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1、英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文致謝怎么寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)畢業(yè)論文(thesis)一般被視為該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生所寫(xiě)的第一篇正規(guī)學(xué)術(shù)性論文,論文寫(xiě)作中的每個(gè)部分對(duì)該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)都是十分重要 的,當(dāng)然,"致謝"(acknowledgements)也不例外。學(xué)術(shù)性論文中的 "致謝" 是指作者以書(shū)面形式對(duì)幫助鼓勵(lì)過(guò)自己完成論文的人所表示的謝意,它是 論文的有機(jī)組成部分,一般置于題名頁(yè)(title page) 之后,獨(dú)立成篇、單另成頁(yè)。"致謝"不僅能反映論文的寫(xiě)作背景及作者學(xué)術(shù)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)態(tài)度和道 德,而且在一定程度上還能反映作者的學(xué)術(shù)水平。然而在指導(dǎo)學(xué)生論文寫(xiě) 作的過(guò)程中,筆者發(fā)現(xiàn),
2、不少學(xué)生難于寫(xiě)好"致謝"o一、問(wèn)題與分析學(xué)生論文"致謝"寫(xiě)作時(shí)存在的問(wèn)題主要表現(xiàn)在以下三個(gè)方面。1 .對(duì)象不明。例如:i am grateful tomy parents , without their support , i cannotfinish my thesis. i am also thankful to all my classmates andteachers , without their encouragement , i cannotgetdown towri?ting the thesis. and finally iwant t
3、o thank the foreign languagesdepartmentofxxx university forprovidingme a computer to typeand print outmy thesis.從對(duì)象分析,該"致謝”盡管提到了父母、同學(xué)和老師,但排名先后 順序不當(dāng),而對(duì)導(dǎo)師(supervisor)的指導(dǎo)卻只字不提??磥?lái),學(xué)生還不清楚"致謝"的主要對(duì)象應(yīng)該是誰(shuí)2 .文體混亂。例如itwas really a laborious task to accomplishmy thesis.manypeople gaveme support a
4、nd help in the process ofwriting thepa?per. i’d like first to givemy gratitude tomy dear teacher , pro.fxxx who generously gaveme her kind help and instructionsdur?ing thewhole process ofmy paper-writing. then i’d liketo givemymany thanks tomy classmateswho helpedme a lotwithmy i
5、n?formation collecting and paper-polishing.從文體上分析,此“致謝”混用了正式文體和非正式文體。如laborious , gratitude屬正式文體語(yǔ)言,短語(yǔ) a lot和縮合詞i’d屬非正式文體語(yǔ)言。另外在此用dear teacher 來(lái)表示"導(dǎo)師"也不當(dāng)或欠妥。可見(jiàn)學(xué)生尚未掌握"致謝”寫(xiě)作的文體。3 .內(nèi)容牽強(qiáng)。例如:iwould like to thankmy supervisor , mrs. xxx who helpedme draw an outline of the thesis and
6、 correctmy mistakes in thethesis. alsoiwant to thank allmy teachers. i learned a lot fromthem, notonlythe knowledge butalso theworking attitude. more?over, i thankmyclassmates aswel.l during the studywe becamegood friends, andspenthappy time. and finally i am grateful tomy parents, withouttheir supp
7、ort , i cannotaccomplishmy study.從內(nèi)容來(lái)看,本"致謝"除第一句外,其他句子都與撰寫(xiě)論文無(wú)關(guān),這表明學(xué)生不知道"致謝”內(nèi)容實(shí)質(zhì)是什么二、解決對(duì)策在對(duì)以上所存在問(wèn)題的分析過(guò)程中,筆者對(duì)論文"致謝"的寫(xiě)作也進(jìn)行了一些研究。英語(yǔ)科研論文寫(xiě)作概要一書(shū)中這樣指出:"in westernacademic circles , there are strict con?ventions aboutwhat shouldbe put in such an acknowledgement , and theway in w
8、hich it shouldbe written."1由此可見(jiàn),"致謝”寫(xiě)作是有一定規(guī)定的,因循慣例是關(guān)鍵,也是解決"致謝”寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題的對(duì)策。具體對(duì)策有以下三點(diǎn):1 .明確"致謝"的對(duì)象英語(yǔ)科研論文寫(xiě)作概要一書(shū)中還指出:"generallyspeaking,thanks are rendered only to those who have helped thewriteracademically.”2。具體說(shuō)來(lái),"致謝的對(duì)象是在研究過(guò)程以及在論文的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中、對(duì)作者的研究和成文起了一定的指導(dǎo)、幫助、支持和鼓勵(lì)作用的人員。”3
