高二下學(xué)期7月期末聯(lián)考英語試題讀后續(xù)寫-畫筆與心門：父女間的情感糾葛+講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Alisonwasaverydeterminedfour-year-oldgirl.Shewasinterestedineverything,butdrawingespeciallywasherexpertise(專長).HermotherAnnboughtherpapers,colors,brushesandpencilsanditseemedthatAlisonusedthemupallinadayortwo.Alisonshowedherdrawingstoeveryone.Sheespeciallywantedtoimpressherfather.Thereisatimewhendaughtersanddadsbondstrongly,andAlisonsurelylovedherdadandwantedtobond.Shewantedtobondverymuch—butDadalwaysseemedtobetoobusy.AnnwatchedwithaheavyhearthowDaughterandDadveryseldomplayedtogetherandhowthefatherreactedtoAlison’sattemptstoshowherdrawingstohim.“Yes,honey,thatislovely,”hewouldbarelyglimpse(瞥)atAlison’sdrawings,andthenanswerhiscellphoneorgotohisstudy.Oneday,Alisonusedmanyhourstodrawareallydetailedhouse.Itwasmagnificent(壯麗的).Shehaddrawnindividualtiles(磚)andcoloredthemonebyone,carefullyleavingsomespacebetweenthetiles.Shehaddrawncurtainsinthewindows,andherself,MomandDadlookingoutofthem.Onthelawnwasthepuppyshesomuchwantedtohave.“Look,Mom!”sherantoshowherdrawingtohermother.“Oh,Alison,thisissobeautiful!Yourbestever!”hermomsaidwithasmile.Alisonwashappy.“I’llshowthistoDadnow!”shesaid.Sherandownthehalltothecloseddoorofherfather’sstudy.“Dad!Dad!”Shetriedtoopenthedoor.Itwaslocked.Alison’smomsawtheexpressionofdisappointmentonherdaughter’sface.Shereachedforthedoorknobonceagain.Theycouldhearhimtalkingonthephonewithsomeone.Thenthetalkingstopped.“DAD!”Alisonknockedonthedoor,“IwantyoutoseethehouseImade!”“I’msorry,Alison.Iambusy,”camethevoicebehindthedoor.“Can’tyoushowittosomeoneelse?”注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：四歲的艾莉森對一切都充滿好奇，尤其熱愛繪畫，媽媽總是全力支持她的愛好，為她購置各種繪畫工具。然而，她格外渴望得到父親的關(guān)注，父女間本應(yīng)在這一階段建立親密紐帶，可父親卻總是忙碌，每次艾莉森滿心歡喜拿著畫作想展示給他時，父親都只是匆匆一瞥，便接著接電話或回書房，讓艾莉森屢屢受挫。有一回，艾莉森耗費數(shù)小時精心繪制了一座細(xì)節(jié)滿滿的房子，屋內(nèi)有家人，屋外有渴望的小狗，滿心期待能得到父親認(rèn)可，可父親依舊以忙碌為由將她拒之門外，這讓艾莉森極度失望，母女倆的心情也隨之沉重。伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)：伏筆：艾莉森尤其想給父親留下深刻印象，總是急切地向父親展示畫作。回應(yīng)：為后文父親多次忽視她的作品，導(dǎo)致她極度失落，以及最終父親意識到錯誤后態(tài)度轉(zhuǎn)變，兩人關(guān)系修復(fù)做鋪墊。續(xù)寫中父親看到女兒傷心欲絕的模樣，深感愧疚，開始重視她的畫作，實現(xiàn)情感轉(zhuǎn)折。伏筆：父親總是很忙，對艾莉森展示畫作的舉動反應(yīng)冷淡，常瞥一眼就去忙自己的事?；貞?yīng)：突出父親前期對女兒情感需求的忽視，使艾莉森的失望順理成章，也引發(fā)讀者對父女關(guān)系走向的好奇。續(xù)寫里父親因愧疚改變行為模式，主動花時間陪伴女兒，與前文形成對比。伏筆：艾莉森精心繪制包含家人與夢想小狗的房子畫作，投入大量心血?；貞?yīng)：解釋艾莉森期望得到父親認(rèn)可的急切心情，畫作越用心，被拒絕后的傷害越大。續(xù)寫中父親看到畫作的精美，震驚之余懊悔不已，進(jìn)一步推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。伏筆：母親心疼地看著父女相處狀況，目睹艾莉森的失落?；貞?yīng)：側(cè)面烘托父親行為的不妥，也為母親后續(xù)可能的安慰、引導(dǎo)作用埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫中母親給予艾莉森擁抱安慰，在父親轉(zhuǎn)變后，家庭氛圍更加溫馨。伏筆：父親在書房內(nèi)鎖門打電話，拒絕艾莉森進(jìn)門?；貞?yīng)：強化父親的忙碌形象，讓艾莉森的受阻顯得更加無奈，凸顯矛盾。續(xù)寫中父親打開門，走出封閉空間面對女兒，象征著打破隔閡，走向和解。續(xù)寫要點：第一段情感線：艾莉森從極度失望、傷心，到陷入自我封閉，對繪畫失去熱情；故事線：艾莉森被父親拒絕后，默默回到母親身邊，暗自落淚，之后幾天都不再觸碰繪畫工具，沉浸在難過之中。第二段情感線：父親從愧疚、懊悔，到?jīng)Q心彌補，艾莉森則由起初的猶豫、不信任，逐漸重燃希望，最終恢復(fù)快樂；故事線：父親聽到哭聲，心懷愧疚地開門，誠懇道歉并認(rèn)真欣賞畫作，此后每天特意留出時間陪伴艾莉森，父女關(guān)系升溫。主旨升華句：Loveisnotjustaboutbeingpresentphysically,buttrulytuningintotheheartsofourlovedones.（愛不僅僅是身體在場，更要真正關(guān)注所愛之人的內(nèi)心。）Inthehustleandbustleoflife,don'tletthemostpreciousbondsfadeaway;cherisheverymomentwithfamily.（在忙碌的生活中，別讓最珍貴的親情紐帶消逝；珍惜與家人相處的每一刻。）Sometimes,asincereapologyandachangeofheartcanhealthedeepestwoundsandreignitethesparkoflove.（有時候，一個真誠的道歉和心意的改變，能治愈最深的創(chuàng)傷，重燃愛的火花。）Thetruemeasureofaparent'sloveliesnotinprovidingmaterially,butinnurturingachild'sspiritwithtimeandattention.（衡量父母之愛的真正標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，不在于物質(zhì)給予，而在于用時間和關(guān)注滋養(yǎng)孩子的心靈。）Achild'sworldissimple:alltheyneedisalittlerecognitiontomaketheirsunshineagain.（孩子的世界很簡單：他們只需要一點認(rèn)可，就能讓心中的太陽再次閃耀。）寫作示范一：Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.

