第2講課堂實(shí)討論與實(shí)踐

1、PAGE PAGE 3MTI課程：非文學(xué)翻譯第2講：課堂實(shí)討論與實(shí)踐國家統(tǒng)計(jì)局：National Bureau of Statistics（專有名詞）公布：release 較為合適增加了1674元，增長12.9%：連續(xù)兩個(gè)動詞，如何處理更為合適網(wǎng)友：netizen and net friend 在金融危機(jī)的大背景下如何翻譯跟著漲如何翻譯與此形成鮮明對比:in great/sharp contrast收入感受下降不好翻，自我感覺自己翻的是漢式英語（你得想辦法譯好）背景：7月29日，國家統(tǒng)計(jì)局了上半年平均工資數(shù)據(jù)。據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)，上半年全國城鎮(zhèn)單位在崗職工平均工資為14638元，與上年同期相比，增加了16

2、74元，增長12.9%。折算下來，平均月工資為2440元，這一數(shù)字在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上被大多數(shù)網(wǎng)友質(zhì)疑。在金融危機(jī)的大背景下，房價(jià)漲了，股價(jià)漲了，收入真的也跟著漲了么？至少老百姓沒有感覺到。國家統(tǒng)計(jì)局最新數(shù)據(jù)顯示，全國城鎮(zhèn)居民可支配收入同比增加11.2%，農(nóng)村居民增8.1%，在職職工上漲12.9%，據(jù)了解，這是近10年來居民收入增幅首次超過GDP。與此形成鮮明對比，央行調(diào)查顯示，今年二季度城鎮(zhèn)居民收入感受下降，并降至10年以來的最低水平。National Bureau of Statistics released the data of the average income for the first

3、half of the year on July 29th . According to the statistics ,the average income of the staff and workers in Urban Units is 14638 yuan in the first half of the year, with an increase of 1674yuan or up 12.9% over the same period of last year . The average monthly income is 2440yuan by conversion , how

4、ever ,this figure is questioned by most netizens . Under the background of financial crisis , house prices and stock prices all have risen up .Hasthe income followed their steps ? at least Civilians havent feel so . The latest data released by National Bureau of Statistics shows that the disposable

5、income of urban residents has increased by 11.2 percent year on year , and the number of rural residents and on the job workers has risen by 8.1 percent and 12.9 percent respectively . It is said that the residents income has grown faster than GDP for the first time in recent 10 years .However , in

6、great contrast with it , the survey made by the Central Bank shows that the income feeling of urban residents fell down in the second quarter of this year , and dropped to the lowest point over the last decade . “全國城鎮(zhèn)單位在崗職工”該怎么譯？“工資”和income是一樣的嗎？“老百姓”怎樣譯？the number of rural residents and on the job

7、workers是什么意思？in great contrast with it中的it指什么？the income feeling of urban residents fell down會讓人誤解的。Under the background of financial crisis你確信這個(gè)搭配？早已經(jīng)：早不好翻譯居民消費(fèi)價(jià)格指數(shù)：專業(yè)術(shù)語負(fù)增長：negative growth按理來說不會翻當(dāng)期收入感受指數(shù)：英語的邏輯順序不會排（不會的東西就是問題，你得解決）統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)就像穿比基尼的美女統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字與現(xiàn)實(shí)情況的背離早已不是秘密，但是如此大的反差著實(shí)令人吃驚。套用一位學(xué)者的名言：統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)就像穿比基尼的美

8、女，露出的部分固然重要，遮住的部分卻更加要命。The deviation between statistics and reality has no longer a secret , but such a sharp contrast is really amazing . As a scholars famous saying goes, statistics is just like a belle in bikini whose bared parts are important, yet her covered-up parts are more important, “The de

9、viation between statistics and reality has no longer a secret”錯(cuò)句！amazing錯(cuò)譯，你去查查英英詞典！As a scholars famous saying goes是“套用”的意思嗎？statistics is just like為什么用單數(shù)謂語呢？a belle in bikini？在平均收入快速上漲的同時(shí)，居民消費(fèi)價(jià)格指數(shù)(CPI)卻仍然持續(xù)負(fù)增長，雖然幅度有所放緩。按理來說，這意味著老百姓可以過上更為愜意的生活。但事實(shí)情況并非如此，央行此前公布的調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)顯示，今年二季度城鎮(zhèn)居民當(dāng)期收入感受指數(shù)為-8.6%，比1季度大幅下

10、降20個(gè)百分點(diǎn)，是1999年開展調(diào)查以來的最低水平。居民對未來收入預(yù)期也不樂觀，并認(rèn)為物價(jià)較高的消費(fèi)者有所增多。 While the average income goes at a fast speed , the Consumer Price Index is still continuing a negative growth, although the pace is a little bit slow. Naturally , it means that people can lead a better life .However ,the truth is far from tha

