2020中考英語作文熱點素材范文16與父母相處

1、熱點16與父母相處1熱點預(yù)測2020年中考與父母相處無疑是今年的火爆熱點之一，它給我們的生活帶來很大的影響。今天，選擇的 英語寫作預(yù)測話題是：與父母相處。【預(yù)測題目】(一)根據(jù)要求完成作文，詞數(shù)：80100詞。假如你的鄰居李濤即將升入初中，他很想了解一下初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，請你給他寫封信談一談，包括以 下內(nèi)容并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名。(1)學(xué)習(xí)方法上建議。(2)與老師同學(xué)融洽相處。3）與父母之間的溝通?！緟⒖挤段摹緿ear Li Tao,I m glad to share something with you. I think it s the most important to liste

2、nto the teacherscarefully in class. It s not necessary to do too many exercises. Weshould try to find the right method to solve them. We can collect the problems we haven t worked out correctly. Go over them at times. The harder you work ， the better grades you will get. We should get on well with o

3、ur teachers and class to keep us happy. Try to be more active and help each other. We d better notargue with our parents when we re in disagreement. Have a talk with them. We should help themdo housework after school. Don t spend too much time on the Internet. It s not good for ourhealth. Good luck!

4、【解析】試題分析：這是個給材料作文。提示中已經(jīng)給出了作文的寫作要點。在寫作時，注意將要點理清，不要遺漏。在整理文章的結(jié)構(gòu)后，用正確的語言把意思表述清楚。文章可使用一般現(xiàn)在時，并且注意主謂一 致。句子之間可適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂眠B詞，使文章邏輯更緊密。寫作亮點：短文敘述清楚，層次分明：第一點是關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)方法上建議；第二點介紹如何與老師同學(xué)相處，最后介紹如何處理與父母之間的關(guān)系。 The harder you work ， the better grades you will get. We d 27re in disagreement. 都是比較經(jīng)典的句子。better not argue with our

5、parents when we（二）你的好朋友Linda ， 現(xiàn)在面臨很多壓力，爸爸媽媽總是把她與其他同學(xué)相比較，因此她最近心情很不好。請你給她寫一封信，建議她1. 與父母好好溝通， 2. 通過做運(yùn)動，聽音樂等方式學(xué)會放松。要求： 1. 語句通順，符合邏輯， 2. 70 詞左右。Notes ：compare with 與 . 相比較； learn to relax 學(xué)會放松；get on well with 與 . 相處融洽； in a bad mood 心情不好；pressure ； stress 壓力?！緟⒖挤段摹縃i! Linda, I am sorry to hear that you

6、 are stressed out these days and your parents oftencompare you with your classmate. I have the same problems as yours. I am very sad,too! But I know my parents want meto study harder and get better grades so they are strict with me. So I communicate with them. And now I understand them and they unde

7、rstand me. So you can try to communicate with your parents. Or you can listen to some quiet music and watch some games to relax yourself. AndI hope you will become happy later!【解析】試題分析：根據(jù)題目要求可知，本文主要以第一人稱書寫，主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，在寫作時可適當(dāng) 使用一些連接詞，使文章前后連貫，符合邏輯。要注意把每個要點都表達(dá)出來，不可遺漏任何一個。寫作亮點：本文首先對朋友的煩惱表示同情，同時說出自己也有類似的

8、煩惱，并講述自己解決的一些方法。符合本題要求及要點提示。同時，本文中多次使用連詞如and、or、so為文章增色不少。真題再現(xiàn)（一）在微信上，Jack跟Bruce談到他跟父母關(guān)系不好，并向 Bruce尋求幫助。假設(shè)你是Bruce ,請根據(jù)下面的提示，給Jack回復(fù)信息。要求：1）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（至少兩點）；2）詞數(shù)：100左右（開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù) ）。內(nèi)容提示：現(xiàn)象我過去經(jīng)常跟父母吵架，有時幾大耳、說話。原因父母過分擔(dān)心我的成績，給我太大的壓力。我不幫父母做家務(wù)，也沒有意識到 幫父母的重要性。相反地，我每天花至少兩個小時玩電腦游戲。措施現(xiàn)在我能和父母相處得好。我認(rèn)

9、為我們該和父母溝通。Jack, don't worry! I didn't get on well with my parent either.Best wishes to you.【參考范文】Jack, don't worry! I didn't get on well with my parents, either.I used to argue with myparents,sometimes we didn t say a word for a few days. Because my parents really worried about my gr

10、ades, it gave me too much pressure. I didn t help them do any housework, because I didn t think it was important to do housework. On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games every day. But now I can get on well with my parents. I think we should often communicatewith my pare

