2018中考人教版英語作文賞析

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上中考滿分英語作文賞析【寫作要求】假設(shè)你叫李華，你們市將要舉行以“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”為題的演講比賽，請你準(zhǔn)備寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.說明此次演講的主題(how to eat in a healthy way)。2.我們應(yīng)該少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些，并說明原因。3.描述自己的健康飲食習(xí)慣，并舉例說明。4.希望大家都有個好的飲食習(xí)慣。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】How to Eat in a Healthy WayHello, ever

2、ybody. I'm Li Hua.Today my topic is how to eat in a healthy way.Firstly, we should never eat fried food or foods with lots of sugar because they are not good for health.Secondly, try to eat more vegetables and fruit.Because they can make us become much healthier.My eating habits are good.For exa

3、mple, I often eat healthy foods, like wholemeal bread, eggs, vegetables and milk for breakfast and rice, noodles, and vegetables for dinner.I hope everyone can eat in a healthy way. 【寫作要求】作家雨果說過：“開啟人類智慧的鑰匙有三把，一是字母，二是數(shù)字，三是音符?！睆倪@句話中，我們足可見音樂對人的發(fā)展的影響。請你根據(jù)以下提示，以Music為題，寫一篇短文參加學(xué)校的英語作文競賽。提示：1. 音樂使人充滿活

4、力，讓人快樂；2. 沒有音樂，生活就沒有樂趣；3. 你最喜歡的音樂是.4. 你不能忍受的音樂是.要求：1. 80詞左右；2. 恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用定語從句?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】MusicI like music very much. It gives me energy when Im tired and it makes me happy when Im sad. Music is very important in our life. If there is no music, our life wont be so interesting. Different people like different

5、 kinds of music. I like electronic music thats loud. It makes me excited. I also like music that I can dance to. The Cool Kids is my favorite band. I cant stand music that is quiet and slow. It makes me sleepy. 【寫作要求】為了使同學(xué)們與人交往時舉止更加文雅，你校學(xué)生會正在舉辦以“How to behave well？”為主題的英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文。（以上背景內(nèi)容無需表

6、述）短文要點(diǎn)如下：1.學(xué)生應(yīng)該守時、守信、不撒謊、不說臟話；2.禮貌待人，熱心助人；3.遵守交通規(guī)則；不在公共場所喧嘩；不亂扔垃圾；4.請你就此話題再補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)個人看法。要求：1.不要逐詞翻譯。2.在文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名和姓名。3.詞數(shù)6080。短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to behave well?Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with others._【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】How to behave well?Behaving well is the secret of getting on well with ot

7、hers.As a student，I think its very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Wed better not talk loudly in public. Dont throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.F

8、inally，learn to work with others. We need good teamwork in our life. 【寫作要求】請根據(jù)以下提示信息以My favourite movie star為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。提示信息： Who is your favourite movie star? What does he or she look like? What do you think is his or her best movie? Why do you like him or her?【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】My favourite

9、movie starMy favourite movie star is Jackie Chan. He has won many prizes. He is famous not only in China, but also in other countries.Jackie Chan is not very tall. He has black hair and a big nose. His eyes are not big, but bright. He always smiles, especially after he beats bad men. Most of his mov

10、ies are exciting. I think his best movie is Police Story. He often gives money to help poor people, so I like him very much. 【寫作要求】天下最偉大的愛就是母愛。假設(shè)你是李靜，母親節(jié)就要到了，你們班將舉辦以What will you do for Mum?為題的英語演講比賽。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇80詞左右的演講稿參加比賽?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】What will you do for Mum?Hello, class. Im Li Jing. Mothers Day is c

11、oming.Im going to do something for my mum on that day.My mum likes flowers, so Ill buy some beautiful ones for her. Ill cook a delicious dinner after school. Our family will get together and have dinner happily. Also, Ill send my mum a card and say “Happy Mothers Day” to her.I love my mum very much

