廣東省肇慶市四會中學(xué)2012屆高三級英語研討會公開課課件：讀寫任務(wù)

1、 四會中學(xué) 潘文娟 - Topic sentence & structure of a paragraph Task-based writing【寫作內(nèi)容】 假設(shè)你是Charlie，讀完信后，請給媽媽寫一封回信。1. 以約30個詞概括來信的主要內(nèi)容；審題人稱 第一人稱 寫作綜合訓(xùn)練(10)讀寫任務(wù)(要點(diǎn)1) Lead-in 注意主題句和關(guān)鍵詞Dear Charlie, Recently I have read an article, which Id like to share with you. “As a study suggests, every hour that an adult s

2、pends watching TV reduces life by almost 22 minutes. Watching TV for an average of six hours a day can reduce your life by five years. The research claims that such a lifestyle is as bad for health as smoking and overweight. This is because when watching TV, people tend to fall lack of exercise and

3、eat unhealthily. Another study shows that exercising for just 15 minutes a day can increase your life by up to three years. When reading this article, I couldnt help worrying about you. You used to like watching TV. When a program that you liked was on, you couldnt tear yourself away from it. You ha

4、d your meals on the sofa in front of TV and you only went to toilet when it was advertisement time. Now you live alone far away from home, I cant always tell you to pay attention to your health. But I want to remind you that such a lifestyle is bad for your health. I hope you can make some changes t

5、o it little by little. Love, Mom Possible version: From your letter, I come to know that _, especially watching it _ _, is really _ for your_, _ _can _ our life. You are _ me and _ me to _ my bad habits.watching TVa long timeforbadhealthwhiledoing exerciselengthenworried aboutwantget rid ofComparati

6、on: The letter is mainly about Charlies mother tells Charlie the bad influence of watching TV so long, and shows that she was worring about charlies health.In your letter, you said that watching TV for a long time is really harmful to health and exercise everyday can build up my body. Therefore, you

7、 want me to keep away from my bad habits. 1 4 立場錯誤;要點(diǎn)不全;語言欠準(zhǔn)確。要點(diǎn)根本齊全；語言準(zhǔn)確；有適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡語。Summing up: 寫概括，首先要利用好_ , 抓住_，省去用來支撐主題句的具體細(xì)節(jié),運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)腳，用25-35個詞概括文章的大意。要注意語言的_。關(guān)鍵詞 主題句句型 準(zhǔn)確性 【寫作內(nèi)容】假設(shè)你是Charlie，讀完信后，請給媽媽寫一封回信。1. 2. 以約120個詞介紹自己的近況，并包括如下要點(diǎn)： (1)讀信后的感受； (2)介紹目前的健康和鍛煉情況； (3)表達(dá)你自己的決心。審題時態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時為主體 I think yo

8、u are right, Mom. So far, I had spent so many time to watching TV that I havent enough to finish the homeworks. And it caused that I lack of exercises. Recently, I found that I couldnt focus my mind in class because I always felt asleep. I feel my body status is between health and unhealth now. so I

9、 make up my mind to do exercises from now on. Last, I promised you that I will get into a health lifestyle.Version 1 Mom, after reading your letter, Im lost in thought. What you said expresses your concerns to me, which makes me moved. I will fully consider your suggestion. At present, I am in good

10、condition and I have set a plan to exercise every day. First of all, in order to ensure I have enough time to study, I only watch TV in my spare time. Secondly, I always sleep and get up early, as the saying goes, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. Last but not le

11、ast, I play basketball everyday, which is helpful to relax myself even makes my stronger and stronger. In a word, what Im doing now enriches my experience and garantees my good health. Now, Mom, I promise you that I will reduce the time in watching TV and change the lifestyle about it. So, you needn

12、t worry about me so much, and everything will go well. Version 1Possible version: From your letter, I come to know that watching TV, especially watching it for a long time, is really bad for your health, while doing exercise can lengthen our life. You are worried about me and want me to get rid of m

13、y bad habits. _for what I did in the past. Im sorry that I made you worry all the time and Im also grateful that you remind me of these details. But actually I have a surprise for you_. Influenced by my fellow classmates, I have been taking part in after-class exercise _dancing, jogging, cycling and

14、 so on. Every morning, I go jogging for about twenty minutes. _, on weekends I usually go climbing or go cycling with my friends. Because of exercise Im in perfect health and Im slim now as you can see from my pictures. Ive benefited a lot from exercise and_. I will take good care of myself and I wi

15、sh you healthy and happy every day! Love, Charlie After reading your letter, I feel ashamed I have already got rid of my bad habits of watching TV and doing little exercise.such asBesidesI will keep it upExemplifying in Skills發(fā)表感想/感受的常用句型When reading the story, my tears rolled down.2) I was shocked/

16、deeply moved by the.3) After reading the story,I was lost in thought. I came to realize that.4) I feel ashamed/sorry for what I did in the past.介紹目前的健康和鍛煉情況:Eg. However, Mom, I want to tell you a good piece of news - I have got rid of my bad habit of watching TV and set a plan to take exercise every

17、 day.At present, I am in good condition and have been doing exercise regularly. As a matter of fact / In fact, 表達(dá)你自己的決心:Eg. From now on, I will make up my mind to To make you at ease, I promise (that) I will Getting benefit from exercise, Im determined to keep it on/up. Practice ?能力解讀與專項訓(xùn)練?Page 215

18、寫作綜合訓(xùn)練12 第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù) Step 1 審題，理解要點(diǎn)要求；Step 2根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，列一個寫作提綱寫出主題句及拓展句之間的銜接詞/過渡語，具體內(nèi)容用省略號代替不用寫概括Possible version: (過渡+要點(diǎn)1主題句) _ learning English is beneficial to both our life and our future careers. (過渡語) _, to learn English well is very necessary for us students. (過渡語) _, (要點(diǎn)2主題句)_. (列舉理由一) _, (列舉理由二) _, (過渡+要點(diǎn)3主題句) _ (過渡語) _, After reading the passage, I come to realize thatThereforeSince I was a primary school studentAs far as Im concerned,