2016年中考英語書面表達(dá)專題《寫人類記敘文》【最新精選】

1、2015年中考英語書面表達(dá)專題寫人類記敘文【寫法指導(dǎo)】【題型設(shè)置與意圖】 寫人的記敘文，是以人物為主要敘述對(duì)象，通過對(duì)人物年齡、身份、籍貫、外貌、性格、興趣愛好、特長(zhǎng)等方面的描述來達(dá)到對(duì)所描述的對(duì)象進(jìn)行初步了解的目的。根據(jù)不同的目的，記人方式可以分為直接記人和間接記人。直接記人主要是對(duì)人物進(jìn)行肖像描寫和性格描寫，準(zhǔn)確而生動(dòng)地勾畫出人物的相貌特征和性格特點(diǎn)。間接記人是指通過描述事件、行為、對(duì)話或他人敘述等方式描寫人物，有時(shí)也叫做側(cè)面描寫。由于初中生英語單詞量和寫作水平的限制，中考試題中，主要以直接記人的寫作為主，難度較小。題型旨在考查學(xué)生對(duì)人物描寫的陳述句型的掌握和運(yùn)用，同時(shí)考查學(xué)生對(duì)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

2、態(tài)，特別是主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時(shí)主謂一致的正確表達(dá)?！緦懽鹘嵌扰c注意事項(xiàng)】 寫作時(shí)要從直接寫人的角度入筆，側(cè)重對(duì)人物情況的介紹。最好以開門見山的方式直接入題，不可拖泥帶水，無病呻吟。內(nèi)容要涵蓋提示詞中的所有要點(diǎn)，不可缺漏，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不可太多或不著邊際。另外，這類題目中對(duì)外貌、興趣愛好、特長(zhǎng)等方面的提示通常會(huì)有多個(gè)要點(diǎn)，在寫作時(shí)要注意不要多個(gè)要點(diǎn)的表述都用相同的句式，使得文章呆板，要注意句式的變化。如描寫外貌時(shí)可以將heshe is，heshe has，heshe is of，hisheris等句型交替使用。在對(duì)興趣愛好、特長(zhǎng)等進(jìn)行描述時(shí)，可用heshe likes，heshe is inte

3、rested in，heshe shows great interest in，hisher favoriteis，heshe is good at，heshe does well in，heshe doeswell等不同句型進(jìn)行表達(dá)。根據(jù)題目的要求選擇第一人稱或第三人稱進(jìn)行寫作。(自我介紹類的題目用第一人稱，介紹他人的題目用第三人稱) 寫 作 演 示【真題再現(xiàn)】(2014黃岡)假設(shè)你叫王偉，你想加人英語沙龍俱樂部，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)?jiān)诰銟凡砍蓡T面前作一下自我介紹，詞數(shù)80左右。 【寫作思路】 1中心人稱：第一人稱 2主體時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)3要點(diǎn)梳理：姓名、班級(jí)、性格、興趣和愛好、特長(zhǎng)與成績(jī)(側(cè)重于英語相

4、關(guān)方面)；參加英語俱樂部的原因【語句構(gòu)建】引出人物i will introduce myself to you介紹人物i am(tall，strong，slim，smart)；my favorite colorsport is；i like典型事跡i often；one day，i希望與祝愿i hope that【寫作模板】問候，打招呼：hello，everyone! how is everything going?自我介紹：my name is ma huaim tom外貌及性格：i have a round facetwo big eyeslong hairi am outgoingshy

5、興趣愛好、特長(zhǎng)：i like sports and i am good at playing basketball經(jīng)歷：i traveled to england last yeari had a very good time there and learnt a lot愿望：i hope that i can make friends with you and i believe we can get on well with each other【范文展示】hello，everyone! how is everything going? id like to introduce mysel

