必修一Unit1Writing交友建議信課件

1、how to write a how to write a letter for adviceletter for advice必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信noimage shirley, recently i find it difficult to get along with my new classmates. what should i do?必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信根據(jù)下列要求和提示，完成審題謀篇、根據(jù)下列要求和提示，完成審題謀篇、遣詞造句、連句成篇等寫(xiě)作過(guò)程。遣詞造句、連句成篇等寫(xiě)作過(guò)程。 假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友harry

2、harry在交在交友過(guò)程中遇到了困難。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示友過(guò)程中遇到了困難。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封信，給他提出一些建議。用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封信，給他提出一些建議。1.1.幫他分析原因。幫他分析原因。2. 2. 給他提出建議和原因。給他提出建議和原因。3. 3. 陳述你幫助他的具體打算。陳述你幫助他的具體打算。 4.1004.100個(gè)詞左右。個(gè)詞左右。必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信dear harry, a i hope you will find these ideas useful.looking forward your letters. b first of all,

3、you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. whats more, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. in this way，you can make friends with more people. last but not le

4、ast, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary.with time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above. c.i am sorry to hear that you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. however, the situation is easy to change

5、 if/so long as you take/follow my advice. yours, li hua 必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信第一步第一步: what must we pay attention to when writing an article ?題材題材：人稱人稱 person (the first/ second person)時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)：tense (the simple present tense)要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)： a letter必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信寫(xiě)作攻略寫(xiě)作攻略2 2：建議信寫(xiě)作的注意事項(xiàng)：建議信寫(xiě)作的注意事項(xiàng)a.第一段要表達(dá)

6、情感，寫(xiě)出第一段要表達(dá)情感，寫(xiě)出目的目的b. 提出問(wèn)題的原因；提出問(wèn)題的原因； 說(shuō)明建議的內(nèi)容，說(shuō)明建議的內(nèi)容，建議的原因，因此要建議的原因，因此要注意注意各條建議之間的銜接各條建議之間的銜接。c. 熟悉熟悉建議信的常用句型建議信的常用句型。必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信structurestructurewhich paragrah is the most important?para1:_ para2:_ _ . _ . _para3:wishes and _ feelings and purposeadvicehopesadvic

7、e 1reasonadvice 2resultadvice 3必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信 how to come up with suggestions?我建議你把零用錢(qián)花在這些事情上/我覺(jué)得你該這么花零 花錢(qián)為例) o you can/ should / had better/might as you can/ should / had better/might as wellwell spend your pocket money in this way. spend your pocket money in this way. o i think you shouldi

8、 think you should spend your pocket spend your pocket money in this way. money in this way. o why not/why dont youwhy not/why dont you spend your pocket spend your pocket money on these things? money on these things? o its a good idea to its a good idea to必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信 6.it would be better

9、if you6.it would be better if you 7. 7. i think iti think itll do you good toll do you good to 8. 8. i suggest thati suggest that you should you should9. 9. i would advisei would advise you toyou to 必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信第一步：審題第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問(wèn)題思考的問(wèn)

10、題樣題分析樣題分析第幾人稱？（第幾人稱？（person）文章的題材是什么？文章的題材是什么？要寫(xiě)的文章主題是什么要寫(xiě)的文章主題是什么 (topic)怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？ (order)動(dòng)作是什么時(shí)候發(fā)生的？動(dòng)作是什么時(shí)候發(fā)生的？(時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)) (when)第二人稱第二人稱一封信一封信好友好友harryharry在交友過(guò)程中遇在交友過(guò)程中遇到了困難，給其建議到了困難，給其建議 說(shuō)理邏輯性說(shuō)理邏輯性現(xiàn)在時(shí)現(xiàn)在時(shí)必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信建議信篇章結(jié)構(gòu)建議信篇章結(jié)構(gòu)提出問(wèn)題的原因；提出問(wèn)題的原因；說(shuō)明建議的內(nèi)容；說(shuō)明建議的內(nèi)容；注意事項(xiàng)：語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌，顧及

11、對(duì)方注意事項(xiàng)：語(yǔ)言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對(duì)方感受。感受。必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信dear harry,im _ to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主題引出主題). here are a few suggestions. first, it is important to . then, it also helps to . besides, it should be a good idea to . you can also . (

