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1、10錢汪海環(huán)球雅思原創(chuàng)寫(xiě)作VIP內(nèi)部講義(2009.1.10) Bar ChartSome people believe that the range of tech no logies available to in dividuals will in crease the gap between the rich and the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(科技類)【In today ' world, the gap between the rich and the poor has an increasing tr

2、end. Some people believe that tech no logy available to in dividuals is the cause of it. And to some degree, I also agree with this idea.】【Today, the phenomenon that the gap between the poor and the rich is widening has captured wide concern. Some people hold the belief that it is the tech no logy a

3、vailable that leads to the in equality of econo mic status. I thi nk this view is to some degree oversimplified. /I hold con servative attitude toward this view. / I thin k, it is superficial that tech no logy is the culprit of the social imbalanee.】Questio n: whether the developme nt of tech no log

4、ies can wide n in come gap?(1) 技術(shù)的發(fā)展對(duì)于人的教育水平提出了很高的要求。處于教育資源匱乏地區(qū)的人很難掌握新的科技，因而無(wú)法從事要求較高的工作，帶來(lái)收入的減少。相反，教育資源豐富的人容易掌握高科技，提高收入。從這個(gè)角度來(lái)說(shuō)，科技在一定程度上擴(kuò)大了收入差距。Tech no logical progress has imposed a higher sta ndard for educati on because many jobs only n eed people with qualificati ons or releva nt work ing skills

5、. Un fortun ately, people from regi ons without adequate educatio n resources find it hard to lear n new tech no logies, thus un able to en gage in hi-tech work. In this knowledge-driven society, possibilities of high payment are very rare for those less educated. By contrast, qualified people can f

6、ind hi-tech work with decent pay. In this sen se, we may suggest that tech no logyis one of the con tributi ng factors to the wide ning ofin come gap.(2) 但是從另外一個(gè)角度來(lái)說(shuō)，科技發(fā)展提高了工作效率，能夠在更短時(shí)間內(nèi)，創(chuàng)造更多 的社會(huì)財(cái)富。同時(shí)創(chuàng)造了更多的工作崗位，讓更多的人有工作，有收入。因此科技發(fā)展并非 是造成貧富差距的根本原因。However, facts show that the developme nt of tech no l

7、ogies has enhanced worki ng efficie ncy. Thus more social fortune is created in shorter time period, which will be distributed to people. Objectively, if the distributi on is tran spare nt, in dividuals"wealth will in crease. In the mean time,tech no logies will create many in dustries and job

8、opport un ities. So more people will be employed and paid. From this, we can find tech no logy is, at least, not the direct and basic factor beh ind in come gap.(3) 從上面分析可以看出來(lái)，造成貧富差距的根本原因在于資源分配的不公平，尤其是教 育資源的分配。其次，稅收政策，社會(huì)保障缺乏，都是導(dǎo)致貧富不均的重要原因。As has suggested above, the un derly ing cause of in come gap

9、 lies in in equality of distributi on of resources, in particular the accessibility of educati on resources. And other factors such as the lack of social security and the imbala nee of tax policies also play a part. Therefore, the tech no logical progress is not to blame for the gap betwee n haves a

10、nd have-no ts.(2009.1.15)流程圖Some people believe that stude nts at schools and uni versities can lear n more from teachers tha n from the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（教育類 + 科技類）Stepping into new century, we find that internet has become an integral part of our life ; education i

11、s no exception. There is a perception that teachers remain the main source of knowledge for students rather than the internet. As for me, it is of some truth though we cannot deny the adva ntages of the intern et.注意區(qū)別“因特網(wǎng)（遠(yuǎn)程教育）是否可以取代傳統(tǒng)課堂教育）”。Body 1:（采取讓步論證）因特網(wǎng)的普及和發(fā)展，給我們的生活帶來(lái)了各種巨大的改變。我們 可以通過(guò)因特網(wǎng)去溝通交流，

