牛津譯林九年級(jí)上UnitTask學(xué)習(xí)教案

1、會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)1牛津牛津(ni jn)譯林九年級(jí)上譯林九年級(jí)上UnitTask第一頁，共16頁。Learning Aims By the end of class, we students are expected to1、Find out highlights and problems in our own writing as well as our peers while fulfilling some tasks、2、 focus on writing problems of contents and languages, such as the lack of details about i

2、deas, poor word choices and boring sentences, etc、3、improve our oral and written ability in evaluating(評估評估(pn ) and improving both our pieces and others, especially editing our own first drafts、What problems of writing will be mainly solved?4/17/2022第1頁/共16頁第二頁，共16頁。I like art best Both my teachers

3、 and classmates think I am able to sing well because I have a gift for singing、 I began to learn my first song Twinkle, twinkle, little star when I was six years old、 At that time I found that singing was such an interesting thing, up to now, I have learned over two hundred songs、 In my spare time,

4、I often sing songs to others、 Everyone is happy to be my listeners, because of my passion and confidence、 Even though I cannot be a professional singer, I still get a lot of fun from singing、 Because of singing, my life becomes more colourful、Lets review if the piece is finished well enough、4/17/202

5、2第2頁/共16頁第三頁，共16頁。一、查作品一、查作品(zupn)完成度完成度Does the writer manage to tell readerswhat art form he likes best?whether he is good at this art from?when he became interested in this art form?whether he has any stories about this art form?How important this art from is to him?Adapted from the questionnaire

6、 in the text bookLets check if the writer finishes the writing task4/17/2022第3頁/共16頁第四頁，共16頁。Good organizationCharacteristics of good writingGood writingFine languageEnough contents4/17/2022第4頁/共16頁第五頁，共16頁。二、評作品二、評作品(zupn)成熟度成熟度I like art best Both my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing

7、 well because I have a gift for singing、 I began to learn my first song Twinkle, twinkle, little star when I was six years old、 At that time I found that singing was such an interesting thing, up to now, I have learned over two hundred songs、 In my spare time, I often sing songs to others、 Everyone

8、is happy to be my listeners, because of my passion and confidence、 Even though I cannot be a professional singer, I still get a lot of fun from singing、 Because of singing, my life becomes more colourful、4/17/2022第5頁/共16頁第六頁，共16頁。二評作品二評作品(zupn)成熟度成熟度結(jié)構(gòu): 1、文章段落是否清晰易讀? 2分 2、文章開頭是否吸引讀者? 1分 3、文章結(jié)構(gòu)是否有所感悟

9、? 1分內(nèi)容: 1、文章是否講述故事而非告訴事情? 3分 2、文章是否有生動(dòng)情節(jié)和細(xì)節(jié)描寫? 3分 3、文章全部內(nèi)容是否與主題密切相關(guān)?2分語言: 1、文章是否有令人眼前一亮的用詞? 3分 2、文章是否有句子嘗試創(chuàng)造畫面感? 3分 3、文章是否借鑒了教材中的語言? 2分Lets review if the piece is finished well enough、4/17/2022第6頁/共16頁第七頁，共16頁。三、賞同伴三、賞同伴(tngbn)好好作品作品 The art form I like bestCalligraphy is a kind of beautiful handwri

10、ting I like best、 However, I couldnt enjoy its charm years ago, “Just so so”、 I thought to myself、 On a hot, noisy summer afternoon , my father showed me lots of calligraphy works he wrote when he was 11、 “For what?” I asked、 “Teach you to learn the art of calligraphy、” he looked at me, smiling、 “Ha

11、-ha, is it of any value to a busy student like a bee?” I couldnt help laughing、 My father didnt say a word、 He just put a piece of rice paper on the table and picked up a Chinese writing brush、 He was so serious that I even felt everything got quieter at that moment、 Also I realized something surpri

12、sing was to take me to another fantastic world I had never been to-I was completely attracted by its magic、 So AMAZING、 It was from that afternoon that I started to learn calligraphy from my father and gradually lost myself in the art form, which taught me to keep peace and simple in the heart no ma

13、tter what was happening outside、 By zhonglong 4/17/2022第7頁/共16頁第八頁，共16頁。三、賞同伴三、賞同伴(tngbn)好作品好作品The art form I like best1.Does the writer use any details to make the story more interesting or easier to understand?2.Does the writer use any specific effective or memorable words to tell the story?3.Do a

14、ny students help to create pictures in your mind when you are reading the story?4.4、-Lets appreciate, and learn from our peers piece、4/17/2022第8頁/共16頁第九頁，共16頁。三、賞同伴三、賞同伴(tngbn)好作品好作品1、 Show enough details instead of telling a fact、2、 Use good words or sentences to create pictures、3、- In this way, yo

15、u can make the piece more interesting toread or much easier to understand、 In a word, when you are writing a piece, dont forget about its readers、Lets-4/17/2022第9頁/共16頁第十頁，共16頁。四、組員四、組員(z yun)齊獻(xiàn)策齊獻(xiàn)策I like art bestBoth my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing well because I have a gift for

16、singing、 I began to learn my first song Twinkle, twinkle, little star when I was six years old、 At that time I found that singing was such an interesting thing, up to now, I have learned over two hundred songs、 In my spare time, I often sing songs to others、 Everyone is happy to be my listeners, bec

17、ause of my passion and confidence、 Even though I cannot be a professional singer, I still get a lot of fun from singing、 Because of singing, my life becomes more colourful、4/17/2022第10頁/共16頁第十一頁，共16頁。五、練修改展示五、練修改展示(zhnsh)與評價(jià)與評價(jià)1、The biggest problem in my first draft is-、2、 a、 I try to add/cut off/ch

18、ange/-because I hope my readers can know/understand/realize-better、 b、 I make such a change in my piece because I want to express/show/find a way to- c、 The best words/sentences/most interesting details in my pieces are-、I wrote them because-、 d、 I am satisfied with the change most because-、 e、 Compa