中考英語作文提高方法ppt課件

1、1 ( (一）初中生寫作一）初中生寫作“現(xiàn)狀現(xiàn)狀” 2 2 初中生寫作初中生寫作1) 1) 審題不清，抓不住要點，東拉西扯；審題不清，抓不住要點，東拉西扯；2) 2) 單詞拼寫錯誤；單詞拼寫錯誤；frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet 3) 3) 動詞缺失；動詞缺失；Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. 2 4 4）前后不一致（數(shù)、人稱、時態(tài)、主謂不一致等）前后不一致

2、（數(shù)、人稱、時態(tài)、主謂不一致等）Eg: All people have their own dream. Eg: All people have their own dream. He said he wants to have a good rest. He said he wants to have a good rest.5 5）中式英語（）中式英語（ChinglishChinglish）Eg: I very like sports.Eg: I very like sports.6) 綜合性錯誤。綜合性錯誤。 包括包括單詞大小寫單詞大小寫、標點符號標點符號以及以及形容詞副詞形容詞副詞的混

3、淆、連詞的缺失誤用、句子結構不完整的混淆、連詞的缺失誤用、句子結構不完整等。等。3中考英語作文評分標準中考英語作文評分標準滿分檔（滿分檔（15分）：長度符合要求（分）：長度符合要求（80-90字），書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要字），書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要 點，結構規(guī)點，結構規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴密，詞匯豐富，沒有任何語法錯誤。范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴密，詞匯豐富，沒有任何語法錯誤。第五檔（第五檔（12-14分）：文本長度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要點，結分）：文本長度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，涵蓋所有要點，結 構規(guī)范，條構規(guī)范，條理清楚，邏輯嚴密，詞匯比較豐富有少量語法錯誤。理清楚，邏輯嚴密，詞匯比較豐富有少量

4、語法錯誤。第四檔（第四檔（9-11分）：文本長度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，基本涵蓋要點（有分）：文本長度符合要求，書寫規(guī)范，基本涵蓋要點（有2 要點得給要點得給9-10分），行文比較連貫，詞匯不夠豐富，有一些語法錯誤。分），行文比較連貫，詞匯不夠豐富，有一些語法錯誤。第三檔第三檔(6-8分分)：文本長度與要求有明顯距離，書寫不規(guī)范，要點不完整：文本長度與要求有明顯距離，書寫不規(guī)范，要點不完整 （只有（只有1個要個要點），行文不連貫，詞匯量不足，錯誤較多，勉強能看出作文意圖。點），行文不連貫，詞匯量不足，錯誤較多，勉強能看出作文意圖。第二檔（第二檔（3-5分）：能用句子表達，錯誤百出，只能勉強猜測出作

5、文意圖。分）：能用句子表達，錯誤百出，只能勉強猜測出作文意圖。第一檔（第一檔（0-2分）：有一些英語單詞，但與話題毫不相干。分）：有一些英語單詞，但與話題毫不相干。 （白卷（白卷0分）分） 中考英語高分作文的特點 1、開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，迅速引入主題。2、段與段之間，自然過渡。有合適的連接詞。3、句與句之間，有恰當?shù)倪B接詞，使之自然成一體。4、全文中同一個意思，基本沒有重復使用某一個詞、短語或者句型等，說明這個同學的詞匯量不同尋常。老師自然就對該作文有好感了。5、能夠恰當使用諺語、格言等給文章添彩。4;. 二、中考英語高分作文的特點二、中考英語高分作文的特點 6、書寫工整，書面整潔，

6、很少有涂改痕跡。7、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一個自然段，讓閱卷老師很容易就能找到作文所要求寫的要點和重要句子。8、要點齊全。9、首尾呼應，自然成一體。10、使用了大量的高級詞匯和句型。閱卷老師一看就知道這個同學的功底非不一般，自然就給打高分了。5;.6Making an invition英語作文英語作文注意交叉使用長短句注意交叉使用長短句吳軼佳說，在吳軼佳說，在5月份長春市模擬考試當中，很多同學都覺得大作文不太容易寫好，不容易得高分。月份長春市模擬考試當中，很多同學都覺得大作文不太容易寫好，不容易得高分。我們容易忽略的一個重要問題是我們面對的是高中老師來批改我們初三學生的作文，高中老師的要我