9、由此看來(lái),英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)士學(xué)位論文”致謝”的對(duì)象應(yīng)主 要是對(duì)論文進(jìn)行指導(dǎo)的導(dǎo)師,同時(shí)包括對(duì)論文提出過(guò)建議或意見(jiàn)的教師、 同學(xué)和朋友,以及對(duì)論文寫(xiě)作提供具體幫助的機(jī)構(gòu)和關(guān)心論文的作者家人 等。2 .采用"致謝”寫(xiě)作的文體”畢業(yè)論文或?qū)W士論文是一種研究性論文(research pa?per)。它的語(yǔ)氣、格調(diào)和格式不同于非正式文體畢業(yè)論文是一種正規(guī)作文,必須遵循正規(guī)作文的規(guī)范?!?英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文屬研究性論文,在寫(xiě)作上理 應(yīng)采用正式文體,"致謝”的文體也在其中,包括宜用學(xué)術(shù)性詞匯、采用單 個(gè)動(dòng)詞、使用單詞的全拼形式、多用平行句子。例如 :i also extend mysincere g
10、ratitude to professorxxx for hisconstant supportthroughoutmywork on this thesis and forhis in?formed guidance and advice.本句中使用的學(xué)術(shù)性詞匯有extend , sincere gratitude 和informed guidance ,這些詞匯的使用可使"致謝"嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、莊重。i ammost grateful to mysupervisor professor xxx withoutwhose support and patience this thes
11、iswould not have been com?pleted.此句中用了單個(gè)動(dòng)詞"completed",意思比較明確,在此則不可采 用短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞"carried out"。因?yàn)槎陶Z(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為非正式語(yǔ)言,"短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞往往 不止一種含義,而且常常難以確定,寫(xiě)專(zhuān)業(yè)論文時(shí)往往要用意義比較明確 的單個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替 "5carryout就有"實(shí)施(計(jì)劃)"、"舉行(義務(wù)、約定)”、等含義。iwould like to thank my supervisor professor xxxwithoutwhosemost hel
12、pful instructions and guidance , the completion ofthis thesiswould have been impossible.此句中的"iwould like to" 不宜縮寫(xiě)為"i’d like to" 。英 語(yǔ)縮寫(xiě)詞"一般用于非正式文體。"6iwould like to express my deep gratitude to my supervisorprofessorxxx for spendingmuch time reading and improvin
13、g thisthesis.finallyiwould also like to extendmy sincere thanks tomr. xxx forevaluatingmy thesis and offering valuable input.iwould like to give thanks tomy classmatexxxforfindingmemany valuable references in the course ofmywriting.止匕"致謝"中的三個(gè)句子相互平行,結(jié)構(gòu)相似,均采用的是 "iwould like to do sth. t
14、o sb. fordoing sth."這一句子結(jié)構(gòu)。帶有平行結(jié)構(gòu)的句子常用于正式文體7,以表強(qiáng)調(diào)。3 .掌握"致謝”內(nèi)容的實(shí)質(zhì)盡管英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文"致謝”的篇幅不大,但其內(nèi)容安排要求對(duì)其排列 有序、段落層次分明、理由實(shí)在具體篇例如:i am most grateful to mysupervisor professor xxx withoutwhosemosthelpful instructions andwarm encouragement this the?siswould nothave been finished.i am also grateful tom
15、y classmates xxx and xxx for theirtime spentwithme discussing questions concerned.2019-05-25英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)畢業(yè)論文(thesis) 一般被視為該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生所寫(xiě)的第一篇 正規(guī)學(xué)術(shù)性論文,論文寫(xiě)作中的每個(gè)部分對(duì)該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)都是十分重要 的,當(dāng)然,"致謝"(acknowledgements)也不例外。學(xué)術(shù)性論文中的 "致謝" 是指作者以書(shū)面形式對(duì)幫助鼓勵(lì)過(guò)自己完成論文的人所表示的謝意,它是 論文的有機(jī)組成部分,一般置于題名頁(yè)(title page) 之后,獨(dú)立成篇、"
