2021年英語四級寫作模擬試題及答案(卷十)

1、2021 年英語四級寫作模擬試題及答案（卷十）題號一二三四五六總分得分題 目 要 求 ： Private Tutoring Outline:1. 為孩子聘請家教目前非常普遍2. 家教的利與弊3. 我的看法參考范文： Sample:A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors.Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parent

2、s, for various reasons, missed the chance of obtaining a good education. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless. Private tutoring is the only solution. As private tutoringis usually one-to-one, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the pupi

3、l clearly.However, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, ittakes up so much of the pupils time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment, which are essential for their physical and mental health. For another, some teachers, busy“shuttling ” fromone family

4、to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. Whats more, some teachers are eager to help pupils do well in the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking rather than help them acquire what is more meaningful.Generally speaking, its disadvantagesoutweigh its advantages. Greater e

5、mphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of pupils potentials. Only in this way can a new generationbe healthily brought up.How do movies or television influence people sbehavior? Use reasons and specific examples tosupport

6、your answer.【范文】The Influence of Television and MoviesThere is no doubt that watching television andmovies can influence the way that people behave.Moreover, it seems that people are spending moreand more time watching some sort of visualentertainment, whether it is television, a video tapeor a DVD.

7、 Therefore, the effects of visual media cannot be ignored.One obvious effect of these media is that watching them inducespeople to buy certainproducts. Television advertising is widespread and, nowadays, even movie theaters permitadvertisements. Another way TV and the movies affect people is that th

8、ey give people either abroader view of the worldor a distorted one, depending on whattype ofprogram they watch.Those who watch news and educational program canlearnmanynewthingswhilethosewhowatchprimarily entertainmentshows may come to believe that most people in the worldpossess great wealth and go

9、od looks. It may make them become dissatisfied with their ownlives. Finally, perhaps the most susceptible viewers are children, who may be unable to tell factfrom fiction and may try to imitate acts that they see on TV or in the movies.With the ever-increasing popularity of video entertainment, soci

10、etymustpayattentiontotheseeffects.Television andmovies, while entertaining and informative, cannot take the placeof real experience.1. 前段時(shí)間校園火災(zāi)頻發(fā)，造成生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)損失2. 分析火災(zāi)發(fā)生的原因3. 作為學(xué)生，如何預(yù)防校園火災(zāi)發(fā)生審題概述這是一分析火災(zāi)原因和如何預(yù)防火災(zāi)為中心的文章，撰寫時(shí)重點(diǎn)即在于此。 開篇綜述校園火災(zāi)頻發(fā)情形及造成的生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)損失， 然后說明火災(zāi)原因， 最后提出可能的火災(zāi)預(yù)防措施。 第一段， 主要概述 ; 第二段，說明原因 ;第三段，詳

11、細(xì)論述措施。【范文】Fire Prevention on CampusPeople are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties weredamaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking“, Wh

12、at onearth results in these repeated tragedies?”A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave theheaters unattended, the risks are rather hig

13、h should the water in thebottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on t

14、he importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving room

15、s. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.第一段思路點(diǎn)評：概述并引入下文語言點(diǎn)提示：(1) 此句 What on earth results in these repeated tragedies? ?？勺鳛檫^渡句，引出下文(2) 注意描述有關(guān)火災(zāi)客觀事實(shí)， 多使用被動語態(tài)， 如 are alarmed by，were reported， were burned down，were damaged， Faced with。第二段思路點(diǎn)評： 論述火災(zāi)的主要原因是使用電熱水器， 還有造成火災(zāi)的次要原因是實(shí)用電爐、蠟燭和亂扔煙蒂語言點(diǎn)提示： electric water

16、-heaters 電熱水器第三段思路點(diǎn)評： 詳述預(yù)防火災(zāi)的三點(diǎn)措施， 注意使用連接詞語 first, second, lastly。語言點(diǎn)提示：take precautions 采取預(yù)防措施fire extinguisher 滅火器1. 校園盜竊案件時(shí)有發(fā)生2. 物品被盜的原因3. 學(xué)生如何加強(qiáng)防盜意識審題概述這是一篇論述校園物品被盜和加強(qiáng)防盜意識的文章。第一段， 主要陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況。 第二段， 主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。第三段，主要闡述學(xué)生怎樣增強(qiáng)防盜意識。【范文】Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts“ If you

17、dont want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, youd better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoyingas they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their tar

