2025年高考英語寫作?？碱}型全面突破專題17 讀后續(xù)寫16大提分句式+對點(diǎn)精練（原卷版）

專題17讀后續(xù)寫16大提分句式+對點(diǎn)精練

句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)”又稱為“with結(jié)構(gòu)”

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激動(dòng)而高

興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

1.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開了她的禮物盒。(with+賓語+adj.open)

2.女孩心怦怦直跳（beatwildly），打開（unwrap）了她的禮物盒。(with+賓語+分詞)

3.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水（fulloftears/filledwithtears）

4.那個(gè)人躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。（ontheground,tremble）

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithhermouthwideopen.

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithherheartbeatingwildly.

Hiswifewasextremelysad,witheyesfulloftears/withtearsrollingdownherface

句式2：并列謂語，細(xì)化動(dòng)作A,BandC

Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathand

walkedtothestartinglineslowly.當(dāng)播音員說“接下來是女子100米欄”時(shí)，朱迪深吸一口氣，慢慢地

走到起跑線上。

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示動(dòng)作伴隨，原因或結(jié)果

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘子，

緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

句式4巧用生動(dòng)的無靈主語：Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.

Relieved(=breathingasighofrelief),Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,help

iscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口氣，向那個(gè)人表示感謝，并將頻率調(diào)回，“麥克，

救命來了！”但沒有回應(yīng)。

句式5：情感形容詞+句子

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激動(dòng)而高

興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語，表達(dá)情節(jié)

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！

句式7：.“一……就……”的表達(dá)法：assoonas,hardly/scarcely…when…,nosooner…than…,the

moment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doing。

Themomenttheannouncerannounced“Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddle

School”,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號，JodieNymble，為

RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻,雷鳴般的歡呼和笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”:

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

句式9：主句，which從句（定語從句）

格式：_______主句________，which第二句話；

例句：瑪麗打開門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。Maryopenedthedoorandsaw

thelittlegirl，whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.

結(jié)構(gòu)2：格式：_______主句________，whichenable/forced/allowedsbtodo；_______主句________，

whichmade/forced/allowedsb感情詞

例句：就在這時(shí)，我們聽到了UnclePaul遠(yuǎn)處傳來的微弱聲音，這重新點(diǎn)燃了我們回家的希望。

Justatthemoment,weheardthefaintvoiceinthedistancefromUnclePaul,whichallowedustolightthe

hopereturninghome.

句式10：描寫氣氛或者氛圍的句子。（情感詞+fill+地點(diǎn)）

Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。

句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累：(表達(dá)情感的形容詞+動(dòng)作具體描寫)，用so…that

Jodiewassoexcitedandrefreshedthatsheyelledout“Myluckyspikes”.朱迪非常興奮，神清氣爽，她

大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘”。

1.興奮：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我動(dòng)得跳了起來

2.開心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高興得上跑下跳

3.感動(dòng)：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感動(dòng)得一句話也說不出來

4.悲傷：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands.我難受得用手捂住了臉。

5.(生氣)IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我氣得一句話也說不出。

6.（害怕）Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.我害怕得手心汗，

心怦怦直跳。

7.（羞愧）IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感覺自己的臉在燃燒。

升級：倒裝

SoshockedwasIthatIwasfrozentothespotthemomentIheardthenews.(當(dāng)我聽到消息時(shí)候，我太震

驚了以至于呆在原地)

句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子

（1）Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿著她嶄新的

釘子，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

（2）Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathand

walkedtothestartinglineslowly.當(dāng)播音員說“接下來是女子100米欄”時(shí)，朱迪深吸一口氣，慢慢地

走到起跑線上。

（3）Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie.激動(dòng)

而高興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)

NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.

直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。

呼應(yīng)主題常用句式

直到...才.…(1)倒裝句:notuntil+時(shí)間狀語didsbrealizethat+主題從句

(2)強(qiáng)調(diào)句:itwasonlythenthatsbrealizedthat+主穎從句

還記得某人的話，某人的話還One’swordsechoed/rangoutinone'searsthat+主題

在腦海中

Myteacher’sencouragingwordsstillechoed/lingered/rangoutinmyears,bringingmeaglimmer/ray/

beamofhope.

Itwasmymotherwhotaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetolife.是我的媽媽一直教導(dǎo)我們要對困難保

持樂觀的態(tài)度。

Itwaslovethatmakestheworldgoaround.正是愛讓/使這個(gè)世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)起來

Shesaidthatitwasmycompanyandencouragementthatnotonlymadeherhappybutalsoimprovedher

confidence.(她說正是我的陪伴和鼓勵(lì)不僅使我快樂而且提高了我的信心）

句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.

