讀后續(xù)寫+神秘老屋的驚險(xiǎn)探秘+講義 高一下學(xué)期3月月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OnesunnySaturdayafternoon,16-year-oldJack,alongwithhisbestfriendTom,decidedtoexploretheoldabandonedhouseattheendoftheirstreet.Thehousehadbeenemptyforyears,itswindowsboardedup(用木板封住)andthefrontyardovergrownwithgrass.Therewereallsortsofrumorsabouttheplace,somesayingitwashaunted(鬧鬼的),whileothersclaimeditwasfilledwithhiddentreasuresfromitsformerowner.JackandTomwerebothadventurousboysandthemysteryoftheoldhousedrewthemin.Astheycarefullypushedopentheoldfrontdoor,acloudofdustroseup,makingthemcough.Inside,theairwasmustyandthefurniturewascoveredinthicklayersofdust.Sunlightshonethroughthenarrowgapsintheboardedwindows.Theywalkedslowly,theireyeswidewithcuriosityastheyexaminedtheold,brokenitems.Suddenly,Tomstumbled(絆腳)uponasmall,lockedwoodenboxhiddenunderapileofoldnewspapersinthecornerofthelivingroom.“Lookatthis,Jack!”Tomshouted,holdingupthebox.Jack’seyeslitup.“Iwonderwhat’sinside,”hesaid,tryingtoopentheboxbutfailed.Justthen,theyheardastrangenoisecomingfromupstairs.Itsoundedlikefootsteps,slowandheavy.JackandTomfroze,theirfacesturningpale.Thefloorboardsabovecreaked(嘎吱作響)undertheweightofsomethingunseen.AspiderwebbrushedTom’sfaceashesuddenlysteppedbackward,coldsweatsoakingthroughhiscollar.Throughthedustyair,theynoticedfaintscratches(輕微的劃痕)onthestairs.“Whatwasthat?”Tomwhispered.“I...Idon’tknow,”Jackreplied,hisheartpoundinginhischest.“Maybeit’sjustthewindorsomething.”Butthenoisecameagain,louderthistime,andtheyweresureitwasn’tthewind.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150字左右。2．請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:JackandTomlookedateachother,fearclearlyvisibleintheireyes._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterawhiletheymanagedtocalmdownabit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本主旨本文講述了兩個(gè)16歲男孩杰克和湯姆，出于好奇去探索街尾一座廢棄多年且充滿神秘傳說的老房子的故事。他們在房子里發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)上鎖的小木盒，正當(dāng)他們試圖打開時(shí)，卻聽到樓上發(fā)出奇怪的聲響，仿佛有人在走動，這讓他們感到極度害怕。故事圍繞著冒險(xiǎn)、好奇心以及面對未知時(shí)的恐懼展開。五要素分析人物（Characters）：杰克（Jack）：16歲，好奇心強(qiáng)，勇敢但也會害怕，是故事的主角之一。湯姆（Tom）：杰克的好朋友，同樣充滿冒險(xiǎn)精神，但在面對恐懼時(shí)也會感到不安。地點(diǎn)（Setting）：廢棄老房子：位于街尾，空置多年，窗戶被木板封住，院子里雜草叢生，充滿了神秘和恐怖的氛圍。時(shí)間（Time）：一個(gè)陽光明媚的周六下午：時(shí)間的選擇增加了故事的對比感，陽光明媚的下午與陰森恐怖的老房子形成鮮明對比。事件（Events）：探索老房子：出于對神秘傳說的好奇，杰克和湯姆決定進(jìn)入老房子探險(xiǎn)。發(fā)現(xiàn)小木盒：在客廳角落的舊報(bào)紙下發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)上鎖的小木盒，增加了故事的懸念。聽到奇怪聲響：樓上突然傳來奇怪的聲響，仿佛有人在走動，讓兩人感到極度恐懼。主題（Theme）：冒險(xiǎn)與恐懼：故事通過兩個(gè)男孩的冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷，展現(xiàn)了好奇心驅(qū)使下的冒險(xiǎn)精神以及面對未知時(shí)的恐懼心理。友誼與勇氣：盡管害怕，但兩個(gè)男孩始終在一起，互相支持，體現(xiàn)了友誼的力量。詞匯積累abandoned（廢棄的）boardedup（用木板封?。﹎usty（發(fā)霉的）curiosity（好奇心）stumbledupon（偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)）lockedwoodenbox（上鎖的小木盒）creaked（嘎吱作響）spiderweb（蜘蛛網(wǎng)）faintscratches（輕微的劃痕）pale（臉色蒼白）heartpounding（心跳加速）gaspingforbreath（喘不過氣來）shaken（震驚的）burden（負(fù)擔(dān)）puttheirmindsatease（讓他們的思想平靜下來）續(xù)寫分析銜接句第一段：使用“JackandTomlookedateachother,fearclearlyvisibleintheireyes.”作為開頭，直接延續(xù)上文的緊張氛圍。第二段：使用“Afterawhiletheymanagedtocalmdownabit.”作為開頭，自然過渡到兩人情緒的緩和，為后續(xù)的情節(jié)發(fā)展做鋪墊。情節(jié)合理性第一段：描述兩人在恐懼中的反應(yīng)，包括試圖逃離房子和對未知的猜測，符合人在恐懼時(shí)的本能反應(yīng)。