotherormysisterifIcouldpetOne-Eyed,theywouldshout,“No!”ortellmethatIhadgerms(細菌)andifItouchedOne-Eyedhewoulddie!Ireallybelievedthem.OnceIevenconfessedtomymomthatItouchedthedogwhennoonenoticed.Atfirst,mymomseemedveryconfused,butthensherealized.Mymomscoldedmybrotherandsister,“You’dbetterstopteasingyourlittlebrother!”Littlebrother!That’sexactlywhatIwas.Thatreallygotmybloodboiling!Secretly,Idecided,“Iwillshowthemwhatalittlekidcando!”6段首句Paragraph1：Oneday,withnooneelsehome,IstoleintothebathroomwithdirtyOne-Eyed.Paragraph2：Mymomcamebackwithmybrotherandsister,seeingwhathadhappened.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了暑假伊始，佛羅里達酷熱難耐，家里迎來新成員——獨眼小狗。除了媽媽和“我”，大家都對小狗寵愛有加。媽媽只看到小狗帶來的臟亂，一心打掃。身為家中最小的孩子，“我”常被家人認為年幼，做事不靠譜。哥哥姐姐不讓“我”碰小狗，這讓“我”決心證明自己。某天趁家人不在，“我”帶著臟兮兮的獨眼小狗進了浴室。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Oneday,withnooneelsehome,IstoleintothebathroomwithdirtyOne-Eyed.一天，趁家里其他人都不在，我?guī)еK兮兮的獨眼偷偷溜進了浴室。我心想，這次一定要好好給它洗個澡，讓大家看看我也能照顧好小狗。我興致勃勃地打開水龍頭，可水溫卻怎么也調(diào)不好，不是燙得讓獨眼直往后躲，就是冷得它瑟瑟發(fā)抖。獨眼對這突如其來的水流感到害怕，開始在浴室里上躥下跳，大聲吠叫。我伸手去抓它，卻因為地上滿是肥皂泡，腳底一滑，整個人摔倒在地，渾身濕透。洗發(fā)水也打翻了，泡沫四溢，浴室瞬間變得一團糟。但我咬咬牙，心里想著絕對不能放棄，一定要完成這次給獨眼洗澡的任務(wù)。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Mymomcamebackwithmybrotherandsister,seeingwhathadhappened.媽媽帶著哥哥和姐姐回來了，看到浴室里這一片狼藉的景象。他們一開始都愣住了，眼睛睜得大大的，滿臉震驚。我低著頭，心里忐忑不安，以為會被狠狠責罵。然而，媽媽卻走上前，輕輕摸了摸我的頭，微笑著說：“寶貝，雖然浴室亂了點，但媽媽為你勇于嘗試的勇氣感到驕傲?！备绺绾徒憬阋惨庾R到以前小看我了。我鼓起勇氣，跟他們說我有多希望能和他們一起照顧獨眼。從那以后，他們果然常常帶著我一起照顧小狗。通過這次經(jīng)歷，我終于讓家人看到了我的責任心。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,withnooneelsehome,IstoleintothebathroomwithdirtyOne-Eyed.Burningwiththedesiretoprovemyself,Iresolvedtobathehim.AsIturnedonthetap,thewatertemperaturewaseitherscaldinghotorice-cold.One-Eyed,unaccustomedtothis,startedbarkingincessantlyandjumpingaroundrestlessly.Imadeseveralattemptstoholdhimstill,buthisboundlessenergymadeitafutileeffort.Theshampoospilledeverywhere,andthesoaprenderedthefloorextremelyslippery.BeforeIknewit,Islippedandfell,gettingcompletelysoaked.Thebathroomwasinutterchaos,butIwasresolutenottogiveup.ItoldmyselfthatImustseethisthroughtotheend.14范文呈現(xiàn)Finally,thegreatdayarrivedand“theoldwoman”couldn’twaittogetonstage.Standingbackstage,Itookadeepbreathtocalmmynerves.Whenthecurtainrose,Iwalkedontothestagewithfulldetermination.Ibecametheoldwoman,everymovementandexpressioncarefullycrafted.Iworkedinharmonywiththeactorplayingthesoldier,vividlyportrayingtheoldwoman'sactofhelping.Theaudiencewascaptivatedbyourperformance.Theirreactions,fromlaughtertosuspense,showedtheirengagement.Whentheperformanceended,theapplausewasdeafening.Ifeltanoverwhelmingsenseofpride,realizingthatnomatterhowsmalltherolewas,mydedicationcouldmakeitshine.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Oneday,withnooneelsehome,IstoleintothebathroomwithdirtyOne-Eyed.Drivenbyanintensedesiretoprovemyself,Iembarkedonthetaskofbathinghim.Uponturningonthewater,thetemperatureoscillatedwildlybetweenscaldingandfreezing.One-Eyed,startledbytheerraticwaterflow,eruptedintoafrenzyofbarkingandleaping.Despitemyrepeatedattemptstorestrainhim,hisexuberantenergyprevailed.Theshampoocascadedacrosstheroom,andthesoap-slickedfloorbecameahazard.Inaninstant,Ilostmyfootingandtumbled,thoroughlydrenched.Amidthechaos,myresolveonlystrengthened;Iwasdeterminedtopersevere.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Mymomcamebackwithmybrotherandsister,seeingwhathadhappened.Initially,shockregisteredontheirfacesastheysurveyedthedevastatedbathroom.Standingsheepishly,Ibracedmyselfforareprimand.Instead,mymom,withawarmsmile,said,“I'mproudofyourcourageintrying.”Thismeltedtheice,andmysiblingsrealizedtheirunderesti