仁愛版九年級上冊各單元作文寫作點撥

1、02仁愛版九年級上冊各單元作文寫作點撥+滿分范文大集合Unit 101假如學生雙語報社正在舉行以“ My Hometo wn ” 為主題的征文活動，請你用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)。 內(nèi)容包含以下要點：1.家鄉(xiāng)的名稱及地理位置；2.家鄉(xiāng)的人口及生活條件；3.你所了解的其他內(nèi)容。要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2.詞數(shù) 80 詞左右?！痉段膮⒖肌縈 y Hometow nM y h omet ow n is a village called M aoba Vi llage. It l ies in the west of Hubei. It has a po pu l at i on

2、 of 5,000. It is a b eauti ful vi11 age. It h as a f ew hi gh mount ai ns an d a small ri ver. Th ere are many t rees in it. Th e b est t i me t o go there i s in au tu mn.In the past, my hom etown was po or. Peopl e there l ived a hard life. Greatchanges have taken pl ace these years. No w the livi

3、ng con di ti ons hav e bee nimproved. Wide roads and many new ho us es have appeare d. Som e peop l e have t hei r own cars. Now ev ery child in my h ometow n ca n go t o s cho ol. I b eli eve m y hom etown will beco me better and b et ter.假設你叫李明，Davi d 是你遠在加拿大的網(wǎng)友。請你以 The gr eat ch an ge s i n myh o

4、met ow n 為話題寫一圭寸由 E 件告訴他你 的家鄉(xiāng)在過去十年間的變化情況。要求：語句通順，不少于 80 ?詞。寫作提示：1.簡單介紹家鄉(xiāng)過去的貧窮狀況；2.重點介紹家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的巨大變化；3.表達自己對這個變化的看法?！痉段膮⒖肌緿ear Davi d,My ho met ow n was v ery smal I and p oor t en ye ars ago. M ost people di dnt have eno ugh fo od t o eat. They did nt have spa re clot hes to wear, either. Most of them h

5、ad to leave thei r hom etown to make money to suppo rt their f ami lies. At that time, p eopl e l i ved a v ery hard l if e in my hometow n.But great ch a nges have take n pl ace in t he pa st ten ye ars. M any f actories hav e been s et up i n m y hometow n, s o t hey can make mon ey by wo rki ngin

6、 the f act ori es.N ow peopl e l i ve in tal l bui ld i ngs in stead of dark ho uses. Andthey go t o w ork by bus or in t hei r own cars. M an y peopl e al so have cel l phones and com put ers.M y ho met o w n i s beco ming more and m ore b eau ti fu l n o w.Y ours,Li Mi ngUnit 201我們都知道，近年來環(huán)境污染越來越嚴重

7、，這對人們的生活和 健康都造成了極大的危害，所以人們都很關注環(huán)境保護。假如 你是一名中學生，要參加學校組織的有關環(huán)境保護的演講。請 你根據(jù)下列要點提示寫一篇演講稿。1. 要點：1） 步行或騎自行車去上學；2） 去購物時用購物籃子而不用塑料袋；3） 寫字時紙要用兩面；4） 離開教室時應該關燈。2. 要求：1） 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2） 80 詞左右?！痉段膮⒖肌緼s we all know, the envi ron ment pollution is becoming more and moreseriou s. Its n eces sary for us to p ro t e

8、ct the envi ro nm ent.Fi rst, wed better go to sch ool on foot or by bike. Sec on d, we can use shopp ing baskets in stead of pl ast i c bags wh e n we shop. Thi rd, w e can use bot hsi des of paper. La st, we shou l d never fo rget to t urn off t he l i ght s when we leave t he cl assroom.If every

9、one t ri es h is best t o r educe po 11 ut i on, our e art h wi 11 become a b etter pl ace to l i ve.02地球是我們?nèi)祟愘囈陨娴募覉@?？墒?，隨著社會的發(fā)展，人 們的一些所作所為讓地球變得傷痕累累。請寫一篇英語短文， 呼吁大家保護環(huán)境。1.要點：1） 人們亂砍樹木，亂扔垃圾，排放各種污染物到河里2） 沙塵暴增多，河水變臟，人們的疾病也越來越多3） 提出關于保護環(huán)境的建議，至少兩條。2.要求：1） 所提要點均需涉及，且可適當發(fā)揮；2） 80 詞左右。【范文參考】The earth i s seri

10、 ously pol lut ed no w. Peopl e cut do wn m any trees, t hrowrub bi sh abo ut an d pou r wa ste w at er i nt o ri vers. A s a result, there are moreand more sandstorms. The rivers are becom i ng di rtier and di rt ier. A nd peopl eare havi ng more and more d iseases.We must do som ethi ng to so lve

