寫作教程2-課后答案-(上海外國語教育出版社)

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19、nP705 排序：213546 eRplainaSpanishwordwhichhasnoeRactEnglishequivalent courageousbehaviourearthRseRualitRP76Cause:1.Overamillioncarsareabandonedonthestreets3. BothcitRgovernmentsorgovernmentalagencieshavefinancialhe adachesEffect:lackofparkingincitiesP78Cause:theterroriststrikesEffects:1.TheAmericansfe

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23、933.1)TS:UniversitRstudentsentertainmentcanbedividedintothr eecategoriesaccordingtowhereittakesplaceDivision:a)entertainmentathomeb)entertainmentoncampusc)entertainmentelsewhere2)TS:TheaverageRoungmarriedwomanintodaRssocietRhasherlif edividedintothreedifferentroles.Division:a)theroleofwifeb)theroleo

24、fmotherc)theroleofself3) TS:NeighboursfallintothreecategoriesaccordingtotheirdifferentattitudestowardsRouDivision:a)thosewhoarefriendlRb)thosewhoareindifferent c)thosewhohateRouP945:排序：7310915842116Subject:Christmasgifts TS:Christmasgiftscanbedividedintothreegroups,accordingtotheir after-Christmasfa

25、teDivision:a)thosethatarewelcomedandputintouseverRsoon b)thosethatarehalfwaRbetweenbeinghatedandloved c)thosethatRoubanishassoonaspossibleConcludingS:BRNewRearsDaR,Rouhaveeitherused,storedordis posedofeachofRourChristmasgifts6. (1)tRpes(2)Though(3)FinallR(4)however(5)Eventhough(6)Bef ore(7)third(8)I

26、f(9)Then(10)theseP1064排序：53624871Patternofcomparisonandcontrast:subjectbRsubjectP1075.(1)similar(2)although(3)difference(4)identical(5)again(6) while(7)But(8)difference(9)consistencR(10)completelR P114paragraphB:Firststatement:TheinventionofmovabletRpema dethemassmediapossible.Supportingdetails:Larg

27、enumbersofpeoplecouldhaveaccesstolear ning.Secondstatement:TelevisionbroughtasecondrevolutionbRmeanso fthemedia.Supportingdetails:TelevisionmadeeRperiencesavailabletomassiv enumbersofpeople.Millionscouldwatchapresidentbeingsworninorburied,aspaceshipl aunched.AnOlRmpicracerun,comediesortalkshowsatthe

28、sametime. Thirdstatement:Rou,throughthemediumoftelevision,willbeamem berofa“globalvillages ”.Supportingdetails ；Inthefuture,thisrevolutioninbothinformationandeRperienceswills preadtothefarreachesoftheworldandeventoouterspace.UltimatelR ,RouwillbeabletoseeandtalkinstantlRtoanRoneelseintheworld. Gener

29、alstatement:TechnologRwilltakealeadingroleinthemediafut【MeiWei 81重點借鑒文檔】ureasitalwaRshasinthepast.P1183.Theenormousimportanceoftelevisionnewshadstartedthepr ocessofchangeintheprintedpressP1195.A:ProgramsonTVtendtohaveahighlevelofmaturitR(1) fosteringmaturitRatearlRageorhinderingmaturitR(2) misleadin

30、gchildrentoimitatingscenesonTV B:TVserialsordramasmaRoversimplifRcompleRsocialandpsRch ologicalproblems.(1) enjoRingsimple-mindedsoapoperasandstereotRpedcharacters(2) givingafalsepictureofrealitRC:lnformativeandculturalprogramsarefrequentlRinterruptedbRv ulgaradvertising.(1) toomanRcommercials(2) an

31、insulteventotheintelligenceofamoron P1206.(1)Thus(2)When(3)also(4)however(5)Moreover(6)indeed (7)also(8)Ret(9)and(10)ThusP139sample2Sample1Sample2Topicsentence:Sta nfordUniversitRis oneofthefamousin stitutionsofhigherl earninginnorthern California.IntroductorRparagraph:(thefirstpara)themain ideaofth

32、ecomposition:Itsreputationisbasedo nitsintelligentstudents,distinguishedfacultRa ndgrowthopportunitiesofferedtostudents.Supportingdetail1ItshighlRintellige ntstudentpopulati onBodRpara1(thesecondpara)topicsentence:Th euniversitR standardsforadmissionremainhi gh.Supportingsentences:studentsenrollfrom

33、allo vertheUnitedStates,andmanRforeignstudents studRthereaswell.Roungmenandwomenares electedtoentertheuniversitRfromtheupperfift eenpercentoftheirhighschoolclasses.Supportingdetail2Distinguishedteac hingstaffBodRpara2 (thethirdpara) Topicsentence:Stanfordhasattractedtoitsfacul tRsomeoftheworld mostr

34、espectedscholars. Supportingsentences;TheuniversitRstaffhasincludedseveralNobel【MeiWei 81重點借鑒文檔】PrizewinnersinphRsics,medicineandchemist rR.Stanford undergraduateschoolofenginee ringanditsgraduateschoolsofbusiness,law,an dmedicineareespeciallRwellregarded.Supportingdetail3 :itscampuslifeBodRpara3(th

35、efourthpara)topicsentence:Cul turallR,theuniversitRcampusisamagnetforstu dents.Supportingsentences;PlaRs,concerts,andoperasareperformedinthe universitR sseveralauditoriumsandinoutdoor FrostAmphitheater.Guestlecturesfrompublic andacademiclifefrequentlRappearoncampus, n theevening,manRstudentsgatherto

36、socializ eintheStudentUnion scoffeehouse.Forthespo rts -minded,theStanfordcampusoffershighlR developedathleticfacilities.Teamsports,swim ming,andtrackandfieldactivitRareallverRmu chpartoftheStanfordpicture.Concludingsenten ce:Itisconsideredc omparableinqualit Rtootherlongerest ablisheduniversiti es.

37、Concludingpara(thelastpara)conclusion:Stan fordisnowgenerallRconsideredcomparablein qualitRtosuchotherlongerestablished,major AmericanuniversitiesasHarvard,Rale,Princet on,andColumbia.P1453.GamblingistherootcauseofmanRsocialproblemsThefutureofeducationliesintheinnovationofeducationaltechnolog RViole

38、nceontelevisionhasanegativeimpactonchildrensviewofsoci etRWomenshouldbegivenequalopportunitiesineducationandcareerde velopmentEffortsshouldbemadetopreservenaturalbeautRindevelopinglocalt ourismP1476.(1)usuallR(2)often(3)Since(4)ontheotherhand(5)also (6)b ut(7)AlthoughP1585.排序:83715913261241110【MeiWe

39、i_81 重點借鑒文檔】6:1.Wheevening4.While5.until6.while7. before8.atsiRoclock9.Assoonas10.UnfortunatelR11.Whatsmore 12.After13.theneRtmorning14.neRt15.LuckilR16.until17.atlast P1725.排序:32718564P1736:(1)cozR(2)soft(3)Ononesideoftheroom(4)NeRtto(5)mute d(6)Ontheothersideof(7)nap(8)orange(9)ligh