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讀后續(xù)寫6大靚麗開頭絕招

Part1六招高分開頭技巧

第一招：非謂語開頭

Lookingaroundhimcautiously,heslippedintotheroomandsoftlyclosedthedoor.他小心翼翼地環(huán)顧四周，溜進(jìn)

了房間，輕輕地關(guān)上門。

Feelingdisappointed,Janehadtostayaloneforanothernight.簡感到失望，不得不再呆一夜。

Feelingrefreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.她感到神清氣爽，繼續(xù)沿著小溪散

步，尋找出去的路。

第二招：形容詞短語開頭

Curioustoknowwhatwasinside,hetiptoedintothedarkcave.他好奇地想知道里面是什么,踮著腳尖走進(jìn)了黑

暗的洞穴。

Unabletosayaword,hewasrootedtothespot.一句話也說不出來，他就楞在了原地。

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的馬前。

AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.我害怕我會傷害

這個可愛的小生物，我自動發(fā)出一聲喊叫來阻止我的馬。

文章給的提示句是：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.我們不知道自己在哪里，天變黑了。

Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.我又累又餓，想知道我們能不能找到回去的

路。

第三招：副詞開頭

Carefully,hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass他小心翼翼地踩過了所有的碎玻璃。

Joyfully,heskippedupthestreet.他很高興地跳過了街道。

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.立刻，一片黑暗籠罩著森林。

第四招：對話或獨(dú)白開頭

：“Let'sseewhogetstherefirst!,?Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.“讓我們看看誰先至！J

那里去！"瑞秋一邊叫著，一邊飛快地蹬著車從珍妮身邊沖過去。

"Getintothecar."PaulshoutedatMac.“上車！”保羅對麥克喊道。

第五招：背景描寫

Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway（我們開車穿過了幾個州，沿途看到了

很多好風(fēng)景。）

Ilookedoutofthecarwindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleys,holdingme

entirelyintheirfascination.

我望著車窗外，蜿蜒的河流，高聳的山脈，陽光明媚的海灘和深邃的山谷，完全吸引了我的注意力。

第六招：行為描寫

Furrystartedwagginghistailandrunningaroundincircleswhenhesawhismastertakingaleashoutfromthe

drawer.Furrywasallreadyforhiseveningwalk.

當(dāng)他看到他的主人從抽屜里拿出一條皮帶時，F(xiàn)urry開始搖，繞著圈跑。Furry準(zhǔn)備好了晚上的散步。

Dadexchangedaglancewithme.WhynotcamptosatisfyMom?爸爸和我相互看了一眼。為什么不露營來滿

足媽媽？

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第一招：非謂語開頭

1.聽到外面的吵鬧聲，她悄悄地打開窗戶往外看。

,shecautiouslyopenedthewindowandpeekedout.

2.感到緊張，他深吸了一口氣，然后走進(jìn)了面試室。

,hetookadeepbreathandthenwalkedintotheinterviewroom.

第二招：形容詞短語開頭

1.困惑不解，他再次審視了這個問題。

,heexaminedtheproblemonceagain.

2.對于即將到來的旅行充滿興奮，他開始收拾行李。

________________________________,hebegantopackhisluggage.

第三招：副詞開頭

1.耐心地，老師一遍又一遍地解釋這個復(fù)雜的概念。

,theteacherexplainedthecomplexconceptoverandoveragain.

2.突然，一道閃電劃破了夜空，接著是一聲巨響。

,aflashoflightningcutthroughthenightsky,followedbyaloudcrash.

第四招：對話或獨(dú)白開頭

1.“我們一定要贏這場比賽！”隊(duì)長在比賽前鼓舞士氣。

thecaptainexclaimed,boostingtheteam'smoralebeforethegame.

2.“請保持安靜，”圖書管理員輕聲說，希望讀者們不要說話。

thelibrarianwhispered,hopingthereaderswouldstoptalking.

第五招：背景描寫

1.我們乘坐火車穿越了鄉(xiāng)村，沿途看到了美麗的田野和寧靜的村莊。

Wetookthetrainthroughthecountryside,seeing.

2.夜幕降臨，街道上的路燈開始亮起，給城市增添了一種溫馨的氣氛。

Aseveningfell,thestreetlightsbegantoglow,.

第六招：行為描寫

1.看到他的朋友在操場上揮手，湯姆立刻跑過去加入他們。

Seeinghisfriendwavingontheplayground,.

2.注意到門后有動靜，她迅速轉(zhuǎn)身，準(zhǔn)備面對任何可能的危險。

答案：Noticingamovementbehindthedoor,sheanypossibledanger.

