高中英語基礎寫作課件.ppt

Basic Writing,時間分配,基礎寫作的命題特點： 考生按所給的內(nèi)容及要求，用5個規(guī)范的英語句子描述所 給信息的全部內(nèi)容，并組成連貫的短文。 簡而言之，考查考生整理信息和組詞造句成文的能力。,對于書面表達的要求：,1.Cover all the language points and given information. 覆蓋所有的語言要點,Avoid grammar mistakes and wrong spelling 應用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性,3.coherent, tight 上下文的連貫性 即有效地使用語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。,4.use the words properly 語言的得體性,5. Write your article clearly.,6. Mind the number of your sentences.,To make the article tight, graceful and clear.,To avoid using repetitive words or expressions. 表達時盡量用一些較高級的詞匯，避免使用重復的詞語，使語言不至于單純和幼稚。也可以給文章增添亮點。,（2）To use some transitional words 恰當選用過渡詞，使文章緊湊，流暢。,(3)To use more sentence patterns such as inverted order, emphasis, a compound sentence or a participle adverbial 適當使用多種句型，注意語言的豐富性，多樣化，以 變化多端的形式來表現(xiàn)豐富多彩的內(nèi)容。,Basic writing skills,Ways of writing good sentences,方法一. 一句多譯,As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.,On arriving at the village，we were warmly.,The moment we arrived at the village, we were,We were warmly welcomed by the villagers immediately we arrived at the village.,No sooner had we arrived at the village than we ,Hardly had we arrived at the village when we.,Use different ways to describe the picture,方法一. 一句多譯,一就受到歡迎,As soon as Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed . On arriving at the airport , Lien Chan and his wife Lien Chan and his wife were warmly welcomed the moment /immediately they arrived at the airport. No sooner had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport than they were Hardly had Lien Chan and his wife arrived at the airport when they were ,方法一. 一句多譯,Practice 一句多譯 這本書花了我300元。 I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. The book cost me 300 yuan.,Practice 一句多譯,昨天下午他才來。 He came here yesterday afternoon. He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.,Rewrite the sentences,方法二. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔,（1）Most of the artists who had been invited to the party were from South Africa.,Most of the artists invited to the party were from South Africa.,（2）Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park in order that they could keep healthy.,Nowadays the old people often do morning exercises in the park to keep healthy.,方法二. 使用非謂語動詞使句子簡潔高檔,Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非謂語動詞) 聽到這個消息,他們變的很激動. _the news, they got excited. 2. 盡管被告知許多遍,他仍然重復這個錯. _many times, he still repeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀請發(fā)言,你應該在會議上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,Translate the following sentences by using non-predicate (非謂語動詞),1,面對困難時，他從不放棄。 2，引入市場后，該產(chǎn)品大獲成功。 3，做完作業(yè)后，他回家了。,Faced with/Facing difficulties, he never gives up.,Introduced to the market, the product made a great success.,Having finished his homework, he returned home.,方法三.豐富的句式,Describe the character by using Inverted Sentence(倒裝句),Poor as/though he was, he was happy.,方法三.豐富的句式,Sentence patterns Are Always Useful,The dog jumped into the river and pulled the girl to the bank. It was the dog that jumped into the river and pulled the girl to safety. The square is near the Great Wall Hotel. Near the Great Wall Hotel is the square. You will have to work hard for years to speak good English. It will take years of hard work to speak good English.,I failed in the exam again. What disappointed me most was that I failed in the exam again. Miss Li will give us a report soon. Miss Li, who has a wide knowledge of English, will give us a report soon. We all like Jim. We all like Jim, who is always ready to help others. We all like Jim because of his helpfulness and kindness.,1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句） 2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒裝句) 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強調(diào)句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,5.I wont believe what he says. （使用狀語從句） 6.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 7He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,Use different ways to describe one sentence. Make sentences by using non-predicate. 3.Sentence patterns are always useful,Summaries:,Practice,此四幅畫描述了 愛鳥周活動中李 明某一天所經(jīng)歷 的事，由此寫一 篇文章。 要求： 1 必須使用5個句子 表達圖畫內(nèi)容。 2 將5個句子組成 連貫的短文。,步驟一 審題,narration,past tense,the third person,time order,caught a bird fixed a string to it,a girl look for mother a police comfort her,步驟二 要點,send her home lost in thought,set the bird free feel happy,步驟二 要點,步驟三. 擴展成句，連句成篇,1.One day,Li Ming caught a bird and fixed a string to it.,2. He saw a girl cry looking for her mum and a police- man comfort her.,3. The policeman sent the girl home and Li Ming was lost in thought.,4. Li Ming set the bird free and felt very happy.,步驟四. 仔細檢查，認真修改,查是否遺漏要點，信息是否完整， 尤其是：人物、地點、時間、發(fā)生什么事、 如何發(fā)生、怎樣進行等方面是否遺漏。 查體裁格式是否正確。 查句式使用是否科學得當。 查敘述的順序是否顛倒。 查過渡詞是否使用合理。 查時態(tài)、語態(tài)是否一致正確。 查書寫和標點符號是否規(guī)范清晰。 查字數(shù)是否符合要求。,One day, Li Ming caught a bird and fixed a string to it. When playing with it, he saw the girl who was crying couldnt find her mum and