高一英語(yǔ)寫作訓(xùn)練.ppt

1、作文基礎(chǔ)過渡性訓(xùn)練,連貫與句式的運(yùn)用,連貫(coherence) 指文章語(yǔ)意的通順和語(yǔ)言形式的緊密銜接并符合一定的邏輯關(guān)系。,要使文章前后銜接緊密，可采用以下方法： 提示1：恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞 如when，so，if，because，so that等。,提示2：巧妙使用意思有聯(lián)系的詞或短語(yǔ) 如First, Second, Third, Soon, Whats more, As a result等。,提示3：適當(dāng)使用過渡性語(yǔ)句 The reasons are as follows. Every coin has two sides. On the other hand, On the contrar

2、y,連接詞、句型的選擇 1、 遞進(jìn)關(guān)系 （肯定） （否定） 2、 時(shí)間 一就 不久 然后 同時(shí),Besides / Whats more / Also /In addition/Furthermore,Whats worse / Even worse / Worse still /To make matters worse,The moment / On doing / as soon as / immediately / directly,It was not long before / After a while / Soon,After that / Then / So / Next,A

3、t the same time / Meanwhile,3、 轉(zhuǎn)折 4、 順序 5、 條件 6、強(qiáng)調(diào),however , / but / on the contrary / On the other hand / yet,First / Second / Third / Last / Next/Then,If / As long as / So long as / on condition that,It was that / who / So she did . / I do hope / She did help me. / It really worked.,7、 其它 不得不做某事 h

4、ave to do sth./have no choicebut to do sth. /have nothing to do but do sth. 有必要做某事 There is no need (for sb.) to do sth. /It is necessary (for sb.)to do 最好做某事 Youd better do sth. Its better to do sth. 做某事沒困難 have no difficulty in doing sth. / have no trouble in doing sth. 感謝某人 thank sb. / be thankfu

5、l to sb./ express ones thanks to sb. / be grateful to sb. / Thanks to ,求助某人 turn to sb. for help / ask sb. for help / with the help of / with ones help 驚奇 To ones surprise / In surprise / Surprisingly / only +不定式（表意外結(jié)果） 原因如下（很多）The reasons are as follows. There are many reasons for it. 浪費(fèi)金錢（時(shí)間）Its a

6、 waste of money / time 結(jié)果 As a result / Therefore / Thus / So 總結(jié) In a word / In short / Above all / After all 表達(dá)觀點(diǎn) In my opinion / I think / I believe / Im sure / I guess,Task 1 請(qǐng)?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語(yǔ)。,Xiao Ming was walking in the street he heard someone cry for help. He advised that I hire a c

7、ar I could travel around in the west . It was not long the police came . he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl. Do you agree with my arrangement ? ,do write to me soon. We can go downtown and do some shopping. , we can pay a visit to some places of interest. 7. I share

8、d the cost of the gas with my friends . , I saved $80. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. , it may make us fat.,Whats more/Besides/ Also/Furthermore/ In addition,when,so that/ in order that,before,As soon as /Immediately/Directly/The moment,If not,As a result/ Therefore,Whats worse/Even worse/ /To m

9、ake matters worse,句式的運(yùn)用：利用不同的句型來(lái)表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，能增加文章的文采。,基本句型： 1、 感嘆句 e.g. 1) How happy I was when I received your letter. 2） What a kind boy he is! 3）How disappointed he was ! 2、 強(qiáng)調(diào)句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. 3、 倒裝句 e.g. 1) Only in this way can you solve this problem. 2) There

10、 comes the police car. 3) Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.,句式的運(yùn)用：利用不同的句型來(lái)表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，能增加文章的文采。,基本句型： 4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. 5、 with短語(yǔ) e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 6、 定語(yǔ)從句 e.g. In my opinio

11、n, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. 7、 各種名詞性從句 e.g. Thats what I should do. 8、 各種狀語(yǔ)從句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it.,Task 2 按要求改寫下列句子,使其更具文采。 1.Tom saved the drowning girl.(強(qiáng)調(diào)) 2.I hope I can pay a visit to you next year.（強(qiáng)調(diào)） 3.Tom was puzzled.（感嘆