7、們容易忽略的一個重要問題是我們面對的是高中老師來批改我們初三學生的作文，高中老師的要求水準，他們指導高考作文的習慣，他們對于作文的品位和要求都可能與我們平時的思維習慣有所求水準，他們指導高考作文的習慣，他們對于作文的品位和要求都可能與我們平時的思維習慣有所不同，所以文章的可讀性就更能成就一篇完美的中考作文。不同，所以文章的可讀性就更能成就一篇完美的中考作文。吳軼佳建議，英語作文在整個寫作過程中，要適當選擇恰當?shù)倪B詞來表示文中的并列、轉折、吳軼佳建議，英語作文在整個寫作過程中，要適當選擇恰當?shù)倪B詞來表示文中的并列、轉折、選擇、條件、因果等關系，并且注意句子結構的變化，避免重復和單調。選擇、條件、

8、因果等關系，并且注意句子結構的變化，避免重復和單調。考試中的寫作是一種控制性寫作，在至多考試中的寫作是一種控制性寫作，在至多25分鐘的時間內要實現(xiàn)審題，列提綱，打草稿，修改分鐘的時間內要實現(xiàn)審題，列提綱，打草稿，修改草稿，打磨語言，并準確，美觀地謄寫在答題卡上。草稿，打磨語言，并準確，美觀地謄寫在答題卡上。在英語寫作中，過多地使用長句和短句都不好，正確的做法是，根據(jù)實際情況，在文章當中交在英語寫作中，過多地使用長句和短句都不好，正確的做法是，根據(jù)實際情況，在文章當中交叉使用長短句。綜合使用各種所謂的叉使用長短句。綜合使用各種所謂的“高級高級”結構。在適合的語境當中，在自己十分有把握的情況結構。

9、在適合的語境當中，在自己十分有把握的情況下，使用一句名言警句來增加文章的色彩。但是在大型考試的考場上，不鼓勵現(xiàn)場原創(chuàng)的語言，還下，使用一句名言警句來增加文章的色彩。但是在大型考試的考場上，不鼓勵現(xiàn)場原創(chuàng)的語言，還是盡量使用平時老師給批改過的，教材中有的，你十分熟悉和有把握的語言。這樣的作文才會在緊是盡量使用平時老師給批改過的，教材中有的，你十分熟悉和有把握的語言。這樣的作文才會在緊張的情緒影響之下少犯錯誤張的情緒影響之下少犯錯誤7中考英語寫作高分“秘笈”要點齊全 過渡自然首尾相呼 分段提行連詞增色 名句添光長短得當 高分有望8 如何如何逐步培養(yǎng)和提升逐步培養(yǎng)和提升英語寫作能力？英語寫作能力？

10、9 二二 寫作能力的引導寫作能力的引導 詞匯短語詞匯短語 句子句子 篇章篇章10 詞匯是學生用英語表達思想詞匯是學生用英語表達思想,同時同時 也是寫作的基礎和源泉。也是寫作的基礎和源泉。 詞匯短語詞匯短語11 1. 詞匯的詞匯的。 （child; beve) 2. 加強中考加強中考的聽默寫。的聽默寫。 3. 鼓勵學生（尤其是優(yōu)等生）堅持課外閱讀，并用鼓勵學生（尤其是優(yōu)等生）堅持課外閱讀，并用收集高頻詞匯、短語、佳句，加強收集高頻詞匯、短語、佳句，加強記憶。記憶。詞匯短語詞匯短語“攻關秘笈攻關秘笈”124. 4. 鼓勵學生使用鼓勵學生使用“高端高端”的詞匯。的詞匯。=endless/oceans

11、 of Playing too much computer is bad for our study. =gets in the way of= have a bad influence on Eg: I am very interested in pop music. I have lots of homework to do every day. = show/take great interest in13 詞不離句，詞不離句，的句式表達是一篇好文章的必備條件。的句式表達是一篇好文章的必備條件。 句子句子14 1. 1. 幫助學生掌握認清幫助學生掌握認清“五大五大”基本句式。基本句式。

12、2. 2. 加強中考相關話題加強中考相關話題的的朗讀朗讀、聽寫聽寫、背誦、仿寫背誦、仿寫、句子翻譯以及課外佳句的積累句子翻譯以及課外佳句的積累。 3. 3. 讓學生在讓學生在“多樣多樣”的句式變換中不斷積攢實戰(zhàn)經驗。的句式變換中不斷積攢實戰(zhàn)經驗。 有效的句式教學有效的句式教學153. “3. “多樣多樣”的句式變換的句式變換 句子句子1）合并為簡單句；）合并為簡單句；Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress. I made great progress in maths with the help of my brothe

