輕松玩轉(zhuǎn)讀后續(xù)寫（動作和情感描寫）課件高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

動作鏈——教你輕松玩轉(zhuǎn)讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫STARTPleasedescribethefollowingpictureandvideo.Tom

cooked

theduck.Tom

added

some

carrots,mixedthem

andtookasip.Pleasedescribethefollowingpictureandvideo.Thetwopandas

hugged

.Theoldpanda

dashedforward,raisedhissonupandhugged

himtightly.重結(jié)果更要重過程Tip:拆解動作，形成動作鏈將結(jié)果性的動作，拆解成更細致的連貫性的微動作，使動作結(jié)果過程化，形成動作鏈。Howtodividetheactionintosmallparts(slowmotions)句式一：S+V1,V2andV3比如“打車去火車站”這個動作

=攔車+上車+告訴目的地He_______ataxi,_______inwithhissuitcaseand

_______thedriver,“Gototherailwaystation,please.”中英文區(qū)別:中文中可以出現(xiàn)一系列動詞，英文中不允許，所以英文寫作非常依賴連詞。stoppedjumpedtold句式一：S+V1,V2andV3“把肉扔給狼”

=拿出+瞄準+扔He_______themeat,_________thewolfand_______itstraighttothewolf.tookoutaimedatthrewHeglancedatthecup,_________________andsaid,“Thanks.”=先看一眼獎杯，深吸一口氣，說道：“謝謝！”。tookadeepbreath句式一：S+V1,V2andV3男孩們跳入湖中嬉戲。=沖向湖邊+脫掉衣服+跳入水中

Theboys_________excitedlytothelake,________theirclothesand_________intothewater.rushedtookoffjumped句式一：S+V1,V2andV3仿寫：

主+V1,V2,andV3....在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容點擊此處添加標題在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容在此處添加內(nèi)容點擊此處添加標題1.她登上(board)飛機，坐在座位上，尋找她的書。2.女孩停止了啜泣(sob)，從女人身邊退了(stepback)回來，開始唱歌。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thegirl

stoppedsobbing,steppedback

fromthewomanand

begantosing.She

boardedtheplane,satonherseatandthen

lookedfor

herbook.2.Myfatherpattedmeontheshoulderandencouragedmenevertogiveupmydreams.Myfather

patted

meontheshoulder,encouragingmenevertogiveupmydreams.1.Marysawtheringonthetableandfeltalittlebitshock.Seeing

theringonthetable,Maryfeltalittlebitshock.3.Thechildwasmovedbythestoryandbegantocry.Movedbythestory,thechildbegantocry.Sentencepattern2:非謂語DoingA(+doingB)，sbdidsth...Sentencepattern3:

非謂語Done，sbdidsth...Polish(用非謂語作狀語)同一對象同時發(fā)出不同動作例：我難過地掛斷電話。

=放下電話+坐下,全身發(fā)抖/哭泣Iputdownthetelephoneandsatdown,shaking/sobbing.句式二：S+V1andV2，+doing/done或doing/done,S+V1andV2=抬起頭+舉起雙臂,大喊“我可以做到！”Heheldup

hisheadandraisedhisarms,________loudly,“Icandoit!”句式二：S+V1andV2，+doing/done或doing/done,S+V1andV2yelling他從墻頭往外看。她遞給我一張紙巾。=把梯子靠墻放好，他爬上去+往外看。=看到我哭，她抽出紙巾+遞給我。_________theladderagainstthewall,he

climbedandlookedout.Seeing

mecryinglouderandlouder,

shesilentlypulledoutof

apieceofnapkinand_________

ittome.non-verb(doing/done作狀語)，S+V句式二：S+V1andV2，+doing/done或doing/done,S+V1andV2PuttinghandedHowtomakeyourcontinuationwritingvivid?題材題材Skill1:

描述一系列的動作。如果是同一個主語做了兩個以上動作，可用:主+謂1,謂2and

(then)謂3Skill2:

當(dāng)出現(xiàn)一系列動作，而且前后幾個動作邏輯主語一致時，還可采用:非謂語,主+謂1and謂2主+謂1and謂2,非謂語主動:doing

被動:done動作鏈:

