2015年高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)專題二(共7頁(yè))

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上寒假專題書(shū)面表達(dá)二名言諺語(yǔ)1你校正在進(jìn)行“英語(yǔ)讀書(shū)周”活動(dòng)。該活動(dòng)要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句（quote）并相互交流，以下是某同學(xué)的句子：“Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you.”請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100120個(gè)詞的短文：針對(duì)摘錄句中的觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ㄅe例說(shuō)明理由注意：短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: &qu

2、ot;Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you. " 【答案】One possible version:In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this; "Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. " I can't agree more with this view. It&#

3、39;s true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and

4、only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the 'history of America. Even to this day. Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in o

5、ur own hands.【解析】【考點(diǎn)】觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)議論文開(kāi)放式【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】試題材料新穎，貼近考生實(shí)際生活，屬于半開(kāi)放性話題。 對(duì)既定的話題進(jìn)行討論，考生有一定的自由發(fā)揮空間，暢所欲言，各抒己見(jiàn)。論點(diǎn)明確，論據(jù)充分是得分的關(guān)鍵。如能靈活運(yùn)用學(xué)過(guò)而且熟練的亮點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，盡量變換句式，長(zhǎng)短句交錯(cuò)使用，并且恰當(dāng)?shù)卮┎逡恍┻^(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)，使文章自然、流暢，有較強(qiáng)的邏輯性，文章一定會(huì)脫穎而出。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意把握好以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔。(2)行文緊湊，過(guò)渡自然。(3)要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清楚。(4)語(yǔ)法正確，時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。(5)用詞無(wú)誤，控制得當(dāng)(80-120詞之間)。(6)認(rèn)真復(fù)查，胸有成竹。2請(qǐng)品讀

6、以下三條關(guān)于perseverance (堅(jiān)持不懈) 的名言 (quote)，選擇一條談?wù)勀銓?duì)此的理解；并結(jié)合一個(gè)具體事例，說(shuō)明perseverance的重要性。A. When the world says, "Give up", Hope whispers," Try it one more time."B. You can't go through life quitting everything. If you are going to achieve anything, you've got to stick with someth

7、ing.C. Don't be discouraged. It's often the last key in the bunch that opens the lock.注意事項(xiàng)：1. 文中不得透漏個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 2. 詞數(shù)為100120左右?！敬鸢浮恳?jiàn)解析【解析】A句意：當(dāng)世界說(shuō)，“放棄”，希望低語(yǔ)，“嘗試再一次。B句意：你不能在生活中去放棄一切。如果你想實(shí)現(xiàn)什么，你必須堅(jiān)持做某事。C句意：不要?dú)怵H。它通常在打開(kāi)鎖最后一把鑰匙。參考范文：Perseverance is what it takes to achieve one's success. Withou

8、t perseverance, one may find it hard to realize his dream. Personally, I prefer quote A, which asks us not to give up but stick with what we're pursuing. Only by trying again and again can we make it at last. Take Madam Curie for example. To fulfill her academic ambition, she overcame many hards

9、hips to go abroad for further education. After her husband's death, she carried on her research work despite a lot of difficulties. Finally, her continuous efforts paid off. She was awarded two Nobel prizes. So, never give up easily when faced with failure. Hold on to your dream and you'll s

10、urely enjoy a sense of achievement.3美國(guó)已故大演說(shuō)家、”成功學(xué)家鼻祖”羅曼·文森特·皮爾有一句名言：”Attitude Is Everything”。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)創(chuàng)碛姓_的人生態(tài)度的重要性,詞數(shù)120左右?！敬鸢浮緼s a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. If we take a positive attitude an

11、d keep on trying , we will achieve our goals in the end.  I cant agree more with this view. At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed. Then I realized that I had to do well in English to go to my favorite university. I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offer

12、ed some valuable advice to me. With my teachers help, I improved my English gradually.  My story shows that if we have a good attitude and keep on trying, we will be able to overcome difficulty and move on. It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.【解析】試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部

13、分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文主題明確，夾敘夾議，在語(yǔ)言上用了一些常見(jiàn)的短語(yǔ)：cant agree more with不能再同意了，take a positive attitude采取積極的態(tài)度， With my teachers

14、 help 在老師的幫助下，句式上也是富有變化：As a saying goes, “Attitude is everything.” It means our attitude will decide whether we will succeed or not in the future. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， At one time I was not good at English, which made me very depressed.和I talked with my teacher about my problem, who offered some valuable adv