13、r . 2）學會使用感嘆句；）學會使用感嘆句； It is necessary to help others. How necessary it is to help others！ 163) 善用復合句；善用復合句； a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble. We need to help the people who are in trouble. b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. As we all know, more and more stud

14、ents like pop songs. 4）巧妙使用強調句；）巧妙使用強調句； We can achieve our dreams by working hard. Only by working hard, can we achieve our dreams. 175) 積累豐富的諺語積累豐富的諺語 (一周兩至三句）一周兩至三句） 英語諺語短小精悍，簡潔明快，韻律優(yōu)美，寓意深刻，在寫作中適當引用諺語能增強文章的說服英語諺語短小精悍，簡潔明快，韻律優(yōu)美，寓意深刻，在寫作中適當引用諺語能增強文章的說服力和感染力。力和感染力。 As the saying goes, “ .” 1) 鍛煉對學生有

15、好處鍛煉對學生有好處As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.2) 集中注意力于學習集中注意力于學習As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.”We should concentrate our mind on our studies. 其他諺語其他諺語: 1.Think twice before you do. 2.Practice makes perfect. 3.Where

16、there is a will, there is a way. 4.Failure is the mother of success. 5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 6.All roads lead to Rome. 7. Every coin has two sides. 1. 水水(節(jié)水方法節(jié)水方法)To make the limited water last long,1) wed better turn off the taps or showers while we are washing hair or brushing teet

17、h.2) its good to save water by reusing the used water to flush the toilet沖廁所沖廁所.2.交通方式交通方式(自己、告訴他人自己、告訴他人)In order to reduce the air pollution, 1) we should either walk or take the bus to school. 2) We are supposed to tell our parents to ride bikes or take the subway as much as possible.18;.3. 電電(節(jié)電

18、方法節(jié)電方法)Dont forget to turn off lights and TVs when we leave the room so that we can save the energy目的目的4. 紙紙In order to make full use of paper, 1) its necessary for us to collect used paper and books and recycle them.2). we need to use both sides of it19;.5. 購物袋購物袋To reduce the white pollution, we a

19、re supposed to take our own bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. 6. 植樹造林植樹造林 Wed better plant trees as many as possible instead of cutting them down. In this way ，we can make the world greener and the air fresher.20;.21 詞不離句，句不離篇。詞不離句，句不離篇。 能夠靈活自如地運用所學的詞匯、短語、句型、語法能夠靈活自如地運用所學的詞匯、短語、句型、語法

20、,謀篇布局寫出精彩的文段是訓練學生寫作謀篇布局寫出精彩的文段是訓練學生寫作的最終目的。的最終目的。 篇章篇章22 如何運用已有的如何運用已有的“遣詞造句遣詞造句”能力在寫作實踐中學會能力在寫作實踐中學會“謀篇布局謀篇布局”“戰(zhàn)無不勝戰(zhàn)無不勝” 呢？呢？231）表并列補充并列補充關系的：What is more，Besides，2) 表示轉折關系的過渡詞：but, yet, however 3) 表示時間關系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that

21、 time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that 4) 表示空間關系的過渡詞：near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside 245) 表示比較關系的過渡詞：表示比較關系的過渡詞：in the same way, just l

22、ike, just as 6) 表示對照關系的過渡詞：表示對照關系的過渡詞：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though 7) 表示遞進關系的過渡詞：表示遞進關系的過渡詞： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again 8) 表示因果關系的過渡詞：表示因果關系的過渡詞：because, since, then, thus, so, therefore ,as a result9) 表示解釋說明的過渡詞：表示解釋說明的過渡詞：for example

23、, in fact, in this case, for, actually She came in spite of her cold. Force a laugh in spite of pain. We met some friends and other people in addition. I can help you.Moreover,you should rely on yourself. 2510) 表示強調的過渡詞：表示強調的過渡詞：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most

24、 important 11) 表示目的的過渡詞：表示目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, 12) 表示列舉的過渡詞：表示列舉的過渡詞：for example , such as 13) 表示總結性的過渡詞：表示總結性的過渡詞：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, in a word, in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking He has hi

25、s faults, but, all in all, he is a good helper. 26英語寫作中用好英語寫作中用好“四心四心”1.精心審題，沉著寫稿精心審題，沉著寫稿2.耐心修改，提煉句子耐心修改，提煉句子3.細心檢查細心檢查, 消滅錯誤消滅錯誤4.虛心抄寫，一絲不茍。虛心抄寫，一絲不茍。27議論文寫作技巧議論文寫作技巧議論文是作者對某個問題或某件事進行分析、評論議論文是作者對某個問題或某件事進行分析、評論,表明自己的觀點、立場、態(tài)度、看表明自己的觀點、立場、態(tài)度、看法和主張的一種文體。議論文有三要素法和主張的一種文體。議論文有三要素,即論點、論據(jù)和論證。論點的基本要求是即論點、