12、and Ill study hard to make her proud of me one day.Thanks for your attention. 【寫作要求】親愛的同學(xué)們，課余時間、周末、假期，你們通常都是怎樣度過的呢？請以“My Free Time”為題，寫一篇短文。信息提示：1. 參加運(yùn)動，強(qiáng)身健體；2. 娛樂活動，放松心情；3. 做家務(wù)，幫助父母；4. 課外閱讀，開拓視野。要點(diǎn)：1. 根據(jù)信息提示，把握要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不逐字翻譯。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名或校名。3. 詞數(shù)為80-100。文章的開頭已給出，但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。My Free TimeI have lots

13、 of things to do in my free time. _【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】My Free TimeI have lots of things to do in my free time.Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the

14、 housework at the weekends too. When I get tired, I would like to sit by the balcony and read books such as a novel, a science fiction, or even a poem. Reading calms my heart down and satisfies my hunger for knowledge.I love my free time because I enjoy the freedom. 【寫作要求】每一個人,每一個國家，都擁有夢想?！爸袊鴫簟?/p>

15、是目前最熱的話題。作為中學(xué)生，你是如何理解中國夢的？你的中國夢是什么呢？為實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢想，你將怎么做呢？假設(shè)你叫李紅（Li Hong）,請以“My Dream”為題，寫一篇不少于100詞的英語短文。要求： 1. 條理清楚，有表明自己觀點(diǎn)的句子。2. 書寫工整，句式規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和大小寫使用正確。3. 短文中應(yīng)盡量包括提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名。4. 參考詞匯：China dream，come true ,achieve ones dreams., give up， hold on to, make up of【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】My DreamEveryone has his

16、dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, and they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams.My names Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have t

17、o study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I wont give it up , I must get it over .Im sure its very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true

18、 one day. 【寫作要求】當(dāng)今社會，與人交往越來越成為一種不可或缺的能力，作為中學(xué)生，學(xué)會如何與人相處尤為重要。假如上周你們班對“如何與人相處”展開了討論，“How to get on well with others?”為題，寫一篇英語短文。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；(3)文中請勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】How to get on well with others?As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what w

19、ays?First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. Whats more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who a

20、re in trouble.In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy. 【寫作要求】在不同的地方有不同的風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣，飲食文化很重要。中國的飲食文化不同于西方。請你談?wù)勚袊娜?，以“when you in China, do as the Chinese do!” 為題寫一篇短文。要求：80詞左右，內(nèi)容合理；要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】When

21、in China, do as the Chinese do!Meals in China are different in some ways from meals in the WestIn China, lunch is usually served around 12 oclockAs for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the WestChopsticks are used to eat most foodGenerally, for dinner, therell be lots of diff

22、erent dishes, not just three coursesBesides, Chinese people like to talk about food, so its a good topic during a mealThe golden rule is: when youre in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do! 【寫作要求】養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，對于我們每一位學(xué)生成長很有幫助。請根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)90左右的短文，發(fā)表在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站上。提示要點(diǎn)：（一）良好的生活和學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣包括：1）在生活方面：健

23、康飲食 經(jīng)常鍛煉 利用好時間2）在學(xué)習(xí)方面：課前預(yù)習(xí) 認(rèn)真聽講 獨(dú)立作業(yè)（二）良好習(xí)慣帶來的益處包括1）幫助我們更好的學(xué)習(xí)知識2）使我們提高技能，學(xué)會自我控制。（三） 談?wù)勀愕母惺茏魑囊螅?、表達(dá)中必須包含所給提示要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2、詞數(shù)90左右，開關(guān)已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3、表達(dá)中請勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。A Good Habit, a Successful School LifeA habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something

24、 that is hard to stop doing_【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】A Good Habit, a Successful School LifeA habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doingIn our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy dietAlso, its necessary for us to exercise a lotAnd we s

25、hould learn to make good use of our timeIn our school life, we should prepare well for each lessonIn class, we must listen to the teacher carefullyBesides, its important for us to do our homework on our ownIn a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skillsWe can learn to c

