人教版英語必修5：Unit1periodⅳwriting.ppt

1、Period ,Writing,原句1 John Snow was a famous doctor in Londonso expert, indeed ( 插 入 語 ), that he attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician.(教材 P2)約翰斯諾是倫敦一位著名的醫(yī)生他的 確醫(yī)術(shù)精湛，因而成了維多利亞女王的私人大夫。,點(diǎn)評(píng),這個(gè)長句是由三個(gè)簡單句合并而成：,John Snow was a famous doctor in London. He was expert.,He attended Queen Victoria as h

2、er personal physician. 合并之第一步：由于句和句之間有“如此以至 于”的邏輯關(guān)系，可以用“so.that.”將其合并：He was so,expert that he attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician.,合并之第二步：省去第句的 he was，改用破折號(hào)引出后,面的內(nèi)容，再在其后加入插入語。,仿寫,張老師是個(gè)熱心的老師。他那么善良，我想，當(dāng)他的學(xué),生遇到麻煩時(shí)他一定樂意幫助他們。,(提示：熱心的 warm-hearted),_ _ 李平是我們班一位用功的學(xué)生。他那么勤奮，我想不到,晚上 11 點(diǎn)他不會(huì)上床睡

3、覺的。,( 提示：用功的，勤奮的 hard-working/diligent; 直到,才 not.till/until.),_ _,Mr.Zhang is a warmhearted teacherso kind, I think/I believe/ I suppose, that he is sure to help his students when they are in trouble.,Li Ping is a hardworking boy in my classso diligent, I suppose, that he never goes to bed until 11

4、at night.,原句2,Although he had tried to ignore them, all his mathematical,calculations led to the same conclusion：that the earth was not the centre of the solar system.(教材 P7)雖然他曾經(jīng)試著不去理睬那 些數(shù)字，然而他所有的數(shù)學(xué)計(jì)算都得出了一個(gè)相同的結(jié)論：地 球不是太陽系的中心。 點(diǎn)評(píng),這個(gè)長句是由三個(gè)簡單句合并而成： He had tried to ignore them.,All his mathematical calc

5、ulations led to the same conclusion. The earth was not the centre of the solar system.,合并之第一步：句和句之間有“盡管但是”,的邏輯關(guān)系，我們可以用 although 將其合并。,合并之第二步：句是解釋說明 conclusion 的具體內(nèi)容，,可以用冒號(hào)加 that 從句充當(dāng)同位語從句。 仿寫,雖然她不相信別人說的話，可她所收集的證據(jù)得出的結(jié),論是：她的實(shí)驗(yàn)結(jié)果是錯(cuò)誤的。,(提示：收集證據(jù) collect evidence(s),_ _ _,Though she didnt believe what oth

6、er people said, the evidences that she collected led to the conclusion: that the result of her experiment was wrong.,他很聰明，但他不勤奮。他從這學(xué)期所經(jīng)歷的失敗中得出,的結(jié)論是：不勞不獲。,(提示：經(jīng)歷失敗 experience the failure; 不勞不獲 no pains,no gains.),_ _ _,Though he was very clever, he didnt work hard and all his failures that he experie

7、nced in this term led to the conclusion: that no pains, no gains.,原句3,He placed a fixed sun at the centre of the solar system with the planets going round it and only the moon still going round the,earth.(教材 P7)他把太陽固定在太陽系的中心位置上，而行星則 圍繞著太陽轉(zhuǎn)，只有月球仍然繞著地球轉(zhuǎn)。 點(diǎn)評(píng),這個(gè)長句是由三個(gè)簡單句合并而成：,He placed a fixed sun at th

8、e centre of the solar system. He had the planets going round it.,He only had the moon still going round the earth.,合并之第一步：句和句之間有并列的邏輯關(guān)系，可以 用 and 將其合并：He had the planets going round it and only (had),the moon still going round the earth.,合并之第二步：句和句之間有伴隨關(guān)系，可用“with,賓語賓補(bǔ)”的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)來表示。 仿寫,當(dāng)你步入校園，在你面前是一個(gè)種著各種花

9、草的大花壇,和兩幢高大的樓房。(提示：花壇 flower bed),_ _ _,When you enter the school, you can see in front of you a big flower bed with various kinds of flowers and grass growing in it and two large buildings.,他看到花朵在點(diǎn)頭，葉子在跳舞，風(fēng)兒正在柔聲歌唱。,_ _,He saw flowers nodding and leaves dancing with the wind singing softly.,描述一位科學(xué)家

10、本單元出現(xiàn)的相關(guān)詞匯：,scientist (n.科學(xué)家), expert (n.專家,adj. 熟練的；經(jīng)驗(yàn)或知,識(shí)豐富的), neither.nor. (既不也不), every time (每次),not.until (直到才),be linked to (與相關(guān)), be to blame,( 該 受 責(zé) 備 ), prevent.from doing ( 阻止 ),be strict with,(對(duì)嚴(yán)格的),be absorbed in (專注于),put forward (提出),be exposed to (暴露在),announce with certainty (肯定地宣布)

11、,apart from ( 除 之 外 ),draw a conclusion ( 總 結(jié) ),make,contributions to (對(duì)做出貢獻(xiàn)) 本單元出現(xiàn)的相關(guān)句式： 1Who put forward a theory about.？誰提出了關(guān)于的 理論？ 2John Snow was.so expert.that.約翰斯諾是他如此 專業(yè)以至于,3 To prevent. from., John Snow suggested that. 為了阻,止發(fā)生， 約翰斯諾建議 4Only if.did.只有，才能,描寫人物的作文，內(nèi)容一般包括“概、貌、育、平、估” 五個(gè)方面，即概況(出生年

