大學(xué)英語B網(wǎng)絡(luò)統(tǒng)考翻譯與寫作ppt課件

1、1大學(xué)英語大學(xué)英語B B網(wǎng)絡(luò)統(tǒng)考考前輔導(dǎo)網(wǎng)絡(luò)統(tǒng)考考前輔導(dǎo)寫作與翻譯寫作與翻譯2寫寫 作作 介介 紹紹考生應(yīng)能在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出長(zhǎng)度不少于80詞的常見應(yīng)用文及一般的敘述文、說明文和議論文?？忌鷳?yīng)能用較正確的語法、詞匯、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)進(jìn)行表達(dá)；基本做到內(nèi)容切題，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，條理清楚；根據(jù)不同的寫作目的進(jìn)行有針對(duì)性的寫作。3第六部分：寫作第六部分：寫作 （滿分（滿分1515分）分） 要求你在要求你在3030分鐘內(nèi)，根據(jù)下面所給的題目用英語寫出一篇不少于分鐘內(nèi)，根據(jù)下面所給的題目用英語寫出一篇不少于8080詞的短文。詞的短文。My Plan for the May 1st Holiday4評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 以考試大

2、綱寫作部分的有關(guān)要求為依據(jù)，一般從作文的內(nèi)容和語言質(zhì)量?jī)蓚€(gè)角度評(píng)定。內(nèi)容包括是否切題，思想是否清楚，意義是否連貫；語言包括所采用的句型以及詞語是否準(zhǔn)確，表達(dá)是否有誤等。除以上兩個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)外，還需注意所寫文章的字?jǐn)?shù)，要達(dá)到考試規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)要求。5作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：大學(xué)英語B的作文考試評(píng)卷原則是在整體評(píng)閱的基礎(chǔ)上給出印象分，此印象分以獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)給分，不是按錯(cuò)扣分。評(píng)分按檔次進(jìn)行，即1-3分，4-6分，7-9分，10-12分，13-15分五個(gè)檔次。各個(gè)檔次的具體描述如下：13-15分：扣題，語言流暢，用詞豐富，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)感強(qiáng)，語法正確，只有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。 610-12分：扣題，語言通順，用詞較豐富，段與段之間有較好的過渡

3、，語法基本正確，有些語病；7-9分：基本扣題，語言基本正確，用詞有一定變化，文中錯(cuò)誤較多，有個(gè)別為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤；4-6分：語言基本功差，文章中中國(guó)式英語表達(dá)居多，用詞貧乏，語法錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，有多處嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。1-3分：語言支離破碎，絕大部分句子無法理解，語言錯(cuò)誤很多。 71. He likes all kinds of sports, but most of all, basketball. 2. He doesnt spend much time on his homework.3. Can you absorb all the knowledge our teacher gave in the c

4、lass?4. Adam is slightly older than Tom.5. His English was adequate enough for the job, although he was not very fluent. 6. Her eyes were immediately filled with tears of gratitude.87. All flights to New York today were delayed because of the bad weather. 8. The best way to lose weight is to avoid e

5、ating fatty foods. 9. I hope we will remain friends forever.10. You wont get the job unless youve got the experience. 11. This is a cruel practice which should be stopped immediately. 12. You cant leave the city now; all the roads are blocked by snow.9There + be1) There are many things to be done. /

6、 There are many things that we can do. 2) There have been great changes here in recent years.3) There are a variety of measures that we can take to protect our environment.2. Not (Never) until / tillWe do not know the value of health until we lose it.103. It is (for sb.) to doIt is impossible (for y

7、ou) to master a foreign language in a few months. 4. It is true that, butIt is true that the computer has changed our lives, but it has brought about many problems as well. 115. AsAs we all know, / As is known to us all, smoking is harmful not only to the smokers but also to the non-smokers. 6. As l

8、ong as There will be nothing to regret as/so long as we have tried our best. 7. Now thatNow that we have realized the importance of time, we should take fuller advantage of it. 12注意事項(xiàng)注意事項(xiàng): :1) 保證寫作的時(shí)間。2) 認(rèn)真審題,仔細(xì)構(gòu)思,草擬大綱。3）注意文章的啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合。4）盡量使用一些標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的句型和成語，避免生造硬套。5）注意文章的總體布局和書寫格式。6）正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。7）認(rèn)真檢查。8）書寫一定要

9、認(rèn)真。13網(wǎng)絡(luò)統(tǒng)考英語命題作文包括：應(yīng)用文及一般的敘述文、說明文和議論文：書信：公務(wù)信件跟私人信件公務(wù)信件：?jiǎn)挝慌c單位或單位與個(gè)人之間的書信來往，包括推薦信、謀職信、入學(xué)申請(qǐng)書、邀請(qǐng)信或詢問、答復(fù)、反映意見等等信件；私人信件：親朋好友之間的通信；英文信件一般由以下六部分組成：信頭、信內(nèi)地址、稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾、簽名。14信頭：信頭：發(fā)信人的地址和日期，通常寫在第一頁的右上角，行首可以齊頭寫，也可進(jìn)行縮進(jìn)去寫，行尾可用也可不用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；書寫地址：書寫地址：由小到大；門牌號(hào)碼、街道、城市、省(州)、郵編、國(guó)名，最后寫發(fā)信日期Eg. “ZhongShanRoad, Hong San District,

