中考英語作文專題復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)

1、Writing 中考作文指導(dǎo)中考作文指導(dǎo)Learning aims: 1. 學(xué)會(huì)作文審題，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。學(xué)會(huì)作文審題，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。2. 能夠根據(jù)要求列出關(guān)鍵詞，學(xué)會(huì)連詞成句。能夠根據(jù)要求列出關(guān)鍵詞，學(xué)會(huì)連詞成句。 3. 通過添加主題句、適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分等學(xué)會(huì)通過添加主題句、適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分等學(xué)會(huì)組句成篇。組句成篇。 中考英語寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中考英語寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 一檔文（一檔文（17-2017-20分）分）寫出全部內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚，寫出全部內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚，語言流暢，有句式變化，語言流暢，有句式變化，有復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，至少有復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，至少2-32-3個(gè)，個(gè)，基本無語法錯(cuò)誤，只有基

2、本無語法錯(cuò)誤，只有1-21-2個(gè)，個(gè)，或有少量由于使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或有少量由于使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)而引起的語法或拼寫錯(cuò)誤，而引起的語法或拼寫錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義理解。但不影響意義理解。 How can we write a good composition(作文作文)?第一步：第一步：都要都要認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作，明確寫作體體裁裁、要求要求和提示和提示要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)How can we write a good composition? (Have a discussion!)具體做法：具體做法：用筆勾畫用筆勾畫 假 如 你 是 王 林 。 你 所 在 學(xué) 校 的假 如 你 是 王 林 。 你 所 在 學(xué)

3、校 的 “ 愛 心 俱 樂 部愛 心 俱 樂 部(Helping Hands Club)”將吸收新會(huì)員。你想加入該俱將吸收新會(huì)員。你想加入該俱樂部，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格和圖片的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一封樂部，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格和圖片的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一封自薦信。自薦信。 姓名姓名王林王林性別性別男男本人特點(diǎn)本人特點(diǎn)身體健康；學(xué)習(xí)刻苦；樂于助人；身體健康；學(xué)習(xí)刻苦；樂于助人；與同學(xué)友好相處與同學(xué)友好相處“愛心愛心”表表現(xiàn)現(xiàn)（見圖片）（見圖片）加入目的加入目的 1. 2. 1.要求：要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫；表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫； 2. 要點(diǎn)須包括表格和四幅圖片中的信息，要點(diǎn)須包括表格和四幅圖

4、片中的信息，但不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等；但不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等； 3. 表格中表格中“加入目的加入目的”一欄內(nèi)容由考生一欄內(nèi)容由考生自擬；自擬； 4. 詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：70左右。左右。第二步：第二步：列出寫作提綱（列出寫作提綱（Outline）。）。具體做法：具體做法：根據(jù)段落整理寫作要點(diǎn)根據(jù)段落整理寫作要點(diǎn)不要遺漏要不要遺漏要點(diǎn)！點(diǎn)！Write an OutlineIntroduction Main bodyConclusionI want to join 本人特點(diǎn)本人特點(diǎn) “愛心愛心”表現(xiàn)表現(xiàn)加入目的加入目的 看表格看表格看表格看表格看圖看圖自擬自擬I hope you will agre

5、e with me. 可以用英文或中文可以用英文或中文姓名姓名/性別性別易漏掉的易漏掉的要點(diǎn)！要點(diǎn)！自薦信自薦信What will you write？王林王林Who are you in this letter?人稱人稱: IWhats your purpose ? 加入該俱樂部加入該俱樂部時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主Thinking:Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard a

6、t my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. 扣分原因一扣分原因一詞數(shù)不夠！詞數(shù)不夠！Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to join the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work

7、 hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. And I can also do more for others. Introduction本人特點(diǎn)本人特點(diǎn)加入目的加入目的扣分原因二扣分原因二遺漏要點(diǎn)！遺漏要點(diǎn)！Write an OutlineIntroduction Main bodyConclusionI am a boy Id like to join 本人特點(diǎn)本人特

8、點(diǎn) “愛心愛心”表表現(xiàn)現(xiàn)加入目的加入目的I hope you will agree with me. 無法拿滿分！無法拿滿分！Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others. I get on well with my classmates If I join the club, I will be abl

9、e to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang Lin少了少了兩個(gè)兩個(gè)重要部分，扣重要部分，扣5-6分，只得分，只得9-10分！分！缺少缺少“愛心愛心”表現(xiàn)表現(xiàn)也缺少也缺少Conclusion“愛心愛心”表現(xiàn)表現(xiàn)(examples)Picture 1 helpwithhelp classmates with lessons我的我的I often help classmates with lessons. 看圖看圖Picture 2helpcross“愛心愛心”表現(xiàn)表現(xiàn)(examples)看圖看圖 hel

10、p old people cross the road I help old people cross the road on my way home.Picture 3“愛心愛心”表現(xiàn)表現(xiàn)(examples)看圖看圖give my seat to give my seat to people in need I often give my seat to people in need on a bus.“愛心愛心”表現(xiàn)表現(xiàn)(examples)看圖看圖Picture 4clean up the park help clean up the park I often help clean up

