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1、By Yue Aifang from No.3 Middle School,English writing skills,Lets play a game,Find the missing word,maths,Chinese,chemistry,physics,English,maths,Chinese,chemistry,physics,English,reading,speaking,practicing,listening,writing,speaking,practicing,listening,reading,writing,kill,skill,hill,bill,fill,ki

2、ll,hill,bill,fill,skill,skills,writing,English,英語寫作技巧,What do I usually do on weekends? I usually,DISCUSSION: What words or phrases can you think of when you see the word “ Internet”,download,search for,latest news,fast,convenient,watch,games,E-mail,send,information,Steps towards writing a good para

3、graph,Step 1 Make sentences using the words or phrases,1.With the Internet，we can get the latest news,2. The Internet is fast and convenient,3. We can find and download information that we need,5. We can play games on it,4. We can send some emails to our friends,Sentences we possibly write,1.With th

4、e Internet，we can get the latest news,2. The Internet is fast and convenient,3. We can find and download information that we need,5. We can play games on it. 6,4. We can send some emails to our friends,Step3.Write these sentences into a paragraph,With the Internet，we can get the latest news. The Int

5、ernet is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it,A short paragragh,Step 3 How to change sentences into a well- organized paragraph,The structure of a composition,Topic sentence,Supporting details,Reason 1,Reason 2

6、,Reason 3,Conclusion,Find the topic sentence in the paragraph,I listen to music while driving to work. I listen to music when Im thinking. I listen to music when Im happy. Even when Im sad, I listen to music, too. I cant live without music. Music plays an important part in my life,Music plays an imp

7、ortant part in my life,Write a topic sentence for the report,A big problem 90% of the citys rivers are polluted. The air in the city is getting dirtier. Noise is becoming a big headache for people,Pollution is becoming a serious problem in the city,With the Internet，we can get the latest news. The I

8、nternet is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it,A short paragragh,Write a topic sentence for the paragraph,With the Internet，we can get the latest news. The Internet is fast and convenient. We can find and down

9、load information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it,The Internet plays an important part in our life./ The Internet is very useful in our life,Conclusion: We cant live without the Internet,How to write a good paragraph,Nowadays the Internet plays an important part i

10、n our life,With the Internet，we can get the latest news. It is fast and convenient. We can find and download information that we need. We can send emails to friends. We can play games on it,We cant live better without the Internet,Connect the sentences with link words to introduce supporting points,

11、First(Firstly), Second(Secondly), Third(Thirdly,First of all, Also(In addition), Finally, However,Add link words to the following paragraph,1. Of all the ways of traveling, I like traveling by train best. _, I neednt worry about traffic crowd. _, the trains are fast and comfortable. You can use the

12、time in different ways. You can just sit and read something, or you can enjoy the scenery out of the window. _, you can have a meal in the dining car or go to sleep in the sleeping car,First,Second,Third,Fill in the blanks with link words,2.School uniform rule has its advantages. _, we dont have to

13、spend time thinking about what to wear every day. _ , we dont need to worry about comparing with others. _, it has some disadvantages. Our personality cant be shown if we wear the same clothes every day_, sometimes the uniform style is old-fashioned,First of all,Also/In addition,However,Whats more,C

14、onclusion words,In my opinion, In a word, In short, Generally speaking,Add link words or phrases to make the supporting details better-organized,Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. It is _ fast _ convenient _. We can do many things with the Internet. _, we can get the latest n

15、ews. _, We can find and download information that we need. _ ,we can send emails to friends. We can even play games on it. _, we cant live without the Internet. (70words,not only,but also,as well,First of all,Secondly,Whats more,In a word,Body,Conclusion/Opinion,Topic sentence Supporting details Rig

16、ht Link wordsand sentence patterns,A good composition of “giving opinion,title,Summary,2012年中考作文,假定今天是六月十六日（星期六，天氣晴朗），你和朋友去沙湖游玩，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給內(nèi)容提示寫一篇日記，記錄本次活動(dòng)并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)劯惺堋?1.內(nèi)容提示 到達(dá)：上午九點(diǎn) 活動(dòng):乘船觀鳥島，騎馬，踢球，游泳，吃午飯，唱歌，做游戲 返回：下午三點(diǎn)半 寫作要求: (1)詞數(shù)80字左右，已給出的句子不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名校名； (3)緊扣要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 Saturday, June 16 Sunny

17、Today my friends and I went to the sand Lake,參考范文,Saturday, June 16 Sunny Today my friends and I went to the Sand Lake. _ we arrived at nine, we _ took a boat to visit the Birds Island. We saw lots of beautiful birds there. _ we came to the other side of the lake. We rode horses and played football

18、for an hour. _, we went swimming in the lake. It was cool and comfortable. At about 12 oclock, we had a simple lunch by the lake. _ lunch was over, we sang and played games. We started to go back at half past three. We had a wonderful time,When,first,Then,After that,When,寫作注意的幾個(gè)問題,1. 盡量使用簡(jiǎn)單句，要牢記 “避繁就簡(jiǎn)”原則，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。 2. 把握要點(diǎn)，避免遺漏，注意發(fā)揮適度既不要多寫也不要少寫。 3. 注意句子與句子、段與段之間過渡自然，行文連貫，適當(dāng)使用連詞，如：and , so , or, but, Whats more; Whats worse, not onlybut also, neithernor 等。 4. 字體一定要工整漂亮,今年是銀川市創(chuàng)建文明城市最關(guān)鍵的一年，