16、;致謝"單另成頁(yè)。"致謝"不僅能反映論文的寫(xiě)作背景及作者學(xué)術(shù)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)態(tài)度和道 德,而且在一定程度上還能反映作者的學(xué)術(shù)水平。然而在指導(dǎo)學(xué)生論文寫(xiě) 作的過(guò)程中,筆者發(fā)現(xiàn),不少學(xué)生難于寫(xiě)好、問(wèn)題與分析 學(xué)生論文"致謝"寫(xiě)作時(shí)存在的問(wèn)題主要表現(xiàn)在以下三個(gè)方面。1 .對(duì)象不明。例如:i am grateful tomy parents , without their support , i cannotfinish my thesis. i am also thankful to all my classmates andteachers , withou
17、t their encouragement , i cannotgetdown towri?ting the thesis. and finally iwant to thank the foreign languagesdepartmentofxxx university forprovidingme a computer to typeand print outmy thesis.從對(duì)象分析,該"致謝”盡管提到了父母、同學(xué)和老師,但排名先后 順序不當(dāng),而對(duì)導(dǎo)師(supervisor)的指導(dǎo)卻只字不提。看來(lái),學(xué)生還不清楚"致謝"的主要對(duì)象應(yīng)該是誰(shuí)。2 .文體混亂
18、。例如:itwas really a laborious task to accomplishmy thesis.manypeople gaveme support and help in the process ofwriting thepa?per. i’d like first to givemy gratitude tomy dear teacher , pro.fxxx who generously gaveme her kind help and instructions dur?ing thewhole process ofmy paper-writing.
19、then i’d like to givemymany thanks tomy classmateswho helpedme a lotwithmy in?formation collecting and paper-polishing.從文體上分析,此“致謝”混用了正式文體和非正式文體。如laborious , gratitude 屬正式文體語(yǔ)言,短語(yǔ) a lot和縮合詞i’d屬非正式文體語(yǔ)言。另外在此用dear teacher 來(lái)表示"導(dǎo)師也不當(dāng)或欠妥。可見(jiàn)學(xué)生尚未掌握"致謝”寫(xiě)作的文體。3 .內(nèi)容牽強(qiáng)。例如:iwould lik
20、e to thankmy supervisor , mrs. xxx who helpedme draw an outline of the thesis and correctmy mistakes in thethesis. alsoiwant to thank allmy teachers. i learned a lot fromthem, notonlythe knowledge butalso theworking attitude. more?over, i thankmyclassmates aswel.l during the studywe becamegood frien
21、ds, andspenthappy time. and finally i am grateful tomy parents, withouttheir support , i cannotaccomplishmy study.從內(nèi)容來(lái)看,本"致謝"除第一句外,其他句子都與撰寫(xiě)論文無(wú)關(guān), 這表明學(xué)生不知道"致謝”內(nèi)容實(shí)質(zhì)是什么。二、解決對(duì)策在對(duì)以上所存在問(wèn)題的分析過(guò)程中,筆者對(duì)論文"致謝"的寫(xiě)作也進(jìn)行了一些研究。英語(yǔ)科研論文寫(xiě)作概要一書(shū)中這樣指出:"in westernacademic circles , there are stri
22、ct con?ventions aboutwhat should be put in such an acknowledgement , and theway in which it should be written."1 由此可見(jiàn),"致謝”寫(xiě)作是有一定規(guī)定的,因循慣例是關(guān) 鍵,也是解決"致謝”寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題的對(duì)策。具體對(duì)策有以下三點(diǎn):1 .明確"致謝"的對(duì)象英語(yǔ)科研論文寫(xiě)作概要一書(shū)中還指出:"generallyspeaking,thanks are rendered only to those who have helped thewr
23、iteracademically."。具體說(shuō)來(lái),"致謝的對(duì)象是在研究過(guò)程以及在論文的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中、對(duì)作者的研究和成文起了一定的指導(dǎo)、幫助、支持和鼓 勵(lì)作用的人員。"3由此看來(lái),英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)士學(xué)位論文"致謝”的對(duì)象應(yīng)主 要是對(duì)論文進(jìn)行指導(dǎo)的導(dǎo)師,同時(shí)包括對(duì)論文提出過(guò)建議或意見(jiàn)的教師、 同學(xué)和朋友,以及對(duì)論文寫(xiě)作提供具體幫助的機(jī)構(gòu)和關(guān)心論文的作者家人 等。2 .采用"致謝”寫(xiě)作的文體"畢業(yè)論文或?qū)W士論文是一種研究性論文(research pa?per)。它的語(yǔ)氣、格調(diào)和格式不同于非正式文體畢業(yè)論文是一種正規(guī)作文,必須遵循正規(guī)作文的規(guī)范。&qu