高分副詞使用

第一組高分副詞

(有些單詞在中文中意思差不多，在英文中還是有差異的，請同學(xué)們多查看英語解釋和常用搭配。)

1.輕輕地;悄悄地(walk/closethedoor)quietly

2.輕輕地(sway/tremble)slightly

3.輕輕地softly(rain/wind)/gently(notviolently)

4.溫柔地；和藹地mildly/gently

5.謙虛地modestly

6.沉默地speechlessly/dumbly

7.感激地gratefully

8.迅速地swiftly

9.堅(jiān)定地firmly/determinedly

10.勇敢地bravely

11.熱情地；熱烈地warmly

12.和藹地kindly

13.渴望地；熱切地eagerly

14.害羞地；內(nèi)向地shyly

15.仔細(xì)地closely

16.專心地attentively

17.舒月艮地comfortably

18.考慮周到地；體諒地considerately

19.故意地deliberately

20.慷慨地generously

21.兇猛地；兇狠地；憤怒地fiercely

22.懷希望地hopefully

23.仁慈地mercifully

24.快樂地；愉快地

(smile)/brightly/cheerfully

25.絕望地；拼命地desperately

26.大聲地loudly

27.友好地；禮貌地pleasantly

第一組高分副詞的運(yùn)用

1.Shegrinnedatme（害羞地）,hereyessparkling.

2.Theaudiencelistenedtothelecture.（專心地）

3.Hewas（故意地）tryingtoupsether.

4.Thedetectivewatchedhim（仔細(xì)地）,waitingforareply.

5.Hewastreated.（仁慈地）

6.'Morning!,shecalled.（快樂地）

7.Ifyou*reallsitting（舒適地），thenPllbegin.

8.Pleasegive（慷慨地）totherefugeefund.

9.1Willtherebeanyfoodleftover?*heasked.（滿懷希望地）

10.Hetreatseveryoneequallyand.（體諒他人地）

11.Helookedround（拼命地）forsomeonetohelphim.

12.Hewalked（迅速地）towardshomedownthedarkstreet.

13.Shesmiled.（愉快地）

14.tcrildothedishes,"hesaid.（友好地；禮貌地）

15.（勇敢地）hewentintotheburninghouse

16.Thetreesswayed（輕輕地）inthebreeze.

17.Forafewsecondsshegazed（沉默地；一聲不啃地）athim.

18.Terrygreetedthevisitor.（熱情地）

19."OfcourseIdon*tmind,^^sheanswered.（和藹地；溫柔地）

20.They*re（渴望地）awaitingthebigday.

21.Hestoodupsoundlesslyand（沉默地；一聲不啃地）andglidedacrossthehallwayandthrougha

door.

22.Heswayed（輕輕地），asifabouttofall.

23.'Icanmanage,1shesaid.（堅(jiān)定地）

24.11wasjustlucky,*hesaid.（謙虛地）

25.Theauthors（感激地）acknowledgeyourfinancialsupport.

26.Rosashutthedoor.（輕輕地）

27.Musicplayed（輕輕地）inthebackground.

28.Thedoglookedather（兇狠地）.

第二組高分副詞

1.有禮貌地politely

2.真誠地sincerely

3.熟練地skilfully

4.欲睡地sleepily

5.傷心地sadly

6.寬容地tolerantly

7.考慮周到地、若有所思地thoughtfully

8.溫順地meekly

9.偷偷地（meet/leave）secretly

10.默默地silently

11.自信地confidently

12.耐心地patiently

13.自豪地proudly

14.熱心地；熱情地；非常感興趣地enthusiastically

15.盡情地；由衷地；發(fā)自內(nèi)心heartily

16.同情地sympathetically

17.贊美地；欽佩地admiringly

18.緊緊地tightly

19.小心謹(jǐn)慎地cautiously

20.好奇地curiously

21.嚴(yán)肅地；認(rèn)真地seriously

22.痛苦地（身體）painfully

23.非常傷心地；痛苦地；悲痛地（心理）；sorrowfully

24.非常傷心失望地；怨恨地；bitterly

第二組高分副詞的運(yùn)用

1.Robynswallowed（痛苦地）.

2/Whathaveyougotinthere?1Felixasked（好奇地）.

3.'CanIhelpyou?*sheasked（禮貌地）.

4/Alotofdamagehasalreadybeendone/hesaid（悲痛地）.

5.Weare（真誠地）gratefulforyourhelp.

6.Ifstimewetalked（嚴(yán)肅地）aboutourrelationship.

7.'AUright；saidNeil（溫順地）.

8.Hecomplained俳常傷心失望地）abouthisexamgrades.

9.Hestared（若有所思地）outthewindow.

10.Hecanplaysoccer（熟練地）.

11.Shelayonthesofa（恢恢欲睡地）.