6、f to youmy name is wang weiim in class 5，grade 3im very brave，outgoing and easy-goingi like traveling a lotmy favorite sport is basketball and i am very good at iti enjoy reading english novels as wellin 2011，i won the first prize in the school englishcompetitioni went to england to study last yeari

7、 think my spoken english is goodand id like to be with you in the english clubwe can learn from each otheri really want to make friends with you!【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇自我介紹的短文。范文審題明確，重點(diǎn)突出，由于是在俱樂部成員面前作自我介紹，所以沒有過多的外貌描寫，而側(cè)重于性格、興趣愛好、特長(zhǎng)等內(nèi)在特征的介紹。語言簡(jiǎn)練，思路清晰，句式靈活多樣，布局合理。【真題再現(xiàn)】(2013聊城)在父親節(jié)(6月16日)來臨之際，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫一篇以“my f

8、ather”為題的英語作文，介紹其大體情況，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)“父親的評(píng)價(jià)。要求：1詞數(shù)：80左右。 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。 my father 【寫作思路】 1中心人稱：第三人稱 2主體時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài) 3要點(diǎn)梳理：年齡、外貌、職業(yè)、性格、愛好 【語句構(gòu)建】引出人物do you knowid like to introduce介紹人物he is(tall，strong，slim，smart)；his favorite colorsport is；he likes典型事跡he often；one day，希望與祝愿i hope that【寫作模板】引出人物：i would like to

9、introduce my father to you我和爸爸的關(guān)系：i love my father and he loves me，toowe are like good friends【范文展示】 my fathermy father is a 40-year-old math teacherhe is tall and fat with short hair and big eyeshe always works hardhis classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved by his studentsmy father is

10、an honest and kind manhe often helps other children and me with our mathmy fathers hobby is playing ping-pongwe often play ping-pong together on weekendsmy father is not only a good father but also a good friendi have learnt a lot from himi love my father very much【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】這是一篇介紹他人的短文。范文融合了提示中的要點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用了較多

11、的新穎句式，既保證了對(duì)父親年齡、外貌、性格、職業(yè)及愛好的介紹，又避免了短文的枯燥、呆板，同時(shí)還打破了提示要點(diǎn)的原有順序，體現(xiàn)了作者較高的語言功底。【實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練】 (一) 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇70詞左右的短文。 施光南是一位偉大的作曲家，1940年出生于重慶，1964年畢業(yè)于天津音樂學(xué)院。在20多年的音樂生涯中，他創(chuàng)作了100多部作品，如在希望的田野上，周總理，你在哪里等。無論青年人還是老年人都喜歡他的歌曲，他被稱為“時(shí)代歌手”和“人民音樂家”。不幸的是，施光南先生于1990年5月2日因病逝世。 參考詞匯：conservatory of music音樂學(xué)院；compose譜曲；in hope fi

12、eld在希望的田野上；premier zhou，where were you周總理，你在哪里 the composer，shi guangnan (二) 假如你是高一新生李華，在開學(xué)第一堂英語課上，用英語向大家作自我介紹。要求：1詞數(shù)：80左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)合個(gè)人情況適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。hello，everyone!my name is li huaim very glad to introduce myself to you thats allthank you! (三) 假如你是李強(qiáng)，你的美國(guó)筆友shirley正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語。她在給你的來信中介紹了她漢語老師的情況

13、。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息用英語寫一封回信，向她介紹你的英語老師miss li。 要求：1詞數(shù)：80左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名； 3根據(jù)所給信息作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要求條理清楚，語意連貫，字跡工整。dear shirley， thank you for telling me about your chinese teacheri think he has a good sense of humor best wishes!li qiang (四) 假如劉麗是你的好朋友，長(zhǎng)得很漂亮，學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，興趣廣泛(讀書、彈鋼琴等)，為了讓別人更好地了解你的朋友，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給信息