24、ot;4英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文屬研究性論文,在寫(xiě)作上理 應(yīng)采用正式文體,"致謝”的文體也在其中,包括宜用學(xué)術(shù)性詞匯、采用單 個(gè)動(dòng)詞、使用單詞的全拼形式、多用平行句子。例如 :i also extend my sincere gratitude to professorxxx for hisconstant supportthroughoutmywork on this thesis and forhis in?formed guidance and advice.本句中使用的學(xué)術(shù)性詞匯有extend , sincere gratitude 和informed guidance ,這些詞匯的使用
25、可使"致謝"嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、莊重。i ammost grateful to mysupervisor professor xxx withoutwhose support and patience this thesiswould not have been com?pleted.此句中用了單個(gè)動(dòng)詞"completed",意思比較明確,在此則不可采 用短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞"carried out"。因?yàn)槎陶Z(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為非正式語(yǔ)言,"短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞往往 不止一種含義,而且常常難以確定,寫(xiě)專(zhuān)業(yè)論文時(shí)往往要用意義比較明確的單個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替 "5carryo
26、ut就有"實(shí)施(計(jì)劃)"、"舉行(義務(wù)、約定)”、等含義。iwould like to thank my supervisor professor xxxwithoutwhosemost helpful instructions and guidance , the completion ofthis thesiswould have been impossible.此句中的"iwould like to"不宜縮寫(xiě)為"i’d like to" 。英語(yǔ)縮寫(xiě)詞"一般用于非正式文體。"6iw
27、ould like to express my deep gratitude to my supervisorprofessorxxx for spendingmuch time reading and improving thisthesis.iwould also like to extendmy sincere thanks tomr. xxx forevaluatingmy thesis and offering valuable input.finally , iwould like to give thanks tomy classmatexxx forfindingmemany
28、valuable references in the course ofmywriting.止匕"致謝"中的三個(gè)句子相互平行,結(jié)構(gòu)相似,均采用的是 "iwould like to do sth. to sb. fordoing sth."這一句子結(jié)構(gòu)。帶有平行結(jié)構(gòu)的句子常用于正式文體7,以表強(qiáng)調(diào)。3 .掌握"致謝”內(nèi)容的實(shí)質(zhì)盡管英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文“致謝”的篇幅不大,但其內(nèi)容安排要求對(duì)其排列 有序、段落層次分明、理由實(shí)在具體篇例如:i am most grateful to mysupervisor professor xxx withoutwhose
29、mosthelpful instructions andwarm encouragement this the?siswould nothave been finished.i am also grateful tomy classmates xxx and xxx for theirtimespentwithme discussing questions concerned.2019-05-25英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)畢業(yè)論文(thesis)一般被視為該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生所寫(xiě)的第一篇正規(guī)學(xué)術(shù)性論文,論文寫(xiě)作中的每個(gè)部分對(duì)該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)都是十分重要 的,當(dāng)然,"致謝"(acknowledgement
30、s)也不例外。學(xué)術(shù)性論文中的 "致謝" 是指作者以書(shū)面形式對(duì)幫助鼓勵(lì)過(guò)自己完成論文的人所表示的謝意,它是 論文的有機(jī)組成部分,一般置于題名頁(yè)(title page) 之后,獨(dú)立成篇、單另成頁(yè)。"致謝"不僅能反映論文的寫(xiě)作背景及作者學(xué)術(shù)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)態(tài)度和道 德,而且在一定程度上還能反映作者的學(xué)術(shù)水平。然而在指導(dǎo)學(xué)生論文寫(xiě) 作的過(guò)程中,筆者發(fā)現(xiàn),不少學(xué)生難于寫(xiě)好"致謝"o一、問(wèn)題與分析學(xué)生論文"致謝"寫(xiě)作時(shí)存在的問(wèn)題主要表現(xiàn)在以下三個(gè)方面。1 .對(duì)象不明。例如:i am grateful tomy parents , wit