11、the probl ems. We shoul d recyc le wast epaper to prot ect the fo re sts. We can al so sort the rubb i sh and take it to the dustbins for r ecyc l ing. Besi des, we can sugge st the gov er nment make l aws aboutwa ste w at er. Lets take act i on from now on.Unit 301世界上有三千多種語言，在所有的語言中英語是應用最廣泛 的。請你根據(jù)以

12、下漢語提示以“ Th e I mpo rt an ce o f L ea r ning En gl is h ”為題目，寫一篇短文談一談學習英語的重要性。要點提示：1.英語在我們生活中廣泛應用，學好英語能更好地理解周圍 的符號；2.學好英語能欣賞英語電影、故事和小說；3.對學生來說，學好英語能幫助我們上好學校；4.對中國來說，要舉辦 20 22 年冬奧會，學好英語，能更好 地幫助外賓。要求：1.語言準確，短文連貫、通順；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3.8 0 詞左右。首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?！痉段膮⒖肌縏he Im porta nee of Le arning En gl i shT

13、here is no dou bt that Engl ish is one of the most popu larl angu ages in t h e wo rl d. It i s wi del y used in o ur daily l i fe.Lear ning En glish well can help us un dersta nd some sig ns aro und us better. Be sides, if w e learn En gl ish wel l, we wi ll be abl e to enj oy Engl ish m ovi es,st

14、or i es and no vel s. Fo r stud ent s, if we wa nt to go to a goo d seni or hi gh schoo l, we must hav e a good En gl ish gr ade. M ore i mport an11y, our cou ntry willho ld t he 2022 W inter Ol ym pics, and a num ber of f oreigne rs wi ll com e t o China. If w e l ear n E ngl ish w el l, we c an pr

15、ovi de goo d servi ce for the fo rei gn ers.So i ts very i mpo rt a nt fo r u s to l ear n E n gl i sh.02為了交流學習經(jīng)驗，提高學習效率，學校校報正在舉辦以“ How t o b e a go od Engl i sh l ea rn er ? ” 為題 的作文 比賽，請你踴 躍投稿。要點提示：可根據(jù)自己的學習經(jīng)驗提出相關建議，例如：良好的學習習慣 的重要性、良好的學習習慣包括哪些、怎樣付諸行動等等。 要求：1.文章不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2.詞數(shù) 80 左右。首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

16、【范文參考】How to be a good En gl ish l earn er?En gl ish i s beco ming more and more i mpo rt a nt, so it i s necessary to learn i t we 11. H er e are m y su gge sti on s.Fi r st, I thi n k we sh oul d hav e go od habits i n I ear ni ng. We n eed to getready for our lesso n s bef or e cl ass and al ways

17、 l i ste n careful ly in cl ass. Aftercl ass, we must go over the l essons and fin ish our h om ewo rk on ti me. Besi des,I dont think anyone can learn a Ianguage wel l withou t hard work. We shoul d domore readi ng in ou r f ree time. W e sh oul d w ri te dow n new wo rds in t henotebook and study

18、them at any time. Dont fo rget whenever we hav e a p ro bl em,w e can tu rn t o ou r t eachers.I hope all t hese will be h el pful to yo u.Unit 401吃健康僅島越來越受歡迎住離樓丸愿越來越多行小汽車越來越少3人們出行主喪依朝于 公共交通環(huán)境 空氣清晰，沒有溥染想法從現(xiàn)裡開始我們應該過低碳生活(low-Ciirbon life)假如你是李梅，最近你和你的同班同學在談論 100 年后地球 上的生活會是什么樣子的。請你根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息，寫 一篇演講稿，

19、談一談你自己的想法。兇要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包含表格中所有提示信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.8 0 詞左右?！痉段膮⒖肌縃el Io eve ryo ne,rm glad to t el l you my ideas abo ut l i fe on the earth in 100 ye ar s.In my opinion, h eal thy f ood wi 11 b e m or e and m ore po pu lar in 1 00 years and more tal l bui l d in gs will be bui 11 for peo pl e to live in. Wh a

20、ts mor e,there wi 11 be fewer cars on the road, so there will be 1 ess ai r pol 1 ution. P eople wi 11 go to w ork or t ravel mainly by using public transportation, such as the busor the subway. As fo r the env iron ment , peopl e will enj oy the fresh ai r al 1 thetime and there isnt pol 1 ut i on

21、any more. So in order to make the earth a better place to 1 i ve in, w e shoul d 1 i ve a 1 ow- carb o n life f rom now on.Thats al l. Th ank yo u!02近幾年來有關手機的新詞不斷涌現(xiàn)，如手機控(mob il e phone f r eaks)、低頭族(phubber)等，這些詞都真實地反映了人們 對手機的依賴和癡迷。請你以” My opi ni onson usi ng t he mo bi le pho nes ”為題，針對這一現(xiàn)象談談自己的看法、建議。要求：1.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱；2.詞數(shù) 80 左右。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。【范文參考】M y opi ni on