初二英語寫作(教學(xué))

1、精選課件1潘斌潘斌-華科同濟醫(yī)學(xué)院華科同濟醫(yī)學(xué)院初二英語課程初二英語課程第二講：作文寫作精講第二講：作文寫作精講精選課件2作文寫作的字、詞、句、段、篇作文寫作的字、詞、句、段、篇 字字：工整、清楚；：工整、清楚； 詞詞：不拼寫錯誤；能適當(dāng)掌握高級詞：不拼寫錯誤；能適當(dāng)掌握高級詞匯；匯； 句句：不出現(xiàn)語法錯誤；句子要逐漸使：不出現(xiàn)語法錯誤；句子要逐漸使用復(fù)雜的從句句型，為文章添彩；用復(fù)雜的從句句型，為文章添彩； 段段：段落內(nèi)容有邏輯性；：段落內(nèi)容有邏輯性； 篇篇：合理安排文章布局；要有邏輯與：合理安排文章布局；要有邏輯與聯(lián)接；聯(lián)接；精選課件3絕對好用的替換詞絕對好用的替換詞 Good wonde

2、rful, excellent, gorgeous, fabulous, amazing, magnificent; Important significant, essential, necessary, carry a lot of weight; ButHowever, Sotherefore, hence,精選課件4 Primarily, Firstly, one of the most essential reasons, to stress first Secondly, above from the first point, In addition Thirdly, Last b

3、ut no least, In conclusion, to make a conclusion, to summarize精選課件5舉例舉例 For example For instance, to take .as an example, to state a fact as an vivid example,精選課件6經(jīng)典句型：經(jīng)典句型：1、Its said that2、No matter what/which/who/where/when/whose+從句從句3、It is/was +被強調(diào)部分被強調(diào)部分 +that (who) +剩余部分剩余部分精選課件7 4、It happened

4、 (chanced) that +從從句句=sb. Happened/chanced to do sth.= sb.did sth by chance 5、由由as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定句從句引導(dǎo)的非限制性定句從句/由由where, when引導(dǎo)的定語從句引導(dǎo)的定語從句精選課件86、It +謂語謂語+時間段時間段 +before +主語主語 +謂語謂語(before引導(dǎo)的是時間狀語從句）引導(dǎo)的是時間狀語從句）7、When/ So long as/ As long as/ Once +從句，從句，+主句（從句也可放在主句（從句也可放在主句之后）主句之后）精選課件9 8、No sooner + had

5、+主語主語 +donethan +主語主語 + did 9、倍數(shù)表達句型倍數(shù)表達句型 倍數(shù)倍數(shù)+more than,倍數(shù)倍數(shù)+as much as. 10、形容詞、副詞、名詞形容詞、副詞、名詞 + as/though + 主語主語 +謂語謂語 +主句主句精選課件10句式多變化句式多變化 要抓住英語高考作文得高分的要抓住英語高考作文得高分的”關(guān)鍵點關(guān)鍵點”,”,就需要把好增加句子復(fù)雜性和使用高級詞就需要把好增加句子復(fù)雜性和使用高級詞匯這兩道關(guān)。匯這兩道關(guān)。 （1 1）句式要有變化。）句式要有變化。改變句子的開頭方式，改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地以主語開頭，接著是謂語，賓不要一味地以主語開頭，接

6、著是謂語，賓語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z放在語，最后再加一個狀語?？梢园褷钫Z放在句首，或用分詞作狀語等。句首，或用分詞作狀語等。精選課件11 原文原文 We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. 修正修正 Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.精選課件12 原文原文 The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.

7、修正修正 Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.精選課件13 (2) (2) 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要在整篇文章中，避免只使用一兩個句式，要靈活運用諸如到裝句、強調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分靈活運用諸如到裝句、強調(diào)句、主從復(fù)合句、分詞狀語從句等。詞狀語從句等。 強調(diào)句強調(diào)句 原文原文 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. 修正修正 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was

8、our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.精選課件14 由由what等引導(dǎo)的從句，此處的等引導(dǎo)的從句，此處的what相當(dāng)于相當(dāng)于中文中的中文中的“所所 ”，有很強的概括，如：，有很強的概括，如： 原文原文 We had to stand here to catch offender. 修正修正 What we had to do was ( to ) stand there, trying to catch the offender.精選課件15 由由with或或 without引導(dǎo)的短語。如：引導(dǎo)的短語。如：He sat i

9、n a chair with a newspaper in the hand. 分詞短語如：分詞短語如：Satisfied with the result, he dicided to go on with a new experiment.精選課件16 倒裝句倒裝句 Only in this way can we achieve our goal. Never before have I seen such a wonderful film. 省略句省略句 If so, victory will be ours. You can make some changes wherever nece

10、ssary.精選課件17 對比，這在中文中也是常使用的方法如對比，這在中文中也是常使用的方法如 Failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is. When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed.精選課件18 (3) (3) 通過分句和合句，增強句子的連貫性通過分句和合句，增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。和表現(xiàn)力。 原文原文 He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. 修正修正 He

