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1、書面表達止土六步走六步走 ”指的是：一審、二列、三擴、四連、五美、六抄。一審 審文體、要求、人稱、時態(tài)、內容 ( 主題二列列提綱 ,確定文章框架 ,列全要點三擴 擴寫句子在主的基礎上添枝加葉四連連句成文 ,句子與段落之間適當加入連接詞五美美化文章 , 使用修飾詞、復合句、諺語、俗語等六抄 書寫工整，卷面整潔1仔細審題，切忌急于下筆。對于所提供的材料要認真分析，反復推敲，抓住要點，掌握大意。在審題過 程中應大概確定寫作目標、文章格式、體裁等。2考生應綜合分析所提供的語言信息和語言材料，找出其內在聯(lián)系，把它們有機地組織起來，編擬出要點 提綱。3盡量使用自己最熟悉、最有把握的句型和短語表達，但也要盡

2、量靈活變通，使用多種句型句式，避免重 復、單調。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊?造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。4用英語思維和表達，切忌漢語式英語。5行文要連貫，語句要通順，層次要清楚。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此考生應盡量使用一 些表示并列、遞進、轉折、總結等的過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。6通讀文章，檢查改錯。作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據錯誤多少來扣 分。因此，考試時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。 檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手：(1) 查格式。特別是應用文的格式，如書信、

3、通知等，注意檢查各要素是否齊全。(2) 查時態(tài)。檢查通篇文章時態(tài)是否正確，特別是從句中的時態(tài)一致問題。(3) 查句式。看句子成分是否完整、語序是否正確等(如賓語從句的語序 )；看語言表達是否流暢，切忌將題目13要求中的內容逐句譯成英語。(4) 查動詞?？粗^語動詞時態(tài)是否使用得當、主謂是否一致等。(5) 查習語、搭配?？醋魑闹惺褂玫牧曊Z、搭配是否符合英語表達習慣等。(6) 查單詞拼寫、標點符號和大小寫。尤其要注意檢查動詞的過去分詞拼寫形式、名詞的單復數(shù)形式，檢查 書寫是否規(guī)范，有無拼寫、標點等筆誤。觀點類作文觀點話題類寫作常用短語和句型In my opinion/view/I think 我認為

4、In a word 總之Some students think/believe that. while the others think/believe. 些學生認為 而另一些認為 First. Second. Third.第一第二第三It is very important for us to do sth. 對我們來說做某事很重要。Every adva ntage has its disadva ntage .有利就有弊。On the one hand. on the other hand.一方面另一方面 As far as I know 據我所知Nowadays, it is com m

5、on to. Many people like. because. Besides. 現(xiàn)在，很普遍，許多人喜歡 因為另外(而且)Man is now facing a big problem. which is becoming more and more serious.人類正面臨著一個嚴重的問題 這個問題變得越來越嚴重。What's more 而且，此外Most important of all. 最重要的是Why.? The first reason is that. The second reason is. The third is. 為什么 ？第一個原因是 第二個原因是第三

6、個原因是I fully agree with that, because.我完全同意這種觀點 (陳述)，因為However, from a personal point of view, I find. 然而，就我個人而言，我發(fā)現(xiàn) 寫作訓練1.假如你們學校要開展“ 創(chuàng)建和諧校園(to build a harmonious campus )”的活動，請根據提示寫一篇倡議書，號召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園而努力。請根據以下要點提示以“Howto Build a Harmonious Campus 為”題寫一篇短文。寫作要點： 1. 學校像我們的家，應該努力創(chuàng)建和諧校園；2.努力學習； 3.與他人友好相處；

7、 4.保持校園干凈 整潔，不亂扔垃圾；5應該盡最大努力使我們的學校美麗。注意：1詞數(shù)100詞左右。2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名?！緦懽髦笇А块_頭：引出話題1.學校就像我們的豕(is like our home )2.我們應該努力創(chuàng)建和諧校園(try best to build a harmonious campus )正文：如何創(chuàng)建和諧校園并提出建議1.學生應努力學習( work hard, improve )2.對別人友好，尊重老師，與他人友好相處 (be friendly to , respect get on well with )3.保持學校干凈整潔，不亂扔垃圾 (shouldnt

