浙江英語(yǔ)新題型讀后續(xù)寫與概要寫作練習(xí)及答案

1、寫作是四項(xiàng)語(yǔ)文技能中不可分割的一個(gè)重要部分，更是語(yǔ)言生成能力的重要表現(xiàn)形式。該部分要求考生考生根據(jù)題示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)?？忌鷳?yīng)能：(1)準(zhǔn)確使用語(yǔ)法和詞匯語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性是寫作中不可忽視的一個(gè)重要方面，因?yàn)樗苯踊蜷g接地影響到信息的準(zhǔn)確傳輸。應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確程度是寫作部分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的一項(xiàng)重要內(nèi)容。(2)使用一定的句型、詞匯， 清楚、 連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思任何一篇文章都需要有一個(gè)主題作者應(yīng)該圍繞該主題，借助一些句型、詞組等的支持，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想。浙江卷寫作第二節(jié)，讀后續(xù)寫或概要寫作，兩種形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。讀后續(xù)寫。提供一段350 詞以內(nèi)的語(yǔ)言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、

2、所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(150 詞左右)，將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。閱卷時(shí)將主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1 . 與所給短文及段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)的銜接程度；2 .內(nèi)容的豐富性和對(duì)所給關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)的覆蓋情況；3 .應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；4 .上下文的連貫性。概要寫作。提供一篇350 詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫出一篇60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。閱卷時(shí)主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1 . 對(duì)原文要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；2 .應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；3 .上下文的連貫性；4 .對(duì)各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況。樣題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分 25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫

3、，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As hewalked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someonetrying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn' t get the car moving. Arthurturned and looked inside at the f

4、ace of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks likeyou ' ve got a problem, “ Arthur said."I' m afraid so. I ' m in a big hurry and I can ' t start my car. ”“Is there something I can do to help " Arthur asked. The young man looked at thetwo suitca

5、ses in the back seat and then said, “ Thanks. If you ' re sure it wouldn ' t betoo much trouble , you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. I ' d be glad to help. ”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. Afterplacing it on the

6、ground, he turned to get the other one. Just asArthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the loug noise of an alarm.It was from the bank. There had been a robbery （ 搶劫）！Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with thesound of the alarm and the shout

7、s of people running from all directions. Cars stoppedand the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other,What happenedBut everyone had a different answer.Arthur , still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of h

8、im.She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised." Why is shelooking at me like that “ He thought. "The suitcase ! She thinks I ' m the bank thief! "Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and withoutanother thought, he started to run.

9、注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1As he was runnings Arthur heard the young man shouting behind ,“Stop, stop!”Paragraph 2：The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur.參考答案：讀后續(xù)寫：One possible version :One possible v

10、ersionAs he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,Arthur imm0|djate|ly rea lized that the young man was the bankrobber. So Arthur didn' t stop, but continued to run until he saw and caught a taxi in front pf him. He quickly put the suitcase in the car and said to the driver, “

11、Please hurry to the Police hfeveoa.case to report to the police ； the man shouting behind is the bank thiefThe taxi raced away to the Police Station like an arrom.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur said to the police who had been had already received the robbery report, This

12、suitcase is that of the bank robber. It may be filled with the money stolen from the ban k hand it to you. Please get ready to arrest the man評(píng)分原則1 . 本題總分為25 分，按 5 個(gè)檔次給分。2 .評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)所續(xù)寫短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3 .詞數(shù)少于130 的，從總分中減去2 分。4 . 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)主要從以下四個(gè)方面考慮：(1) 與所給短文及段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)的銜接程度；(2) 內(nèi)容的豐富

13、性和對(duì)所標(biāo)出關(guān)詞語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用情況；(3) 應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；(4) 上下文的連貫性。(5) 寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)重要方面，評(píng)分時(shí)， 應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。(6) 書寫較差以致影響交際，可將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。第二節(jié) :概要寫作(滿分25 分)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the earl

14、y 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in

15、 his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thusbegan a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in afriendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, th,e nob

16、leman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit （ 好處） of dirt was long-lived ， dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing di

17、sease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyondscience since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea： clothes need to bewhiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however,gone too farAttitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowada

18、ys. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush ， American immunologist （ 免疫學(xué)家）， encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter （ 后者） position isgaining some ground.參選答案：One possible version ：People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.（要點(diǎn) 1 ） For a long time inhistory, people of some