12、） 4.It is great fun to climb the hill.（感嘆） 5.Tom and Mary like singing songs.（肯定倒裝） 6.John likes to study and play.（否定倒裝） 7.Soon the firefighters came.（表時(shí)間句型）,It was Tom that/who saved the drowning girl.,I do hope I can pay a visit to you next year.,How puzzled Tom was!,What great fun it is to climb

13、 the hill!,Tom likes singing songs, so does Mary.,Not only does John like to study, but (also) he likes to play.,It was not long before the firefighters came.,Task 3 Writing Practice 請(qǐng)你給中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)寫一篇稿件，談?wù)勣r(nóng)村兒童失學(xué)的主要原因及你的看法。 原因： 1、 家庭貧窮，供不起兒童上學(xué)，他們不得不在家賺錢養(yǎng)家。 2、部分家長(zhǎng)認(rèn)為女孩上學(xué)無(wú)用，不愿讓她們上學(xué)。 3、 部分兒童對(duì)功課不感興趣，不愿上學(xué)。 看法： 1、

14、 每個(gè)兒童包括女孩都應(yīng)有受教育的機(jī)會(huì)。 2、全社會(huì)都應(yīng)重視兒童教育，他們對(duì)國(guó)家的未來(lái)將起到重要的作用。 要求： 1、不要逐字逐句翻譯。 2、語(yǔ)句要連貫通順。 3、字?jǐn)?shù)100個(gè)左右。,Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. Most families are poor and cant afford their education. They have to stay at home and make money. Some parents think daughters neednt go to scho

15、ol. They dont let them go to school. Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldnt like to go to school. All the children including girls should be educated . The whole society should pay attention to it. Theyll play an important part in the future of our country.,診斷： 優(yōu)點(diǎn) 缺點(diǎn) 藥方,1、詞能達(dá)意

16、； 2、語(yǔ)句表達(dá)基本正確。,語(yǔ)句不夠連貫,1、使用常見句型； 2、每?jī)蓚€(gè)句子之間使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞或過渡詞。,Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. 。，most families are too poor to send their children to school . ,they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. ,some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go

17、to school. ,they dont let them go to school. ,some children are not interested in their studies. ,some wouldnt like to go to school. ,all the children including girls should be educated . ,the whole society should pay attention to it theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day

18、.,Task 4 Writing by yourselves 下列圖畫描述的是兩位少先隊(duì)員上星期日去少年宮的途中經(jīng)歷的事情.請(qǐng)據(jù)此寫一篇短文,參加由英語(yǔ)組組織的英語(yǔ)作文競(jìng)賽。,練習(xí)一、（一）簡(jiǎn)單句翻譯,1我們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)怎樣用電腦。 Were learning how to use the computer. 2他和他的朋友經(jīng)常查字典。 He and his friend always look up in the dictionary.,3 請(qǐng)給我一杯水, 好嗎？ Please give me a cup of water, will you? 4 老師讓我回答了這個(gè)問題。 The teacher

19、 asked me to answer the question.,5 我們的國(guó)家變得越來(lái)越強(qiáng)大。 Our country is getting stronger and stronger. 6 你的到來(lái)使我很高興。 Your arrival makes me very happy.,7 村莊里有許多綠樹和湖泊。 There are many green trees and lakes in the village. 8 我們不應(yīng)該歧視弱者。 We should not look down upon the weak.,(二) 并列句翻譯,1. 我喜歡讀書，他喜歡玩玩具。（while） I l

20、ike reading while he likes playing with toys. 2. 孩子們非常高興，或者至少看起來(lái)很高興。（or） The children are very happy or at least they look happy.,3. 中國(guó)是發(fā)展中國(guó)家，而美國(guó)是發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家。（but/ while） China is a developing country, while the United States is a developed one. 4. 這里常下雨，有時(shí)有暴風(fēng)雨。(and） It often rains here, and storms sometim

