寫作：關于稿件問詢郵件+講義 高二下學期期中質量檢查英語試題

寫作假定你是李華，一個月前你給校英文報新開設的專欄“HeritageinDanger”投稿，但尚未收到校報編輯的回復。請你寫一封郵件問詢，內容包括：1.簡述稿件內容；2.詢問稿件情況。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearEditor,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely,LiHua關于稿件問詢郵件的寫作寫作提綱第一段：自我介紹并說明寫信目的。明確提及一個月前向“HeritageinDanger”專欄投稿，引起編輯對郵件主題的關注。第二段：簡述稿件內容。詳細描述稿件中關于當?shù)厥芡{遺產的情況，如面臨的具體危險、現(xiàn)狀等，讓編輯快速回憶起稿件。第三段：禮貌詢問稿件情況，表達希望得到反饋的急切心情，展現(xiàn)對投稿的重視。語言積累submitanarticleto：向……投稿文章，如“Isubmittedanarticletoyournewcolumn.”（我向你們的新專欄投了一篇文章。）amonthago：一個月前，用于說明時間，如“Amonthago,Isentmymanuscript.”（一個月前，我寄了我的稿件。）currentsituation：現(xiàn)狀，如“describethecurrentsituationof...”（描述……的現(xiàn)狀）facedamagefrom：面臨來自……的破壞，如“facedamagefromnaturalerosion”（面臨自然侵蝕的破壞）humanactivities：人類活動，如“beaffectedbyhumanactivities”（受到人類活動的影響）wonderabout：想知道，如“I'mwonderingaboutthestatusofmysubmission.”（我想知道我的投稿情況。）thestatusof：……的情況，如“thestatusofmymanuscript”（我的稿件情況）givesb.somefeedback：給某人一些反饋，如“Couldyougivemesomefeedback?”（你能給我一些反饋嗎？）lookforwardto：期待，如“I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.”（我期待你的回復。）kindlyletmeknow：請告知我，如“Kindlyletmeknowtheresult.”（請告知我結果。）5個佳句I'mwritingtoinquireaboutthearticleIsubmittedtoyouresteemed“HeritageinDanger”columnamonthago,whichIsincerelyhopehascaughtyourattention.（我寫信是想詢問我一個月前投給你們備受尊敬的“瀕危遺產”專欄的文章，我衷心希望它能引起您的注意。）ThearticleIsentfocusesonthedistressingcurrentsituationofalocalancienttower,whichisonthevergeofcollapseduetolong-termnaturalcorrosionandirresponsiblehumaninterference.（我寄的文章聚焦于當?shù)匾蛔潘钊藫鷳n的現(xiàn)狀，由于長期的自然腐蝕和不負責任的人為干擾，它已瀕臨倒塌。）I'meagerlylookingforwardtohearingfromyouaboutthestatusofmysubmission,asthistopicholdsgreatsignificanceinraisingawarenessaboutheritageprotection.（我急切地期待您告知我投稿的情況，因為這個話題對于提高遺產保護意識具有重要意義。）GiventhataconsiderableamountoftimehaspassedsinceIsubmittedmywork,I'mhopingyoucouldkindlyprovidemewithsomefeedbackonwhetheritmeetstherequirementsofyourcolumn.（鑒于我投稿已經過去了相當長的時間，我希望您能好心地給我一些反饋，告訴我它是否符合你們專欄的要求。）Iunderstandthatyoumaybeswampedwithnumeroussubmissions,butI'dbeextremelygratefulifyoucouldspareamomenttoletmeknowthefateofmyarticle.（我理解您可能被大量的投稿淹沒，但如果您能抽出一點時間告訴我我的文章的情況，我將不勝感激。）寫作示范一DearEditor,I'mLiHua.Isentanarticletoyour“HeritageinDanger”columnamonthago.It'saboutalocaloldtemple.Thetemplehasstoodforcenturiesbutnowfacesthreatsfromweatheringandsomeconstructionaroundit.I'mreallyeagertoknowthestatusofmysubmission.Couldyoupleasegivemesomefeedback?Sincerely,LiHua寫作示范二DearEditor,I'mLiHua.Amonthago,Isubmittedanarticleregardingthe“HeritageinDanger”column.Init,Idescribedthepoorstateofalocalhistoricalwell.It'sbeendamagedbypollutionandlackofpropermaintenance.I'mwonderingifmyarticlehasbeenreviewed.I'dappreciateitifyoucouldletmeknowtheresult.Sincerely,LiHua寫作示范三DearEditor,I'mLiHua.Onemonthago,Isentinanarticleforyour“HeritageinDanger”column.Thecontentisaboutalocalancientwall.It'sbeingerodedbyrainandalsoaffectedbyillegalgraffiti.I'mverycuriousaboutthesituationofmysubmission.Couldyoukindlytellmeifithasachancetobepublished?Sincerely,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,IamwritingtoinquireaboutthestatusofthearticleIsubmittedtothenewcolumn“HeritageinDanger”inourschool’sEnglishnewspaperonemonthago.Titled“HelpingtheWoodenPagoda”,myarticledelvesintotheurgentsituationfacingtheWoodenPagodaofYingxianCounty,aimingtouncoverthefactorscontributingtoitsdamageandadvocatethepublictotakeactiontoprotectandrepairthepagoda.Inaddition,Isignedmynameandclassatthebottomofmyart