31、hout their support , i cannotfinish my thesis. i am also thankful to all my classmates andteachers , without their encouragement , i cannotgetdown towri?ting the thesis. and finally iwant to thank the foreign languagesdepartmentofxxx university forprovidingme a computer to typeand print outmy thesis
32、.從對(duì)象分析,該"致謝”盡管提到了父母、同學(xué)和老師,但排名先后 順序不當(dāng),而對(duì)導(dǎo)師(supervisor)的指導(dǎo)卻只字不提。看來(lái),學(xué)生還不清楚"致謝"的主要對(duì)象應(yīng)該是誰(shuí)2 .文體混亂。例如itwas really a laborious task to accomplishmy thesis.manypeople gaveme support and help in the process ofwriting thepa?per. i’d like first to givemy gratitude tomy dear teacher , pr
33、o.fxxx who generously gaveme her kind help and instructionsdur?ing thewhole process ofmy paper-writing. then i’d liketo givemymany thanks tomy classmateswho helpedme a lotwithmy in?formation collecting and paper-polishing.從文體上分析,此“致謝”混用了正式文體和非正式文體。如laborious , gratitude屬正式文體語(yǔ)言,短語(yǔ) a lot和縮合詞
34、i’d屬非正式文體語(yǔ)言。另外在此用dear teacher 來(lái)表示"導(dǎo)師"也不當(dāng)或欠妥。可見(jiàn)學(xué)生尚未掌握"致謝”寫(xiě)作的文體。3 .內(nèi)容牽強(qiáng)。例如:iwould like to thankmy supervisor , mrs. xxx who helpedme draw an outline of the thesis and correctmy mistakes in thethesis. alsoiwant to thank allmy teachers. i learned a lot fromthem, notonlythe knowl
35、edge butalso theworking attitude. more?over, i thankmyclassmates aswel.l during the studywe becamegood friends, andspenthappy time. and finally i am grateful tomy parents, withouttheir support , i cannotaccomplishmy study.從內(nèi)容來(lái)看,本"致謝"除第一句外,其他句子都與撰寫(xiě)論文無(wú)關(guān),這表明學(xué)生不知道"致謝”內(nèi)容實(shí)質(zhì)是什么二、解決對(duì)策在對(duì)以上所存在問(wèn)
36、題的分析過(guò)程中,筆者對(duì)論文"致謝"的寫(xiě)作也進(jìn)行了一些研究。英語(yǔ)科研論文寫(xiě)作概要一書(shū)中這樣指出:"in westernacademic circles , there are strict con?ventions aboutwhat shouldbe put in such an acknowledgement , and theway in which it shouldbe written."1由此可見(jiàn),"致謝”寫(xiě)作是有一定規(guī)定的,因循慣例是關(guān)鍵,也是解決"致謝”寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題的對(duì)策。具體對(duì)策有以下三點(diǎn):1 .明確"致謝&qu
37、ot;的對(duì)象英語(yǔ)科研論文寫(xiě)作概要一書(shū)中還指出:"generallyspeaking,thanks are rendered only to those who have helped thewriteracademically.”2。具體說(shuō)來(lái),"致謝的對(duì)象是在研究過(guò)程以及在論文的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中、對(duì)作者的研究和成文起了一定的指導(dǎo)、幫助、支持和鼓勵(lì)作用的人員?!?由此看來(lái),英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)士學(xué)位論文”致謝”的對(duì)象應(yīng)主 要是對(duì)論文進(jìn)行指導(dǎo)的導(dǎo)師,同時(shí)包括對(duì)論文提出過(guò)建議或意見(jiàn)的教師、 同學(xué)和朋友,以及對(duì)論文寫(xiě)作提供具體幫助的機(jī)構(gòu)和關(guān)心論文的作者家人 等。2 .采用"致謝”寫(xiě)作的文
38、體”畢業(yè)論文或?qū)W士論文是一種研究性論文(research pa?per)。它的語(yǔ)氣、格調(diào)和格式不同于非正式文體畢業(yè)論文是一種正規(guī)作文,必須遵循正規(guī)作文的規(guī)范?!?英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文屬研究性論文,在寫(xiě)作上理 應(yīng)采用正式文體,"致謝”的文體也在其中,包括宜用學(xué)術(shù)性詞匯、采用單 個(gè)動(dòng)詞、使用單詞的全拼形式、多用平行句子。例如 :i also extend mysincere gratitude to professorxxx for hisconstant supportthroughoutmywork on this thesis and forhis in?formed guidance a
