高考英語復(fù)習(xí)備考：游記寫作指導(dǎo)

1、高考英語復(fù)習(xí)備考：游記寫作指導(dǎo)情境呈現(xiàn)假如你上周末第一次去廈門旅行，請(qǐng)寫一篇英語短文介紹此次旅行的見聞，內(nèi)容包括：.介紹景點(diǎn)；.談?wù)勀愕母惺?。注意?詞數(shù)80左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。寫作指導(dǎo)Step 1審題本次的寫作任務(wù)是寫一篇游記。游記是對(duì)某一景點(diǎn)進(jìn)行介紹和描述的文 體，即對(duì)旅游景點(diǎn)和所見所聞的描寫。同時(shí)，大概描述一下旅游的路線和 順序，使文章線索清晰，給讀者以景點(diǎn)的大致輪廓。介紹完見聞后，對(duì)此次旅行進(jìn)行簡明扼要的總結(jié)。Step 2謀篇話題某景點(diǎn)體裁游記人稱第一人稱和第三人稱時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)/一般過去時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)首段:總體介紹景區(qū)(brief introduction to the

2、tourisl attraction) 中段：具體介紹景點(diǎn)以及相關(guān)活動(dòng)(whal you saw; what you did) 尾段:簡單說明旅游時(shí)的感受(how you fell)Step 3語庫一、短語第一次 for the first time留下深亥I 的 象 leave a deep impression位于 be located/situated at/in/on各種美味的小吃 various delicious snacks被包圍 be surrounded by被吸弓I be attracted by成千上萬的游客thousands of tourists乘船 by sea/s

3、hip二、句子Step 4短文【佳作賞析】I traveled to Xiamen last weekend for the first time, which left a deep impression on me.Xiamen is located in the southeast of Fujian Province, and Gulangyu Island is one of the most famous places in Xiamen. Thousands of tourists go to Gulangyu Island every day. There is a commu

4、nity called Zengcuoan, where you can taste various delicious snacks. Xia-menUniversity is a beautiful place which you must visit. After visiting it, you can find it is a wonderful thing to go to university. Xiamen is surrounded by the sea. You can go to pick up shells and swim in the sea.In short, w

5、hat a fascinating city Xiamen is !即時(shí)訓(xùn)練假定你是李華，你的英國網(wǎng)友Tom寫郵件來詢問你一次難忘的旅游經(jīng) 歷。請(qǐng)你用英語給他回一封郵件，要點(diǎn)包括：.旅游過程；.你的感受。注意：.詞數(shù)80左右；.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Tom,Im glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.Im looking forward to going there with you next time.

6、Yours,Li Hua游記寫作答案Dear Tom,Im glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.On July 7, my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province, which is famous for the Buddha. The Buddha is really big. Looking up at the large head and the large feet, I felt I was so small. The next day, we climbed Mount Email, where there are many old temples and wild monkeys. The naughty monkeys were the most exciting things I experienced there. Toward evening we made our way back. We were all tired, but o