12、月，年齡，性別，背景等)，外貌/性 格(高矮胖瘦，性格等)，教育，生平(經(jīng)歷，成就等)，評(píng)估(影 響，評(píng)價(jià)等)。,Einstein, the world-famous expert on physics, was born in,Ulm, Germany, in March 1879 and died in April, 1935.,He was so naughty when he was young that neither his parents nor his teacher thought that he could be a scientist. However, it seeme

13、d that he was curious about everything.Every time he faced a question, he would never be satisfied until he found the answer, which was linked to his success in the future. In 1895, he failed the college entrance examination, in which his poor history and language were to blame.To prevent himself,fr

14、om failing again, he faced the challenge bravely, began to be strict with himself and was absorbed in study.Finally, he defeated others and entered ETH.In 1905, he put forward the Theory of Relativity, which was a hit in scientific field.During the outbreak of the Second World War, he was exposed to

15、 various dangers.He announced with certainty that he was against war.Apart from this, he contributed his works to raise money for the poor. It is not difficult to draw a conclusion that Einstein has made,great contributions to the world in his whole life.,結(jié)構(gòu)分析：,第一段描寫愛因斯坦的概況； 第二段描寫他的性格；,第三段描寫他的教育和生平；

16、 第四段是對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)。 亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)：,1應(yīng)用了豐富多變的句型，使文章很有層次感。 2敘述生平按照時(shí)間順序來寫，有條理。,1介紹人物特征時(shí)，多使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。若描述人物具體 的過去行為，或描述人物已過世，則使用一般過去時(shí)。,2積累常用的描寫人物外貌和性格的詞匯。,3描寫人物性格特征時(shí)，可使用多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)，豐富人物,形象。,4可使用副詞或“withn.”的狀語結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)一步描寫人物,的行為動(dòng)作。,5使用同位語從句、定語從句、非謂語動(dòng)詞等豐富人物信,息。,必背詞匯,1be born in a poor family 出生于貧窮家庭 2attend school 上學(xué),3at the age of 在歲時(shí),

17、4during his childhood 在他童年時(shí) 5sense of humour 幽默感,6be always ready to 總是樂于 7modest and honest 謙虛誠實(shí) 8be regarded as 被認(rèn)為是,9have a gift for 在方面有天賦,10work hard at 致力于,11devote ones life to 致力于 12graduate from 從畢業(yè) 13take an active part in 積極參加,14open-minded and optimistic 樂觀開朗 15be admitted to 被錄?。豢既?16go

18、 abroad for further studies 出國深造 17be honored for 因而受到尊敬,18dream of being a. 夢想成為一位 19have a strong interest in 對(duì)有濃厚興趣,常用句式,1soadj./adv.that 如此以至于 2adj.enough to do sth.足夠去做某事 3a person withn.一個(gè)有的人,【小試牛刀】,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇英語短文。,寫作內(nèi)容,鐘南山，1936 年 10 月出生于福建廈門，是治療呼吸道疾 病的專家。他對(duì)自己在工作方面要求很嚴(yán)格，每次遇到問題， 不找到解決方法，決不放棄。20

19、03 年，SARS 襲擊了廣東省， 他不怕暴露在危險(xiǎn)中，勇于面對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)。終于他發(fā)現(xiàn)了一種病毒， 這正是罪魁禍?zhǔn)祝瑥亩柚沽思膊鞑?。我們可以得出結(jié)論， 他對(duì)人類做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)。 寫作要求,只能用 5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。,參考詞匯：呼吸道疾病 respiratory disease,參考范文：,Zhong Nanshan, an expert on curing respiratory disease, was born in Xiamen, Fujian Province, in Oct.1936.He was so strict with himself in work that every

20、 time he faced a problem, he would never give up until he found the answer.In 2003 when SARS hit Guangdong Province, he was not afraid of being exposed to danger and faced the challenge bravely.Finally he found a virus which was to blame and managed to prevent the disease from spreading. Therefore,

21、we can draw a conclusion that he has made great contributions to the human beings.,如何以約30詞概括短文要點(diǎn),1故事類：The author argues that _ ( 故事主旨) by telling the story of _ ( 故事 主人公), who _ (主人公的經(jīng)歷) 2議論/說明類：The passage mainly conveys that _ _ (議論的道理或說明的現(xiàn)象) by showing the _ _ (例子、報(bào)道、數(shù)據(jù)等) that _ (具體的內(nèi)容或影響、作用等),【小

22、試牛刀】,1閱讀下面的短文，然后以約 30 詞概括文章的大意。,In one way of thinking, failure is a part of life.In another way, failure may be a way towards success.Edison, the inventor of the light bulb, made hundreds of models that failed before he found the right way to make one.Abraham Lincoln, the famous American president,

23、 lost elections more times than he won them! He never gave up in the face of failure but kept trying and was eventually elected to Congress and then the presidency.,So what? First, always think about your failure.What caused it? Were conditions right? Were you in top from yourself? What can you chan

24、ge so things will go right next time?,Second, is the goal youre trying to reach the right one? Try to do some thinking about what your real goals may be.Think about,this question.“If I do succeed this time, where will it get me ？”,This may help you prevent failure in things you shouldnt be doing any

25、way.,The third thing to bear in mind about failure is that its part of life.Learn to “l(fā)ive with yourself” even though you may have failed.Remember, “You cant win them all.”,2閱讀下面的短文，然后以約 30 詞概括文章的大意。 I have a friend Monty Roberts who owns a horse ranch (牧馬 場) in San Ysidro.When he was a senior, he was asked to write a,paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up. The next day he handed it in to the teacher.On the front was a,la