21、es.,5他不但受到我們的鼓勵(lì)而且受到老師的表?yè)P(yáng)。（not only but also） He was not only encouraged by us but also praised by the teacher. 6我們周圍的東西不是固體、液體就是氣體。(eitheror) Everything around us is either solid, liquid or gas.,7一個(gè)人既應(yīng)該有勇氣也應(yīng)有毅力。 （both and) A man should have both courage and perseverance.,8. 新中國(guó)的婦女在政治生活和家庭生活方面享有和男子同等

22、權(quán)利。(as well as） In new China women enjoy equal rights with men in political life as well as in family life. 9. 我喝咖啡要加奶加糖。 When I drink coffee, I prefer to add sugar as well as milk.,(三) 復(fù)合句翻譯,1我相信你一定能成功。 Im sure youll succeed. 2北京再也不是20年前的樣子了。 Beijing is no longer what was 20 years ago.,3 這個(gè)城市是我出生的地

23、方。 This is the city where I was born. / The city is the one which I was born in. 4 他和以前不一樣了。 He is not what he used to be.,5為了明天趕上早班車，我要早起。 I have to get up earlier so that I can catch up the early bus. 6. 雖然他年輕，但是經(jīng)驗(yàn)很豐富。 Although he is young, he is very experienced. / He is young but he is very expe

24、rienced.,7 如果有困難，請(qǐng)來(lái)找我。 Please turn to me if you are in trouble. 8. 老師所講的都記在筆記本上了。 What the teacher said was all taken down on the notebook.,9眾所周知，中國(guó)是人口大國(guó)。 It is well-known that China is a country with a large population. 10據(jù)報(bào)道，他是來(lái)自新西蘭的一位學(xué)者。 It is reported that he is a scholar from New Zealand.,11他與我

25、們到別時(shí)留下了他的姓名和地址。 He left his name and address when he said good-bye to me. 12李秘書被解雇是因?yàn)樗苜V。 Secretary Li was dismissed because he took bribe.,13盜賊沒等警察抓捕，就逃逸了。 The robbers had escaped before the police arrived. 14他讀過信后就把信毀掉。 He destroyed the letter after he read it.,15自開店以來(lái)，我們贏獲大利。 We have made large p

26、rofits since we opened this shop. 16如果我知道它在哪，它就不會(huì)丟了，是不是？ If I knew where it was, it wont be lost, would it?,17一直向前走直到一所新的藍(lán)色大樓。 Go straight on until you come to a new blue building. 18他不照別人告訴他的去做。 He wont do as hes told.,19按照她的要求，她被埋葬在花園里。 She was buried at the garden, as she had requested. 20我們一到達(dá)那里

27、就給你打電話。 Well ring you as soon as we get there.,練習(xí)二、改正錯(cuò)句,(一) 修改下面的句子，去掉多余的詞。 1.Do you know who first invented the telephone? Do you know who invented the telephone?,2. In my opinion, I think Japan is far ahead of Spain in science. In my opinion, Japan is far ahead of Spain in science.,3. The first up

28、 train leaves away from the station at 6:00. The first up train leaves at 6:00. 4. No sooner had I left the house than it began to rain immediately. No sooner had I left the house than it began to rain .,5. Listen to me speaking carefully. Listen to me carefully. 6. Every day Tom and I walk to schoo

29、l on foot together. Every day Tom and I walk to school together.,7. Every Sunday I go to pay him a visit. Every Sunday I pay him a visit. 8. George is entirely different in various ways from his brother. George is entirely different from his brother.,9. That famous football team from Brazil which wo

30、n the match. That famous football team from Brazil won the match. 10. Henry is still too young not to handle this important job alone. Henry is still too young to handle this important job alone.,11. Mary has made up her mind to decide to go abroad. Mary has made up her mind to go abroad. 12. There

31、is a mistake in your wrong sentence. There is a mistake in your sentence.,13. I suggest how about eating out this weekend. I suggest eating out this weekend. 14. Please look the papers over from beginning to end. Please look the papers over .,15. Though she has six children, but she lives by himself

32、. Though she has six children, she lives by himself. 16. You will find his house easily without difficulty. You will find his house easily .,17. I always have eggs for breakfast in the morning. I always have eggs for breakfast. 18. Hong Kong is an island surrounded by water on all sides. Hong Kong i