26、ontrol ourselves if we have good habitsI think good habits are really good for our mind and body 【寫作要求】學(xué)會分享很重要。你有哪些東西要分享?可采取哪些方式分享?請根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，寫一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。要求：1要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2詞數(shù)：80詞左右(開頭已給出、不計(jì)人總詞數(shù))；3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。SharingIts very important to learn to share with each other【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】SharingI

27、ts very important to learn to share with each other.I have many things to share in different waysFor example，I can share some beautiful pictures，favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQe-mail which are widely used. Now Id like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with

28、 youEmily was lonely and unhappyI hoped to cheer her upSo I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after classAs time went by，she became used to sharing her feelings with meNow were good friendsIn a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow upWe can learn a lo

29、t from sharing and enjoy our lives more 【寫作要求】近年來我國的發(fā)展世人矚目，中國的傳統(tǒng)文化正越來越受到各國朋友的關(guān)注。請根據(jù)提示，以“The Spring Festival”為題寫一篇短文，向外國朋友介紹我國的春節(jié)。要求：1、字跡工整，規(guī)范；2、 80詞左右；3、根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)及參考詞匯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。春節(jié)是中國農(nóng)歷年（the lunar year）的第一天；春節(jié)前：一個月前開始準(zhǔn)備（prepare）食物，打掃衛(wèi)生，裝飾（decorate）房子；除夕（On Chinese New Years Eve）：家人團(tuán)員（get together）, 吃年

30、夜飯（big dinner）,守夜（stay up till midnight）, 放煙花鞭炮（play fireworks and crackers）；大年初一（the first day）：穿新衣（put on new clothes），向父母拜年（greet parents），收壓歲錢（get lucky money）【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】The Spring FestivalIn China, the Spring festival is the first day of the lunar year. People usually start preparing for the festi

31、val one month before it comes. They prepare delicious food, and clean and decorate their homes. On Chinese New Years Eve, the family all get together for a big dinner. They stay up till midnight, and then play fireworks and crackers for good luck. On the first day of the lunar New Year, children put

32、 on their new clothes and greet their parents. They are very happy to get lucky money from them. 【寫作要求】假如你是李華,是一名初中生。隨著科技的發(fā)展,iPad已成為中學(xué)生的新寵。用iPad既可以聽音樂,閱讀純文本電子書,又可以玩電子游戲。請你用英語給某英語報(bào)社寫一篇短文,談?wù)勚袑W(xué)生使用iPad的利弊。短文內(nèi)容必須包括以下幾點(diǎn):1. 使用iPad對學(xué)習(xí)的好處;2. 對課堂紀(jì)律和學(xué)習(xí)可能產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響;3. 提出自己的建議并說明理由。注意:開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總數(shù)。詞數(shù)100字左右。Is

33、iPad Good or Bad for Middle School Students?Im a junior middle school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and they think its a fashion to use them.【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】Is iPad good or bad for middle school students?Im a junior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and they

34、 think its a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, its helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without

35、earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore conce

36、ntration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way. 【寫作要求】三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束,靜坐在考場中的你,一定會思緒萬千。三年來,你在學(xué)習(xí)、生活等方面取得了優(yōu)異的成績,這些成績的背后有老師的辛勤教誨、家長的次次鼓勵,還有現(xiàn)在想來你很感謝他們。請以“Thank you,my.”為題寫一篇英語短文。要求如下:1. 短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括人物的外貌、性

37、格、愛好和使你難忘之處等;2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名;3. 詞數(shù)80左右?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文1】Thank you,My English teacherI should say “thank you”to my English teacher.Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. Hes kind

38、but strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.I think he is the best in my mind.I will remember him forever.【優(yōu)秀滿分范文2】Thank You,My MotherWher

39、ever we are today, whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother.I think my mother is one of the best mothers in the world. She is the busiest one in my family. She does chores for the family and cares about my s