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1、武漢教育資源網(wǎng) 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全江西省中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時間長、壓力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约?。某英文報“學(xué)生習(xí)作”專欄正在就“學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞健边@一話題進(jìn)行征文。假設(shè)你是二十二中初三(3)班的班長，最近你對班上同學(xué)課后放松方式進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請根據(jù)表格提供的調(diào)查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報投稿。 對 象 二十二中初三（3）班 人 數(shù) 60人（男：31人；女：29人） 常用放松方式 1.看電視（30人） 2.玩電腦游戲（12人） 3.聽音樂（8人） 4.進(jìn)行體育鍛煉（5人） 5.沒有時間放松（5人） 你的觀點(diǎn) 哪一種（些）放松方式是適當(dāng)?shù)模?為什么？ 注意：1.短文

2、包括對調(diào)查相關(guān)信息的介紹和你自己的觀點(diǎn)；2.詞數(shù)：80-100。題目和開頭已為你寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)。The Proper Way(s) for Students to RelaxI am the monitor of Class3,Grade 3,No.22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. _滿分文(一)The Proper Way(s) for students to RelaxI am the monitor of C

3、lass 3, Grade 3, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play comput

4、er games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is n

5、ot a proper way to help us relax. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play pingpang. 點(diǎn)評：第一段和第二段是敘述表格中的信息，第三段是表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。在敘述信息時，作者使用了簡潔地語言把意思準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)出來；在抒發(fā)自己的觀點(diǎn)時候，作者詳細(xì)地闡明了自己的觀點(diǎn)。詳略得當(dāng)，銜接自然，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，不愧為一篇佳作。 積

6、累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1. recently最近 2. suffer 受痛苦 3. pressure 壓力 4. proper 正確 5. improve 提高 好句 1. As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax.因?yàn)槲覀円獙W(xué)習(xí)很長時間，承受著很大的壓力，所以每個學(xué)生都應(yīng)選擇正確的方法來放松。 2. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it

7、can rest our brains and eyes. 我認(rèn)為做運(yùn)動是合適的方法因?yàn)樗苁刮覀兊拇竽X和眼睛得到2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全樂山市最近，教育部啟動了陽光體育運(yùn)動，建議全國中小學(xué)生每天鍛煉一小時，讓他們健康、快樂。此項(xiàng)活動受到廣大學(xué)生的歡迎。李華對所在學(xué)校學(xué)生參加活動的情況和反映做了一 個調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)下面調(diào)查表的內(nèi)容，幫他給校報寫一篇報道。報道的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。詞數(shù)， 80詞左右. Interviewees(調(diào)查對象)ActivitiesFeelingsReasonsmost students play sports interestedhave lots of fu

8、n many studentsskip rope(跳繩)happykeep healthy some studentstake a walk relaxedenjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom a few studentsworriedhave no enough room(空間)on the playgound;have no enough time to finish homework The “Sunshine Sports program is warmly welcomed in our school ,Nearly

9、all the students have taken part in it.No matter what students think about the program， all the students like the idea which is to make students happy and keep them fit at the same time.滿分文(一)The Sunshine Sports program is warmly welcomed in our school. Nearly all the students have taken part in it.

10、 Most students are interested in playing sports. They think they have lots of fun. Many students are happy with skipping rope. They believe it really keeps them healthy. A few students are relaxed while taking a walk. They find it good to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom. However，

11、 a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.No matter what students think about the program，all the students like the idea which is to make them happy and keep them fit at the same time.點(diǎn)評：本文最大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于，作者在傳

12、達(dá)不同的學(xué)生為什么選擇不同的運(yùn)動的時，所使用的表達(dá)方式，比如They think，They believe，They find it good等，避免了重復(fù)，展現(xiàn)了語言的多樣化。 這并不是每個同學(xué)都能做到的，很多同學(xué)在表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時很容易犯重復(fù)的毛病，通通使用I think，這樣使文章看起來很乏味，因此，本文作者豐富的表達(dá)方式有很大的借鑒意義。積累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1. warmly 熱烈地 2. believe 相信 3. fresh 新鮮的 4. fit 健康的 好句 1. They find it good to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in