8、throitter around)結尾：總結全文盡最大的努力使我們的學校美麗(do our best to make our schoobeautiful)【參考范文】How to Build a Harmonious CampusOur school is like our home. So we should try our best to build a harm onious campus.First of all, the students in our school should wo rk hard at our lessons. After school, we' d

9、better take part inkinds of activities to help improve our health and study. Then we should be friendly to one another. We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates. Thirdly, it is our duty to keep the school yard clea n andtidy. We shouldn ' t throw litter around or pick f

10、lowers.Please do our best to make our school beautiful.2.隨著生活水平的提高，人們越來越關注健康。下周你校英語俱樂部將舉行一次以“ Living a Healthy Life為主題的英語演講比賽，假如李芳要參加演講比賽，請你以李芳”的名義寫一篇演講稿。參考要點：1.飲食(好的飲食習慣、多吃蔬菜水果)；2.運動(騎自行車、打球 )；3.要求：1.從不同的角度談論；2.100詞左右，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱?！緦懽髦笇А块_頭：引出話題健康生活很重要(It ' s important )正文：闡述學英語的

11、好方法1.養(yǎng)成良好的飲食習慣，多吃蔬菜水果(vegetables and fruit)2.作息：保證足夠的睡眠，合理安排時間，早睡早起(eno ugh sleep， go to bed early and get upearly)3.衛(wèi)生：勤洗手，不隨意丟垃圾，勤打掃房間，保持空氣清新( wash hands, litter， keep the air fresh )。結尾：總結話題我們生活得越健康，我們就會感到越開心(thehealthier.the happier.)【參考范文】Livi ng a Healthy LifeHello, every on e. I' m Li Fan

12、 g. It' s nice to give a speech about livi ng a healthy life .It' shealthy life.First of all, we need to form good eating habits. We' d better eat more vegetshOUriaind frtihaWetoo much meat or sugar.Secon d, it' s importa nt for us to have eno ugh sleep. So we should pla n our time c

13、arefully so that we can go tobed early and get up early.Last, keep ing clea n is also importa nt. We must wash our hands ofte n so that we can preve nt some diseasesfrom spreadi ng. We should n't drop litter everywhere. What' s more, it' s necessary for us to clean our r(day. We can ope

14、n the win dows to keep the air fresh.In a word, the healthier life we live, the happier we will feel.記敘說明類寫作記敘說明類寫作常用句型How time flies !時光飛逝!I really had a good time today.我今天過得很愉快。I've learned a lot from it.我從中學到了很多。I will remember it forever. 我永遠不會忘記的。Today, I went to.今天，我去 Although we were tir

15、ed, we were still very happy.雖然我們很累，但是我們很高興。寫作訓練1假如你叫李華，是一名中學生，想申請做“ 2022年北京冬奧會”的志愿者。對方要求你用英語寫一篇短文,介紹自己的基本情況。短文應包括下列的全部內容。提示： How old are you and where are you from?(2) What ' s your hobby and what are you good at?(3) How can they connect with you?要求：1.語言表達準確，語意通順、連貫；2書寫工整、規(guī)范；3根據所給內容和參考詞匯，可適當發(fā)揮；

16、注意：1詞數(shù)：100詞左右；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名?！緦忣}指導】細讀所給文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 本文要求寫一篇自我介紹，故文體為說明文，應用第一人稱，介紹自己的目前情況用一般現(xiàn)在時，介紹 過去的事情，用一般過去時。詞數(shù)100詞左右。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。要點提示素材串聯(lián)開頭：弓1出話題我想要做志愿者(1 d like to be a volu nte正文：介紹情況1.出生年月，出生地，學習情況(be born, work hard at2.愛好：讀英語小說，收集郵票(reading English novels and collecting stamps)3.特

17、長：電腦和央文與作(do well in computer andEnglish writing )4.獲獎：央語比賽第一名(got the first place )結尾：給出聯(lián)系方如果你想要了解我的更多情況，請聯(lián)系(get in touch式，表示感謝with me)【參考范文】Dear Editor,m quite pleHow are you? rd like to be a volun teer duri ng the Olympic Win ter Games in 2022.1 to you to in troduce myself.I ' m a middle scho

18、ol boy born in February, 2003. My birth place, Zhangjiakou, is a very beautiful city in He bei Province. I work hard at my lessons while at school. Meanwhile, I have many hobbies in my spare time. I like reading English novels and collecting stamps. Also, I do well in computer and English writing. I