11、nts. In our free time, we can do some housework with parents. Wecan also spend weekend with our parents. We can share our happiness and sadness with our parents. In this way, we can get on well with our parents.【解析】這篇作文要求我們以 Bruce 的身份給 Jack 寫一封信，背景是Jack 與他的父母關(guān)系不好，想尋求你的幫助。題目中用表格的形式呈現(xiàn)了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的

12、英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。通過審題可知： 1. 這篇短文應(yīng)用第一人稱來敘述，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要用 I 或者 we； 2. 短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般 過去時態(tài)為主，具體來看，第一個內(nèi)容和第二個內(nèi)容應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，謂語動詞用過去式形式；第三個內(nèi)容應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能逐詞去翻譯表格里的內(nèi) 容，而應(yīng)用英語中的句式結(jié)構(gòu)來表達(dá)，如常見的主謂賓和主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，構(gòu)成簡單句；在文章中穿插使用并 列句或者復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等，提升文章的檔次，長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。同時語 句之間應(yīng)注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如副詞、連詞或者短語等，使文章整體意思連貫?！军c睛

13、】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點。短文內(nèi)容主要包括三個方面：首先作者介紹了過去他和父母相處的情況；接下來分析了自己與父母相處不好的原因然后介紹了他與父母現(xiàn)在關(guān)系好了，并結(jié)合自己的具體做法給Jack提了一些建議。整篇文章層次清晰，敘述有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以第一人稱為主，使用了一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)，符合語言的表達(dá)需要，謂語動詞形式準(zhǔn)確，尤其是注意了不規(guī)則動詞過去式的形式，語法規(guī)范。第三，文章句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，短文中既有簡單句，也有復(fù)合句或并列句，如Becausemy parents really worri

14、ed about my grades, it gave me too much pressure. I didn' t help them doany housework, b ecause I didn ' t think it was important to do housework.中兩個原因狀語從句。其他的較好的句型和短語有 On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games everyday. 、 I think we should often communicate with m

15、y parents.、 In this way, we can get on well withour parents. 等。（二）假如你是班長，學(xué)期結(jié)束時你要給同學(xué)作簡短的評價。你班的李華這個學(xué)期變化很大，請你根據(jù)提示 寫一篇簡評。過去功課不好，常與同學(xué)爭吵，垃圾被他撒的滿地都是，課桌總是一團(tuán)糟。現(xiàn)在自從老師和他溝通后，后了很大變化。（學(xué)習(xí)、與同學(xué)相處、生活）結(jié)果父母、老師對他很滿意。希望在即將到來的考試中取得好成績。汪思：短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；括號部分須用3、4句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;詞數(shù)80個左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)?！緟⒖挤段摹縇i h ua

16、has improved a lot this term.In the past he didn' t do well in his subjects. He oftenquarreled with his classmates. Rubbish was spread all over the floor by him. His desk was alwaysin a mess. He has changed a lot since the teacher had communication with him. Now he works hardat his lessons. He g

17、ets along well with his classmates. He often sweeps the floor. His parentsand teachers are satisfied with him. I hope he will get good grades in the coming exam.【解析】試題分析：本文的寫作對李華的過去的，情況進(jìn)行描寫，不擅長于功課he didn ' t do well in hissubjects. 與朋友吵架 quarreled with his classmates.垃圾被他撒的滿地都是Rubbish was spread

18、 allover the floor by him.課桌總是一團(tuán)糟 His desk was always in a mess.然后對他現(xiàn)在的情況進(jìn)行描寫,如與同學(xué)能很好的相處 gets along well with his classmates.等，再對現(xiàn)在的結(jié)果是父母、老師對他很滿意 His parents and teachers are satisfied with him.最后提出希望 I hope he will get good gradesin the coming exam.點評：本文不難寫，對于作文的寫作要注意詳略得當(dāng)，學(xué)生在平時的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常 用的表達(dá)多

19、個好處的句型。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對于不會表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會替換，同 時注意用平時在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫 出文采。（三）我們的生活中處處充滿著愛，有父母的愛，有老師的愛，有同學(xué)的愛，有朋友的愛請以" Love AroundMe （我身邊的愛）”為題，寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要點如下:愛你的人愛的表現(xiàn)父母為你做早餐；送你上學(xué)老師傳授知識；照顧你同學(xué)一起學(xué)習(xí)；和睦相處朋友在網(wǎng)上交流；分享快樂與煩惱寫作要求：1.根據(jù)表格提示父母的愛、老師的愛、同學(xué)的愛和朋友的愛都要寫齊。2.詞數(shù)90詞左右，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名參考詞7匚：r