14、介紹你的朋友。詞數(shù)：80100。my friend liu li （五） 父母的鼓勵(lì)有利于孩子健康成長(zhǎng)。鼓勵(lì)可以是贊許的話語，也可以是一份禮物。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格描述李江的父母曾經(jīng)對(duì)他鼓勵(lì)的方式。對(duì)此做出你的評(píng)價(jià)并表達(dá)你希望你的父母如何鼓勵(lì)你。人物成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)滴鼓勵(lì)的方式李江學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步買禮物，如:文具（stationery）、手機(jī)（mobile phone）等競(jìng)賽獲獎(jiǎng)去飯店慶祝分擔(dān)家務(wù)多給零花錢你的評(píng)價(jià)與希望：要求: 1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.評(píng)價(jià)李江父母的做法；表達(dá)你希望你的父母如何鼓勵(lì)你。3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。4.語氣通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚

15、，字跡工整。5.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。parents encouragement is good for their childrens growth. its a nice way for parents to speak highly of their children when they make progress. （六）假設(shè)你是一名中學(xué)生，名叫田梅。你從南京青奧會(huì)英文網(wǎng)站上獲悉他們正在招收志愿者，你想給組委會(huì)寫一封英文自薦信。內(nèi)容提示見下表：基本信息 新城中學(xué)九年級(jí)學(xué)生，16歲個(gè)人品質(zhì)精力充沛，隨和，有耐心主要特長(zhǎng)英語說得好，擅長(zhǎng)與他人合作相關(guān)經(jīng)歷今年4月，成為“201

16、4無錫國(guó)際馬拉松賽”志愿者，注意事項(xiàng)：1.自薦信須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2.“相關(guān)經(jīng)歷”一欄中省略部分須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右，信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)；4.信件內(nèi)容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。參考詞匯：新城中學(xué)（new town middle school）志愿者工作（voluntary work）2014無錫國(guó)際馬拉松賽（the 2014 wuxi international marathon）（七）以下是nick vujicic的基本信息，請(qǐng)根據(jù)這些信息和要求，寫一篇英語短文，向某英語報(bào)社投稿。項(xiàng)目 信息及要求生日19

17、82年12月4日出生地 澳大利亞主要事跡 1.一生下來就沒有雙臂和雙腿，但他學(xué)會(huì)了游泳、穿衣服、使用電腦等。 2. 21歲大學(xué)畢業(yè)后周游世界做演講，與年輕人談人生和夢(mèng)想，至今有三百多萬人聽過他的演講。3.到過中國(guó)5次，2008年來成都幫助地震中的幸存者( survivors)。你從他的故事中學(xué)到了什么？ 寫一點(diǎn)即可。注意：1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面提示的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；2. 詞數(shù)：100個(gè)詞左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、姓名等其它信息，否則，不予評(píng)分。 nick vujicic is a worl

18、d - famous speaker . his experience inspires a lot of people in the world . _（八）請(qǐng)你以great people in history為題，用英文寫一篇短文，介紹美國(guó)總統(tǒng)奧巴馬。要點(diǎn)提示：1、奧巴馬于1961年8月4日出生，在大學(xué)時(shí)是優(yōu)等生；2、他的嗓音是如此振奮人心，被認(rèn)為是個(gè)天生的演說家；3、他曾經(jīng)害怕當(dāng)眾演講，但沒有放棄，而是不斷改進(jìn)演講技巧，終獲成功；4、2008年，47歲的奧巴馬成功當(dāng)選為首位非洲裔美國(guó)總統(tǒng)；5、他經(jīng)常鼓勵(lì)黑人學(xué)子（black students）.6、我相信他將.注意事項(xiàng):1、短文須包括所給

19、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫； 2、第5和第6要點(diǎn)須各用1-2句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3、詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。great people in historydear classmates, im glad to introduce to you a great person in history-barack hussein obama._（九）假設(shè)你是周杰倫的粉絲，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給信息寫一篇有關(guān)他的短文。內(nèi)容提示如下：1. 我最喜歡的明星是周杰倫（jay chou）, 他三十幾歲了，結(jié)婚四個(gè)月了；2. 15歲試圖寫歌曲，夢(mèng)想成為一名成功的歌星；3.

