2019年求職信細節(jié)問題范文.doc

求職信細節(jié)問題范文 寫求職信的目的在于獲得職位，一封求職信無論如何文辭并茂，令人心動，公司HR主管不見到應(yīng)聘者本人是不會給予工作機會的。因此，求職信的實際目的在于獲得面談的機會。許多人都會copy網(wǎng)上的求職信范本，導(dǎo)致千篇一律，這是非常不可取的。我們已經(jīng)講過怎樣寫求職信，這次我們來談?wù)勄舐毿艑懽髦腥菀妆缓雎缘募毠?jié)問題。 一、求職信的第一段說明寫信的目的，有些專家認為不宜用分詞句子，比如用下面的句子做開頭，因為這樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去特點。 Replyingtoyouradvertisement.Answeringyouradvertisement.Believingthatthereisanopportunity.Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourpany.Havingreadyourad. 再比較下面三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當(dāng)。 A:(1)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsalesmanager. (2)Iamapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanager.Ibelievemyqualificationswillmeetyourexactingrequirements. B:(1)IbelieveafterreadingyouradvertisementinthismorningsJournalthatyouareofferingjusttheopportunityIamlookingfor. (2)YouradvertisementinthismorningsJournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptedmetoapplyforthisposition. C:(1)HavingreadyouradvertisementintheNewYorkTimesforanaccountant,Ithoughtyoumightbeinterestedinmyapplication. (2)Inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofapetentperson,withthoroughtraininginthefieldofcostaccounting.Pleaseconsidermeanapplicantfortheposition.HerearemyreasonsforbelievingIamqualifiedforthiswork. 二、在提到希望得到的待遇時，可用類似的句子： Idprefernottosetasalary,butsinceyouask,Iconsider6,500amonthtobesatisfactory. Itshardformetosaywhatmysalaryshouldbesetat,butifpressedIwouldhavetoaskforamonthasaninitialsalary. IdontfeelthatIshouldsetmyownsalary,asIamhappyenoughtohavetheprivilegeofworkingforyou.However,Iwouldconsideramonthsatisfactorypensationformyapprenticeship. 三、提起或要求待遇時不要過分謙虛或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用： Asforsalary,Idonotknowwhattosay.Would$4,500amonthbetoomuch? DoyouthinkIwouldbeaskingtoomuchifIsaid5,000dollarsamonth? YouknowwhatmyservicesareworthbetterthanIdo.AllIwantisalivingwage. 四、關(guān)于求職信的結(jié)尾用語，下面也有三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經(jīng)過修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當(dāng)。 A:(1)軟弱、羞怯的：IfyouthinkIcanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,Ishallbegladtotalkwithyou. (2)改寫后（較佳）：Ifmyqualificationsmeetyourstandards,Iwouldbehappytospeakwithyouinperson. B:(1)懷疑，不妥、不安全的：Ifyouareinterested,pleaseletmeknowimmediately,asImsureaninterviewwillconvinceyouImthemanforthejob. (2)改寫后：Iwouldliketorequestaninterview.YoucanreachmebytelephoneatBeijing123456betweenthehoursof7-9a.m.and5:30-9:30p.m.anyevening. C:(1)哀求式的句子，不夠完整（漏掉面談時間）：Iwouldappreciatetheopportunityforaninterview.IcanbereachedbycallingBeijing12345678. (2)改寫后：MayIhavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterfurther