中考英語寫作示范課人物篇完整版

1、 Brainstorming: years oldHe/She is His / Her name/He/She is He/She was born in+地方；地方；on月日，年月日，年 tall/short/thin long hair/big eyes read /basketball He/She is + adj(形容詞) He/ She has + 名詞短語 He/ She is adj with 名詞短語 shy/outgoing/ kind He/She is He/She is (not) good at He/ She does well in English/ math

2、s Jim/Kate He/She likes v-ing/ n. His/ Her hobby is What activities do your friends and you do together? have dinner together enjoy food play basketball together do sports together The things that your friend did make you feel thankful help sb with homework study together be hurt / ill take sb to th

3、e hospital 寫人寫人 文章可通過介紹人物的年齡、外文章可通過介紹人物的年齡、外 貌、職業(yè)、愛好、貌、職業(yè)、愛好、 學(xué)習(xí)工作等學(xué)習(xí)工作等 方面來展現(xiàn)人物鮮明的個性。方面來展現(xiàn)人物鮮明的個性。 (敘述的原則是敘述的原則是從外到內(nèi)從外到內(nèi)） 改 連擴(kuò) 列 審 書面 表達(dá) 書面表達(dá)5步法 一、審題注意一、審題注意“四定四定” 1.定內(nèi)容：定內(nèi)容：根據(jù)要點(diǎn)定內(nèi)容。根據(jù)要點(diǎn)定內(nèi)容。 2.定句型、定詞語：定句型、定詞語：應(yīng)依據(jù)內(nèi)容。應(yīng)該應(yīng)依據(jù)內(nèi)容。應(yīng)該 先定詞語后定句型。先定詞語后定句型。 3. 定時態(tài)定時態(tài):記敘文、日記一般用一般過去記敘文、日記一般用一般過去 時；說明文、通知、布告、介紹等用時

4、；說明文、通知、布告、介紹等用 一般現(xiàn)在時；計劃等用一般將來時。一般現(xiàn)在時；計劃等用一般將來時。 4.定人稱：定人稱：用第一人稱親近自然；用第用第一人稱親近自然；用第 三人稱客觀真實(shí)。三人稱客觀真實(shí)。 書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，在這三年中， 你一定和你的同學(xué)結(jié)下了深厚的友誼。 請根據(jù)提示要求，寫一篇短文，講述你們之前的交往。 80詞左右。 提示：建議內(nèi)容如下： （1）who your best friend is （2）what makes you get on well with her/him （3）One unforgettable thing happe

5、ned to both of you 寫作要求： （1）短文須包括所給的提示內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象 （2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名、班級和地名 （3）語句通順、意思連貫、書寫工整，詞數(shù)80詞 左右。 二、列提綱二、列提綱 根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列提綱，列提綱根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列提綱，列提綱 時候應(yīng)以時候應(yīng)以動賓短語動賓短語或者或者系系 表短語表短語的形式羅列。的形式羅列。 Beginning: Ending: Main body Outline Name： Character： Activities： One unforgettable thing： leave school ; make friends be hap

6、py/ thankful/lucky such a best friend Tony / Jim be kind / outgoing have dinner, do sports, study together be hurt / ill take sb to the hospital What activities do your friends and you do together? have dinner together/ enjoy food Play basketball together/ do sports together The unforgettable things

7、 that make you feel thankful help sb with homework study together be hurt / ill take sb to the hospital 三、擴(kuò)展成句 將提綱里的動賓短語或 系表短語擴(kuò)展成完整的 句子。 Beginning: Ending: Main body: Name： Character： Activities： One unforgettable thing： leave school. I am sohappy/ thankful/lucky that I have such a best friend Tony.

8、 kind and outgoing. make friends I am going to I have made lots of friends. My best friend is He is 擴(kuò)展成句擴(kuò)展成句 have dinner, do sports and study together. hurt / ill at sports meeting. be happy/ thankful/lucky such a best friend We often I was Tony hurried to take me to the hospital. 四、連句成文 補(bǔ)充適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞和過 渡

9、句，使之時間 、空 間、 細(xì)節(jié)有邏輯、連 貫呼應(yīng)。 Beginning: Ending: Main body: Name： Character： Activities： One unforgettable thing： leave school I feel/am happy/ lucky that I have such a best friend Tony. kind and outgoing. I am going to I have made lots of friends. My best friend is He is 連句成文連句成文 We often have dinner,

10、do sports and study together. I was hurt / ill at sports meeting. Tony hurried to take me to the hospital. soon. During three years, One day, I was deeply moved /thankful. 五、查錯改錯 主要檢查：(1) 人稱是否用錯，并注意人稱 代詞的主格和賓格形式是否有錯； (2) 動詞的時態(tài)形式是否準(zhǔn)確無誤，特別注 意查看一般現(xiàn)在時主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時 謂語動詞是否加了(e)s； (3) 名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式； (4) 單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和大

11、小寫是否錯； (5) 格式是否有錯。 要盡量剔除錯誤，最后抄正文章 I will leave my school soon. During these three years， I made some friends. Jelly is one of my best friend . She is very kind and easygoing. I learn a lot from her. We often do sports or study together. One day， I want to copy her maths homework because I wasnt good

12、 in maths. But she refused me. I was angry with she. The next evening, she came to my home and said she would like to help me with my maths. I was deep moved. From then on, I do better in maths with her help. I am so thankful . 請改正文中的六個錯誤：請改正文中的六個錯誤： have made friends her deeply at wanted A:了解一些新聞人物，如劉翔、姚明等了解一些新聞人物，如劉翔、姚明等 B:積累生活中讓人難忘、激動的事件積累生活中讓人難忘、激動的事件 C:關(guān)注社會熱點(diǎn)，了解時事新聞關(guān)注社會熱點(diǎn)，了解時事新聞 D: 體會范文佳作中有效素材及出彩語句體會范文佳作中有效素材及出彩語句 E: 利用好手頭有效的教輔材料，英文報，利用