housework作文課件

1、簡單句簡單句l1. 主系表主系表 leg. I am a middle school student. He is fourteen.l2. 主謂主謂 leg. I ran fast.l3. 主謂賓主謂賓 leg. We will have dinner together.l4. 主謂賓賓補(bǔ)主謂賓賓補(bǔ) leg. We keep our classroom clean and tidy.簡單句簡單句+狀語短語狀語短語l1. 時(shí)間狀語時(shí)間狀語 leg. I am a middle school student now. He is fourteen this year.l2. 地點(diǎn)狀語地點(diǎn)狀語 l

2、eg. We will have dinner together at home.簡單句（主句）簡單句（主句）+狀語從句狀語從句l1. 時(shí)間狀語從句時(shí)間狀語從句 leg. My parents helped me a lot when I was in trouble.l2. 條件狀語從句條件狀語從句 leg. If you have any questions, please write to me. l3. 原因狀語從句原因狀語從句 leg. I like English best because it is interesting and fun.主句主句+賓語從句賓語從句l我認(rèn)為（我想

3、、我希望）我認(rèn)為（我想、我希望）leg. I think he is helpful and great.leg. I believe you will love this city.leg. I hope I can be a volunteer some day. 使用定語從句使用定語從句l我喜歡可以跟著跳舞的音樂。我喜歡可以跟著跳舞的音樂。leg. I love music I can dance to.l父母是我最愛的人。父母是我最愛的人。leg. My parents are the people who I love most.簡單句簡單句+連詞連詞+簡單句簡單句l1. 并列連接并

4、列連接 leg. I am a middle school student and I study in No. 1 Middle School.l2. 轉(zhuǎn)折連接轉(zhuǎn)折連接leg. I work hard at English but my English is not good enough.l3. 因果連接因果連接leg. He is good at English so I often ask him for help. 總結(jié)寫句子的方法總結(jié)寫句子的方法l簡單句簡單句l簡單句簡單句+狀語短語狀語短語l簡單句（主句）簡單句（主句）+狀語從句狀語從句l主句主句+賓語從句賓語從句l使用定語從句使

5、用定語從句l簡單句簡單句+連詞連詞+簡單句簡單句五、結(jié)合話題，寫作訓(xùn)練實(shí)例五、結(jié)合話題，寫作訓(xùn)練實(shí)例09年北京市中考英語寫作試題年北京市中考英語寫作試題l課外生活話題課外生活話題家務(wù)方面家務(wù)方面l某英文報(bào)紙就家務(wù)勞動（某英文報(bào)紙就家務(wù)勞動（Housework）話）話題征文，請你投稿。題征文，請你投稿。l每個(gè)家庭都有許多家務(wù)，人人都應(yīng)該學(xué)做每個(gè)家庭都有許多家務(wù)，人人都應(yīng)該學(xué)做過一些。談?wù)勀憬?jīng)常幫父母做哪些家務(wù)，過一些。談?wù)勀憬?jīng)常幫父母做哪些家務(wù)，有什么體會，并打算在暑假為家里做什么。有什么體會，并打算在暑假為家里做什么。l提示詞語：提示詞語：every family, lots of house

6、work, learn to do, help, parents, be/feel proud of詞匯的積累詞匯的積累l本話題在教材中的相關(guān)單元（八上）本話題在教材中的相關(guān)單元（八上）單句訓(xùn)練單句訓(xùn)練l1. 我做家務(wù)。（簡單句：主謂）我做家務(wù)。（簡單句：主謂） I do chores. l2. 我經(jīng)常做家務(wù)。（簡單句：主謂我經(jīng)常做家務(wù)。（簡單句：主謂+頻率狀語頻率狀語 +地點(diǎn)狀語）地點(diǎn)狀語） I do housework at home every day.l3. 我一星期洗兩次衣服。（簡單句：主謂我一星期洗兩次衣服。（簡單句：主謂+頻頻 率狀語）率狀語） I do the laundry

7、once a week. 單句訓(xùn)練單句訓(xùn)練l4. 我每天疊被子，在我起床后。（主謂我每天疊被子，在我起床后。（主謂+時(shí)間時(shí)間 狀語從句）狀語從句） I make my own bed after I get up at 6:30 every morning.l5. 如果我做更多家務(wù)，我父母下班后將更輕如果我做更多家務(wù)，我父母下班后將更輕松。松。 （條件狀語從句）（條件狀語從句） If I do more chores, my parents will be relaxed at home after their hard work.l6. 我喜歡做家務(wù)因?yàn)樗梢允刮野职謰寢屧谖蚁矚g做家務(wù)因?yàn)樗?/p>

