2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語(yǔ)Unit1TeenagelifeSectionⅦReadingforWriting-建議信學(xué)案新人教版必修第一冊(cè)

PAGEPAGE1SectionⅦReadingforWriting——建議信本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是讀一封建議信，了解建議信的結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)言特征，然后再寫(xiě)一封建議信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthemodel10September，2024DearWorriedFriend，Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend，ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou，sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest，SusanLuo(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①recommendvt.建議②unhealthyadj.不健康的③encouragevt.激勵(lì)④usefuladj.有用的⑤advicevt.忠告，建議⑥inone’ssparetime閑暇⑦lookforwardto盼望，期望⑧beworriedabout對(duì)……擔(dān)憂⑨beattractedto寵愛(ài)⑩beaddictedto對(duì)……上癮?concentrateon集中精力于?begoodfor/dogoodto對(duì)……有好處?makefriends交摯友?hearfrom收到……的來(lái)信?enjoyoneself/havefun玩得開(kāi)心Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李華，你的好摯友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請(qǐng)依據(jù)下面提示給她寫(xiě)一封建議信。1.要交摯友首先要做一個(gè)摯友；2.要和摯友同甘共苦；患難之中的摯友才是真正的摯友；3.友情須要時(shí)間和投入(effort)。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：thepurposeoftheletterParagraph2：thesuggestionsthatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’shopeStep2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①tip/advice/suggestionn.建議②situationn.狀況③makefriends交摯友④havetrouble/difficultyindoing...做……有困難⑤takeone’sadvice接受某人的建議⑥sharehappinessandsorrowwith...和……同甘共苦⑦callfor須要⑧putone’sheartinto一心一意2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很愧疚。(havetroublein...)Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.②假如你接受我的建議，變更這種狀況是很簡(jiǎn)潔的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.③要交摯友為什么不先做一個(gè)摯友呢？(whynot)Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?④你和摯友同甘共苦莫非不是一個(gè)好辦法嗎？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?⑤正如一句諺語(yǔ)說(shuō)的，患難之中的摯友才是真正的摯友。(asasayinggoes)Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleast15Sept，2024DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours，LiHuaⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytoread?篇章結(jié)構(gòu)Thefirstpart：thebeginning(dateandgreeting)oftheletterThesecondpart：thebody(fact-stating，youropinionandhope)oftheletterThethirdpart：theend(wishesandsignature)oftheletter亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)1.建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式①I(mǎi)knowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你現(xiàn)在在與人溝通方面有些麻煩，你也可能常常感到孤獨(dú)。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很興奮收到你就……征求建議的來(lái)信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.這里有幫助你的一些建議。2.表達(dá)建議常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，為什么不參與一個(gè)俱樂(lè)部？假如你這樣做的話，就會(huì)交到摯友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你應(yīng)當(dāng)盡力與人交談。這樣，你會(huì)感覺(jué)好點(diǎn)。③Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，假如你看書(shū)或聽(tīng)音樂(lè)將會(huì)是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的辦法。通過(guò)這樣做，你會(huì)使自己安靜下來(lái)。④Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最終但同等重要的是，你應(yīng)當(dāng)先和她談一談。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看來(lái)，你們應(yīng)當(dāng)相互幫助。3.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式①I(mǎi)hopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你會(huì)發(fā)覺(jué)這些方法有用。②Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheaboveadvice.假如你遵從以上建議，隨著時(shí)間的推移，人們會(huì)更加了解你，會(huì)情愿和你交摯友的。③Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you’llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我信任，假如你聽(tīng)從我的建議，你會(huì)和同學(xué)們相處好的。寫(xiě)作技巧連句成篇，行