Tearsstreameddownhercheeksuncontrollablyasshetrudgedbacktohermother.Thedrawingthathadoncebeenasourceofpridenowfeltlikeaheavyburden.Sheshoveditunderherpillowandclimbedintobed,pullingthecoversoverherhead.Fordays,shemopedaroundthehouse,ignoringtheinvitingblankpapersandbrightcolors.Hermothertriedtocoaxheroutofherfunk,butitwasasifalighthadgoneoutinsideAlison.Sheevenstoppedaskingaboutthepuppyshehadsolongedfor,herdreamsseeminglycrushedalongwithherspirit.ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.

Hisfacewasetchedwithremorseashebeheldhisdaughter'sforlornstate.Hequietlysatontheedgeofthebedandgentlypulledbackthecovers.“Alison,I'vebeenafool.Iforgotwhattrulymattered.”Reachingunderthepillow,heretrievedthewrinkleddrawing.Ashestudiedit,hiseyesgrewmisty.“Thisisamasterpiece,baby.You'vegotagift.”Heheldouthisarms,andafteramoment'shesitation,Alisonflungherselfintothem.Fromthenon,hecarvedoutspecialtimeeachday,whetheritwaspaintingwithherintheparkorframingherdrawingsathome.Thehousewasonceagainfilledwithlaughter,andAlison'shearthealed,onebrushstrokeatatime.寫作示范二：Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.

Asenseofdesolationwashedoverher.Shelookedatthedrawinginherhand,nowseemingsoworthless.Slowly,shewalkedtoherroom,closedthedoor,andleanedagainstit,sobbingsoftly.Thecolorsonthepaperblurredashertearsfell.Inthefollowingdays,sheavoidedtheartcornerinthelivingroom.Whenherfriendscameoverandaskedtodraw,sheshookherhead.Thejoythatarthadoncebroughtherwasgone,replacedbyacoldemptiness.ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.

Hesteppedintothehallway,guiltgnawingathim.SpottingAlison'sdoorajar,hepeekedin.Seeinghersmall,tremblingform,herushedtoherside.“Alison,I'msosorry.Iwaswrong.”Kneeling,hetookthedrawing,smoothingoutthecreases.“Lookatthis!It'samazing.Ishouldhavebeenhereforyou.”Hisvoicecracked.Alisonliftedhertear-stainedface,andastheireyesmet,aglimmerofhopereturned.Afterthat,hemadeaschedule,dedicatingeveningstoartprojectswithAlison.Theirrelationshipblossomedanew,provingthatlovecanalwaysfinditswayback,evenafterthedarkestmoments.【答案】 Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.Shelookeddownonherbeautifuldrawingandherlowerlipstartedtotremble.“Idon’twantt