8、可以使我爸爸媽媽在 家輕松。（原因狀語從句）家輕松。（原因狀語從句） I like / love / enjoy doing housework because it will make my parents relaxed at home. l7. 我希望分擔(dān)父母的辛苦工作。（賓語從句）我希望分擔(dān)父母的辛苦工作。（賓語從句） I hope I can share my parents hard work.單句訓(xùn)練單句訓(xùn)練l8. 對于我來說最簡單的家務(wù)對于我來說最簡單的家務(wù)-每天只花我每天只花我10分鐘掃地，使我和父母都非常開心。分鐘掃地，使我和父母都非常開心。 Spending 10 min

9、utes in sweeping the floor which is easy for me makes my parents and me very happy.單句訓(xùn)練單句訓(xùn)練寫作環(huán)節(jié)寫作環(huán)節(jié)l審題審題-中文小段中文小段-漢譯英漢譯英- 寫簡單句寫簡單句-連長句連長句-標(biāo)亮點(diǎn)標(biāo)亮點(diǎn)-文章升華文章升華-整體修改整體修改環(huán)節(jié)一：審題（定人稱、定時(shí)態(tài)）環(huán)節(jié)一：審題（定人稱、定時(shí)態(tài)）l人稱：第一人稱人稱：第一人稱l時(shí)態(tài)：必須使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)態(tài)：必須使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)；（可選擇穿插使用過去式或現(xiàn)時(shí)；（可選擇穿插使用過去式或現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)）在完成時(shí)）環(huán)節(jié)二：中文小文段（中文單句）環(huán)節(jié)二：中文小

10、文段（中文單句）l每個(gè)家庭都有許多家務(wù)。每個(gè)家庭都有許多家務(wù)。l人人應(yīng)該學(xué)做一些家務(wù)。人人應(yīng)該學(xué)做一些家務(wù)。l我經(jīng)常幫父母掃地、洗碗。我經(jīng)常幫父母掃地、洗碗。l我喜歡幫家長做家務(wù)，因?yàn)樗麄児ぷ髋蚁矚g幫家長做家務(wù)，因?yàn)樗麄児ぷ髋?、辛苦，下班后非常累。力、辛苦，下班后非常累。l我希望他們能放松并且高興。我希望他們能放松并且高興。l暑假就要到了，我打算學(xué)做飯，我相信暑假就要到了，我打算學(xué)做飯，我相信父母會以我為自豪。父母會以我為自豪。環(huán)節(jié)三：漢譯英環(huán)節(jié)三：漢譯英l1. Every family has a lot of housework. l2. We should learn to do s

11、ome housework. l3. I often help my mom and dad do some. l4. I can sweep the floor and clean the dishes. l5. I love helping my parents with the housework.環(huán)節(jié)三：漢譯英環(huán)節(jié)三：漢譯英l6. They work hard every day and are very tired after work. l7. I hope they can relax and be happy at home. l8. The summer vacation i

12、s coming, and I am going to learn to cook. l9. I believe my parents will be proud of me.環(huán)節(jié)四：連長句環(huán)節(jié)四：連長句l3+4 lI often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes.環(huán)節(jié)四：連長句環(huán)節(jié)四：連長句l5+6 lI love helping my parents with housework because they work hard every day and are ver

13、y tired after work.環(huán)節(jié)五：出亮點(diǎn)環(huán)節(jié)五：出亮點(diǎn)lEvery family has a lot of housework. In my opinion, teenagers are supposed to learn to do some housework. How about you? I often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes. I love helping my parents with housework because they wor

14、k hard every day and are very tired after work. 環(huán)節(jié)五：出亮點(diǎn)環(huán)節(jié)五：出亮點(diǎn)lI hope they can relax and be happy at home. The summer vacation is coming, and I am going to learn to cook. I believe my parents will be proud of me.環(huán)節(jié)六：文章升華環(huán)節(jié)六：文章升華lEvery family has a lot of housework. In my opinion, teenagers are suppo

15、sed to learn to do some chores. How about you? lI often help my mom and dad do some such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the dishes. I love helping my parents with chores because they work hard every day and are very tired after work. 環(huán)節(jié)六：文章升華環(huán)節(jié)六：文章升華lAs for their daughter, I am eager to share th

16、eir hard work and want them to share my happiness. So I will try my best to do more chores to make them relaxed and happy at home. lThe summer vacation is coming, and I am going to learn to cook. I believe my parents with be proud of me. Lets do housework now! Being helpful to our parents is fantast