33、s an island.,19. Mrs Hill is old-fashioned in the dress, but young at the heart. Mrs Hill is old-fashioned in dress, but young at heart. 20. Mr. Li is an honest man who never tells lies. Mr. Li is an honest man .,（二）改正下面句子中的詞語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤：,Dont be discouraged; go ahead, and make other try. Dont be discouraged

34、; go ahead, and make another try. 2. Mr Cooper would tell you the truth if he was here. Mr Cooper would tell you the truth if he were here.,3. There is not more much time before our vacation. There is not much more time before our vacation. 4. A person should always be ready to make a change in habi

35、ts. A person should always be ready to make a change in his habits.,5. Every child likes surprise. Every child likes a surprise. 6. If the book you will want is out you may ask for it. If the book you want is out you may ask for it.,7.He walked slowly, stopped frequently to rest. He walked slowly, s

36、topping frequently to rest. 8. The number of the tickets that the box office sell was very large. The number of the tickets that the box office sold was very large.,9. The final plan differed greatly with the original one. The final plan differed greatly from the original one. 10. That package is to

37、o heavy to be carried. That package is too heavy to carry.,11. We all know the news which we won the football match yesterday. We all know the news that we won the football match yesterday. 12. The suggestion of the worker proved far more valuable that we had expected. The suggestion of the worker p

38、roved far more valuable than we had expected.,13. It was not until 1920 since regular radio broadcast began. It was not until 1920 that regular radio broadcast began. 14. They stayed at a hotel in front of it was a beautiful garden. They stayed at a hotel in front of which was a beautiful garden.,15

39、. So surprised he was that he could hardly say a word. So surprised was he that he could hardly say a word. 16. Is this necessary to buy a new mobile phone while the old one is still working? Is it necessary to buy a new mobile phone while the old one is still working?,17. Our teacher insisted we wo

40、uld go there on foot. Our teacher insisted we go there on foot. 18. Though he has a lot of work to do, however, he often helps us. Though he has a lot of work to do, he often helps us.,19. This is the date when I will never forget. This is the date (that) I will never forget. 20. You can stay the pl

41、ace where you are. You can stay in the place where you are.,練習(xí)三、,（一）改正句子中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的錯(cuò)誤 Get up late is a bad habit. Getting up late is a bad habit. 2. Be diligent is one of the keys to success. Being diligent is one of the keys to success. / Diligence is one of the keys to success.,3. My hobby is readin

42、g and go shopping. My hobby is reading and shopping. 4. Compare with these kinds of the one-child families, my family is rare at present. Compared with these kinds of the one-child families, my family is rare at present.,5. A good housewifes love can make every member in the family feels happy. A go

43、od housewifes love can make every member in the family feel happy. 6. Become a good teacher is my dream. Becoming a good teacher is my dream.,7. I want to buy a lot of beautiful dresses, as love beauty is a nature of a girl. I want to buy a lot of beautiful dresses, as loving beauty is a nature of a

44、 girl. 8. Lets learn English, begin with ABC. Lets learn English, beginning with ABC.,9. Close the distance between them, she pressed her face to his heart. Closing the distance between them, she pressed her face to his heart. 10. She watched the trees in the yard, regret that spring had so soon pas

45、sed. She watched the trees in the yard, regretting that spring had so soon passed.,11. Limiting by the time, I could not visit so many places. Limited by the time, I could not visit so many places. 12. It introduced that the founder of the club was a young man. It is introduced that the founder of t

46、he club was a young man.,（二）改正句子在結(jié)構(gòu)上的錯(cuò)誤,I like by train. I like traveling by train. 2. I very much like there. I like there very much.,3.Her dream is she can give performance in Beijing. Her dream is that she can give performance in Beijing. 4.Only do that, can we improve our writing skills. Only by

47、 doing that can we improve our writing skills.,5. I would save each coin can be saved. I would save each coin that can be saved. 6. I was still thinking if let him know it. I was still thinking if I should let him know it.,7. Most of the people buy vegetables in the market are women. Most of the peo

