2017-2018學(xué)年高中英語Unit1ArtSectionⅤWriting建議信教學(xué)

1、Un it 1 Art SectionVWriti ng建議信本單元的寫作任務(wù)是建議信。建議信是英語中常見的一種應(yīng)用文體，就是在你所寫的信中發(fā)表你的建議與看法。建議信除了遵循書信的格式之外，還要求在信中針對對方的問題， 給出你的觀點(diǎn)及解決辦法。一、基本結(jié)構(gòu)建議信一般采取“三段式結(jié)構(gòu)”。首段：表明意圖，陳述事由。主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。通常以firstly,sec on dly, thirdly或to beg in /startwith, the n, later,last but not least等依次陳述建議。結(jié)尾段：禮貌地

2、總結(jié)或表示期盼回復(fù)。二、注意事項(xiàng)1注意結(jié)構(gòu)。通常以“三段式”結(jié)構(gòu)行文。2.客觀地提出建議，針對對方的問題，給出你的觀點(diǎn)。3語言要委婉、精煉，同時要簡潔，表達(dá)清楚。三、增分佳句（一）首段常用句式1.rm glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to appreciate art well.很高興收到你的來信，詢問我如何很好地欣賞藝術(shù)。2.I am sorry you are having difficulty withyour physics classes.很遺憾你在物理學(xué)習(xí)方面有困難。3.I have l

3、earned thatyou have sometrouble in learning art andI would liketo offer you the following tips.我知道你在藝術(shù)學(xué)習(xí)方面有困難，因此我想給你提如下一些建議。（二）陳述建議句式1.If you feel thatit is stopping you from doing your best then you shouldtell him.寫作技法擔(dān)導(dǎo)XIEZUOJIFAZHIDAO2如果你覺得這阻止了你做得最好，那你應(yīng)該告訴他。2.It is only when students are not tryi

4、ng as hard as they canthat a teacheris forced to take acti on.Only wh en students are not trying as hard as they can is a teacher forced to3take acti on.只有當(dāng)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)不盡力的時候老師才會被迫采取措施。3.It is high time thatwe put an end to the trend.該是我們停止這一趨勢的時候了。4.It is time to take the advice of eating more fruit.該是采納多吃

5、水果的建議的時候了。5.In my opinion , the Great Wall should be protected.依我看，長城應(yīng)該得到保護(hù)。6.It is in deed a won derful idea and every one這真的是一個好主意而且每個人都希望它能成功。7.You should eat food with less fat .你應(yīng)該吃脂肪含量更少的食物。（三）結(jié)尾句式1.I do hope you will consider my tips/suggestions.真心希望你能考慮我的建議。2.I hope you will find these tips

6、helpful.題目要求假定你是李華，你的朋友張柯發(fā)e-mail給你，就買什么樣的英語詞典想聽聽你的建議。 請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語給他回一封e-mail，推薦他買電子詞典。1.方便、快捷；2.內(nèi)置多部詞典、能發(fā)音；3.能儲存資料；7參考詞匯：電子詞典electronic dictionary;內(nèi)存RAM第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵、審題1.確定體裁：本文為建議信；2.確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第二人稱；3.確定時態(tài)：主要使用一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時。二、構(gòu)思第一部分，提出建議一一買電子詞典。第二部分，給出該建議的理由：方便、快捷、能發(fā)音、能儲存資料。我希望這些建議對你來說有幫助。五步寫作規(guī)范WUBU

7、XIEZUOGUIFAN4第三部分，希望采納該建議。5第二步：核心詞匯想周全1.a_wise_choice2.Iead_to/c ontribute。_3.convenient4.as_soon_as_possible5.consult/look_up _6.meet_with7.a_number_of/a_variety_of8.why_not第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)1.對你來說，買一本電子詞典是一個明智的選擇。（It is+n. for sb. to do sth.）It_is_a_wise_choice_for_you_to_buy_an_electronic_dictiona _2.有幾

8、個因素促成了我的建議。（there be; which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）There are several factors which lead to my suggestion.3.無論你到哪里去，帶著電子詞典都很方便， 因?yàn)樗绕胀ㄗ值湫〉枚唷＃↖t is+adj.for sb. to do sth.; wherever引導(dǎo)的地點(diǎn)狀語從句；as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）It_is_convenient_for_you_to_carry_the_electronic_dictionary_wherever_you _as_it_is_much_smaller_than_the_common_one_

9、4.在電子詞典中，你會非?？斓氐玫侥闼胍摹ou_can_get_what_you_want_in _the_electronic_dictionary_as_soon一as possible._5.查閱這種字典很容易。（動名詞短語作主語；習(xí)語a piece of cake）Con sulti ng_this_ki nd_of_dictio nary_is_really_a_piece_of_cake._6.當(dāng)遇到有用的材料時， 你可以盡可能多地儲存下來。（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）When you meet with the useful material, you can store

10、 it as much as possibl _7.它能夠給你生動、清晰和正確的發(fā)音，就像一位老師站在你的旁邊。（主語+謂語+賓語；like）It can give you a vivid, clear and correct pronunciation just like a teach_ _r standing by you._明智的選擇促成 方便的 盡可能快 查閱（資料）遇到 很多為什么不（what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）6&這讓它從眾多的其他字典中脫穎而出。（make it outsta nding）That makes it outstanding from a variety of

11、 others._9.既然有這么多的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，為什么不買一個呢？（si nee引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句；why not）Since there are so many advantages, why not buy one _10.真心希望我的建議會對您有用。（do強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語動詞；主語+系動詞+表語）7I_do_hope_my_suggestions_will_be_useful_to_yo_第四步：句式升級造亮點(diǎn)1用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作定語改寫句2There_are_several_factors_leading_to_my_sugge _2.用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)作原因狀語及wherever狀語從句的省略形式改

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