17、ic. 環(huán)節(jié)七：修改文章環(huán)節(jié)七：修改文章課堂練習(xí)課堂練習(xí)l在和諧社會里，人與人之間的互幫互助已構(gòu)成我們生活中的重要組成部分。下周英國友好學(xué)校將來你校訪問，你校的英語俱樂部將舉行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”為主題的英語演講比賽。假如李智要參加演講比賽，請你以李智的名義用英語寫一篇演講稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示：1.幫助同學(xué)-友誼 2.幫助老人-幸福 3.幫助病人-快樂 4.幫助別人體會解析：解析：1.審題：本篇作文的題材為演講稿，要求寫一篇以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”為主

18、題的演講稿，語言要言簡意賅，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作時(shí)，注意語言要準(zhǔn)確，語篇上下連詞的使用，使行文連貫。2.寫作要點(diǎn)：（1）幫助同學(xué)：develop our friendship;(2)幫助老人：the meaning of pleasure;(3)幫助病人：happiness comes to us;(4)幫助別人體會：important in our life, get much, much better than receiving.3.重點(diǎn)短語及句型：help each other, helpwith,give a hand, as we know, in our life. 參考范文

19、參考范文Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful Hello, everyone. Im Li Zhi. Its nice to speak about help here. In our life we often help others and also get help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and other things, we can develop our friendship. If we give a hand to old peopl

20、e, we can understand the meaning of pleasure. As we know, patients need help most. When we help them, happiness comes to us. Helping others is very important in our life. I think we can get much when we help the people around us. As the saying goes, “Giving is much better than receiving.” Thank you

21、for your listening! 學(xué)生作文失分原因分析學(xué)生作文失分原因分析-內(nèi)容內(nèi)容： 1）偏題甚至離題如偏題甚至離題如: FriendMy friend My family lifeMy family v語法語法- 1）名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)前后不統(tǒng)一）名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)前后不統(tǒng)一 Exams are necessary because it helps improve ourselves in many ways. 2）時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂不一致）時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂不一致 Having family teachers are very common among students. 3）副詞位置或選用不當(dāng)）

22、副詞位置或選用不當(dāng) We also can do something for our parents to show our thanks . 4)表達(dá)隨意表達(dá)隨意,中國式英語比比皆是中國式英語比比皆是 There are a large number of tourists visit Shanghai every year.5）語言表達(dá)繁瑣或生硬）語言表達(dá)繁瑣或生硬 Ill try my best to study hard. I want to get good marks. (建議用建議用in order to 連接連接) To buy things on line makes our

23、 life more convenient.(用用Shopping on line) Endless homework lets me have little time to do things I like.-Endless homework always keeps me too busy to do things I like.-I have little time to do things I like because of endless homework.開頭開頭 必須簡明直接，亮出自己的必須簡明直接，亮出自己的觀點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn)，如，如提倡提倡什么，什么，支持支持什么，什么，反對反對什么什

24、么, ,也可以借用也可以借用社會現(xiàn)象社會現(xiàn)象引出自己觀點(diǎn)引出自己觀點(diǎn) 開頭的幾種方法開頭的幾種方法直接法 As we all know, fast food is bad for peoples health.I think it is necessary for middle school students to wear school uniforms. 間接法Our junior school life is both busy and enjoyable.(歸納法歸納法)Its time for us to leave middle school. In the past few ye

25、ars, I have learned a lot.(觸景生情法觸景生情法) 主體段主體段 4/5部分兩到三點(diǎn)論據(jù)(理由) 說服力 意思連貫性結(jié)構(gòu)層次性句式多樣性銜接詞得當(dāng)1/5部分生活感受感召力 簡潔明了細(xì)膩真實(shí)緊摳主題結(jié)尾結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)開頭、避免重復(fù)句型提升主題展望號召建議 感悟 教學(xué)生列提綱教學(xué)生列提綱 Is a family teacher necessarydepend on a family teacher-cant listen to teachers attentively in class-work less efficientlywaste moneyreasonswaste t

26、ime - take a lot of time of ones weekend-do the same kind of excises -have little time to review other subjectsSuggestions-work hardimprove ways of learning instead of having a family teacherconclusionMy view on exams be fair to everyoneto know how we learn /if we learn well/what we are poor at-chan

27、ge or improve our ways of study (teaching)Show our abilities/ win more confidence (become more confident)Important part of school life/ learn a lot from mistakes through examsnecessityconclusionrealize the importance of examsbe not everything收集寫作素材收集寫作素材vA:了解一些新聞人物，如劉翔、姚明等了解一些新聞人物，如劉翔、姚明等 B:積累生活中讓人難