10、 Xuzhou, Jiangsu, 221053, China, May 12, 1999 學(xué)校地址：English Department, Shanxi Teachers University, Sian, Shan Xi, 710062, P.R.C., March 1, 1995 15信內(nèi)地址信內(nèi)地址: :寫收信人的姓名和地址,寫在寫信日期下一行的左上角，格式與寄信人地址一樣.稱呼：稱呼：與左邊線對(duì)齊，寫在收信人姓名、地址下面1-2行處；英國(guó)人稱呼后用逗號(hào)，美國(guó)人常用冒號(hào)；Eg. Dear Professor/ Prof. Smith:/Dear Dr. Stein:/Dear Ms.

11、Santos: 對(duì)不認(rèn)識(shí)的人要按性別稱呼: Dear Sir:/Dear Madam:/Dear ladies: 16正文正文: :正文是書信的主體，書信的選詞造句要準(zhǔn)確、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語言規(guī)范、簡(jiǎn)潔。書信正文的開頭往往要說明寫信人的身份及寫信的宗旨，然后提出寫信人的情況、想法或要求，加以必要的解釋或說明。 17結(jié)尾結(jié)尾: :公務(wù)信件公務(wù)信件: “Yours truly”, “ “Yours sincerely”, “ “Sincerely yours”, “Cordially yours”, “ “Yours cordially” 私人信件私人信件:“Yours sincere1y”, “ “You

12、rs truly”, “Yours faithfully” 18 College of Mechanical EngineeringUniversity of Petroleum ChinaDongying, ShandongPeoples Republic of ChinaDec. 5, 2009ChairmanDepartment of Mechanical EngineeringUniversity of ArizonaTueson, Arizona 85721U.S.A.Dear Sir,信頭與稱呼19 I am a senior in the College of Mechanica

13、l Engineering of the University of Petroleum China. As an undergraduate, I specialize in fluid-dynamics and would like to continue studying it as a graduate student. Could you send me more information on your department and an application for admission? Although I will be receiving government suppor

14、t, I would still like to apply for financial aid. Could you please send me this application form as well? Thank you very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Li Huaming正 文結(jié)尾與簽名20如果給熟人寫信，信頭和信內(nèi)地址可以免寫，用詞很隨便，如：如果給熟人寫信，信頭和信內(nèi)地址可以免寫，用詞很隨便，如： September 13, 1987 Dear Brother, I have so m

15、any things to tell you that I hardly know where to begin. Now the first thing I want to tell you is that I have been so fortunate as to study in such a wonderful city and such a lovely college. In the first few days after I came here, there was so much to see and do and enjoy that I could not concen

16、trate on anything but having fun and being happy.21Last Monday school began. My teachers are kind and amiable. But I find that my lessons are much more difficult than they were in the middle school. However, I shall never dread them as I can work hard. Please take good care of Father and Mother and

17、give my love to everybody at home. Your sister, Li Min22書信常用結(jié)構(gòu)書信常用結(jié)構(gòu) January 12th, 2006 Dear: I am . I am sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to talk about . (I am most happy to receive your letter and hear that ) I am looking forward to your reply. Best regards. Sincerely yours, 2

18、3書信常用經(jīng)典句型：書信常用經(jīng)典句型： January 12th, 2006一、詢問信We learn something from /We learn from that Your company enjoys a good reputation in this line.Your company specializes in (專門經(jīng)營(yíng))We would like you to send me /We would appreciate it if you will let us know (the ruling price of the goods 這個(gè)產(chǎn)品的現(xiàn)行價(jià)) We look fo

19、rward to receiving your early/favorable reply. Best Wishes/Best Regards! Yours Sincerely 24書信常用經(jīng)典句型：書信常用經(jīng)典句型： January 12th, 2006二、道歉信I am writing this letter to make an apology to you for my I am sorry for any inconvenience caused to you, please accept my sincere apology.三、致謝信Thank you for cooperati

20、on/confidence/sharing your suggestionI am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for I appreciate your cooperation and look forward to receiving Best Wishes/Best Regards! Yours Sincerely 25經(jīng)典語句經(jīng)典語句I am delighted to learn thatI am sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to

21、talk aboutI am most happy to receive your June 16th letter and hear thatI am writing to tell you thatI would like to apply for the position ofyou have advertised inI am looking forward to hearing from you soon. (to seeing you in my hometown)Best regards. / Please give my love to8. Please accept my s

22、incere thanks / apologies. 26 August 25, 2004 Dear Xiao Lin, I am very pleased to learn that you have successfully passed the National Entrance Examination for Colleges and Universities this year and have been admitted to the Beijing University with honors. Allow me to offer my most sincere congratu

23、lations on this happy occasion. From our communication in the past, I can see that you have all along been working hard at your professional studies, excelling in almost all the subjects. Your success serves to show that diligence can yield good results. My family encourage me to follow your example