39、nd advice.本句中使用的學(xué)術(shù)性詞匯有extend , sincere gratitude 和informed guidance ,這些詞匯的使用可使"致謝"嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、莊重。i ammost grateful to mysupervisor professor xxx withoutwhose support and patience this thesiswould not have been com?pleted.此句中用了單個(gè)動(dòng)詞"completed",意思比較明確,在此則不可采 用短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞"carried out"。因?yàn)槎陶Z(yǔ)
40、動(dòng)詞為非正式語(yǔ)言,"短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞往往 不止一種含義,而且常常難以確定,寫(xiě)專(zhuān)業(yè)論文時(shí)往往要用意義比較明確 的單個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替 "5carryout就有"實(shí)施(計(jì)劃)"、"舉行(義務(wù)、約定)”、等含義。iwould like to thank my supervisor professor xxxwithoutwhosemost helpful instructions and guidance , the completion ofthis thesiswould have been impossible.此句中的"iwould like t
41、o" 不宜縮寫(xiě)為"i’d like to" 。英 語(yǔ)縮寫(xiě)詞"一般用于非正式文體。"6iwould like to express my deep gratitude to my supervisorprofessorxxx for spendingmuch time reading and improving thisthesis.finallyiwould also like to extendmy sincere thanks tomr. xxx forevaluatingmy thesis and offering v
42、aluable input.iwould like to give thanks tomy classmatexxxforfindingmemany valuable references in the course ofmywriting.止匕"致謝"中的三個(gè)句子相互平行,結(jié)構(gòu)相似,均采用的是 "iwould like to do sth. to sb. fordoing sth."這一句子結(jié)構(gòu)。帶有平行結(jié)構(gòu)的句子常用于正式文體7,以表強(qiáng)調(diào)。3 .掌握"致謝”內(nèi)容的實(shí)質(zhì)盡管英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文"致謝”的篇幅不大,但其內(nèi)容安排要求對(duì)其排列 有
43、序、段落層次分明、理由實(shí)在具體篇例如:i am most grateful to mysupervisor professor xxx withoutwhosemosthelpful instructions andwarm encouragement this the?siswould nothave been finished.i am also grateful tomy classmates xxx and xxx for theirtime spentwithme discussing questions concerned.2019-05-25英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)畢業(yè)論文(thesis) 一般
44、被視為該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生所寫(xiě)的第一篇 正規(guī)學(xué)術(shù)性論文,論文寫(xiě)作中的每個(gè)部分對(duì)該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)都是十分重要 的,當(dāng)然,"致謝"(acknowledgements)也不例外。學(xué)術(shù)性論文中的 "致謝" 是指作者以書(shū)面形式對(duì)幫助鼓勵(lì)過(guò)自己完成論文的人所表示的謝意,它是 論文的有機(jī)組成部分,一般置于題名頁(yè)(title page) 之后,獨(dú)立成篇、"致謝"單另成頁(yè)。"致謝"不僅能反映論文的寫(xiě)作背景及作者學(xué)術(shù)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)態(tài)度和道 德,而且在一定程度上還能反映作者的學(xué)術(shù)水平。然而在指導(dǎo)學(xué)生論文寫(xiě) 作的過(guò)程中,筆者發(fā)現(xiàn),不少學(xué)生難于寫(xiě)好、問(wèn)題與分析
45、 學(xué)生論文"致謝"寫(xiě)作時(shí)存在的問(wèn)題主要表現(xiàn)在以下三個(gè)方面。1 .對(duì)象不明。例如:i am grateful tomy parents , without their support , i cannotfinish my thesis. i am also thankful to all my classmates andteachers , without their encouragement , i cannotgetdown towri?ting the thesis. and finally iwant to thank the foreign languages
46、departmentofxxx university forprovidingme a computer to typeand print outmy thesis.從對(duì)象分析,該"致謝”盡管提到了父母、同學(xué)和老師,但排名先后 順序不當(dāng),而對(duì)導(dǎo)師(supervisor)的指導(dǎo)卻只字不提??磥?lái),學(xué)生還不清楚"致謝"的主要對(duì)象應(yīng)該是誰(shuí)。2 .文體混亂。例如:itwas really a laborious task to accomplishmy thesis.manypeople gaveme support and help in the process ofwr