15、ice to me., 這兩句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， It is our attitude that plays a key role in our life.這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句?？键c(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放式作文4請(qǐng)閱讀下面的名言，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)友情的看法?！癆 friend in need is a friend indeed.”談感想 結(jié)合自己一次經(jīng)歷 以此為題要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括： 2.詞數(shù)：120詞?！敬鸢浮縁riendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, sup

16、port and encouragement. With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. No man can make the most of his life without friends as he goes along.Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making frie

17、nds. Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart. Real friends can share all our sorrows and doubts all our joys.While making friends, we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. Then we should treat our friends with honesty. We should

18、 forgive their failures and do our best to help them. In short, when we have established friendship, we ought to treasure it by means of words and deeds. Only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.【解析】試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文。開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要

19、點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Friendship is a kind of human relations. When in trouble, we need friends to offer us help, support and encouragement. 這句話是用了省略句，With success achieved, we also need friends to share our joys.這句話用了wi

20、th復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， Friendship is also one of the greatest pleasures that we can enjoy. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， Knowing how valuable friendship is, we should be very careful in making friends. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)，Real friends are those who have good character, superior ability and kindness of heart.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， While making friends,

21、 we should take care to select those who have such fine qualities. 這句話用了省略句Only in this way can we develop real friendship in our life.這句話用了倒裝句?？键c(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放式作文【答案】He who makes no mistakes makes nothing.Many people around us are afraid of making mistakes. They even feel it a shame to make a mistake. Thats

22、 completely wrong. Other people, however, think that making mistakes is an essential part of growing. They don't care about making mistakes, they just want to experiment and obtain experience.As a matter of fact, no one never makes any mistakes. Children would fall down many times before they ca

23、n walk and no one could become an expert until he has failed over and over again.As far as I am concerned, being afraid of making mistakes is a mistake itself. Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress. Thomas Edison could not have become a scientist if he had not made thousands of mi

24、stakes. Making mistakes for pursuing truth is much better than doing nothing. That is, he who makes no mistakes makes nothing.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇開(kāi)放性作文，題目給出了一個(gè)話題，要求結(jié)合實(shí)例解釋這個(gè)諺語(yǔ)。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組

25、織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】They even feel it a shame to make a mistake.這句話用的是it做形式賓語(yǔ)，Other people, however, think that making mistakes is an essential part of growing.這句話用了插入語(yǔ)和動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)， Children would fall down many times before th

26、ey can walk and no one could become an expert until he has failed over and over again.這句話用了兩個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句， Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.這句話用了only的倒裝句，. That is, he who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 這句話是一句諺語(yǔ)，還有文章還用As far as I am concerned,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫?？键c(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放式作文6通過(guò)描述一件你親身經(jīng)歷

27、的事情來(lái)說(shuō)明主題“Honesty makes a difference”，要求120詞以上。Honesty makes a difference【答案】Honesty makes a difference“Who did this？” asked my teacher once more. She seldom became angry， but she was this time. She held up a piece of broken glass and asked， “Who broke this window？”I was the one who broke the window.

28、 I had not meant to do it. It was caused by an inaccurate throw of a basketball. If I admitted it， I would be in a lot of trouble. How would I be able to pay for a big window like that？ I didnt even get an allowance.“My father is going to have a fit，” I thought. I didnt want to raise my hand. But th

29、en a force much stronger than me changed my mind. I had to tell the truth.I couldnt believe what happened the next day！ My teacher went to my desk with a book I was longing for and said， “You will not be punished as long as you remember that I am not rewarding you for your misdeed， but for your hone

30、sty.”The book is gone and all that remains of that day is my memory and the lesson my teacher taught me！【解析】略【答案】As the saying goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. Nobody can achieve success without parental love and Mothers devotion plays an especially critical role in our life. Mo

31、thers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.My mother always gives me a helping hand in both my studies and my life. Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me guidance. O

32、n the other hand, she takes care of me in my life like other devoted mothers. Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. Its impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.In fact, no matter whether you are successful or not, mothe

33、rs always stand behind you and back you up. Everyone knows that mothers love is just like a flowing river, and it keeps running forever, pushing and carrying you forward to your destination of life and work. And what we can do is never to stop halfway. Only in this way can we treasure and repay the

34、sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇開(kāi)放性作文，給出了一個(gè)話題，“一個(gè)成功孩子的背后是一個(gè)偉大的母親”，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】As the saying