26、論據(jù)和論證。論點的基本要求是:觀點觀點正確正確,認真概括認真概括,有實際意義有實際意義;論據(jù)的基本要求是論據(jù)的基本要求是:真實可靠真實可靠,充分典型充分典型;論證的基本要求是論證的基本要求是:推理必須符合邏輯。推理必須符合邏輯。 英語議論文的結構一般較為固定英語議論文的結構一般較為固定,通常包括以下三部分通常包括以下三部分: 1. 在導語部分提出需要議論的議題在導語部分提出需要議論的議題; 2. 在正文部分對所提出的問題進行議論在正文部分對所提出的問題進行議論; 3. 在結論部分對以上的討論進行總結和歸納。在結論部分對以上的討論進行總結和歸納。28lets see some examples

27、Shall we send children to study abroad? With more and more people becoming rich in recent years, it is a new tendency for them to send their children to study abroad. But I dont think it is a good idea. First of all, children are too young to look after themselves. Second, the language barrier is a

28、serious problem. Many children are not proficient in the foreign language before going abroad. As a result, they have difficulty in understanding what the native speakers are talking about. Third, they may get into trouble when dealing with various situations for lack of knowledge of the customs in

29、the strange land. Furthermore, the cost of living is much higher than that in our country, which might cause a heavy burden to the family. In conclusion, there are more disadvantages in sending children to study abroad. So, wed better not do it.29 Learn To Respect Our Parents Nowadays, more and more

30、 families have only one child. As most of the students today are the only child in the family, they often regard themselves as the center of the family and become selfish, without caring too much about their parents.30 So we should learn to respect our parents. Firstly, we are supposed to remember o

31、ur parents birthday and express our best wishes to them. Secondly, we should say hello to our parents when we see them returning home. Thirdly, we are supposed to tell our parents where we go when we leave home. 31 In a word, respecting parents is our Chinas traditional values. No matter how old we

32、are, its necessary for us to respect our parents.32 On the one hand, computer has many advantages. It can help people finish work quickly. And it also can help people to do more and more work. Its not noly a good way for students to receive education but also its very convenient for people to commun

33、icate with others by using computers.33 On the other hand, it has some disadvantages. Computer can work out difficult math problems that students cant. But it may make them be lacking in thinking. And if you often work with computer, maybe you will get sick. Some people surf the Internet all day, th

34、ey waste much time and have no time to care for the real people.34 So we should have a right way to deal with the greatest invention computer.3536My Favorite Places Many people have favorite places they like to go to when they are feeling sad or bored. I also have favorite places that I go to as oft

35、en as I can. Here are the three places that I like most. First of all, I like the zoo.The animals are amazing because some are so cute and some are so ugly! I like to pet(寵寵) them,feed them and watch them perform. Museums are cool places, too. They have good exhibits(陳列品陳列品)and fascinating displays(

36、吸吸引人的展品引人的展品). I like the works of art( 藝術品藝術品)there. Some museums teach me a lot about history and science. From dinosaurs to robots, I love them all. Finally, theme parks are my favourite place. I think the roller coasters are the best. Its fun to scream and getscared. These places always cheer me

37、 up(快活）快活）. I try to go to each of my favorite places once a year. I am going to find more favorite places to go to when I grow up.37作文走向預測及參考范文1. 1. 最近，老師布置了一道作業(yè)，就最近，老師布置了一道作業(yè)，就 “Can parents be friends?Can parents be friends?” 這一問題在這一問題在同學中間開展一次調查，下表是調查的結果：同學中間開展一次調查，下表是調查的結果：45%45%的同學可能父母太忙，沒有時間關心

38、的同學可能父母太忙，沒有時間關心他們。他們。55%55%的同學可能在家里，父母常常和他們談心，像朋友一樣。你的觀點的同學可能在家里，父母常常和他們談心，像朋友一樣。你的觀點? 請根據(jù)以上調查數(shù)據(jù)，寫一份請根據(jù)以上調查數(shù)據(jù)，寫一份8080詞左右的調查報告。報告的開頭已給出。詞左右的調查報告。報告的開頭已給出。 I recently surveyed (調查調查)my classmates about their views(觀點觀點) on whether parents can be friends. According to the survey, 45% of the students i