19、 was very lucky to have got the first place in the En glish con test in our school in 2017.If you ' d like to know more about me, you can get in touch with me aihua.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua真題訓練如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式共享單車(bike-sharing)，它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞,但同時也引發(fā)了一些問題。請你根據提示以"Bike-sharing "為題寫一篇英語短文，表

20、達自己的看法和建議。1. 短文應包括以上要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名及地名；3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))?！緟⒖挤段摹縏oday, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.It ' s known that it has many advantages. So it' s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it

21、s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. Therewill be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it ' s helpful to people' s health.However, it also brings some problems. For

22、example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stole n.In my opinion, every one should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environmen

23、t will be more beautiful.假如你是李華，你們學校正在進行課堂教學改革，經過一段時間的適應，同學們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請你根據所給提示以 The Changes in Class "為題目，用英語寫一篇 100詞左右的 文章給教務處，談談你的感受和想法，開頭和結尾已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。要求：1.短文應行文連貫、條理清晰、段落分明、書寫工整；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名和地名等信息；3. 文章必須包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作適當發(fā)揮。The Chan ges in ClassYour feeli ngsin terest ing and

24、 livelyope n and freetell stories play games listen to musicget more kno wledgestudy and think by ourselves discuss in groupsshow ourselves【參考范文】Thanks for givi ng us stude nts a cha nee to express ourselves about how we study in class.Now our classes are ope n and free. All of our classmates feel t

25、he classes are in terest ing and lively as we ofte n tell stories and play games. Therefore, we can not only learn but also have fun. The teachers often use the computer in class. We can lear n more by liste ning to music and watchi ng videos. Our teachers give us eno ugh time to study and think by

26、ourselves to develop our ability of in depe ndent study. We also have more cha nces to discuss in groups freely so that we can lear n how to com muni cate with each other and lear n from each other. Sometimes we even show ourselves in front of the whole class. And we can ask questions during or afte

27、r class freely.In a word, I am glad to see the good cha nges in class. We can get more kno wledge and make great progress easily.假如現(xiàn)在是2116年，你是Kate，生活在火星上。你的朋友Jim現(xiàn)在在地球上，他即將來火星生活。請你用英語寫一封信，向他介紹你在火星的生活。1. 總詞數(shù)100左右，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 信中須涉及上述幾個方面的內容，并要求合理想象，適當發(fā)揮，使意思表達更加完整?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Jim,Now, I ' m

28、writing a letter to you on Mars. It'Ito reoHyiwMaderfI think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on earth. We have online schoolsin stead of real on es. We have less ons, do our homework, take exams and talk to teachers and classmates throughthe computers connected to

29、 an interplanetary network at home. It' s not so crowded here so we have more spaclive. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is verybeautiful. There are gree n trees and fresh flowers everywhere, and there is no polluti on here. We have supe

30、rmarkets in our n eighbourhood. They make our life more convenient.YoursKate四家鄉(xiāng)鹽城正在創(chuàng)辦新型的科技之城。鹽城已經舉辦了好幾場科技產品展，現(xiàn)在將舉辦2017年的科技展，請你根據下表的提示內容，結合自己對科技展的看法，為鹽城晚報寫一篇英文版的報道?；顒幽康臑榱俗尭嗟娜肆私饪萍几淖兩钭⒁馐马椈顒觾热?. 本次科技展將持續(xù)1個月。2. 設計國際機器人展、手機展和4D電視展3. 可以參與電子游戲（失重籃球賽，觀看火星電影等，發(fā)揮1 2 點）孩子免費成人20元到展有小禮物你的觀點自由發(fā)揮2 3點寫作要求：1 要點齊全，可

31、適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2 .詞數(shù)100左右，條理清晰，語意連貫，字跡工整?！緟⒖挤段摹縄n order to let more people lear n more about how scie nee and tech no logy has cha nge people' s lives, we wilhold a 2017 Science And Tech no logy Exhibiti on in the Science Museum.This exhibiti on will last for a mon th, coveri ng the intern ati onal

32、 robot show, mobile phone show and 4-D TVshow, and so on. Of course, you can take part in the computer games, such as low-gravity basketball matches,watch ing the films on Mars. You can also watch robots help people solve the problems and how n ewly-type mobile phones work. The price is free for chi