12、此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建議的句式提出建議)as to , i suggest (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面到某一反面). in addition, (其他建議其他建議). im sure (預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心信心和決心).im looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望表達(dá)愿望).sincerely yours,li hua必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型 1. 1. 詞匯：詞匯：(1).(1).積極參與積極參與 be active to take

13、part inbe active to take part in/actively take part /actively take part inin (2).(2).耐心聽(tīng)他人說(shuō)話耐心聽(tīng)他人說(shuō)話 be patient to listen to othersbe patient to listen to others (3).(3).隨著時(shí)間的流逝隨著時(shí)間的流逝 as time goes by/ with time going byas time goes by/ with time going by (4).(4).和和交朋友交朋友 make friends withmake friend

14、s with 必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型 1. 1. 詞匯：詞匯：(1).(1).很難與他人交流很難與他人交流 have trouble/difficult in communicating with have trouble/difficult in communicating with othersothers (2).(2).感到孤獨(dú)感到孤獨(dú) feel lonelyfeel lonely (3).(3).采納下面的建議采納下面的建議 adopt the following advice/suggestionsadopt

15、 the following advice/suggestions (4).(4).了解他人的興趣了解他人的興趣 learn about their interest/hobbieslearn about their interest/hobbies 必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信 (1).(1).你在信中說(shuō)，你與別人交流時(shí)有困難。你在信中說(shuō)，你與別人交流時(shí)有困難。 in your letter, you said youin your letter, you said you were not were not good atgood at communicating with

16、 others. communicating with others. b. in your letter, you said youb. in your letter, you said you had had difficulty/trouble indifficulty/trouble in communicating with communicating with others. others. c. in your letter, you said c. in your letter, you said you found you found it hard toit hard to

17、 communicate with municate with others. 2. 2. 句式練習(xí)句式練習(xí) 一句多譯一句多譯必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信 (2). (2).我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下我相信你可以克服的，只要你能遵循一下幾點(diǎn)建議。幾點(diǎn)建議。 a. i believe you can just a. i believe you can just overcome itovercome it so long as you can so long as you can adopt the following adopt the following advic

18、e advice . . b. i think you can b. i think you can get over itget over it_ _ so long so long as you can as you can follow/take the advice follow/take the advice . .2. 2. 句式練習(xí)句式練習(xí) 一句多譯一句多譯必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信(3).(3).在班級(jí)舉行討論的時(shí)候，你要積極參加，并且積極在班級(jí)舉行討論的時(shí)候，你要積極參加，并且積極表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。 in a class discussion,

19、 youin a class discussion, youd better d better actively actively take part in it take part in it and and express your views/opinionsexpress your views/opinions actively.actively.b. when taking part in a class discussion, you b. when taking part in a class discussion, you shouldshould take part in i

20、ttake part in it and tell others what and tell others what you thinkyou think actively. actively. c. you should c. you should participate inparticipate in the discussionthe discussion positivelypositively and and make your voice heardmake your voice heard actively.actively. 2. 2. 句式練習(xí)句式練習(xí) 一句多譯一句多譯必修

21、一-unit1-writing交友建議信(4).(4).這樣你就可以結(jié)識(shí)更多的人。這樣你就可以結(jié)識(shí)更多的人。 in this way, you can in this way, you can make friends make friends withwith more people. more people.b. then you can b. then you can make acquaintance make acquaintance withwith more people. more people. 2. 2. 句式練習(xí)句式練習(xí) 一句多譯一句多譯必修一-unit1-writing

22、交友建議信(5).(5).必要時(shí)給別人以幫助也是個(gè)好主意。必要時(shí)給別人以幫助也是個(gè)好主意。 a. it will also a. it will also be a good idea be a good idea to help to help others when necessary. others when necessary. b. it is also a good idea that b. it is also a good idea that you canyou can help others help others when when necessary.necessary

23、. 2. 2. 句式練習(xí)句式練習(xí) 一句多譯一句多譯必修一-unit1-writing交友建議信dear harry, i am sorry to hear that you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. however, the situation is easy to change if/so long as you take/follow my advice. first of all, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. whats more, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, lear