考研英語一真題作文2008 Part B(含范文和修改)

1、.Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly，2) explain its intended meaning, and then3) give your comments.You should write neatly on Answer Sheet 2.文字說明：你一條腿，我一條腿；你我一起，走南闖北。Vanes WritingThere is a picture here

2、showing us that two disabled man binding their two disabled legs and moving fast shoulder to shoulder, with their walking sticks thrown away. And there is a note: you have one leg and I have one leg, but we can go anywhere together. The intended meanings in this picture is cooperation. Exactly, we a

3、re just human beings who are not all-powerful, and thats why we cant solve all problems without others help. And in our society the spirit of team-working is very important, which means by working together and cooperating with each other can realize the inequality: 1+12.But how can we cooperate with

4、 each other? The first factor is trust. You wont success if you dont trust your partners. And the second factor is honesty. You should communicate with your partners not only the advantages you have, but also the disadvantages and the challenges you have to face. And in my opinion the last one is pe

5、rsistence. No matter how far it is, and no matter how hard it is, you should always keep walking and then you will finally get to the destination. Modified Version 1This picture is displaying a scenario of two disabled persons handicapped men, each one has only one leg on the different sides respect

6、ively. It is obvious to see that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the old saying goes that one tree cant be a forest, union is a kind of power, which we may conclude from the image. It makes no differ

7、ence how tough the trouble thing is , (but your attemptation attempt on solutions.后半句話結(jié)構(gòu)不全)， your attempt on solutions is more important.To In my view, each page have has two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we face to them with positive attitudes. Cooperation can produce more than a si

8、ngle hero does nowadays, and every member focus on one the same field can finish the job with full concentration and yield better outcomes so that the whole project will be done in a higher level more effectively.Modified Version 2This picture is displaying a scenario of two disabled persons, each o

9、ne has only one leg on the different sides respectively. It is obvious to see that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the old saying goes that one tree cant be a forest, union is a kind of power, which

10、we may conclude from the image. It makes no difference how tough the trouble thing is, but your attemptation on solutions. To這里是to 還是on？我印象中貌似是on my view, each page have two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we face to them with positive attitudes Cooperation can produce more than a sing

11、le hero does nowadays, and every member focus on one field can finish job with full concentration and yield這個單詞用的漂亮！ better outcomes so that whole 加個theproject will be done in a higher level.這個我不知道這類考研作文的具體要求是怎樣，不過我覺得你這篇寫得蠻好的！結(jié)構(gòu)，布局都不錯，用詞還不錯，沒什么改得出來了。不錯！加油！Modified Version 3 This picture is displayin

12、g a scenario of two disabled persons, both (each) has only one leg on the different sides respectively. It is obvious to see that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the old saying goes that one tree can

13、t be a forest, union is a kind of power, which we may conclude from the image. It makes no difference how tough the trouble thing is, but your attempt (attemptation) on solutions. To my view, each page has (have) two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we face to them with positive attitud

14、es. Cooperation can produce more than a single hero does nowadays, and every member focus on one field can finish job with full concentration and yield better outcomes so that whole project will be done in a higher level.Modified Version 4This picture is displaying a scenario of two disabled people,

15、 each one has only one leg on the different sides respectively. It is obvious to see that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the old saying goes that one tree cant be a forest, union is a kind of power,

16、 which we may conclude from the image. It makes no difference how tough the trouble thing is , but your attemptation on solutions. In my view, every coin has two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we face to them with positive attitudes Cooperation can produce more than a single hero does

17、 nowadays, and every member focus on one field can finish job with full concentration and yield better outcomes so that whole project will be done in a higher level.主要我覺得是你理解錯了。人家要說的意思是，合作更美好。能夠取長補短。你自己理解有點問題=。=Modified Version 5This picture is displaying a scenario of two disabled persons, each one

18、 has only one leg on the different sides respectively. It is obvious to see 多余 that they have to walk with sticks. However, when they hug side by side, they are able to walk smoothly without any help of instrument.As the (an) old saying goes that 去掉，改成逗號 one tree cant be a forest, union is a kind of power這是中文式英語, which we may conclude from the image. It makes no difference how tough the trouble thing is , but your attemptation (沒這個詞。Attempt就是名詞了) on solutions. To my view, each page have two sides and we could learn from the troubles if we