11、 stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.精選課件19 原文原文 We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. 修正修正 After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.精選課件20精選課件212007年上海市中考寫

12、作題：年上海市中考寫作題： Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)”. ( ( 以以“爸爸爸爸 / / 媽媽的故事媽媽的故事”為題寫一篇不少為題寫一篇不少于于6060個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。) ) （ 注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）精選課件22我的父親母親我的父親母親 先中文構(gòu)思先中文構(gòu)思 盡量避免復(fù)雜的詞句盡量避免復(fù)雜的詞句 將中文翻譯成英文將中文翻譯成英文 加入適當(dāng)

13、的連詞，組成文章加入適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，組成文章 注意全文用過去式寫作注意全文用過去式寫作精選課件23關(guān)于職業(yè)的單詞關(guān)于職業(yè)的單詞 scientist 科學(xué)家科學(xué)家 detective偵探偵探 fisherman 漁夫漁夫 fire fighter 消防員消防員 journalist 新聞記者新聞記者 lawyer 律師律師 barber 理發(fā)師理發(fā)師 singer歌手歌手 engineer 工程師工程師 精選課件24 worker工人工人 painter畫家畫家 writer/author 作家作家 businessman 商人商人 pilot 飛行員飛行員 dentist牙醫(yī)牙醫(yī) nurse護士護

14、士 accountant 會計會計 waiter/waitess服務(wù)員服務(wù)員 librarian圖書管理員圖書管理員 surgeon 外科醫(yī)生外科醫(yī)生 精選課件25 pharmacist藥劑師藥劑師 anesthetist 麻醉師麻醉師 manager經(jīng)理經(jīng)理 governor政府官員政府官員 President總統(tǒng)總統(tǒng) policeman 警察警察 policewoman 女警察女警察 waiter 服務(wù)員服務(wù)員 waitress 女服務(wù)員女服務(wù)員 driver 司機，駕駛員司機，駕駛員精選課件26真題舉例真題舉例 1）A Story about My Parent; 2) In mums

15、family, there were seven people: mums parents, mums two brothers and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker; 3) At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters wou

16、ld go home to help their mother with the housework. For example, they helped to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.精選課件27 My mum was born in a small village. In her family, there were seven people: mums parents, mums two brothers

17、and two sisters and mum. When mum was young, her father was a doctor in the small village and her mother was just a worker. At that time, for lack of TV and computer, everyday after school mum along with her brothers and sisters would go home to helped their mother with the housework. For example, t

18、hey help to make supper or wash clothes. Mum told me that though the life at that time was very hard, she felt happy.精選課件28比較型作文寫作比較型作文寫作 常用詞組常用詞組: Prefer A to B I show my strong preference to A. Compared with A, I shed more light on B. In comparison with A, I find that B is more.精選課件29文章層次文章層次 1 1、

19、開啟段落，指出自己的選擇結(jié)果。、開啟段落，指出自己的選擇結(jié)果。 2 2、列出原因，將一些可比項進行比較。橫、列出原因，將一些可比項進行比較。橫向與縱向。向與縱向。 3 3、總結(jié)、總結(jié)精選課件30開啟段落開啟段落 In facing the high school entrance examination, we have to make choices about which school to attend. Between the two choices, I will choose. The reason for that is are as following. 精選課件31學(xué)會對比學(xué)

20、會對比 南方大學(xué)南方大學(xué): :學(xué)費學(xué)費8000/8000/年年 招生招生2020人人 無優(yōu)惠政策無優(yōu)惠政策 北方大學(xué)北方大學(xué): :學(xué)費學(xué)費5000/5000/年年 招生招生1010人人 加加2020分優(yōu)惠分優(yōu)惠 選擇南方：選擇南方：1 1、雖然學(xué)費貴，但是招生人數(shù)比北、雖然學(xué)費貴，但是招生人數(shù)比北方的多；方的多；2 2、自己是南方人，適合南方的生活，、自己是南方人，適合南方的生活，離家近。離家近。 選擇北方：選擇北方：1 1、學(xué)費便宜；、學(xué)費便宜；2 2、有加分政策；、有加分政策；3 3、可以體驗不同的學(xué)習(xí)生活，學(xué)會獨立?？梢泽w驗不同的學(xué)習(xí)生活，學(xué)會獨立。精選課件32如何轉(zhuǎn)折如何轉(zhuǎn)折 Thou

21、gh the tuition is higher in the southern University, yet I prefer the ways of living here in the south. The Northern University offers an additional 20 scores. However, I still have a strong inclination to the Southern University.精選課件33如何結(jié)尾如何結(jié)尾 Concerning the reasons above, I would not hesitate to choose. In conclusion, concerning the convenience, the tuition and the other reasons, I will choose. In all, to conclude, to put all the reason together,精選課件34上海上海2002年的中考英語作文年的中考英語作文根據(jù)英文提示，以根據(jù)英文提示，以“我的心愛之物我的心愛之物”為題寫話，為題寫話，不少于不少于5050個詞。內(nèi)