中考英語(yǔ)作文課件.ppt

1、,中考指南：書(shū)面表達(dá),How to write a good composition,書(shū)面表達(dá)是全國(guó)各地中考的必考題型，該題型重在考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)正確遣詞造句的能力以及連句成篇的語(yǔ)言組織能力。初中英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)的考查形式比較簡(jiǎn)單，且大多帶有提示，對(duì)文采、修辭要求很低，只要根據(jù)所給的提示把主要內(nèi)容設(shè)法充分地表達(dá)出來(lái)即可。因此，在具體寫(xiě)作中可以運(yùn)用以下策略：,（一） 細(xì)審題目， 擬定提綱。 在進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作之前，務(wù)必把寫(xiě)作要求認(rèn)真完整地看一遍, 確定對(duì)要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容、文章體裁進(jìn)行整體性的思考。根據(jù)題目中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾。設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)記下，形成提綱。,時(shí)

2、態(tài),人稱(chēng),體裁,內(nèi)容,字?jǐn)?shù),（二）簡(jiǎn)潔通順，行文流暢。 這是根據(jù)審題時(shí)定出的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)、順序、開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾，以及列出的提綱和要點(diǎn)，把各部分內(nèi)容細(xì)化的過(guò)程。寫(xiě)作應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔、通順，表達(dá)正確，切中要點(diǎn)。在連詞成句，連句成篇時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：,(1)盡量使用自己最熟悉、最有把握的句型和短語(yǔ)表達(dá)。但也要盡量使句型多樣化，如適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句，這樣不會(huì)使人覺(jué)得乏味； (2)語(yǔ)句通順，要用英語(yǔ)思維和表達(dá)，切忌漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)要正確，主謂要一致，注意人稱(chēng)代詞、物主代詞用法等； (3) 層次要清楚，行文要連貫流暢。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此考生應(yīng)盡量使用and, or, (al)

3、though，but, however，because, so等詞，以便使行文自然流暢； (4)不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡(jiǎn)。,（三）書(shū)寫(xiě)工整, 標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。 卷面整潔與否也是能否得高分的重要因素之一。另外, 拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)也不可忽視, 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)特別要注意漢英之間句號(hào)、句點(diǎn)的不同，即漢語(yǔ)是句號(hào)“?！?，而英語(yǔ)是句點(diǎn)“. ”。,自從實(shí)施規(guī)范辦學(xué)后，中學(xué)生有了更多自主支配的時(shí)間，但有些同學(xué)不知如何利用好這些時(shí)間，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語(yǔ)之聲”欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時(shí)間”進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給該欄目寫(xiě)一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：,注

4、意: 100詞左右，廣播的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),體裁,人稱(chēng),內(nèi)容,時(shí)態(tài),字?jǐn)?shù),以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,Introduction Main body Conclusion,不良現(xiàn)象同行為,看法,建議,Write an outline,花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛(ài)好上 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲 -,-,合理安排時(shí)間 參加興趣小組 -,已給出,總結(jié)全文，再次點(diǎn)題,列關(guān)鍵詞,Problems spend too much time on their hobbies , be crazy about, play computer games , watch too much TV , refuse to do home

5、work, ,列關(guān)鍵詞,Opinions not good for our health and study, pay more attention to ,列關(guān)鍵詞,Suggestions plan time carefully, join interest groups , achieve a balance between study and bobbies, take part in different after-school activities, do some sports , do some housework ,列關(guān)鍵詞,Conclusion Lets, I hope,并列

6、句,復(fù)合句 結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on time,Some students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time,How

7、to make better sentences?,變換句式,連詞成句,細(xì)心檢查,Now, we have much free time than before. But many students dont know how should they spend the time. They spend so much time to play that they cant finish homework on time. Also some of them watch too many TV, Some are crazy about play computer games. I dont

8、think its good for their study and health. However, how can we make better use of our spare time? First, we can plan our time careful and try to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. Second, we can take part in interest groups. Besides these, we should help parents do some houseworks. Let

9、s make better use of our free time and make our life colorful!,more,they should,playing,much,playing,carefully,join,housework,4 大錯(cuò)，4小錯(cuò)。-5分,r,15分,From Susan,11分,卷面整潔不一定加分， 卷面潦草一定要扣分！,應(yīng)對(duì)策略：,1、仔細(xì)審題，判定哪些是要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，哪些是干擾信息。 2、謀篇布局。不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。 3、考慮時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)，用自己最熟悉的句型、短語(yǔ) 去寫(xiě)。 4、要使用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)言；盡量用一些復(fù)合句；注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。 5、不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、

10、姓名。 6、書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。 7、不能空白,1.認(rèn)真審題,2.列出提綱,3.連詞成句,4.連句成文,5.細(xì)心檢查,a good composition,Summary,假如上周一你班舉行了“愛(ài)護(hù)水、節(jié)約水”的主題活 動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)為你校校報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇活動(dòng)報(bào)道。,要求：1. 詞數(shù)不少于90，文章的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)； 2. 要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫； 3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)的人名、校名。,Introduction Main body Conclusion,內(nèi)容,收獲,Write an outline,邀請(qǐng)王老師作報(bào)告 全班討論如何節(jié)水和愛(ài)護(hù)水,我國(guó)一些地方水源受到污染 我市

11、也缺水 節(jié)水和愛(ài)護(hù)水的方法,舉行主題班會(huì),活動(dòng)感受,列關(guān)鍵詞,Introduction hold an activity about save and protect water,列關(guān)鍵詞,Content invite sb to do give sb a talk have a discussion about how to save and protect water,列關(guān)鍵詞,Achievement some of the rivers be polluted be short of as a result throw rubbish into dumpinto use less wat

12、er ,列關(guān)鍵詞,Feeling: take part in the importance of protect the environment ,Last Monday our class held an activity. We talked about saving and protecting water.,How to make better sentences?,變換句式,連詞成句,Last Monday our class held an activity about saving and protecting water.,After taking part in the ac

13、tivity, we had a better understanding of the importance of protecting the environment and saving water.,范文展示,Last Monday our class held an activity about saving and protecting water.,Mr. Wang was invited to give us a talk. After his speech, we had a discussion about how to save and protect water.Now we know that some of the rivers are polluted in our country and that we are short of water although there are some rivers and lakes in our city. As a result, we need to protect and save water. For example, we shouldnt leave water running after using it. Besides, we mustnt thr