33、ldren and 20 yuan for per adult. You can get a gift if you come here.Our hometow n Yan che ng is creat ing a new type of Science and Tech no logy City. I am sure you will lear nmore about the developme nt of modern scie nce and tech no logy from this great exhibiti on. And we will certai nly make a

34、contribution to our city in the future .五今年年初，你們學校組織同學們學習八禮四儀”，并開展了一個 爭做文明市民”的活動。同學們在人際交往，社會公德方面都比以前有了很大進步。請你根據下表所提示的要點，以To be a civilized citizen為題，用寫一篇英語短文，介紹同學們現(xiàn)在的表現(xiàn)，并談談你對這個活動的看法。表現(xiàn)人際交往尊敬他人樂于助人誠信友善禮貌待人社會公德遵守交規(guī)寬容禮讓愛護環(huán)境（自擬一點）感受你對這個活動的看法（請考生自擬一點內容）1. 表達中必須包括所給要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

35、3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。【參考范文】To be a civilized citize nOur school orga ni zed an educati onal activity called“ To be a civilized citize nthe year. Alt the begi nningthe stude nts took part in this activity and they have improved a lot i n many ways.It ' s really nice to see the students being polite

36、now. They know it' s important to respect the old aiyoung. They also realize they should have good manners and be honest. As a result, they are always friendly to others. Moreover, they are willing to help people any time. When they are on the bus, they always give their seatsto people in n eed.

37、 They are always patie nt eno ugh to liste n to others about their joy and worries.Now the students don' t just care about themselves. They tell others it' s very necessary to follow tThey also protect the environment. They show great respect to others and treat people politely.I ' m so

38、happy ththe students have learnt a lot from this activity!最近一項調查表明，你校大約40%的學生有不吃早飯的習慣。請根據表格中的提示內容用英語用一篇題為 The most important meal of the day 的短文。原因1、晚上作業(yè)多，睡覺遲，不吃早飯可以多睡一會兒；2、有的家長工作忙，無暇準備早飯，給錢讓孩子自己解決;3、部分女生為了保持苗條身材不吃早飯。結果1、由于饑餓，上課注意力無法集中，聽課效果差；2、 有些冋學經常有胃痛(stomachache),身體健康受影響。個人看法(請考生自擬至少兩點看法)1把表格中的提

39、示內容表達完整，條理清晰，意思連貫。2.詞數(shù)100字左右。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3 句式規(guī)范，字跡工整，表達中不得提及考生所在學校和個人真實姓名?！緟⒖挤段摹縏he most importa nt meal of the dayA recent survey done in our school shows that n early 40 perce nt of the stude nts do not eat break fast, which should catch our atte nti on.According to the survey, some students don&

40、#39; t have breakfast to have a few extra minutes in bed because theyhave too much homework and stay up too late. Others are given money to buy food themselves because their parents are too busy with their own work to spare any time to prepare breakfast for them. Some girls want to stay slim and oft

41、e n go to school without breakfast.Without havi ng breakfast, many stude nts cannot pay atte ntio n to what the teachers say in class and do badly intheir lessons. What' s worse, some students even suffer from stomachache and their health is worrying.In fact, breakfast is the most importa nt mea

42、l in a day because it provides our body with much en ergy. Having a proper breakfast not only makes us energetic and healthy but also helps us avoid overeating. So, we should start our day with a regular breakfast.七?請你以"Less stress, better life為題，根每個人在生活中都要面對各種各樣的困難。該怎樣緩解自己的壓力呢 據下表內容寫篇演講稿。Stres

43、s人們會因為困難覺得失望、疲憊或者憂傷，承受著巨大的壓力1. 想一想最喜歡的人或事，不要總是想那些麻煩事Ways to relax2. 聽音樂、唱歌、鍛煉等3尋求幫助，和父母、老師或朋友多溝通 4.要求:1.語言表達準確、連貫、通順2短文應包括所有提示內容，可適當發(fā)揮3詞數(shù)100左右,文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹縇ess stress, better lifeLadies and gen tleme n,Thank you for your coming today. I ' mery glad that all of you are full of hope for the future. And yes, everyone has to face difficulties in his life. People will feel down, tired or unhappy, and they will be under much stress. We should know how to deal with the stress.Try to relax yourself. First, cha nge your mind.