18、gets ranging widely from bikes,cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard tofind. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft

19、 alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they ll also leave their bikes unlockedbefore a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuffbefore t

20、hey go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay onguard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more sp

21、ecific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go.In addition, it s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbou

22、ring dorms.第一段思路點(diǎn)評：陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況語言點(diǎn)提示： it seems that 此句型表示一種可能性第二段思路點(diǎn)評：說明被盜原因語言點(diǎn)提示：(1) What makes students the easy targets此?句引出下文(2) anti-theft alertness 防盜意識(3) lack of alertness缺乏警惕(4) light-fingered 小偷小摸的、慣行扒竊的第三段思路點(diǎn)評：闡述如何加強(qiáng)防盜意識語言點(diǎn)提示：注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞語 in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。1. 現(xiàn)

23、在社會上有各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班2. 有些人認(rèn)為有必要參加課外培訓(xùn)班，有些人則認(rèn)為沒有必要3. 你的觀點(diǎn)審題概述這是一篇主要論述人們和你對社會上各類培訓(xùn)班看法的文章。第一段，概述各種各樣培訓(xùn)班的狀況。第二段，論述人們對參加課外培 訓(xùn)班的不同看法。第三段，重點(diǎn)闡述你對此的看法?！痉段摹縄s it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided

24、 concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.Some consider it advis

25、able to attend such classes while othersbelieve it unnecessary. The former argues that its far more effective tocommand these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in

26、 school, hence, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than get knowledge into our hea

27、d.As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does usno harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.第一段思路點(diǎn)評：

28、 第一句綜述社會上提供知識、 技能服務(wù)的各類培訓(xùn)班雨后春筍般興起，第二句例舉語言速成課程特別火爆。語言點(diǎn)提示：(1)a great diversity of 各種各樣的(2)mushrooming 迅速擴(kuò)散、增加(3)language crash courses語言速成課程第二段思路點(diǎn)評： 先用一句對比式地?cái)[出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)， 再分別詳述他們的看法。語言點(diǎn)提示： 注意連接詞語 while ，The former，They，The latter group of people 等的使用，強(qiáng)化了上下文之間的連貫性。第三段思路點(diǎn)評：辯證地論述你對參加各類培訓(xùn)班的看法。語言點(diǎn)提示：(1)as far

29、as I am concerned我認(rèn)為，就我而言(2)counter-productive 適得其反的、事與愿違的Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying "The beautiful thing about learning is that nobody can take that away from you." You can cite examples to illustrate the beauty and fea

30、tures of knowledge. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.參考范文 :The Beauty of KnowledgePraise of knowledge has never come to an end since ancient times. Apparently, knowledge is a treasure thateverybody volunteers to possess and much of success could be attributedto itdirect

31、ly or indirectly.As far as I am concerned, the beauty of knowledge can be explainedin three aspects.Firstly, knowledge is open to all human beings. People can learn whatever they wish in one way or another. Secondly, knowledge learnt can be reflected in one's later life, so that one knows how to

32、 savor thepresent moment in peaceful times and how to deal with problems in difficult times. Last but not least, one of the most prominent features of knowledge is that one carries it throughout his life. Even if one loses a large fortune, he will never be a beggar if he already knows how to make mo

33、ney.To sum up, knowledge is of great importance in one's lifetime. It isadvisable that one should learn the beauty of knowledge and enjoy the process of learning.Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to writeacomposition on the topic :Cell Phones .You should write no less than 120

34、words and base your composition on the outline below:1. 描述手機(jī)用戶數(shù)的變化情況2. 出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3. 對此現(xiàn)象作出評價(jià)【寫作范文】Cell PhonesAs is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. A

35、nd in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, acell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly,a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through

36、 sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.The wide use of cell phones has made them more and moreindispensable in peoples daily life. The functions of the cell phone have

37、 made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainmentif you play them in a reasonable way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once. Yet if you have enough self-c

38、ontrol over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.寫作要求： 1.目前，微博用戶數(shù)量持續(xù)增長2. 微博是一把雙刃劍3. 我的看法范文My Views on Micro-blogWith the number of micro-bloggers soarin9，micro-blog has become part of our lives and has drawn much attention around the country.Micro-blog is a double

39、-edged sword.On the one hand ， micro-blog plays an important role in upholding justice，advancing social democracyand providing a platform for people to comment about their lives.On the other hand, micro- blogging can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people s privacy. What is worse.s