20、他認(rèn)為古典音樂具有永恒價(jià)值，也擅長(zhǎng)西方樂器，且聽說即將加盟“中國(guó)好聲音”；4. 成就不局限于音樂界，他還在電影頭文字d(initial d)中擔(dān)任主角。5. 我相信注意：短文必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；1. 第5點(diǎn)必須用二至三句話展開合理想象；2. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右。（十） 在一節(jié)寫作課上，老師要求你們寫一篇名為“心目中的同學(xué)”的短文，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你用英文來介紹一下你的同學(xué)mike。1. mike學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，喜歡思考，能想出許多有創(chuàng)意的點(diǎn)子； 2. 他小時(shí)候讀了許多有關(guān)科學(xué)家的書籍，愛迪生的故事對(duì)他影響最大；3. 他對(duì)搞小發(fā)明很著迷，迄今為止，他已幾次因其發(fā)明獲獎(jiǎng)；4. 現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)忙碌，但他

21、從未放棄愛好，他說這真是其樂無窮；5. 他的夢(mèng)想我認(rèn)為注意事項(xiàng)：1. 短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2. 第5要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容必須用2至3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右，短文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯：有創(chuàng)意的 creative 愛迪生 edison my classmate mike is _（十一）請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，用英文寫一篇短文，介紹你的偶像劉翔。1. 平易近人，被公認(rèn)是最受歡迎的中國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng)員之一；2. 從小對(duì)體育感興趣；3. 訓(xùn)練刻苦，2004年榮獲雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)男子110米欄金牌，標(biāo)志他成功事業(yè)的開端；4. 贏得中國(guó)乃至全世界的高度贊揚(yáng)； 5.

22、 盡管他不再是運(yùn)動(dòng)員，但我覺得注意：1.短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；2.第5點(diǎn)省略部分請(qǐng)作2-3句合理的想象發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：事業(yè) career；雅典athens；男子110米欄mens 110-meter hurdles；運(yùn)動(dòng)員athleteliu xiang is my hero. he was born in shanghai on july 13 ,1983. 【參考答案】 (一) the composer，shi guangnan have you heard of shi guangnan? he is one

23、of chinas greatest composers he was born in chongqing 1940 and graduated from tianjin conservatory of music in 1964he composed more than 100 works during over 20 years，such as the songs in hope field，premier zhou，where were you and so onnot only the young but also the old like his songshe is called“

24、the era singer”and“the peoples musicianunfortunately，he died of a terrible illness on may 2nd，1990 i believe all chinese people will love and miss him forever (二) hello，everyone! my name is li huaim very glad to introduce myself to you i was born in march，1998im outgoingi like to make friends with o

25、thersand i get on well with my classmatesi 1ike doing sportsrunning is my favorite sport，so i do best in runningi always remember that i was once a star of a running classmy dream is to become a teacheri think，on the one hand，being a teacher can achieve my teaching ideals；on the other hand，i can als

26、o play with kids，so i will be happy thats allthank you! (三)dear shirley，thank you for telling me about your chinese teacheri think he has a good sense of humornow id like to introduce my english teacher，miss lishe is a nice teacher and has taught us for three yearsshe is tall and slim，and she is als

27、o smartblue is her favorite color and she often wears blue clothesshe likes reading and she often travels in her spare timeshe is kind and helpfulas a teacher，she is very patientshe spends lots of time explaining difficult things to us. she teaches so well that she won the first prize in the teachin

28、g competition this yeara1l of us like heri hope that i can be a teacher like herbest wishes!li qiang (四) my friend liu li one of my friends is a beautiful and clever girlher name is liu li she has rosy cheeks and two bright eyes，which shine below her curved eyebrowsin her small mouth there are two l

