讀后續(xù)寫續(xù)寫選狗故事講義-廣東省惠州市實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)河源高級(jí)中學(xué)等校高二下學(xué)期4月聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmybrother'sidea.Let'sgetMomapetdogforherbirthday.Itwouldmakeherhappy.Ithoughtitwasagoodidea,asMomhadalwayswantedtoownadog.Bythetimeourconversationended,Ihadmytask:findourmotheradog.Afteracarefulsearch,Ifinallyfoundanadfordogsinalocalnewspaper.Anearbyfamilyhadadogwhohadjustgivenbirthtofivemalepuppies（小狗）！Allhadhadtheirfirstvaccines（疫苗），andwouldbereadytoleavetheirmominafewweeks.Igavethemacall.Themanwhoansweredthephonelistenedpatientlytomystoryandsetadateforustomeetthedogs.Whenthedayarrived,Igotintomybrother'scar.Wepulledupinfrontofsomehousesthatsatalonganarrowstreet.Aswesteppedontothesidewalk，weweregreetedbynoisybarks（吠叫聲）.Fourdogshadpositionedthemselvesonthebackofasofaandwerewatchingusthroughalargewindow.Weclimbedontotheporch(門廊)andrangthedoorbell.Atallmanwithgrayinghairandakindsmileopenedthedoor.AsIreachedtoshakehishand,Icouldseethepuppiesbehindhim,runningtogettous.Eachpuppyworeadifferentcolorstringaroundhisneck.Wemettheman'swife,whoworeasimilarfriendlysmileandweledustoherhome.Wemetthepuppies'parentsandthensetaboutthebusinessofselectingafriendforourmother.Therewerefourpuppiesandfourvisitors;themanhandedeachofusadog.Threeofthepuppieslookedupatuswithlarge,curiouseyes.Thefourthone,whoIwasholding,begantowiggleexcitedlyandkissmyface."Let'stakethisone!He'stheone!Lookhowlovelyheis!"Isaid.AsfarasIwasconcerned,itwasadonedeal.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________續(xù)寫選狗故事續(xù)寫分析第一段續(xù)寫分析故事線：哥哥提出花時(shí)間了解每只小狗，“我”雖不耐煩但同意。眾人與小狗互動(dòng)，“我”懷中的小狗活潑且與“我”互動(dòng)頻繁，而其他小狗表現(xiàn)各異。最終哥哥認(rèn)可“我”選的小狗最適合媽媽。短語(yǔ)：takesometime（花些時(shí)間）；gettoknow（了解）；incontrast（相比之下）；abitshy（有點(diǎn)害羞）；interestedin（對(duì)……感興趣）；exploringtheroom（探索房間）；aspecialconnection（特殊聯(lián)系）；noddedinagreement（點(diǎn)頭同意）主旨升華句：①Thisprocessofgettingtoknowthepuppiestaughtustheimportanceofpatienceinmakingtherightchoice.（這個(gè)了解小狗的過(guò)程教會(huì)我們?cè)谧稣_選擇時(shí)耐心的重要性。）②Throughinteractingwiththepuppies,werealizedthatsometimesthebestconnectionisformedthroughgenuineandimmediateaffection.（通過(guò)與小狗們互動(dòng)，我們意識(shí)到有時(shí)最好的聯(lián)系是通過(guò)真誠(chéng)且即時(shí)的喜愛(ài)建立起來(lái)的。）③Theuniquecharmofeachpuppyremindedusthateverycreaturehasitsownspecialqualitieswaitingtobediscovered.（每只小狗獨(dú)特的魅力提醒我們，每個(gè)生物都有其等待被發(fā)現(xiàn)的特殊品質(zhì)。）④Intheend,ourcollectivedecisionmakingnotonlyfoundtheperfectpetbutalsostrengthenedthebondamongfamilymembers.（最終，我們共同的決策不僅找到了完美的寵物，還加強(qiáng)了家庭成員之間的聯(lián)系。）⑤Thisexperienceofchoosingapuppywasmorethanjustatask;itwasajourneyofunderstandingandunitywithinourfamily.（這次挑選小狗的經(jīng)歷不僅僅是一項(xiàng)任務(wù)，更是我們家庭中理解與團(tuán)結(jié)的一次旅程。）第二段續(xù)寫分析故事線：兩周后，我們接回小狗并藏在媽媽客廳角落。媽媽開(kāi)心拆完其他禮物后，我們帶她到角落，小狗沖向媽媽，媽媽驚喜落淚，認(rèn)為這是最好的生日禮物，我們也因計(jì)劃成功而開(kāi)心。