28、忘、激動的事件積累生活中讓人難忘、激動的事件 C:關(guān)注社會熱點(diǎn)，如北京奧運(yùn)、上海世博等關(guān)注社會熱點(diǎn)，如北京奧運(yùn)、上海世博等 D:了解時(shí)事新聞了解時(shí)事新聞 E: 體會學(xué)生佳作中有效素材及出彩語句體會學(xué)生佳作中有效素材及出彩語句 E: 利用好手頭有效的教輔材料，英文報(bào)，選利用好手頭有效的教輔材料，英文報(bào)，選取好的議論文體裁、題材多樣的文章，選取取好的議論文體裁、題材多樣的文章，選取精彩語段或語句進(jìn)行背誦，積累好句，同時(shí)精彩語段或語句進(jìn)行背誦，積累好句，同時(shí)拓展學(xué)生思路拓展學(xué)生思路 常用的銜接詞常用的銜接詞1 1、引出文章引出文章： nowadays , It is adj.to do 、I thi

29、nk, as we all know2、承接上文：承接上文：also/too、 of course、in fact、in other words 、besides、in addition、whats more、furthermore、more importantly3、轉(zhuǎn)折：、轉(zhuǎn)折： however , yet, though/although ,but, 4、舉例舉例：for example (跟句子）跟句子）,such as（短語）（短語）5、因果因果：therefore、That is to say.6、對比對比： while, on the other hand.7、總結(jié)：總結(jié)： fo

30、r these reasons, generally, in a word ，as the famous saying goes(如以下著名的諺語所說）如以下著名的諺語所說）介紹多種表達(dá)法介紹多種表達(dá)法 1)Reading is fun. 2)Reading is enjoyable. 3)Reading is a pleasure. 4)Reading makes us happy. 5)Reading brings /offers us a lot of fun. 6)It is fun to do some reading . 7)We can get great fun by read

31、ing.(from books)u9)Nothing can be more interesting and helpful than readingu8)Reading provides not only knowledge but also fun with us.u10)What other way can be more relaxing and enjoyable than reading!常用的諺語常用的諺語vA friend in need is a friend indeed. (寫朋友）寫朋友）vAll work and no play makes Jack a dull b

32、oy.（寫如何享受生活）（寫如何享受生活）vEarly to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.（養(yǎng)成生活好習(xí)慣）（養(yǎng)成生活好習(xí)慣）vWhere there is a will, there is a way.（寫志向（寫志向）vIts never too late to learn.(學(xué)習(xí)的重要性學(xué)習(xí)的重要性)v可以用以下短語引出可以用以下短語引出: As the famous saying goes寫作訓(xùn)練方法探討寫作訓(xùn)練方法探討1、多讀英文報(bào)英文報(bào)頭版文章, 對其中的出彩句子進(jìn)行中譯中譯英英等練習(xí)等練習(xí)

33、2、利用現(xiàn)有教輔材料中的有時(shí)代感、貼近學(xué)生生活的文章，多體會文章結(jié)構(gòu)、思路、寫作手法結(jié)構(gòu)、思路、寫作手法3、多讀學(xué)生佳作，學(xué)會欣賞欣賞，然后仿寫仿寫4、重視寫作訓(xùn)練過程、重視寫作訓(xùn)練過程：說、選、整、寫、改、寫：說、選、整、寫、改、寫5、 重視作文批改批改及評講（結(jié)構(gòu)和小錯(cuò)并重）評講（結(jié)構(gòu)和小錯(cuò)并重）6、因人而異、分層要求因人而異、分層要求7、分階段、分體裁訓(xùn)練、分階段、分體裁訓(xùn)練8、鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生搜集、整理寫過的作文、鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生搜集、整理寫過的作文 謝謝！謝謝！家庭家庭生活作文題材生活作文題材第一類第一類:（以下題材應(yīng)以（以下題材應(yīng)以記敘記敘為主）為主）vMy mother(father)（寫人）（

34、寫人）vMy flat(neighbourhood)（寫地方）（寫地方）vMy favourite present(寫物）寫物）vA birthday party/ A trip to(寫事情）寫事情）第二類第二類:（以下題材應(yīng)（以下題材應(yīng)夾敘夾議，夾敘夾議，著重寫自己著重寫自己感受）感受）vMy family lifevMy thanks to my mother(my father)第三類（以下題材應(yīng)以第三類（以下題材應(yīng)以議論議論為主）為主）vHow to spend pocket moneyvThe importance of breakfastvThe advantages of do

35、ing housework學(xué)校學(xué)校生活作文題材生活作文題材v第一類第一類:vMy teacher(friend, classmate)vMy schoolv第二類第二類:vMy hobby/My My dream/My school lifev第三類第三類:vMy view on examsvThe advantages of after-school activitiesvHomework/Sports/ReadingvIs it necessary to wear school uniformsvMy good (bad) study habitsv第四類第四類:vA football match/An interesting lesson社會熱點(diǎn)話題社會熱點(diǎn)話題vThe Olympics and I (2008 and I )vBeing a lovely Shanghainese for the World Expo in 2010vMy view on online games vMobile phones at sch