39、n our class think it impossible to make friends with their parents as theyre always too busy to show their concern. On the other hand, 55% of the students believe they can make friends with their parents because their parents often talk with them like friends at home. In my opinion, its just natural

40、 for parents and children to be friends so long as they trust each other, the parents often talk with their children and know how to share.382. 愛是心中的太陽，融化你我身邊的冰雪。假設你是李明，你們學校的愛是心中的太陽，融化你我身邊的冰雪。假設你是李明，你們學校的“English Garden”正在舉辦主題為正在舉辦主題為“付出即是收獲付出即是收獲”的征文活動，請你聯(lián)系自己平時的愛心行的征文活動，請你聯(lián)系自己平時的愛心行為和感受寫一篇文章投稿。為和感受

41、寫一篇文章投稿。 要求：要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關信息。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關信息。 2.80100詞。標題和文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。詞。標題和文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Giving is Receiving My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to

42、the old peoples home and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Childrens Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?393. 假如你叫李華，參

43、加學校開展的假如你叫李華，參加學校開展的“有困難向誰求助有困難向誰求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的調查活動，調查結果如下。請用英語給校報編輯寫一封信反映相關內容。）的調查活動，調查結果如下。請用英語給校報編輯寫一封信反映相關內容。 求助對象：同學、朋友，求助對象：同學、朋友，58%，年齡相仿，容易理解交流。老師家長，年齡相仿，容易理解交流。老師家長，30%，有愛心、有經驗、，有愛心、有經驗、可以可以 信任。無，信任。無，12%，不愿與人交流，難以與人溝通。，不愿與人交流，難以與人溝通。 注意：注意：1內容要點全面，并表達出你的觀點。為了使文章

44、連內容要點全面，并表達出你的觀點。為了使文章連 貫，可適當增加內容。貫，可適當增加內容。2詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：90詞左右。詞左右。 Dear editor, Im a student . We have made a survey“Who do you turn to when in trouble?” Here are the results. Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble as theyre almost of the same age, so they have a lot

45、in common and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their teachers or parents about their troubles and ask them for help as the teachers and parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students.Only a few students solve their problems all by the

46、mselves. They hate to talk with others and cant get on well with others. They have few friends. In my opinion, when in trouble wed better ask our teachers, parent, friends or classmates for help. Yours Li Hua404、臺灣自古以來是中國領土不可分割的一部分，盡早解決臺灣問題，實現(xiàn)祖國的完全統(tǒng)一，是中華兒女的共同期盼。假定你們正舉行“我心中的臺灣”主題班會，請你根據(jù)提示寫篇短文。 1：臺灣是中

47、國的一部分 2：我所知道的臺灣（地理位置、人口或其他資訊）3：臺灣與祖國大陸的民間交往（走親訪友、商業(yè)往來、興辦工廠等） 4：愿望。 詞語準備： Taiwan Island, Taiwanese, the mainland, many kinds of , beautiful , relative, shop ,factory, lie. Visit, build , run. There is but one China and Taiwan is part of China. Taiwan, the biggest island, lies to the southeast of Fuji

48、an Province. The weather there is warm and wet.So many plants grow very well. The fruit there are really delicious,like bananas,oranges and so on. It has a popolation of 23.000.000.Taiwan produces many kinds of products,especially seafood. It is a very beautiful island. Riyuetan Pool AND Mount Ali a

49、re very famous places of interest , Now many Taiwanese come to the mainland, they visit their relatives and friends, and some of them build factores and run shops, I love Taiwan very much and I hope I can visit Taiwan some day. China is getting stronger and stronger. All the people hope Taiwan can c

50、ome back quickly. Im sure Taiwan will come back in the future.415.陽光運動工程陽光運動工程(Sunshine sports program)Dear Jane, Thank you for your last letter asking about our sunshine sports program.Now I tell you some sports in our school. Many students doing sports one hour everyday. Different students have di

51、fferent interests. Some boys like playing football, because they love it. Most girls like shopping, because they think it relaxing. But most boys like playing Chinese Kongfu, because they believe it can help they keep healthy. And some girls like dancing, because they want to keep fit. I think the s

52、unshine sports program is very important for us. Because the study of students very hard. Sports can also let brains have a good rest so that our study will be more effective. And it can help you relax. 427. 許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life為主題的英語演講比賽,請

53、你準備發(fā)言稿,談談你的一些緩解壓力的好辦法,與同學分享,內容包括：同學們中普遍存在的壓力是什么；我的壓力是什么；我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。參考范文: Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they sen