句式15：名詞性從句

主語從句

結(jié)構(gòu)1：Itis+adjforsbthat…

結(jié)構(gòu)2：whatIcoulddo/say/…isto

what(counts/matters/impressme)mostisthat…=itisimportantthat…

Whatmakemeanxiousisthat>>>>

功能：用于突出某個(gè)動(dòng)作的重要或必須

應(yīng)用位置：不限

例句1：我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。

Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

例句2：我所看到的與我過去所經(jīng)歷的任何事情完全不同。

WhatIsawwascompletelyunlikeanythingIhadexperiencedinthepast.

句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事

1.Withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought

2.Couldnot/hardlywaittodosth

【例句】

1.在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezing/bitterlycoldwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver

withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought,reachingformyson.

2.我迫不及待地想把這個(gè)好消息告訴媽媽。

Icouldhardlywaittoinformmymotherofthisgoodnews.

對點(diǎn)精練

一、對點(diǎn)精練--漢譯英

句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

1.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開了她的禮物盒。

______________________________,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.

2.女孩心怦怦直跳，打開了她的禮物盒。

______________________________,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.

句式2：并列謂語，細(xì)化動(dòng)作

1.他看到包里的外套后，非常驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出來。

Seeingthecoatinthebag,he______________________________hismothertocomeout.

2.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。

Hiswife,extremelysad,______________________________.

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子

他躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。

______________________________,hetrembledwithhishands.

句式4：巧用生動(dòng)的無靈主語

1.一想到即將到來的考試，他就感到無比焦慮。

__________________________________________________________himwithimmenseanxiety.

2.一股激動(dòng)的情緒在人群中蔓延，因?yàn)闃逢?duì)的主唱宣布了演唱會(huì)的日期。

_____________________________amongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedtheconcert

date.

3.一種寧靜的感覺籠罩了整個(gè)圖書館，每個(gè)人都在專心致志地學(xué)習(xí)。

__________________________________________________________,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedon

theirstudies.

句式5：情感形容詞+句子

興奮和精神煥發(fā)，朱迪大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘鞋”。

_____________________________,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".

句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語，表達(dá)情節(jié)

好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！

_____________________________,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!

句式7：“一……就……”的表達(dá)法

當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號，JodieNymble，為RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻，雷鳴般的歡呼和

笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.

_____________________________"Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddle

School",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”

一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

_____________________________didn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.

句式9：主句，從句（定語從句）

瑪麗打開門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。

Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,_____________________________.

句式10：描寫氣氛或者氛圍的句子

空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。

_____________________________.

句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累

我動(dòng)得跳了起來。

_____________________________Igaveajumpintheair.

句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子

Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘鞋，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,_____________________________.

句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)

直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。

_____________________________thatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodo

it.

句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

她手里顫抖著拿錢，眼里淚水涌起。

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,_____________________________.

句式15：名詞性從句

我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。

_____________________________wastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事

在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver

_____________________________,reachingformyson.

二、請使用現(xiàn)在分詞結(jié)構(gòu)改寫下列句子或小段落

1.Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”

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2.Isatbackinaneasychairandfellasleep.

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3.WhenIsawnoonenoticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.

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4.Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna’sdormitoryfrom

doortodoor.

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5.Helookedatmeandbithislips,asifhewasthinking.

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6.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhoto

buyitfor.

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7.Whenhesawthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthenaskedhismothertocomeout.

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8.‘Here,’hesaid.Atthesametimehehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

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9.Atallgirlansweredthedoorandshewasfrowning.ShetoldEmilythatZatannawasworkinginthe

schoolcafé.Whensheheardthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedherandleft.

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10.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouse

assheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.

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三、請使用獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)改寫下列句子

1.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears,andsheleft.

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2.Theboystoodthereandhisfacewasrigidwithanger.

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3.IclaspedmyhandsbehindmeandIwastooshockedtosayaword.

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4.Agirlcameinwithabookinherhand.

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5.Themanagersatquietlyintheofficeandhiseyeswereclosed.

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6.Theysatintheroomwiththecurtainsdrawn.

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7.Oliverjumpedupandhisfacewasbrightredwithanger.

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8.Lindaleapttoherfeetandhereyeswereblazingwithanger.

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9.AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome.Hertearswereshininginhereyes.

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10.Hecriedandhisblueeyeswereshiningbehindhisglasses.

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四、請用過去分詞或形容詞改寫下列句子或小段落

1.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iwasconfused.

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2.Theywereveryfrightened.Theyalljumpedback.

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3.Intheevening,thechildrenreturnedhome.Theyweretiredandhungry.

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