47、iting thepa?per. i’d like first to givemy gratitude tomy dear teacher , pro.fxxx who generously gaveme her kind help and instructions dur?ing thewhole process ofmy paper-writing. then i’d like to givemymany thanks tomy classmateswho helpedme a lotwithmy in?formation collecting an
48、d paper-polishing.從文體上分析,此“致謝”混用了正式文體和非正式文體。如laborious , gratitude 屬正式文體語(yǔ)言,短語(yǔ) a lot和縮合詞i’d屬非正式文體語(yǔ)言。另外在此用dear teacher 來(lái)表示"導(dǎo)師也不當(dāng)或欠妥??梢?jiàn)學(xué)生尚未掌握"致謝”寫(xiě)作的文體。3 .內(nèi)容牽強(qiáng)。例如:iwould like to thankmy supervisor , mrs. xxx who helpedme draw an outline of the thesis and correctmy mistakes in thethes
49、is. alsoiwant to thank allmy teachers. i learned a lot fromthem, notonlythe knowledge butalso theworking attitude. more?over, i thankmyclassmates aswel.l during the studywe becamegood friends, andspenthappy time. and finally i am grateful tomy parents, withouttheir support , i cannotaccomplishmy stu
50、dy.從內(nèi)容來(lái)看,本"致謝"除第一句外,其他句子都與撰寫(xiě)論文無(wú)關(guān), 這表明學(xué)生不知道"致謝”內(nèi)容實(shí)質(zhì)是什么。二、解決對(duì)策在對(duì)以上所存在問(wèn)題的分析過(guò)程中,筆者對(duì)論文"致謝"的寫(xiě)作也進(jìn)行了一些研究。英語(yǔ)科研論文寫(xiě)作概要一書(shū)中這樣指出:"in westernacademic circles , there are strict con?ventions aboutwhat should be put in such an acknowledgement , and theway in which it should be written.&
51、quot;1 由此可見(jiàn),"致謝”寫(xiě)作是有一定規(guī)定的,因循慣例是關(guān) 鍵,也是解決"致謝”寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題的對(duì)策。具體對(duì)策有以下三點(diǎn):1 .明確"致謝"的對(duì)象英語(yǔ)科研論文寫(xiě)作概要一書(shū)中還指出:"generallyspeaking,thanks are rendered only to those who have helped thewriteracademically."。具體說(shuō)來(lái),"致謝的對(duì)象是在研究過(guò)程以及在論文的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中、對(duì)作者的研究和成文起了一定的指導(dǎo)、幫助、支持和鼓 勵(lì)作用的人員。"3由此看來(lái),英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)士學(xué)位論
52、文"致謝”的對(duì)象應(yīng)主 要是對(duì)論文進(jìn)行指導(dǎo)的導(dǎo)師,同時(shí)包括對(duì)論文提出過(guò)建議或意見(jiàn)的教師、 同學(xué)和朋友,以及對(duì)論文寫(xiě)作提供具體幫助的機(jī)構(gòu)和關(guān)心論文的作者家人 等。2 .采用"致謝”寫(xiě)作的文體"畢業(yè)論文或?qū)W士論文是一種研究性論文(research pa?per)。它的語(yǔ)氣、格調(diào)和格式不同于非正式文體畢業(yè)論文是一種正規(guī)作文,必須遵循正規(guī)作文的規(guī)范。"4英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文屬研究性論文,在寫(xiě)作上理 應(yīng)采用正式文體,"致謝”的文體也在其中,包括宜用學(xué)術(shù)性詞匯、采用單 個(gè)動(dòng)詞、使用單詞的全拼形式、多用平行句子。例如 :i also extend my sincere
53、 gratitude to professorxxx for hisconstant supportthroughoutmywork on this thesis and forhis in?formed guidance and advice.本句中使用的學(xué)術(shù)性詞匯有extend , sincere gratitude 和informed guidance ,這些詞匯的使用可使"致謝"嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、莊重。i ammost grateful to mysupervisor professor xxx withoutwhose support and patience this th
54、esiswould not have been com?pleted.此句中用了單個(gè)動(dòng)詞"completed",意思比較明確,在此則不可采 用短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞"carried out"。因?yàn)槎陶Z(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為非正式語(yǔ)言,"短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞往往 不止一種含義,而且常常難以確定,寫(xiě)專(zhuān)業(yè)論文時(shí)往往要用意義比較明確的單個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替 "5carryout就有"實(shí)施(計(jì)劃)"、"舉行(義務(wù)、約定)”、等含義。iwould like to thank my supervisor professor xxxwithoutwhosemost he