13、 the classroom.他們發(fā)現(xiàn)比起呆在教室里，呼吸新鮮更有樂趣。 2. However， a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.然而，一些學(xué)生仍然很擔(dān)心操場上沒有足夠的任他們施展的空間，因?yàn)樗麄儞?dān)心他們可能完不成作業(yè)。 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全沈陽市假如你是China Daily 中學(xué)生版的記者，請根據(jù)下面材料寫篇報道。背景：這所學(xué)校建于

14、三年前，當(dāng)時有數(shù)百名兒童因貧困而失學(xué)，后來人們?yōu)椤跋Ｍこ?(Hope Project)”捐款200余萬元，當(dāng)?shù)卣眠@筆款項(xiàng)興建了這所學(xué)?！，F(xiàn)狀：教師60人，學(xué)生900人，教學(xué)樓內(nèi)有18個教室，另有1，200平方米的操場，微機(jī)室，語音室，圖書館各一個。這所學(xué)校已遠(yuǎn)近聞名，學(xué)生們都很努力，因?yàn)槭窍Ｍこ探o了他們學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會。滿分文(一)The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldnt go to school because they were very poor. Later the l

15、ocal government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front

16、 of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.點(diǎn)評：同樣，這是另外一篇根據(jù)提示信息完成的文章，作者使用了非常準(zhǔn)確

17、地語言把提示信息簡潔明了地表達(dá)出來。本文表達(dá)通順流暢，基本無語法錯誤，作者能夠準(zhǔn)確地翻譯提示信息中的一些專有詞匯，如computer room, sound lab, 可見作者平時還是有一定的積累量。積累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1. government 政府 2. offer 提供 3. pupil 小學(xué)生 4. bright 明亮的 5. meter 米 好句 1. Thus the school came into being. 因此學(xué)校就成立了。 2. The students there study very hard because they all know that it is

18、“Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.那里的學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)都很刻苦，因?yàn)樗麄冎朗窍Ｍこ探o了他們上學(xué)的機(jī)會。 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全蘇州市假設(shè)某英語雜志“奧運(yùn)來了”欄目正在舉辦征文比賽。請你根據(jù)下面的“奧運(yùn)會徽”和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語以“中國印-舞動的北京”為題寫一篇短文，參加比賽。內(nèi)容：會徽設(shè)計成中國印，名為“中國印-舞動的北京”；印中的“京”字代表北京，像個舞者，向世界展開雙臂；印是紅色的，下面寫有“北京2008”，紅色代表好運(yùn)；“舞動的北京”使你想到.(考生自擬，至少一點(diǎn))。注意：詞數(shù)90字左右。短

19、文的標(biāo)題和開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Chinese Seal-Dancing BeijingThe Olympic emblem(奧運(yùn)會徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.滿分文(一)Chinese Seal-Dancing BeijingThe Olympic emblem(奧運(yùn)會徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown

20、 to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.The emblem, named “Chinese Beijing”, was designed as a Chinese seal with the words “Beijing 2008”written below. The Chinese word “Jing” meaning Beijing appears on the seal. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world. The seal is red, an imp

21、ortant colour for the Chinese people, and red also represents good luck.I think“Dancing Beijing”will attract more and more people from the world to Beijing and Beijing will open its arms to people from all over the world in 2008.點(diǎn)評：作者準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)了提示內(nèi)容所要表達(dá)的意思，雖然看起來有點(diǎn)像翻譯，但是即便是翻譯，也是很到位的，這不是每個初中生都能完成的。在語言方面，作者

22、顯得非常地嫻熟老練，比如be designed to, appear, represent等難詞的運(yùn)用體現(xiàn)作者厚實(shí)的積累，此外，作者還非常自然地使用了狀語，同謂語，后置修飾語等手法使一句話傳達(dá)了很豐富的意思。積累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1. design設(shè)計2. lively 活潑的 3. important 重要的 4. represent 代表 5. attract 吸引 好句 1. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world. 它看起來象一個活潑的舞者，向世界張開它的雙臂。 2 .The seal is red,

23、 an important colour for the Chinese people, and red also represents good luck. 中國印是紅色的，對中國人來說，這是非常重要的顏色，紅色也代表著好運(yùn)。 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全湖南懷化市初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。假設(shè)你是張華，身在中考考場，回想自己在父母和師長的關(guān)愛和幫助下的成長過程，心中充滿感戴之情。請根據(jù)表中所列信息，用英語給父母或老師寫一封70詞左右的短信，表示謝意。 感謝 對象 FatherMotherMiss Gao參考 用語 take care of, love, help, encourag