20、eceive love ; get on .with ; chat online;There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.【參考范文】Love around meThere is lots of love around me in my everyday life. Every day I can receive love from myparents, myteachers, myclassmates and myfriends. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks deliciousf

21、ood for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only look afterme well but also teach melots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates and I study together happily, getting on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often sharemy pleasure

22、and trouble. I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decisionto study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say to them, “Thank you for all your love.”【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“ Love Around Me （我身邊的愛）”為題，寫一篇短文。結(jié)合所給材料，可 知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見

23、句式的應(yīng)用，比如： There is .,Every day I can , my lovely mothercooks, I chat online with , I make a decision to , I should .等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了在我的日常生活中有很多愛我的人，接下來介紹愛我的人的表11現(xiàn)，最后我對他們的愛表示感謝。此處at school, look after, get on well with, chat with, make adecision, make gre

24、at progress 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。（四）最近從媒體報道的一些家庭事件來看，孩子與父母的關(guān)系不和諧，隔閡越來越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。針對這個問題，某中學(xué)生英文報社開展了主題為“與父母和諧相處”的征文大賽。作為一名初中畢業(yè)生，你一定有自己的思想與辨別是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想過應(yīng)該怎樣和自己的父母相處呢？請以“ How to Get on Well with Our Parents? ”為題寫一篇短文參加此次征文大賽。一、寫作要點提示1. 與父母和諧相處很重要。2. 與父母和諧相處的做法或建議：（ 1 ）理解與尊重父母（如傾聽與有禮貌表達(dá)想法）；（ 2 ）多與父母交流

25、（如分享快樂與傾訴煩惱）；（ 3 ）為父母做一些力所能及的事。3. 與父母和諧相處的感受。二、寫作要求短文應(yīng)緊扣要點，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使短文銜接、連貫，詞數(shù)控制在 80 100 詞。How to get on well with our parents?It s very important for us to get on well with our parents. But how can we get along wellwith our parents? Here is some of my advice.We should understand and respect

26、our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us.We are supposed to listen to them. When we want to tell them our opinions, we d better be ina polite way. We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, we d better help them do some thin

27、gs.I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each other.Let s get on well with our parents because they are our parents.【解析】試題

28、分析：本題是一篇提綱作文，要仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。本題要求談?wù)撛鯓优c父母和諧相處，根據(jù)提示，短文要從與父母和諧相處的重要性、怎樣相處及自己的生活感受幾個方面進(jìn)行寫作。短文用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，可以用恰當(dāng)?shù)那閼B(tài)動詞來幫助表情達(dá)意。寫作亮點：短文第一段提出觀點：與父母融洽相處很重要。開門見山，直奔主題。第二段是對如何與父母融洽相處的建議，詳略得當(dāng)，重點突出，中心明確。第三段談?wù)撟约旱纳罡惺?；最后號召人們同父母融洽相處結(jié)尾。短文層次清楚，語言連貫。短文用 should, be supposed to, had better 等等不同的形式來表示人們的責(zé)任與義

29、務(wù)，生動具體。其中用到的動詞不定式，時間狀語從句，賓語從句等，也增加了本文的文采。常用表達(dá)1. I get on well with my parents.2. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends.3. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble.We love each other.4. Let' s get on w

30、ell with our parents because they are our parents.5. It ' s very important for us to get on well with our parents.6. There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.7. On the other hand, I spent at least two hours playing computer games every day.8. I think we should often communicate with m

31、y parents.9. In this way, we can get on well with our parents.10. In a word, wherever we are, we should behave well to be good students.11. If we do, our society will be better and better.12. I think it ' s because we are too busy.13. If you follow these, you can get on well with your parents.14

32、. If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.15. I hope what I say here can help you a lot.寫作模板The topic of （主題）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides ofopinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for th

33、e reason of （支持 A 的理由一）What is more, 理由二）.Moreover, （ 理由三）.While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,（ 支持 B 的理由一）.Secondly （besides）, （理由二） .Thirdly （finally）, （ 理由三）.From my point of view, I think （我的觀點）.The reason is that （ 原因）.As a matter of fact, there

34、are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise必背簡文（一）良好的家庭關(guān)系對青少年的健康成長很重要。但現(xiàn)實生活中，不少孩子和父母之間缺乏必要的溝通和交流。作為晚輩，我們應(yīng)該如何和父母友好相處呢？請根據(jù)下面的提示，以Howto get on with parents ?為題寫一篇80詞左右的文章。（文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）與父母友好相處的要點主動交流：每天花些時間，與父母談?wù)劺蠋?，同學(xué)和學(xué)校的事;創(chuàng)造機(jī)會：每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做飯、逛商店等；討論問題：遇事多與父母討