48、ple who buy vegetables in the market are women. 8. The way of people spend the weekend is different. The way people spend the weekend is different.,9. As an airhostess can often stay in the sky. As an airhostess she can often stay in the sky. 10. In the countryside, there are too many children cant

49、go to school. In the countryside, there are too many children who cant go to school.,11. In the street of Beijing we can often meet foreigners come from all over the world. In the street of Beijing we can often meet foreigners coming from all over the world. 12.The reason for this is because they di

50、dnt realize the importance of career for a woman. The reason for this is that they didnt realize the importance of career for a woman.,13. He likes to help others either he knows or he doesnt know. He likes to help others whether he knows them or not. 14. Ill read the papers which placed on my desk

51、by my secretary. Ill read the papers which were placed on my desk by my secretary.,15. Because I admire him very much. So I decide go to this college. Because I admire him very much, I decide to go to this college. 16. My brother is 12 years old and studying in a local school. My brother is 12 years

52、 old and is studying in a local school.,17. He dreamed that he drove a car, and a lot of money around him. He dreamed that he drove a car, with a lot of money around him. 18. Being a guide can travel to a lot of places. Being a guide he can travel to a lot of places.,19. In his spare time, he does h

53、ouse cleaning, reading newspapers, watching television, and cooking for his grandson. In his spare time, he does house cleaning, reads newspapers, watches television, and cooks for his grandson. 20. He has three books have been published. He has three books that have been published.,21.You own money

54、 more or less is not important. How much money you own is not important. 22. Laughter instead of silence. Laughter took the place of silence.,23. Late is a bad habit. Being late is a bad habit. 24. A good student should have good characters, such as easy-going, active, warm hearted. A good student s

55、hould be easy-going, active, and warm hearted.,25. Every time we go across the bridge, he will grasp my hand firmly and as if Im still a little girl. Every time we go across the bridge, he will grasp my hand firmly as if I were still a little girl.,練習(xí)四、英漢互譯,（一） 1。月亮晚間照耀。 The moon shines by night. 2。

56、幾乎每天都會(huì)發(fā)生車禍。 Cars accidents occur nearly every day. 3。 昨日上午他在家里。 He stayed at home yesterday morning.,4. 他們第一次見面是在這個(gè)郵局。 They met the first time at the post office. It was at the post office that they met the first time. 5. 這個(gè)會(huì)議是在兩個(gè)小時(shí)之前就開始了嗎？ Did the meeting begin two hours ago?,6. Linda failed in the

57、 examination again this time. 琳達(dá)這次考試不及格。 7. The music club meets once a month. 這個(gè)音樂俱樂部每月活動(dòng)一次。,8. Mr Li and his wife both teach in the primary school. 李先生和夫人都在這所小學(xué)教書。 9. Mary lives with her parents. 瑪麗和父母住在一起。 10. My son drives very well. 我兒子駕車技術(shù)很好。,（二）主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ),這本書有許多圖片。 This book contains many pictu

58、res. 2. 我替老人提包。 I carried the bag for the old man. 3. 我們廠制作木桌。 We made wooden tables in our factory. 4. 上月我賣了我們的汽車。 I sold our car last month.,5. 他帶給我一個(gè)文件。 He brought me a file. 6. 他們接受了邀請(qǐng)。 They accepted the invitation. 7.我自己能照料這個(gè)商店。 I can manage the shopping myself. 8.我的父親給了我一些忠告。 My father gave me

59、 some advice.,（三）主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+to do+,1。布朗一家計(jì)劃搬家。 The Browns planned to move house. 2。他們繼續(xù)支持我們。 They continued to support us. 3。他幫助這位老太太過馬路。 He helped the old woman to cross the road.,4。 你應(yīng)該拒絕做這件事。 You should refuse to do it. 5。 我有個(gè)約會(huì)去見一個(gè)朋友。 I have an appointment to see a friend.,6.Tell him not to be late again. 告訴他不要再遲到了。 7. He decides to go abroad. 他決定出國(guó)。 8. She