一連串的動作構(gòu)成畫面情緒描寫——教你輕松玩轉(zhuǎn)讀后續(xù)寫讀后續(xù)寫STARTFeelingadj.adv.Feelingadj.adv.開心驚訝難過困惑痛苦好奇緊張自信激動羞愧生氣焦慮失望自豪happydelightedhappilydelightedlysadsadlypainfulpainfullynervousnervouslyexcitedexcitedlyangryangrilydisappointeddisappointedlysurprisedamazedsurprisedlyamazedlyconfusedconfusedlycuriouscuriouslyconfidentconfidentlyashamedashamedlyanxiousanxiouslyproudproudlyMymomtakescareofmepatiently.Mymomtalkstomegently.ObservethesentencescarefullytofindouttheruleSkill1:Useadverbstomakeactionsmoreemotional.使用副詞讓動作更具情感。1.Nervousandscared,Peterstartedtodeliverhisspeech.

2.Confidentanddetermined,Davidtriedhisbesttorun.3.Depressedandhelpless,Ericburstintears.ObservethesentencescarefullytofindouttheruleSkill2:Adj.1andadj.2,sb.didsth.懷著...和...的感情，某人做...1.既開心又激動2.既難過又沮喪3.既緊張又焦慮4.既擔(dān)心又害怕5.既堅定又自信6.既驚訝又感動7.既生氣又失望8.既疲倦又饑餓常用搭配DelightedandexcitedSadandfrustratedNervousandanxiousWorriedandscaredDeterminedandconfidentSurprisedandtouchedAnnoyedanddisappointedExhaustedandhungryTips:使用兩個意義相近的形容詞進行搭配。Task2:Completesentenceswithappropriateadjectives.1._________________________(感到堅定和受到鼓舞的）,Davidraisedhishead,

lookingatmewithgratitude.（2022全國1卷）2._________________________(感到放松的和快樂的),Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline,

conveyinghishappinessandgratitude.（2022全國1卷）3.________________________(既驚訝又感動),Mr.AlderbelievedwhatIsaid,givingmeasecondchance.(2023廣東一模)4._________________________(感到開心和興奮的),hereceivedtheadmissionletterfromGuangzhouUniversity.DeterminedandinspiredRelaxedanddelightedSurprisedandtouchedDelightedandexcitedObservethesentencescarefullytofindouttheruleSkill3:So+adj.+be+主語+that從句某人是如此的...以致于SohappyisTomthathejumpshighly.SoscaredwasTinathatsheburstintotears.1.______________________thatIheardmyheartpoundingstrongly.我非常緊張，能聽到我的心劇烈地跳動。2.______________________thatsheburstintolaughter.可莉非常開心，突然大笑起來。Task3:CompletethefollowingsentencesSonervouswasI

SodelightedwasKlee

感受情緒:套用固定句式例2:Shefeltagreatsenseofangerwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.她感到一股強烈的怒意在內(nèi)心升騰2. Judgingfromhervoice,itwasevidentthatshewastrappedingreatconcern/worry.從她的聲音判斷,很明顯她陷入了極大的憂慮之中.Sb情緒sb’ssbsb’ssb情緒引導(dǎo)啟發(fā)，句型探索

·無靈主語“Ifelthappy.”無靈主語句：用無生命的事物來做主語(換主語):“開心(的情緒)抓住了我”

(加介短):“一股開心(的情緒)抓住了我”

(加并列):“開心與振奮(的情緒)抓住了我”

我開心:

Delightseizedme.

Awaveofdelightseizedme.

Delightand

excitementseizedme.1.情感狀態(tài)的抽象名詞+謂語+sb.Fear

gripped

thevillage.Courage

desertedhim.Angerchokedmywords.Awaveofnervousness

washedoverhim.Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.Excitement

seizedhim.整個村莊籠罩在恐怖之中。他失去了勇氣。我氣得說不出話。一陣緊張感涌上他。他突然感到不寒而栗。他好興奮。情緒名詞固定動詞seize/catch/takeholdof抓住strike/hitsurround圍繞著tear...intopieces把..撕碎wellupin涌入comeover包圍/支配envelop

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