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1、 萬能質(zhì)量高作文模板 (1) When it comes to XX, there is no agreement among people as to the issue of XX: some people hold a positive attitude towards it while others are against it. In such an environment where XX is playing an increasingly important role in XX, almost XX come to believe that XX talks. There a
2、re numerous reasons(methods/approaches) to account for the phenomenon ( 或者 to contribute to this issue), I would explore the most conspicuous ones below. 第二段:One of the primary reason(方法:method, to my mind, is that such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture (topic/ problem)has aroused wide-spread
3、social concern ,Nowhere in history has the issue been talked about so much as in our society today. Apart from that, the painting(topic/ problem) reveals an upsetting story and similar events happened and happening are hared or reported in nearly all aspects of our life .What is also worth noticing
4、(considering) fact is that Enhancing peoples awareness of such practices and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities of the agenda. 第三段:In conclusion, taking into account of the above(或 In brief, we may safety (safely) arrive at the conclusion that), we may reach the con
5、clusion that it is high time that such stories were (should be) terminated or at least reduced. Only when such happenings come to an end can we maintain a happy and harmonious society as we all wish, vice and verse. 更多作文模板、小作文模板可自己關(guān)注公眾號:考研研學(xué)姐,老師私人微信號:zhedayanxuejie 第一段參考: What the drawing is trying
6、to express is symbolic and philosophic ! (并列押韻, 可以說是有用的廢話)Featured in the above image are two men who , each of them having only one leg , are running forward together. (妙在 featured 和 who,插入的 獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。這句話是得分重點,需要自己組織一個簡單的切題的句子。) However ridiculous and humorous(押韻) it may seem at first glimpse ,this ca
7、rtoon does carry rather significant implications . (可以認(rèn)為是有用的廢話.) 1 基礎(chǔ) - 核心句寫作 重要性說明:核心句寫作是考研小作文和大作文的核心部分,也是臨場發(fā)揮成分最大的部分,所以一定要花時間好好練習(xí)。 即便大作文不考圖畫作文,也一定是議論文。者也要求我們在第一段能用一句話就說清楚要評論的事物或現(xiàn)象,這句話也是我們現(xiàn)在要訓(xùn)練的核心句寫作。 _, 主語,_, 謂語 (及物動詞后加賓語),_. 具體步驟 步驟1:看清圖畫的主要含義,并因此確定S + V .(或者S + Vt + n)迅速寫出句子。每幅圖一句。 (此步重點:確定主語,也就
8、是抓住圖畫中最主要的事物是關(guān)鍵,一般這一事物居于圖畫正中間) 例如 A lamp is flickering. 步驟2.圍繞圖片主語列出所有的細節(jié)并添加到句子當(dāng)中,包括: 1.找出可以修飾主語的形容詞(單個的放在主語前邊)A small oil lamp is flickering. 2.找出主語的同位語后加定語從句 (主語后)A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light , is flickering. 3.找出可以修飾主語的介詞短語 (主語后邊)A small oil lamp , the only object that
9、gives off light in the picture, is flickering. 4.找出主語發(fā)出的其它動作,做成伴隨狀語,放在主語前做導(dǎo)入Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering. 步驟3 圍繞謂語展開細節(jié)并添加到句子當(dāng)中,包括: 1.找出可修飾動作的副詞,放在謂語后Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil la
10、mp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly. 2.看看動作發(fā)生的時間和地點可不可以用介詞短語來做,放謂語及副詞的后邊,地點在前,時間在后Standing lonely but full of 4 confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time. 3.看看句子謂語
11、動作造成什么結(jié)果或意義沒有,如果有,做成后置的伴隨狀語Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time,bringing brightness to everything around it. 4.如果謂語動作沒有造成什么結(jié)果或意義,看看有沒有其它的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)可以做成獨立主或伴隨狀語,來把謂語動作細節(jié)化。 confiden
12、ce, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time. 3.看看句子謂語動作造成什么結(jié)果或意義沒有,如果有,做成后置的伴隨狀語Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in
13、 the darkness all the time,bringing brightness to everything around it. 4.如果謂語動作沒有造成什么結(jié)果或意義,看看有沒有其它的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)可以做成獨立主或伴隨狀語,來把謂語動作細節(jié)化。 步驟4 如果謂語后有賓語,再按主語擴展模式略作處理(加前后定語,盡量短) 最終版本:Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering qui
14、etly in the darkness all the time,bringing brightness to everything around it. (37字) 大家再看一個例子,進一步熟悉一下以上四個步驟 中外文化的融合圖片描述 1. An American girl appears pleasant. 2. A beautiful young American girl appears pleasant. 3. A beautiful young American girl, an international student, appears pleasant. 4. A beau
15、tiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant. 5. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant. 6. Standing under a tree, a beauti
16、ful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears obviously pleasant. 總結(jié):通過以上四個步驟,從定主謂入手,通過添加細節(jié),迅速制造出一個30-40字左右的好句子作為大作文開頭。 在小作文當(dāng)中,也是利用同樣的方法,迅速的說明事由,細節(jié)的添加主要以回答下列幾個問題為主:誰(who)在什么時候(when)在什么地方(where)出于何種原因(why)通過何種方式(how)作了什么事情(what) 例如:投訴信:-對兩條狗進
17、行投訴 1. These dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 2. These vicious dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 3. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought, were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 4. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were boug
18、ht by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 5. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 6. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bo
19、ught by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since. 7. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since, bark
20、ing day and night, leaving waste everywhere, and even attacking both residents and passers-by. (44字) 下面,請大家按照剛才講述的步驟練習(xí)寫下面的句子,這是作文成功的關(guān)鍵,最后沖刺的幾天,請一定多練 1 起點就是終點 (提示:主語是男孩,謂語是跑向終點) 2 溫室的花朵第一幅 (提示:主語是花朵,謂語是挺立) 3 溫室的花朵第二幅 (提示:主語還是花朵,謂語是變得虛弱) 4 把上兩句話用 -, while - 的模式連成一句 提解決方案, 分個人和社會兩句來寫 Ø 壞事 Ø 好
21、事 Without this necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society, nothing could ever be achieved and everything will be in a chaos. Without this necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society, nothing could ever be achieved and everything will be in a chaos. Therefore, a per
22、son with no idea of love, most people believe, is an unfortunate failure in the 21centry, deprived of one of the most valuable intrinsic qualities they should possess. Therefore, a person with no idea of love, most people believe, is an unfortunate failure in the 21centry, deprived of one of the mos
23、t valuable intrinsic qualities they should possess. 說出好事的作用(第二句) 指出沒有它的后果 以個人為例,重申沒有它的后果 Once convinced of the seriousness and urgency of this issue, sb should seek to dispel their misunderstanding and put the cultivation of a more rational attitude on the agenda of priority. Once convinced of the s
24、eriousness and urgency of this issue, sb should seek to dispel their misunderstanding and put the cultivation of a more rational attitude on the agenda of priority. In addition to the effort on the part of the individual, the government and departments concerned should also assume their own responsibility, pass relevant regulations and put them into force. In addition to the effort on the part of the individual, the government and departments concerned should also assume their own responsibility, pass relevant regulations and put them into force. Real
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