12、甚至進(jìn)行貿(mào)易交易。在教育領(lǐng)域，我們可以通過(guò)因特網(wǎng)查閱信 息，及時(shí)了解這個(gè)世界。比如我們可以通過(guò)GOOGLE迅速的搜索我們所需要了解的作家，或者書(shū)籍。也可以隨時(shí)查閱到我們所需要的數(shù)據(jù)。但是因特網(wǎng)在目前并不能成為我們學(xué)習(xí)的主要渠道。主要原因在于，首先，因特網(wǎng)的信息量雖然龐大，但是不成體系。其次，因特網(wǎng) 信息良莠不齊，青少年往往無(wú)法區(qū)分。再次，因特網(wǎng)學(xué)習(xí)無(wú)法給學(xué)生培養(yǎng)道德品質(zhì)，審美能力。The developme nt and prevale nee of the Internet ren der us imme nse cha nges. In doma in of education, stud

13、ents can browse abundant information via the internet so as to widen their horizon. Specifically, we can search out the information about the authors or their works. And also we can download the data that we need or even borrow the books from online libraries. Despite all these advantages, the inter

14、net cannot become the main channel of study, at least in present time. At first, the in formati on from the internet is not systematic. And youn gsters cannot disti nguish whether the information is beneficial or harmful. Furthermore, students' virtues as well as values cannot be cultivated in t

15、he right way by intern et.Body 3:傳統(tǒng)的老師課堂教育有著不可替代的方面。一方面，老師傳授的知識(shí)比較系統(tǒng)，而 且詳盡。其次，老師傳授知識(shí)的過(guò)程可以互動(dòng)，解釋，答疑。再次，老師不僅僅是個(gè)學(xué)生理 論知識(shí)的輔導(dǎo)，更重要的是教會(huì)學(xué)生判斷是非。而且，老師教學(xué)有利于提高學(xué)生的品德。Teachers play a dominant role in students 'earning at universities and schools, which cannot be replaced by the internet. For one thing, the knowl

16、edge from teachers is more systematic and detailed. And the n teach ing in classes is a process of in teract ion betwee n teachers and stude nts by means of explaining and questioning. Moreover, the teachers are not only responsible for academic kno wledge cram ming, but also for the cultivati on of

17、 values.Therefore, at schools and uni versities stude nts lear n more from teachers. They can not on ly learn theoretical knowledge, but also form personality and virtues. Internet, as a new means of in formatio n cha nn el, will be helpful for stude nts 'lear ning.（2009.1.17） Line GraphNowadays

18、, people in some coun tries can choose to live and work any where they want because of the improveme nt of the tran sportati on and com mun icati on tech no logies. Discuss the ben efits and the drawbacks of the phenomenon.（社會(huì)現(xiàn)象類 ）The modern age is characterized by the increasing social mobility . P

19、eople today change their jobs periodically and move from one place to ano ther casually. The effects of this phe nomenon, both n egative and positive, are subjected to discussi on.stBody 1: advantage of living wherever they want. 1.21century is characterized by social mobility,which enables people t

20、o find more opportunities and proper jobs. And also this practice stre ngthe ns the com muni cati on of tale nts and in tellige nee. 2. This en courages the developme nt of com muni catio n and economy. 3. This gives a full play to pers onal freedom.Body 1: In the past, people were confined in certa

21、in area due to the underdevelopment of transportation and communication means. But today people can change their jobs and find the place suitable for them without con sideri ng too much.Adva ntages are obvious. This mobility canbring people more opport un ities and more choices. New places and new w

22、ork can offer people more chances to know more, thus widening their vision. In addition, people can enjoy more freedom and exercise their ability. Without restrict ions, they can choose wherever they feel fully relaxed and comfortable. Their imagination and creativity can find the right vent out.Bod

23、y 2: However, this practice may cause some n egative effects. The most no teworthy one is that quick mobility will lead to the imbalance of regional development. Naturally, talents and funds will surely flow into those developed areas, which may cause the un derdeveloped area to be even worse. What

24、'more, if this phe nomenon con ti nues in the long run, there will arise some problems much more serious. For example, the frequent migration of people will lead to the loss of some com mun ity traditi ons, cultural ide ntity and local conven ti ons. This, to some degree, is the cause of today&#

25、39;s segregati on of social groups and loose ning social relatio nships.In con clusi on, social mobility is an in evitable trend due to the developme nt of society and tech no logy. Of course, people can enjoy more freedom and opport un ities. But its n egative effects such as regi onal imbala nce a