11、the park.“愛心愛心”表現(xiàn)表現(xiàn)(examples)1. I often help classmates with lessons.2. I help old people cross the road on my way home.3. I often give my seat to people in need on a bus.4. I often help clean up the park.ConclusionIll be glad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me.Dear Chairperson,I

12、am a boy student from Class1 Grade 9. Id like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hard at my lessons. I like helping others I get on well with my classmates .If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, I can do more for others. Yours Wang LinIll be gl

13、ad if I can join the club. I hope you will agree with me. and often help classmates with their lessons. On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always give my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park.不但要點(diǎn)完整了，詞數(shù)也夠了。不但要點(diǎn)完整了，詞數(shù)也夠了。寫作：寫作：第一步就是要第一步就是要認(rèn)真審題

14、認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作，明確寫作體裁體裁、要求要求和提示和提示要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)第二步就是要第二步就是要列出寫作提綱列出寫作提綱，根據(jù)，根據(jù)段落段落整理整理寫作寫作要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)。寫作前：寫作前： 確定確定人稱、時(shí)態(tài)人稱、時(shí)態(tài)寫作后：寫作后： ？Dear Chairperson,I am a boy student from class1 Grade 9. Id like be a member of the Helping Hands Club. I am healthy. I work hardly at my lessons. I like helping others. and often help cl

15、assmates with their lesson . On my way home, I often help old people cross the road. On a bus, I always gave my seat to people in need. Sometimes, I help to clean up the park. If I join the club, I will be able to make more friends. Besides, he can do more for others.Ill glad if I can join the club.

16、 I hope you will agree with me. Yours Wang Lin CtolessonsgiveIbe1分分其它六處錯(cuò)扣其它六處錯(cuò)扣2分分只得只得12分分作文中作文中應(yīng)避免應(yīng)避免的幾種常見的幾種常見語言錯(cuò)誤語言錯(cuò)誤：1.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤（扣分多，一個(gè)時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤扣分在時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤（扣分多，一個(gè)時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤扣分在1分左右）。分左右）。2. 中國式的英語（不正確的英文表達(dá)會(huì)讓中國式的英語（不正確的英文表達(dá)會(huì)讓整整句不得分句不得分）。）。3.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤及大小寫（單詞拼寫一定單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤及大小寫（單詞拼寫一定要要過關(guān)過關(guān)）。）。4. 介詞介詞, 代詞，非謂語動(dòng)詞或形容詞副詞的代詞，非謂語動(dòng)詞或

17、形容詞副詞的不正確使用（對(duì)單詞的不正確使用（對(duì)單詞的詞性詞性要要熟悉熟悉）。）。5. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)（名詞單復(fù)數(shù)（細(xì)心細(xì)心就可以避免的錯(cuò)）。就可以避免的錯(cuò)）。寫作：寫作：第一步就是要第一步就是要認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作，明確寫作體裁體裁、要求要求和提示和提示要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)第二步就是要第二步就是要列出寫作提綱列出寫作提綱，根據(jù)，根據(jù)段落段落整理整理寫作寫作要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)。寫作前：寫作前：確定確定人稱、時(shí)態(tài)人稱、時(shí)態(tài)寫作后：寫作后： 檢查檢查另外另外作文中書寫不規(guī)范，卷面不整作文中書寫不規(guī)范，卷面不整潔也是要失分的（中考中有潔也是要失分的（中考中有12分分的卷面整潔分的卷面整潔分，這兩分，這兩分不能丟！不能丟！

18、）。）。解決方法：解決方法：平時(shí)認(rèn)真規(guī)范書寫，少平時(shí)認(rèn)真規(guī)范書寫，少用或不用膠帶或修正液，盡量減少用或不用膠帶或修正液，盡量減少涂改。涂改。Lets Lets practice!practice!你將代表學(xué)校參加揚(yáng)州市中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，演講的題目是你將代表學(xué)校參加揚(yáng)州市中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，演講的題目是Learning to get along with our parents. Learning to get along with our parents. 請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下。 要求：要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；）表達(dá)清楚

19、，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（演講稿的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）詞左右（演講稿的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。 現(xiàn)象現(xiàn)象經(jīng)常跟父母發(fā)火，甚至幾天不講話經(jīng)常跟父母發(fā)火，甚至幾天不講話原因原因1 父母過分關(guān)注分?jǐn)?shù)父母過分關(guān)注分?jǐn)?shù) 2 我們我們措施措施（不少于三點(diǎn)）（不少于三點(diǎn)）1. 我們應(yīng)該和父母溝通我們應(yīng)該和父母溝通 2. 我們我們 3. 我們我們Lets enjoy our own compositions!Sample

20、 writing Good morning , ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is learning to get along with our parents . These days , most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents .We easily get angry for no reason and even dont talk to them for days. I think the causes are as follows .First , our parents only care about our marks and it