35、論，他們會幫你更好地解決問題。How to get on with parents ?For teenagers, it's important to get on with parents.What should we do?【參考范文】How to get on with parents ?For teenagers, it's important to get on with parents. What should we do?Firstly , we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For

36、example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We'll improve our relation with them in this way. Thirdly, we'd better discuss our problems with them

37、. They will help us find better ways to solve them.It's not easy to get on with parents. So we should learn to be understanding first.試題分析：本題是一篇給提綱作文。提綱作文，要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。寫作要涉及所有提示要點。提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。短文用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作亮點：短文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，層次清楚。第一段提出自己

38、的觀點：和父母相處融洽重要；第二段就如何與父母相處提出詳細(xì)的建議；第三段簡要地概括結(jié)尾。第二段中用 firstly, secondly, thirdly等等引出各要點，讓人一目了然。短文詳略得到，中心突出。第一、三段略寫，第二段對短文中心內(nèi)容則作了非常詳細(xì)的表達(dá)。短文生動具體，詞匯運(yùn)用得當(dāng)。文中用到的 spend some time doing sth, 定語從句等等，給本文增色不少。（二）在提倡和諧的社會里，我們怎么樣才能成為一名“講文明，禮貌，守紀(jì)律”的中學(xué)生？請根據(jù)下面的提示，以“ How to be a cool s tudent? ”為題寫一篇詞數(shù)80 詞左右的短文。提示： 1. 家

39、庭表現(xiàn)：愛父母，幫助父母做一些力所能及的家務(wù)等。2. 學(xué)校表現(xiàn)：遵守校規(guī)，與同學(xué)友好相處。3. 公共場合表現(xiàn)：勿大聲喧嘩，坐公車時應(yīng)主動讓位給老人等。要求： 文章必須包括所給提示中 1 3 項的內(nèi)容， 可展開思路， 自由地適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名，校名和其他真實信息。15【參考范文】How to be a good student?As a student. it's necessary and important to behave well.When we come back home from school, we should try our best to help

40、 our parents. When we are at school, we should get on well with our schoolmates and teachers. We should also help each other .We should follow the school rules, too. In public ,we should be ready to help others who are in trouble. We'd better not talk or laugh loudly. When we are on a bus, we sh

41、ould offer our seats to the old and the women with babies.In a word, wherever we are, we should behave well to be good students. If we do, our society will be better and better.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以“ How to Be a Cool Student? ”為題，就怎樣成為一名“講文明，禮貌，守紀(jì)律”的中學(xué)生寫一篇短文。短文可以從“在家庭的表現(xiàn)”、“在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)”、“在公共場合的表現(xiàn)”幾個方面展開講述。短文用一般現(xiàn)

42、在時態(tài)，可以用 when 引出的時間狀語從句， if 引出的條件狀語從句等等來設(shè)置不同的情境來談?wù)撊藗兊男袨橐?guī)范。要注意語言的選擇及句型的運(yùn)用。要做到主題鮮明，思想積極向 上。寫作亮點：短文開門見山，直奔主題：行為規(guī)范、舉止文明很必需而且重要。第二段具體講述如何成為一名“講文明，禮貌，守紀(jì)律”的中學(xué)生。本段用“ When we -, we sho uld”排比句型，從“在家庭 的表現(xiàn)”、“在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)”、“在公共場合的表現(xiàn)”幾個方面展開講述。條理文明，生動具體。其中的try one's best, get on well with, be ready to do , had bette

43、r等等結(jié)構(gòu)為本文增色不少。第三段再次強(qiáng)調(diào)中心：無論在哪兒，我們都應(yīng)該舉止文明做好學(xué)生。并進(jìn)一步升華主題：如果我們舉止文明，我們的社會就會越來越好。17（三）提示：當(dāng)前，大多數(shù)孩子普遍存在逆反心理，孩子與父母的關(guān)系不和諧，隔閡越來越大。作為一名初中生，你會怎樣與自己的父母相處呢？請以“ How to get on well with our p arents ”為題，寫一篇英語作文。要求：1 根據(jù)所給題目，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于 60 個；2 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。【參考范文】How to get on well with our parents?Nowadays， we can not

44、 communicate with our parents well. I think it s because we are too busy.We don t have enough time to stay together.How to communicate with your parents? Here are some suggestions.First, both you and your parents should spend time with each other. Second, try to talk to your parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to you. Third, try to think about your parents more, so you will find that you can understand them.If you follow these, you can get on well with your parents.【解析】1. 題干解讀：因為