26、nd loss of cultural traditi ons cannot be n eglected.（2009.2.7） Bar ChartSome people believe that rich coun tries provide poorer coun tries with other types of help rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（政府決策類 ）主題分析：金錢援助的弊端，有一些貧窮國(guó)家之所以貧窮是因?yàn)槿狈夹g(shù)，缺乏資源；另外一方面，也因?yàn)檫@些國(guó)家存在一定的腐敗現(xiàn)象

27、，如果給予金錢，往往被貪污。金錢援助具有 不可持續(xù)性，往往造成被援助國(guó)的懶惰，不思進(jìn)取，只會(huì)造成更加貧困。金錢援助由于缺乏監(jiān)管，往往被用作其他途徑，而不能到達(dá)民眾手中，或者無(wú)法到達(dá)所指定的用途。但是財(cái)政援助也有好處，更直接，效率更高，技術(shù)援助的周期太長(zhǎng)，不可預(yù)料因素過(guò)多。（授之以魚(yú)，不如授之以漁的道理。結(jié)合劍4閱讀small enterprise credit.）第一段：在某些不發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家，猖獗的腐敗使得經(jīng)濟(jì)援助無(wú)法真正得到使用。因此有些人提出，發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家對(duì)貧窮國(guó)家的援助應(yīng)該轉(zhuǎn)向技術(shù)，知識(shí)和教育的援助。這種看法在目前有很好的實(shí)踐意義，但是不能完全否認(rèn)金錢援助的效用。In some underdev

28、eloped countries, rampant corruption and embezzlement render financial aid unable to reach targeted victims and fulfill its original purposes. So some people put forward that rich coun tries' aid should shift to the in troduct ion of tech no logy, kno wledge and educati on. Though this suggestio

29、n is feasible and practicable, the effects of traditional financial aid cannot be denied completely.Body 1: why the shift is necessary at present?Considerable evidenee has indicated that there are numerous loopholes and defects of sheer financial aid. In some underdeveloped countries, corruption is

30、really a headache and a large amount of funds from don ati on has bee n embezzled. The fund fails to reach people in poverty and difficulty; and public facilities are out of repair due to the lack of money. In these coun tries, the lack of lawful supervision renders the financial aid an appetizing m

31、eal for local officials and an airy dream for poor people. On the other hand, the finan cial aid is not susta in able.( 在很難論證 的情況下，可以適當(dāng)?shù)剡M(jìn)行比喻)There are some similarities between financial aid and somemedicines like tranquilizer. Specifically, it can calm the patients down immediately but fails to hea

32、l his or her psychological disorders. Likewise, financial help may solve some problems superficially, but cannot remove poverty completely.Body 2: The effect of financial aid.However, it does not necessarily mean that financial aid is of no redeeming features. When we are aware of the disadvantages

33、of economic assistanee, we should not go to another extreme by stopping it completely. After all, financial aid is more effective and efficient in dealing with some emergencies. And if rightly supervised, it can also avoid the drawbacks mentioned above. (Maybe, we should beware of the possibility th

34、at some people take them as the excuse for cutt ing finan cial help to poorer coun tries.)問(wèn)題解決：是否應(yīng)該結(jié)合其他援助手段？其他援助手段有哪些。應(yīng)該明確，要結(jié)合其他手段，主要包括贈(zèng)與技術(shù)，免于收取昂貴的技術(shù)專利費(fèi)用；派遣專家團(tuán)隊(duì)；派遣醫(yī)療和教育隊(duì)伍進(jìn)入，從根本改善當(dāng)?shù)亟?jīng)濟(jì)狀況；同時(shí)，對(duì)于財(cái)政援助，應(yīng)該有國(guó)際監(jiān)督，或者由國(guó)際組織如 紅十字會(huì)負(fù)責(zé)資金的流向。(2009.2.12) Line Chart + TableThe developme nt of tech no logies is caus ing

35、 environmen tal problems. Some people believe that the soluti on is for every one to adopt a simpler way of life while others say that tech no logies can solve these problems. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion.( 科技類)Low-carb on lifestyleThese two views are not mutually exclusive.