35、goes, behind each successful child is a great mother. 這句話是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， Mothers dedicate almost everything we need, which is a necessary part on our road to great achievements.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， Since she is a math teacher, whenever I meet with any difficulty in the subject, she is always patient to give me gui

36、dance. 這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和原因狀語(yǔ)從句， Whenever I fall ill she spares no efforts to help me recover from the illnesses. 這句話也是讓步狀語(yǔ)從句和詞組：spares no efforts to do，Its impossible for me to grow up and achieve success in my life without my mother.這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，.And what we can do is never to stop halfway. 這句話里面有主語(yǔ)從句，O

37、nly in this way can we treasure and repay the sacrifice and devotion of our mothers.這句話用了倒裝句，還有文章用了 On the other hand,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫?？键c(diǎn)：考查開(kāi)放式作文8根據(jù)下面中文提示寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文。俗話說(shuō)：早起的鳥(niǎo)兒有蟲(chóng)吃（The early bird will catch worms）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你生活中親身經(jīng)歷的一件事，說(shuō)明：凡事要早做規(guī)劃；不辭辛苦，辛勤勞作；不斷追求；方能有所收獲，獲得成功?！敬鸢浮縏he early bird will catch worms An

38、 old saying "The early bird will catch worms" reminds us that if people want to get something useful and want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties. Also they mustn't give up pursuing their ambiti

39、on. I was good at English, but I couldn't pass the exam, for I wasn't prepared well before the examination. I had many things to solve at that time. As I met the complex things, I was at a loss. The reason was that I had no plan and involved in many things and didn't study more hard, so

40、I failed. In short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying. 【解析】本題是一篇相對(duì)開(kāi)放的開(kāi)放性作文，只給出了一個(gè)中心思想，要求考生根據(jù)這個(gè)思想進(jìn)行結(jié)合自身實(shí)際進(jìn)行合理的拓展，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中要注意使用高級(jí)詞組與連接詞讓文章更流暢。9Life is hard, and you are sure to meet much difficulty. You can't go through life quitting everything. If you

41、 are going to achieve anything, you've got to stick with something. 請(qǐng)以Never give up為題,結(jié)合自己的生活經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓?duì)它的理解。注意：1內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2詞數(shù)：120左右?！敬鸢浮?One possible version：Perseverance is what it takes to achieve one's success, without which, one may find it hard to realize his dream.Tak

42、e an example of mine, who frequently failed in the dictations given by my English teacher. As the times of failure grew, the sense of inferiority accumulated sharply which led to low spirits and my ignorance of English learning. It is my English teacher who encouraged me not to give up that prevente

43、d the terrible feeling spreading. With the inspiration, I worked much harder and determined to stick with my study. Had I given up easily, I wouldnt have made such great progress.So, never give up easily when faced with failure. Hold on to your dream and you'll surely enjoy a sense of achievemen

44、t.【解析】 試題分析：根據(jù)要求可知，本篇作文為話題作文。通過(guò)提示語(yǔ)可總結(jié)出命題者讓學(xué)生寫(xiě)的話題即never give up永不言棄。所以在結(jié)構(gòu)上可以采取三段式，第一段用兩到三句話引出話題What our life will be like is based on what we actually do at present。第二段按照命題要求自然插入實(shí)際生活事例，第三段總結(jié)概括，進(jìn)一步深化主題。在列舉事例時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)和長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，搭配適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞使文章銜接自然。最后總結(jié)點(diǎn)題時(shí)注意呼應(yīng)第一段內(nèi)容和第二段觀點(diǎn)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇范文開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，直接引入話題并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)Perseverance is

45、 what it takes to achieve one's success, without which, one may find it hard to realize his dream。這個(gè)句子十分巧妙，既有what引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句，又體現(xiàn)了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的用法。開(kāi)篇就讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。文體部分以Take an example of mine自然過(guò)渡，引出生活實(shí)例，銜接自然。在描述事例的過(guò)程中長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，各種句型靈活運(yùn)用，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句：It is my English teacher who encouraged me not to give up that prevented the terrible feeling spreading. 虛擬語(yǔ)氣和倒裝句：Had I given up easily, I wouldnt have made such great progress. 祈使句：Hold on to your dream and you'll surely enjoy a sense of achievement.這些都是重要的高中語(yǔ)法點(diǎn)，作者以make sentence的形式表現(xiàn)出來(lái)，顯示了深厚的功底，