29、ines of white teethher hair is straight and long，hanging down to her shouldershe is healthy and attractive she is very diligent in her 1essonsshe always gets straight a marks in the examinationsher teachers like her very muchshe can also play the piano and sing sweet songsat every new years party，sh

30、e is always asked to perform programs for her classmates who love her very muchshe likes reading books，playing games，eating delicious food and sleepingshe is a good girltoday，a little boy tripped over a stoneshe went to help the boy from now on，i will be a good student，developing in all ways like he

31、r（五）one possible version:parents encouragement is good for their childrens growth. its a nice way for parents to speak highly of their children when they make progress. it is very common for parents to buy their children presents. for example, when li jiang made progress in his study, his parents bo

32、ught him stationery, a mobile phone and so on. after li jiang won prizes in the competitions, his parents took him to the restaurant for a big dinner. when li jiang did some housework, he could get some extra pocket money from his parents.i dont think its really a good way for li jiangs parents to g

33、ive him something or money as encouragement. i dont want my parents to buy me something when ive done very well in my study. i hope they can give me more chances to decide what i can do in my free time. if so, i will be more confident to do everything better. and its good for my growth.（六）dear sir/m

34、adam:i have visited your english website and have learned that volunteers are wanted. my name is tian mei a grade nine student from new middle school .i an sixteen years old.i am energetic,outgoing and patient.i speak english well and good at working with others.in april this year,i became a volunte

35、er for the 2014 wuxi international marathon i worked hard and did well.youth olympic games .i look forward to hearing from you.（七） nick vujicic is a world - famous speaker . his experience inspires a lot of people in the world . he was born on december 4th ,1982 in australia. unluckily ,he was born

36、without arms or legs ,but he learnt to swim ,get dressed ,used a computer and so on. at 21 ,nick graduated from university . then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams . he has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people so far . he has ever visited china five

37、 times . in 2008 ,he visited chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake. from his story , i have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life .（八）great people in history dear classmates, im glad to introduce to you a great person in history-barack hussein obama. obama

38、was born on august 4, 1961. he was a top student at university. his voice is so exciting that he is considered to be a born speaker. however, he was once afraid to speak in front of many people. he kept improving his speaking skills instead of giving up. finally he succeeded. in 2008, he successfull

39、y became the first african american president at the age of 47. he often encourages black students to study hard and never to give up. i believe he will lead america to a brighter future.（九）my favourite star is jay zhou. hes in his thirties. he has been married for 4 months. he tried to write songs

40、at the age of fifteen. he dreamed of becoming a successful singing star. he thinks classical music has a lasting value. hes also good at western musical instruments. he will take part in the tv programme vocie of china. his achievements went beyond the music industry. he also played the lead role in

41、 the film initial d. i believe he will be a world-famous star one day. and i should learn from him.（十）my classmate michael is hard-working. he likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas. in his childhood, he read many books about scientists. the story of edison influenced him most. he is cra

42、zy about inventing things. so far, he has won several awards for inventions. now he is busy with his study, but he has never given up his hobby. he says its great fun for him. his dream is to be an inventor as great as edison. i think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some

43、day.（十一）liu xiang is my hero. he was born in shanghai on july 13, 1983. hes easy to get along /on with. he is considered as/ to be one of the most popular athletes in china. he has been interested in sports since he was young. he practised very hard. in 2004, he won the mens 110-metre hurdles at the

44、 athens olympic games. it marked the beginning of his successful career. he won high praise not only from china but also from all over the world. although he isnt an athlete any more, i think he is the pride of our country, and he is the person i admire most.72以下是附加文檔，不需要的朋友下載后刪除，謝謝教育實(shí)習(xí)總結(jié)專題15篇第一篇:教育實(shí)習(xí)總結(jié)一、實(shí)習(xí)學(xué)校中學(xué)創(chuàng)辦于清光緒33年（年），校址幾經(jīng)變