55、lpful instructions and guidance , the completion ofthis thesiswould have been impossible.此句中的"iwould like to"不宜縮寫(xiě)為"i’d like to" 。英語(yǔ)縮寫(xiě)詞"一般用于非正式文體。"6iwould like to express my deep gratitude to my supervisorprofessorxxx for spendingmuch time reading and improving
56、 thisthesis.iwould also like to extendmy sincere thanks tomr. xxx forevaluatingmy thesis and offering valuable input.finally , iwould like to give thanks tomy classmatexxx forfindingmemany valuable references in the course ofmywriting.止匕"致謝"中的三個(gè)句子相互平行,結(jié)構(gòu)相似,均采用的是 "iwould like to do sth
57、. to sb. fordoing sth."這一句子結(jié)構(gòu)。帶有平行結(jié)構(gòu)的句子常用于正式文體7,以表強(qiáng)調(diào)。3 .掌握"致謝”內(nèi)容的實(shí)質(zhì)盡管英語(yǔ)畢業(yè)論文“致謝”的篇幅不大,但其內(nèi)容安排要求對(duì)其排列 有序、段落層次分明、理由實(shí)在具體篇例如:i am most grateful to mysupervisor professor xxx withoutwhosemosthelpful instructions andwarm encouragement this the?siswould nothave been finished.i am also grateful tomy
58、classmates xxx and xxx for theirtimespentwithme discussing questions concerned.2019-05-25英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)畢業(yè)論文(thesis)一般被視為該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生所寫(xiě)的第一篇正規(guī)學(xué)術(shù)性論文,論文寫(xiě)作中的每個(gè)部分對(duì)該專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)都是十分重要 的,當(dāng)然,"致謝"(acknowledgements)也不例外。學(xué)術(shù)性論文中的 "致謝" 是指作者以書(shū)面形式對(duì)幫助鼓勵(lì)過(guò)自己完成論文的人所表示的謝意,它是 論文的有機(jī)組成部分,一般置于題名頁(yè)(title page) 之后,獨(dú)立成篇、單另成頁(yè)。"
59、;致謝"不僅能反映論文的寫(xiě)作背景及作者學(xué)術(shù)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)態(tài)度和道 德,而且在一定程度上還能反映作者的學(xué)術(shù)水平。然而在指導(dǎo)學(xué)生論文寫(xiě) 作的過(guò)程中,筆者發(fā)現(xiàn),不少學(xué)生難于寫(xiě)好"致謝"o一、問(wèn)題與分析學(xué)生論文"致謝"寫(xiě)作時(shí)存在的問(wèn)題主要表現(xiàn)在以下三個(gè)方面。1 .對(duì)象不明。例如:i am grateful tomy parents , without their support , i cannotfinish my thesis. i am also thankful to all my classmates andteachers , without th
60、eir encouragement , i cannotgetdown towri?ting the thesis. and finally iwant to thank the foreign languagesdepartmentofxxx university forprovidingme a computer to typeand print outmy thesis.從對(duì)象分析,該"致謝”盡管提到了父母、同學(xué)和老師,但排名先后 順序不當(dāng),而對(duì)導(dǎo)師(supervisor)的指導(dǎo)卻只字不提??磥?lái),學(xué)生還不清楚"致謝"的主要對(duì)象應(yīng)該是誰(shuí)2 .文體混亂。例如it
61、was really a laborious task to accomplishmy thesis.manypeople gaveme support and help in the process ofwriting thepa?per. i’d like first to givemy gratitude tomy dear teacher , pro.fxxx who generously gaveme her kind help and instructionsdur?ing thewhole process ofmy paper-writing. then i’d liketo givemymany thanks tomy classmateswho helpedme a lotwithmy in?formation collecting and paper-polishing.從文體上分析,此“致謝”混用了正式文體和非正式文體。如laborious , gratitude屬正式文體語(yǔ)言,短語(yǔ) a lot和縮合詞i’d屬
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