第二段：描寫兩人在安全環(huán)境下的情緒恢復(fù)和對下一步行動的思考，符合情節(jié)發(fā)展的邏輯。情感鋪墊第一段：通過描寫兩人恐懼的表情和動作，如“fearclearlyvisibleintheireyes”、“theirheartspounding”等，增強(qiáng)了故事的緊張感。第二段：通過描寫兩人在安全環(huán)境下的情緒恢復(fù)，如“managedtocalmdownabit”、“gaspingforbreath”等，為后續(xù)的情節(jié)發(fā)展提供了情感基礎(chǔ)。情感走向第一段：情感走向是恐懼和緊張，兩人在聽到奇怪聲響后感到極度害怕，試圖逃離房子。第二段：情感走向是逐漸平靜和理性思考，兩人在安全的環(huán)境中逐漸恢復(fù)平靜，開始思考如何處理發(fā)現(xiàn)的小木盒。主題深化冒險(xiǎn)與恐懼：通過續(xù)寫進(jìn)一步展現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)男孩在面對未知和恐懼時(shí)的心理變化，深化了冒險(xiǎn)與恐懼的主題。友誼與勇氣：兩人在恐懼中互相支持，最終決定一起面對未知，體現(xiàn)了友誼的力量和勇氣的重要性。下水文一Paragraph1:JackandTomlookedateachother,fearclearlyvisibleintheireyes.Withoutaword,theybothknewtheyhadtogetoutofthere.Jackreachedforthelockedwoodenbox,clutchingittightlyasifitweretheironlyhope.Theybackedawayslowly,theirheartspoundingintheirchests.Thenoisefromupstairsgrewlouder,andtheycouldfeelthecoldairontheirnecks.Suddenly,ashadowmovedacrosstheceiling,andtheybothletoutagasp.Jack’smindracedwiththoughtsofghostsandhiddendangers.“Weneedtogetoutofhere,”Tomwhisperedurgently,hisvoicetrembling.Jacknodded,andtheyturnedtorun,theirfootstepsechoingthroughthedustyhallways.Paragraph2:Afterawhiletheymanagedtocalmdownabit.Theyfoundthemselvesoutsidethehouse,gaspingforbreathandtryingtomakesenseofwhathadhappened.Thesunlightfeltwarmandcomfortingontheirfaces,andtheyrealizedhowfoolishtheyhadbeentoventureintosuchaplace.Jacklookedatthelockedwoodenboxinhishands,nowfeelingmorelikeaburdenthanatreasure.“Whatdoyouthinkwasupthere?”Tomasked,stillshaken.Jackshrugged,hiscuriosityfadingintofear.“Maybeitwasjustanoldanimalorsomething,”hesuggested,thoughhedidn’treallybelieveit.TheydecidedtotaketheboxtoJack’shouseandtrytoopenitthere,hopingtofindsomeanswersandputtheirmindsatease.下水文二Paragraph1:JackandTomlookedateachother,fearclearlyvisibleintheireyes.Thestrangenoisesfromupstairsseemedtogrowlouderwitheachpassingsecond,makingtheirheartsraceevenfaster.Jack’shandtightenedaroundthesmallwoodenbox,asifholdingontoitcouldsomehowprotectthem.“Weshouldleave,”Tomsaid,hisvoicebarelyaboveawhisper.Jacknodded,feelingacoldsweattricklingdownhisback.Theyturnedandran,theirfootstepspoundingontheoldfloorboards.Astheyreachedthefrontdoor,theyheardaloudthudfromabove,followedbyachillingsilence.Theyburstoutofthehouse,slammingthedoorbehindthem.Paragraph2:Afterawhiletheymanagedtocalmdownabit.Standinginthebrightsunlight,theytriedtosteadytheirbreathingandmakesenseoftheterrifyingexperience.Jackheldthelockedwoodenboxclosetohischest,feelingamixoffearandcuriosity.“Whatifthere’ssomethingdangerousinsidethatbox?”Tomasked,hiseyeswidewithconcern.Jackshookhishead,tryingtoreassurehisfriend.“We’llneverknowunlessweopenit,”hesaid,determinationinhisvoice.TheydecidedtotaketheboxtoJack’shouseandfindawaytounlockit.Astheywalkeddownthestreet,thesunfeltlikeacomfortingblanket,butthemysteryoftheoldhouseandthelockedboxstillweighedheavilyontheirminds.【答案】范文JackandTomlookedateachother,fearclearlyvisibleintheireyes.Thecreakinggrewlouder,accompaniedbyfaintwhispersechoingthroughthedecayingwalls.Jacktightenedhisgriponthewoodenbox,hispalmssweating.“Weneedtoleavenow!”Tomurged,backingtowardthedoor.Butbeforetheycouldmove,ashadowyfigureappearedatthetopofthestairs.Theboysgasped—anoldmanwithawalkingstickstoodthere,hisfaceweatheredbu