36、Emissi on, public tran sportati on.Cut unn ecessary travels may reduce emissi on. Refuse to use plastic bags and throwaways.Overall, to lead a simpler way of life means that we should minimize our desires for relaxation and comfort. That is to say, we should be equipped with the aware ness of protec

37、t ing en viro nment. Apart from the environmental awareness, some countermeasures against pollution are in dispe nsable. Tech no logies take the cen ter stage. New engine. Waste water disposal tech no logies etc.低碳環(huán)保和技術(shù)環(huán)保The development of economy may cause the deterioration of environment. Therefor

38、e, some people may suggest the best way to stop en viro nmen tal deterioratio n is to slow dow n econo mic developme nt. What is your opinion?在討論這個(gè)主題的同時(shí)，盡量能夠把“技術(shù)”具體化為：汽車，電子產(chǎn)品，電子設(shè)備等等具 體的物件，避免空對(duì)空論證。(2009219) Bar ChartToday, most people un dersta nd the importa nee of protect ing the environment, while

39、 some people think individuals are too weak to take aetions and make a differenee. Discuss why do such people hold this opinion and tell what should be done to solve the problem. (Report)首段：Today, the deteriorati ng environment n ecessitates every in dividual ' protect ion. However, some people

40、feel frustrated due to the belief that pers onal stre ngth is too weak to combat the curre nt tendency. But in my view, though in dividual stre ngth is weak, it may be stro ng whe n comb ined together.Body 1:首先針對(duì)“個(gè)人力量太薄弱，不足以改變”，其原因；批判其不正確之處。原因之一，目前環(huán)境污染的規(guī)模很大，屬于全球問(wèn)題。第二點(diǎn)，形式很嚴(yán)峻，看起來(lái)很難改變這個(gè)進(jìn)程。第三點(diǎn)，全球環(huán)保者之間缺乏

41、有效的組織和系統(tǒng)的聯(lián)系。這三點(diǎn)原因造成了個(gè)體的環(huán)境保護(hù)者覺(jué)得力量的渺小和微不足道，甚至失望，挫折。Body 2:如何解決環(huán)境保護(hù)問(wèn)題，從個(gè)人，政府，等角度出發(fā)。NGO(2009.2.28) Line GraphSome people believe that building more sports facilities is beneficial for the public health while some others thi nk the practice has limited effects. Discuss the both viewpoi nts and give your

42、own opin io n.(政府決策類)類似于：junk food. To educate people, but the effect is limited.思考出發(fā)點(diǎn)：體育設(shè)施，公眾健康。Obesity, cardiovascular disease and insomnia are labeled as com mon compla ints suffered by moder n people. And most of them are closely associated with the abse nee of physical activities.Hen ce, it is

43、argued that the establishme nt of more sport facilities will ben efit public health. And I think it is far from eno ugh.It should be no ted that the promoti on of sport aware ness relies on more in vestme nt of sport facilities. Nowadays, despite living standard improvement, our living quality exper

44、iences a surprising deterioration, largely due to the lack of physical exercises. So the advocate of more exercise requires huge investment in building facilities. The wide availability of facilities will definitely ignite public enthusiasm of participation. The sport facilities can be established i

45、n some den sely populated com mun ities, some garde ns and even some comparatively un derdeveloped regi ons. This may ren der every in dividual access sports on a daily basis.The scarcity of facilities may play a part in people 'lack of sport aware ness, but the deep-rooted cause is manifold. Fo

46、r example, in some developed areas, the abundance of sport facilities is amaz ing, but they are rarely used. Recen tly con ducted survey in dicates that people may be exhausted after a day'stoil. And quick living tempo spares them little time to consider their health. So the most essential thing

47、 is to give people more time and leisure to participate in activities.In conclusion, the establishment of sport facilities is beneficial for the promotion of health aware ness. However, it should be en sured that people can afford eno ugh to do physical exercise; otherwise, all those facilities will

48、 be reduced to some useless exhibiti on.(2009.3.5) Bar Chart + Pie ChartNewspapers have great in flue nee on people ' opinions and ideas. What are the reasons of the phe nomenon and an alyze the positive and n egative effects of the phe nomenon. (Report)In the age of in formati on explosi on, n