短語(yǔ)：pickedup（接走，撿起）；hid...aroundthecorner（藏在角落）；openedherbirthdaygifts（打開(kāi)她的生日禮物）；exchangedexcitedglances（交換興奮的眼神）；led...to（帶領(lǐng)……到）；rushedtowards（沖向）；burstintotearsofjoy（喜極而泣）；scooped...up（抱起）主旨升華句：①ThismomentofMom'spurehappinessshowedusthatthegreatestgiftsinlifearethosethatefromtheheart.（媽媽這一刻純粹的快樂(lè)向我們表明，生命中最偉大的禮物是那些發(fā)自內(nèi)心的禮物。）②Thepuppy'swarmweleandMom'semotionalresponsewereabeautifulreminderofthepowerofloveandsurprise.（小狗熱情的迎接和媽媽激動(dòng)的反應(yīng)美好地提醒著我們愛(ài)與驚喜的力量。）③OurcarefullyplannedsurprisenotonlybroughtjoytoMombutalsocreatedapreciousmemorythatwouldbecherishedforalifetime.（我們精心策劃的驚喜不僅給媽媽帶來(lái)了快樂(lè)，還創(chuàng)造了一個(gè)將被珍藏一生的珍貴回憶。）④ThesightofMomandthepuppytogethersymbolizedthebeginningofanewchapterfilledwithloveandpanionshipinourfamily.（媽媽和小狗在一起的畫面象征著我們家庭中充滿愛(ài)與陪伴的新篇章的開(kāi)始。）⑤Thisbirthdaygiftgivingexperiencetaughtusthatsmallgesturesoflovecanhaveaprofoundimpactonourlovedones'lives.（這次送生日禮物的經(jīng)歷教會(huì)我們，小小的愛(ài)的舉動(dòng)可以對(duì)我們所愛(ài)的人的生活產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響。）寫作示范一Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Reluctantly,Iputasidemyeagernessandjoinedin.Asweplayedwiththepuppies,InoticedthattheoneIheldearlierwasnotonlylivelybutalsoextremelyintelligent.ItquicklylearnedtofetchasmallballItossed,whichmademeevenmoreconvincedofmychoice.Mybrother,observingthepuppy'scleverness,alsohadtoadmititscharm.Afteraheartwarminginteraction,wewerecertainthiswastheoneforMom.Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.Momwasinhighspirits,enjoyingeverypresent.Whenallthegiftswereunwrapped,weguidedhertothesurprisespot.ThemomentthepuppysawMom,itleapedforward,waggingitstailvigorously.Momwasstunnedforasecondandthenabroadsmilespreadacrossherface.Shecroucheddownandembracedthepuppytightly,saying,"Youguysreallyknowhowtomakemehappy!"Thisspecialgiftnotonlybroughtanewmembertoourfamilybutalsoaddedmorewarmthtoourhome.寫作示范二Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Despitemyinitialimpatience,Idecidedtogiveitatry.Asweengagedwiththepuppies,theoneinmyarmsdisplayedanendearingprotectiveness.Whenanotherpuppygotabittooclosetome,itgentlynudgeditaway,asiftosay"Thishumanismine!".Thissweetbehaviormeltedmyheartevenmore.Afterseeingthis,mybrothersmiledandagreedthatitwastheperfectfitforMom.Twoweekslater,wepickedupthedogandhidhimaroundthecornerinmymom'slivingroomwhilesheopenedherbirthdaygifts.Momwaschattingmerrilyassheunwrappedthepresents.Onceshewasdone,weledhertothehiddenpuppy.ThepuppyboundedtowardsMom,showeringherwithlicks.Momletoutadelightedscreamandthenheldthepuppyclosetoherchest."Thisisbeyondmywildestdreams!"shecried.Thisexperiencetaughtusthatthemostpreciousgiftsarethosethatbringunexpectedjoy,andweweregladtohavemadeMom'sbirthdaysomemorable.參考答案Mybrotherwasn'tsureandsuggestedthatwetakesometimetogettoknowallofthem.Wespentthenexthoursittingonthefloorplayingwithagroupofpuppies.Finally,wesettledonadifferentpuppyforourmom.Hewasthesmallestandweakestofthedo