24、e, cheer upthankful, work hard, try to do better注意：1. 感謝對象可在父母或老師中任選其一，但請避用真實(shí)姓名和校名。2. 除表格所列關(guān)鍵詞語外，還可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、舉例并抒發(fā)感受。3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。Dear _,Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. Best wishes!YoursZhang Hua滿分文(一)Dear Miss Gao,Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. Youve taken

25、 good care of my studies since I came to this school. When Im in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, Ive made great progress

26、 in English. Im so thankful for your love that Ill work harder and try to do better in the future.Best wishes.YoursZhang Hua點(diǎn)評：作者巧妙地把所有的提示詞融入到文章中，完整得敘述了對老師的感激之情以及感激老師的理由。本文銜接自然流暢，前后連貫，層層推進(jìn)。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是作者使用了很多復(fù)合句， 狀語從句，可見作者對初中階段的句型掌握地還是很扎實(shí)的。積累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1express表達(dá)2encourage鼓勵3upset傷心的4improve提高5thankful感

27、激的 好句 1When Im in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. 當(dāng)我有困難時，你常常鼓勵我，并給予我很好的建議。 2Im so thankful for your love that Ill work harder and try to do better in the future.我非常感謝你對我的愛，所以我會更加努力，希望在將來做得更好。 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全天津市日前，由教育部、國家體育總局、共青團(tuán)中央聯(lián)合舉辦了“全國億萬青少年學(xué)生陽光體育運(yùn)動”啟動儀式，其影響巨大，意義深遠(yuǎn)。你在本校

28、參與了此項(xiàng)活動，請你根據(jù)表格中所給信息寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容 感想 學(xué)校師生收看了啟動儀式； 開展了一小時的集體體育活動，如： 跑步，做操，打籃球等 鍛煉有利于強(qiáng)身健體； 運(yùn)動使大腦休息，學(xué)習(xí)效果更好； 每天鍛煉一小時，幸福生活一輩子 注意：1. 詞數(shù)80100個左右。2. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)和適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文通順、連貫。4. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名。參考詞匯：the launching ceremony 啟動儀式；build up ones body strength 強(qiáng)身健體more effective 效果更

29、好滿分文(一)“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exerc

30、ises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises. I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep

31、on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.點(diǎn)評：作者根據(jù)的題目中的提示完成了這篇佳作。本文最大的特點(diǎn)就是要點(diǎn)清楚，表達(dá)通順。很多人在根據(jù)提示完成文章時，常常把一條一條的提示寫的很突兀，沒有連續(xù)性，而本文的作者卻成功地避免了這種問題，運(yùn)用非常嫻熟地語言表達(dá)功力把各個要點(diǎn)非常自然地串聯(lián)起來。 積累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1nationwide全國2launch啟動3strength力量4effective有效的 好句 1I think it is a good way to build up

32、our body strength. 我認(rèn)為這是增強(qiáng)體力的一個很好方法。 2To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it.每天做一個小時的運(yùn)動會使我們一生都幸?？鞓罚晕視猿窒氯サ?。 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全昆明市提示：閱讀理解B篇文章的情節(jié)使我們感動。你一定也收到過許多禮物，其中你最喜歡的禮物總會不斷地呈現(xiàn)在你的記憶中，它可能來自于你的親人，朋友或老師，在禮物中有他們對你的愛和期待，請你以“A Gift”為題，用英語寫一篇小短文

33、，敘述你收到禮物后得到的啟示和你的感動之情。要求：1. 語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60字。2. 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名，校名，否則以零分計。3. 短文必須寫在答題卷上，如在本卷中作答，一律不得分。 滿分文(一)A GiftI have received so many gifts on my birthdays. But I love the book named Beautiful English best. It was given to me by my mother last year. I like to read it in my spare time. From

34、 the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. I also know people should help each other, understand each other and love each other. I think Ill grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mothers deep love.點(diǎn)評：作者開門見山地點(diǎn)出了自己最喜歡的禮物，然后詳細(xì)地闡述了這份禮物的來源和為什么喜歡這份禮物的原因。

35、最后作者表達(dá)了自己的希望。本文內(nèi)容很完整，作者層層深入，娓娓道來，展現(xiàn)了一位中學(xué)生的敘事功底。在語言方面，本文長短句結(jié)合，增加了語言的多樣化。 積累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1receive收到2spare空閑的3understand理解 好句 1From the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. 從這本書中，我學(xué)到了世界充滿了愛和美麗。 2I think Ill grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mothers