24、. Though we havent seen each other for a long time, I bet well have the chance. Someday Ill go to Beijing to see you. Wish you greater achievements in your college education. Cordially yours, Xiao Ming 27 August 25, 2004 Dear Lin Hai, You have no idea what a thrill your note gave me. My best friend

25、is getting married, and I cant wait to see who is the lucky girl! You know how much I think of you, and how many good wishes I am sending along right now. Yes, indeed, Ill certainly be at your wedding, and at the reception, too. I wouldnt miss a minute of the occasion, and while there Ill hope to be

26、 brought up to date on the news of our classmates at college. Its so long since I saw any of you. I had hoped to visit you long ago, but one thing after another interfered with my plans. Please give my greetings to your girlfriend. Ill be seeing you soon. Sincerely yours Li Bing 28Advantages and Dis

27、advantages of the Internet1）有人認(rèn)為因特網(wǎng)有很多的優(yōu)勢(shì)2）也有人認(rèn)為因特網(wǎng)存在很多缺點(diǎn)3）我認(rèn)為提示，寫作文之前要認(rèn)真研究題目所給提示29Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Nowadays, the Internet is playing a more and more important role in peoples daily life. However, peoples opinions are still divided on this point. Those who are in favor of

28、 the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages. Firstly, information searching is no longer a tough job with the help of all kinds of search engines. Secondly, we can contact friends or business partners via e-mails or software such as Internet Meeting and Yahoo Messenger. Last but no least, we

29、 can take part in groups or mailing lists to talk with friends of the same interest. 30 Those who are opposed to the Internet hold that disadvantages are obvious. In the first place, the Internet costs considerable time, money and energy especially for those with less self-control. In the second pla

30、ce, surfing on the Internet for a long time harms the eyes a lot. Finally, more and more young people are indulged in online games, Internet chat and even pornography, which are extremely harmful to their future development. 31 All in all, we can safely come to the conclusion that the pro outweigh t

31、he cons. The past twenty years witnessed the fast development of the Internet along with national economy. A brighter future is awaiting us if we make good use of the Internet. 32 My View on Opportunity1）不同的人對(duì)于機(jī)遇有不同的看法2）我的觀點(diǎn)33My View on Opportunity Different people have different view on opportunity

32、. Some people think that there are few opportunities in the world, while others argue that everybody will have some kind of opportunity along his life route. 34 As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe opportunities are everywhere around us. No perso

33、n will be unlucky enough to have no opportunities all the time, because “every dog has his day”. For another, since opportunities are transient, we have to make good preparations and improve ourselves. Just think of Newton, who discovered the Law of Gravity when many people had watched an apple fall

34、ing ahead of him. 35Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there are quite a few opportunities in our society. Only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by, just as the saying goes, “Opportunities are only for

35、the prepared minds”.36 My Plan for the Spring Festival Spring festival is the most important festival for Chinese people. Many people will prepare many things for the spring festival. Now this is my plan for the spring festival. The first, I will visit my friends and my relatives. The second, I will

36、 make a big snow man with my daughter and my wife. The third, I will stay with my parents, because I have no more time to stay with them at peacetime. This is my plan for the spring festival. I hope all of you have a good time in the spring festival. 37About TelevisionTelevision has its good as well

37、 as bad sides. It makes us informed of daily news, lets us know the outside world, provides lessons for learners, and it has brought joy and interest into peoples lives. Unfortunately, some television programs have been extremely harmful to the young. Violent movies are shown on TV programs. Childre

38、n regard the murders as heroes or models, so they imitate. Therefore there happened many murders or shooting cases in American campuses. What a big harm. So young people should learn to get ride of the bad influences of TV and learn to make use of the advantages that TV brings us. 38選擇一個(gè)你想旅游的地點(diǎn)，并安排旅

39、行計(jì)劃。你應(yīng)包括下列內(nèi)容： 1.說明你想旅游的地點(diǎn)； 2.說明你為什么選擇這個(gè)地點(diǎn)； 3.描述你的旅行計(jì)劃。 39Dear Amy,I plan to make a journey to Jiuzhaigou in Si Chuan province. Its a beautiful place with fresh air, beautiful natural scenery like waterfall, lake and high mountains. Because many films and TV series have been made here, it is very fam

40、ous. Whats more, I am very busy and exhausted this year, so I want to go for a relaxation. I plan to stay there for a week and travel with a tour group. I believe I will enjoy myself there. Regards Yours ever Tim 40你應(yīng)邀到一位好友家吃晚飯。事后給朋友寫信表示謝意。你的信應(yīng)包括下列內(nèi)容： 1.表達(dá)謝意； 2.表達(dá)想回請(qǐng)的意愿； 3.期待朋友的光臨。 41Dear Amy: Thank

41、s for your invitation to your home last night. I enjoy the food very much. I will hold a small party to celebrate my birthday on November 12th, and I will invite a lot of friends to have dinner at my home, would you like to join us? Oh, there will also be a band to perform live music. I think it will be exciting to dance with the live music.