如何讓你的作文更有亮點(diǎn)

1、WELCOME,WELCOME,如何讓你的作文更有亮點(diǎn),2012年湖南卷.書面表達(dá) 生活中，你自己或他人曾有過物品不慎丟失而又找回的經(jīng)歷，期間有煩惱，有驚喜，有感慨請(qǐng)就此寫一篇英語短文。 主要內(nèi)容包括：1.丟失的物品；2.物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過；3.你的感想。 注意： 詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)； 不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱,Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscrib

2、ed. Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back. When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I

3、 found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to me,wearing a smile on his face. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. From this story, I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society.,How to

4、polish(潤色) your composition?,一 遣詞 努力使用高級(jí)詞匯,1.Atweekends,wehavealotofhomeworktodo.,Atweekends,wehave_homeworktodo.,endless,2. I had a good idea.,A good idea_ me.,struck,3.As a result, the plan was a failure. The plan _ _ to be a failure.,4.She went to Austria in order to study music. She went to Aust

5、ria _ _ _ _studying music.,turned,out,for,the,purpose,of,5.She cant correctly pronounce the word. She _ _ _ pronouncing the word.,has,trouble/difficulty,in,2學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞：,1）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而), otherwise, in spite of, despite , regardless of(不管,不顧), although, though, while.,3）

6、表示對(duì)比關(guān)系,on the contrary; Instead of; on one handon the other hand; for one thing ,for another thing.,2） 表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系,besides, furthermore , whats more, in addition, moreover , worse still, to make matters /things worse,6）表示解釋、說明關(guān)系,7）表示結(jié)論,namely (也就是), actually, in fact, as a matter of fact, such as, for

7、 example/for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this,in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole, in conclusion,4） 表示因果關(guān)系,as a result /consequence (of), owing to, due to, thanks to, on account of(由于), so

8、, therefore, because, since ,as,5） 表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系,shortly afterwards(不久之后), first, second, then, next, finally, in the end, eventually.,二 造句- 靈活多變的句式結(jié)構(gòu),1.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句,2) l didnt realize the importance of learning English well until then. _ _ _ _then _ I realized the importance of learning English well.,It,was,n

9、ot,until,that,1)The dog has saved my little brother. _,It is the dog that has saved my little brother.,2.使用倒裝句,You can learn to write English well only in this way. _,Only in this way can you learn to write English well.,Though I am weak, I will make the efforts. _ _ _ _, I will make the efforts.,We

10、ak,as,I,am,3.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞,The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news. _ _ _ _, the young man couldnt help crying.,Hearing,the,bad,news,She walked out of the room and many students followed her. _ _ many students, she walked out of the room .,Followed,by,He didnt turn up. And it disappoi

11、nted everybody. _ _ everybody _ he didnt turn up.,It,disappointed,that,4.使用名詞性從句,定從,_ _ everybody _ _he didnt turn up.,disappointed,that,was,what,He didnt turn up, _ disappointed everybody.,which,5. 改變語態(tài),People suggest that the conference be put off. _ _ _that the conference be put off.,It,is,suggested,6.使用并列句,If you give him an inch,he will take a yard. _ _ an inch, _ he will take a yard.,the,more,excited,When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. The more he spoke,