36、 deep love. 我想我會和這本書一起成長，因?yàn)樗粌H僅是一本書，還代表了母親深深的愛。 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全太原市學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)不斷加重，學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)每況愈下。為此，教育部在全國啟動了“陽光體育運(yùn)動，(Sunshine Sports)，提議學(xué)生每天參加一小時的體育鍛煉活動。為了督促學(xué)校積極參與此項(xiàng)活動，某報社面向?qū)W生做調(diào)研。請仔細(xì)閱讀調(diào)研內(nèi)容，給報社寫一封回信。要求：不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名 詞數(shù)：60-70Dear students,Here are some questions for our survey aboutsunshine sports.Please answ

37、er them.Do you have much time to do sports now?Do you still remember one exciting sports activity you took part in before?Please tell us.What do you think of sunshine sports?EditorOne possible versionDear editor,Yours,Li Jiankang 滿分文(一)Dear Editor,I dont have much time to do sports now. Too much hom

38、ework makes me feel very tired. In fact, I love sports, especially skateboarding. Whenever I think of my first skateboarding competition, I feel very excited. I can still remember the day when I was in Grade Seven, we had a competition in our school. Many people took part in it, but I was the winner

39、. I skated fastest that day. I feel very proud. Doing sports can relax ourselves. But its a pity we cant do that now. I think “Sunshine Sports” is necessary for us students. I hope I can play outside the classroom every day and enjoy sports! Yours,Li Jiankang點(diǎn)評：本文是一篇書信體，文章中的三段話分別回答了來信中的三個問題，要點(diǎn)清楚。在第二

40、段中，作者詳細(xì)地敘述了自己曾經(jīng)參加過的滑板運(yùn)動，語言真切自然，可見作者對這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動的喜愛之情。第三段中作者抒發(fā)了自己的觀點(diǎn)，感情真摯細(xì)膩?？偠灾?，本文是以作者的親身體會談了談對運(yùn)動的看法，可謂以情動人。 積累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1especially尤其是2skateboarding溜冰板3necessary必要的4relax放松 好句 1. In fact, I love sports, especially skateboarding. 事實(shí)上，我喜歡運(yùn)動，尤其是溜冰。 2I hope I can play outside the classroom every day and enjo

41、y sports! 我希望我能夠在課堂之外多做運(yùn)動，并享受運(yùn)動帶來的樂趣。 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全重慶市隨著陽光體育運(yùn)動在全國的開展，每天鍛煉一小時，健康工作50年，幸福生活一輩子?！?的理念深入人心，校園里出現(xiàn)了可喜的變化：運(yùn)動時間延長了，運(yùn)動項(xiàng)目增加了，學(xué)生體質(zhì)增強(qiáng)了，校園生活豐富了。請以Sports in Our School為題給?？瘜懸黄獔蟮?。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示：1. time for sports2. kinds of sports3. change of students health and study4. change of school life要求：1.80詞左右，

42、可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱等相關(guān)信息。Sports in Our School 滿分文(一)Sports in Our SchoolSports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week.and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active

43、part in the ball games，running，and jumping on the playground.Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.Whats more? A healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.點(diǎn)評：本文要點(diǎn)非常齊全，三段話分別敘述了題目中要求的四個方面，層次清楚，段與段之間的連接也很自然。第一段主要講我們學(xué)校的運(yùn)動課和運(yùn)動時間發(fā)生

44、了很大的變化，第二段是講同學(xué)都很積極地參加運(yùn)動，第三段主要講運(yùn)動給校園生活帶來的變化。本文最大的特點(diǎn)就是每一個的開頭都是一個中心句，這樣使得文章大意非常明了，結(jié)構(gòu)也很清晰。積累卡片 英漢互譯 好詞 1change改變2active活躍的3wonderful精彩的4relax放松 好句 1.Students get so excited at these changes. 同學(xué)們對這些變化感到非常激動。 2.Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit 做運(yùn)動是放松身心，保持體形很好的方法。 2007年中考英語滿分作文精品大全杭州市假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和來自英國的一位中學(xué)生Allen一起討論了一個話題：the ways to learn English better?，F(xiàn)請你根據(jù)他的觀點(diǎn)和你自