12.Wasshe（嚴(yán)重地）hurt?

13.Hehad（考慮周到地）broughtwithhimsomefbodtoshare.

14.Hereactsrather（容忍地）towardhisson*sjuvenilebehavior.

15.Hughlaughed（盡情地）atthejoke.

16.Thechildren（偷偷地）wenttothemovieswhentheyweresupposedtobeatthelibrary.

17.Theydiscussedthequestion（熱心地、熱烈地）.

18.Wewelcomedher（熱情地）.

19.Hesat（一言不發(fā)地）bythebed.

20.Carlasmiled（自信地）atthecameras.

21.Hewaited（耐心地）forKatherinetospeak.

22.Helookedathisprofessor（欽佩地）.

23.She（自豪地）displayedherprize.

24.Thegovernmentresponded（謹(jǐn)慎地）tothemove.

25.Helistenedtoher（同情地）andcomfortedher.

第三組高分副詞

1.拼命地；發(fā)瘋般地（work/run）crazily=likecrazy

2.隨意地；漫不經(jīng)心地；粗心大意地；馬虎地carelessly

3.隨意地；漫不經(jīng)心地casually

4.狂跳（heart）beatwildly

5.歡呼cheerwildly

6.急切地四處張望lookwildlyaround

7.（態(tài)度）冷淡地coldly

8.猛烈地；劇烈地（shake/tremble/shiver）violently

9.無助地helplessly

10.尷尬地;難為情地awkwardly/embarrassedly;

11.笨拙地clumsily

12.茫然地blankly

13.貪婪地greedily

14.不情愿地reluctantly/unwillingly

15.懷疑地doubtfully

16.激動地、興奮地excitedly

17.遲鈍地；呆笨地dully

18.絕望地；無望地hopelessly

19.憎恨地hatefully

20.后悔地；遺憾地regretfully

21.粗魯?shù)兀粺o禮地rudely

22.不安地；緊張地uneasily/restlessly/nervously

23.粗暴地（push/grabbedsb）roughly

24.嚴(yán)厲地（punish/say）severely/sternly

25.固執(zhí)地stubbornly

第三組高分副詞的運(yùn)用

1.Hisheartwasbeating（瘋狂地）.

2.Shenoddedherhead（呆呆地）,thinkingaboutsomethingelse.

3.Aftermuchthought,we（不情愿地）agreed.

4.“Well,whatcanIdoforyou?^^heasked（冷淡地）.

5.Shewasrushingaround（拼命地）tryingtoputoutthefire.

6.Shethrewhercoat（隨意地）ontothesofa.

7.Annastared（茫然地）atthewall.

8.Theywaitedthere（不安地）foralongtime.

9.Severalpeoplehavebeen（猛烈地）attackedinthesubway.

10.Tmverysorryaboutyoursister/hesaid（難為情地）.

11.Martyalwaysbumpedintothings（笨拙地）.

12.Imustdie,*hesaid（絕望地）.

13.Hegrabbedthebottleanddrank（貪婪地）.

14.'Stopbehavinglikeafool!,shesaid（嚴(yán)厲地）.

15.Theywatched（無助地）astheirhomewentupinflames.

16.Geraldshookhishead（懷疑地）.

17.Theaudiencecheered（歡呼）.

18.1wasstilltrembling（劇烈地）.

19.Someonehad（粗心大意地；馬虎地）leftawindowopen.

20."Youwillgetpunishedoneday/hesaid（憎T艮地）.

21.Hepushedher（粗暴地）outoftheway.

22.11don'tcare,1shesaid（固執(zhí)地）.

23.Shelooked（急切地）aroundforanescape.

24.Whatdoyouwant?*sheasked（粗魯?shù)兀?

25.Peoplehadgatheredandweretalking（興奮地）.

26.（遺憾地）,wedonothavetimetocontinuethisdiscussionnow.

第四組高分副詞

1,猶豫不決地hesitantly

2.不耐煩地impatiently

3.無憐憫地；殘忍地mercilessly/cruelly

4.悶悶不樂地moodily；unhappily

5.虛弱地；微弱地weakly

6.生氣地angrily

7.害怕地；恐懼地（runaway/scream）fearfully

8.羨慕地；嫉妒地enviously

9.焦慮地、不安地、擔(dān)憂地anxiously

10.有力地；堅(jiān)定地firmly

11.擔(dān)憂地；著急地worriedly

12.出乎意料地；意外地unexpectedly

13.困惑地confusedly

14.忠誠地；一心一意地devotedly

15.贊美地；欽佩地admiringly

16.失望地disappointedly

17.高興地delightedly

18.感興趣地interestedly

19.滿意地contentedly

20.匆忙地