40、ome people argue that thewidespread use of micro-blogs has made it easier for people to spreadrumors and false news.and the platform is predestined for closure.As far as I am concerned.micr0 blog will play all increasingly important role in our Eves.Only when the administration creates a favorable c

41、ondition for communication and users conform to the rules of the new media.can micro-bloggers enjoy a healthy information-sharing platform.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write acomposition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composi

42、tion on the outline below:1) 現(xiàn)在有些大學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，家長和學(xué)校對此憂心忡忡2) 但有人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲并非一無是處3) 你的看法。范文Online GamesAs a product of modern computer and theInternet, online games have become very popular among college students. A great many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we

43、 see, some students lacking self-discipline are toomuchindulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worryfromthe teachers and parents.However, some others argue that online games are not alwaysharmful. They can train the ability

44、 of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition onthe

45、 topic: Living alone or Living with Roommates? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1. 有人認(rèn)為大學(xué)里應(yīng)獨(dú)自生活2. 另一些認(rèn)為大學(xué)里應(yīng)與別人同住3. 你的看法【寫作范文】Living alone or Living with RoommatesNowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among thecollege students as to whether t

46、hey should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students dormitory. Opinions are divided over the matter.Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves. They can enjoy absolute freedom in aroom of their own. They

47、 can have their own timetable without disturbing others. They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of itsown. With several students sharing the same room, each person s e

48、xperiences can be greatly enriched. They can learn a lot from talking toone another. By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.As far as I m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because Ilove the feeling of belonging. Besides, it is a lot cheaper

49、to live in a dorm than to rent an apartment outside the campus.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write acomposition on the topic Frustration Education should be Strengthenedamong College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ：1

50、) 加強(qiáng)挫折教育十分重要，2) 舉例說明你的觀點(diǎn)，3) 為了加強(qiáng)挫折教育，我們應(yīng)該······參考范文Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students It is universally acknowledged thatcollege students should beguided correctly to face frustrations in life. Frustration is inevitableduring our life, a

51、nd frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities. The truth of it is deep and profound.A great many remarkable illustrations contribute to this argument.A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committingsuicide each year when confronte

52、dwithsome kind of frustration.This is close tosuggest thatstrengtheningfrustration education allows of no delay. As a matter of fact, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing with frustrations. Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead

53、 of drawing lessons.Judging fromthe evidence offered, we might safely draw theconclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students. But what is worth noting is colleges should also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education. To conclude, c

54、ollege students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life.參考譯文普遍公認(rèn)我們應(yīng)該正確引導(dǎo)大學(xué)生面對生活中的挫折。 挫折在我們生活中必不可少， 而挫折教育應(yīng)該在學(xué)生和大學(xué)中展開。 其中的道理非常深刻。很多值得注意的例子支持上述論證。 一個(gè)恰當(dāng)?shù)睦泳褪钱?dāng)面對某種挫折的時(shí)候， 每年自殺的大學(xué)生越來越多。 這充分證明了加強(qiáng)挫折教育刻不容緩。 事實(shí)上，成功人士似乎傾向于擅長面對挫折。 此外， 大多數(shù)學(xué)生經(jīng)常被挫折所煩惱和沮喪，而非吸取教訓(xùn)。根據(jù)上述論證， 我們可以得出結(jié)論： 挫折教育對于大學(xué)生十分重

55、要。但值得注意的是，在進(jìn)行挫折教育的同時(shí)，大學(xué)也應(yīng)為學(xué)生提供心理服務(wù)?？傊?在面對生活中的挫折時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該對大學(xué)生給與正確引導(dǎo)。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition on the topic SocialPractice of College Students. You should write atleast 120 words, and base your composition on theoutline below:1) 各大學(xué)在假期都會組織學(xué)生參加各種社會實(shí)踐活動，2)

56、 這些活動給大學(xué)生帶來了哪些好處，3) 參加社會實(shí)踐活動應(yīng)該注意些什么?！痉段摹縎ocial Practice of College StudentsNowadays a large number of universitiesencourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During theholidays, students in mounting numbers choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, ortake part

57、 in other practical activities alike. It is obviousthat social practice is playing anincreasingly essential role in China scollege education.Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice. Above all, they areprovided with more opportunities to contactthe real world outside campus. What is more, insocial practice activities, students can apply their theoretical knowledge to the solution to thepractical problems. So their practica