49、ewspapers serve as an in dispe nsable cha nnel for people to know the outside world and make their judgme nt. But its in flue nee may be twofold; n ewspapers may be misleadi ng and exaggerati ng.參考劍橋雅思5文章報(bào)紙對(duì)于人們思想觀念的印象，其原因要從主客觀角度來(lái)分析。(主觀，客觀；直接，間接；表面，根本)個(gè)人對(duì)于世界的看法和判斷，基于其所獲取的信息，而恰恰報(bào)紙是個(gè)人獲取信息的主要渠道之一。(It is

50、 widely accepted that people 'values and perceptions towards the world is based on the in formatio n in their mi nd, while n ewspapers serve exactly as the main cha nnel of in formati on. Therefore, people's view of the world is largely determined by the media including newspapers.) 報(bào)紙業(yè)非常發(fā)達(dá)，

51、無(wú)處不在，滲透到生活的方方面面，人們充分暴露在媒體信息的狂轟濫炸之中。(Newspaper has permeated into every facet of our daily life. And people are constantly exposed to the bombardme nt of n ews and in formati on.)主觀上，人們喜歡從報(bào)紙和媒體上獲取自己所需要的信息，來(lái)佐證和強(qiáng)化自己的觀點(diǎn)； 而報(bào)紙也喜歡滿足大眾的需求，提供公眾所需要的信息，如災(zāi)難等。(Subjectively, people have theinclination to obtain i

52、nformation they are interested in, so as to certify and intensify their con ceptio ns and opinions. In the mean time, n ewspapers and broadcasters are there to provide what the public wants. That can lead to significant distortions of perception. For example, ) 影響：媒體容易嘩眾取寵，容易夸大。(Newspapers tend to b

53、e sensational and exaggerating. As for mostof the newspapers, how to win more audiences is what they focus on. So maybe it is justified for them to print some news which is eye-catching and even thrilling. And exaggeration is a freque ntly-used trick for them to capture more atte nti on from the rea

54、ders. However, even though this practice is justifiable for winning more market share, it objectively distorts public attitude and the truth.)媒體容易誤導(dǎo)讀者觀眾，容易成為某些利益集團(tuán)的工具。(2009.3.7) Bar ChartMany people believe that music plays an importa nt role in the society. Others, however, believethat music is sim

55、ply a kind of entertainment for individuals. What扌由象類)s your opinion?(Un doubtedly, music is com mon ly regarded as a means of en terta inment for people from all walks of life. But it is not absolutely restricted to amus ing people. Its fun cti ons and effects are far more than that.(高分開(kāi)頭)經(jīng)典音樂(lè)和流行音樂(lè)

56、分野：Beethove n, Bach and Han del are n ot un familiar n ames for most people all over the world. We remember them and love them not as entertainers but great artists and supervisors of our soul. Therefore, their music works are not just to entertain us but plays an important role in cultivating our m

57、ind and eve n boost the adva nceme nt of our society. It should be no ted that most popular music mainly serves as the means of amuseme nt.音樂(lè)對(duì)于社會(huì)的作用，從抽象意義來(lái)說(shuō)：也許和笑一樣，音樂(lè)通常被看做沒(méi)有實(shí)際效用和生物意義的一種多余的愉悅享受。而實(shí)際上任何一個(gè)民族都無(wú)一例外地?fù)碛凶约旱囊魳?lè)，在任何一個(gè)社會(huì)發(fā)展階段都有著不同的音樂(lè)風(fēng)格和模式。也就是說(shuō)，音樂(lè)是伴隨著社會(huì)發(fā)展的，不可或缺的一個(gè)因素。(Music bears somesimilarities t

58、o laughter: Both are defined as a kind of pleasure and amusement of no apparent social effect and biological purpose. And any nation has its own music without exception. Each social period of social development is characterized by various music styles and modes. In other words, music serves as an in

59、 dispe nsable eleme nt in the course social adva nceme nt.)總體而言，音樂(lè)是一種社會(huì)文化的反應(yīng)，它是對(duì)生活的一種抽象的，形而上的反應(yīng)。它可以充當(dāng)一種文化身份認(rèn)同，可以凝聚一個(gè)民族，凝聚公眾的力量。(In gen eral, music acts asthe reflect ion of social culture, which is abstract and metaphysical. It also is the cultural ide ntity;for example, whe n we sing the n ati onal an them, we feel un ited and a sense of bel onging to a certain culture. Music in this sense