11、t . The date released by the Central Bank of China shows that the income that people felt they received in the second quarter this year was indexed by -8.6% , 20 percent drop lower than that in the 1st quarter ,and reached the lowest point since the start of the survey in 1999.People are not optimis

12、tic about the future income , and the people who think the price high have increased. goes at a fast speed是“快速上漲”的意思？a little bit slow合適嗎？Naturally這是“按理來說嗎”？the truth is far from that是“事實(shí)并非如此”？The date released by什么意思? “當(dāng)期收入感受指數(shù)” 這個(gè)詞你弄懂了沒有? 20 percent drop lower than that in the 1st quarter看不懂。個(gè)體工商戶

13、個(gè)人稅前工資,并且包括個(gè)人繳納的養(yǎng)老、醫(yī)療、住房等個(gè)人賬戶的基金,包括計(jì)時(shí)工資、計(jì)件工資、獎(jiǎng)金、津貼和補(bǔ)貼、加班加點(diǎn)工資、特殊情況下支付的工資,甚至包括實(shí)物形式支付等。專業(yè)術(shù)語扣繳單位納入全員全額扣繳明細(xì)申報(bào)管理沒看明白(查資料，把它弄明白)國家統(tǒng)計(jì)局對此數(shù)據(jù)的解釋是,現(xiàn)行城鎮(zhèn)單位在崗職工工資統(tǒng)計(jì)范圍,尚未包括城鎮(zhèn)的私營企業(yè)和個(gè)體工商戶。而工資總額統(tǒng)計(jì)的是個(gè)人稅前工資,并且包括個(gè)人繳納的養(yǎng)老、醫(yī)療、住房等個(gè)人賬戶的基金,包括計(jì)時(shí)工資、計(jì)件工資、獎(jiǎng)金、津貼和補(bǔ)貼、加班加點(diǎn)工資、特殊情況下支付的工資,甚至包括實(shí)物形式支付等。The National Bureau of Statistics exp

14、lains that the statistics only covers the income of on the post workers in urban unions ,and private enterprises and self-employees havent been included.The total income includes funds of age pensions, medical insurances and housing funds, and payments of hourly wages, piece rates, bonuses, allowanc

15、es, overtime pays, payments under special conditions and even payments in kind.The National Bureau of Statistics explains the statistics currently covering the pay of laborers in employment in towns exclude private enterprises and self-employees. And the individual gross pay includes funds of age pe

16、nsions, medical insurances and housing funds, and payments of hourly wages, piece rates, bonuses, allowances, overtime pays, payments under special conditions and even payments in kind.on the post workers注意拼寫! urban unions這是什么? and合適嗎? havent been included不規(guī)范。針對社會上對平均工資數(shù)據(jù)的議論，國家統(tǒng)計(jì)局局長馬建堂表示，要改進(jìn)工資統(tǒng)計(jì)工作。他

17、透露，私營企業(yè)工資統(tǒng)計(jì)已經(jīng)開展，去年私營企業(yè)平均工資已經(jīng)統(tǒng)計(jì)出來了。因?yàn)楫?dāng)前平均工資數(shù)據(jù)還承擔(dān)了各類補(bǔ)償、賠償、社保等政策依據(jù)的功能，在和有關(guān)部門商定后，將適時(shí)公布私營企業(yè)工資數(shù)據(jù)。國家稅務(wù)總局此前也下發(fā)通知，力爭在2009年底前將全國所有扣繳單位納入全員全額扣繳明細(xì)申報(bào)管理。也就是說，從明年開始，在工資統(tǒng)計(jì)上就將有全員申報(bào)的稅務(wù)數(shù)據(jù)，到時(shí)候?qū)⒉粫俪霈F(xiàn)拿一個(gè)“尚未包括城鎮(zhèn)的私營企業(yè)和個(gè)體工商戶”的平均工資數(shù)據(jù)出來的“玩笑”了。In response to the arguments on the average income in the statistics, Ma Jiantang, t

18、he NBS Director, has indicated that the income statistics needs to be improved. He revealed statistic on the pay in private enterprises has been on the way , and the average income of last years has been finished. Since the statistics of average income function at present as the foundation for polic

19、y-making in terms of compensations, reparations and social insurances, the bureau will publicize in good time the statistics of per capita pay in private enterprises after negotiations with relevant departments and sections. The State Administration of Taxation had notified its subordinates earlier

20、this year to strive to bring by the end of 2009 all the tax-withholding agents into the system of administration of withholding and declaration of individual income tax for all taxpayers and in full amount. That is to say, from the next year onward there will be the taxation data of all incumbent pe

21、rsonnel concerning the statistics of pay. Therefore in the next year there should not be such a folly on the average pay “that not cover private enterprises and self-employees.”that the income statistics needs to be improved看不懂。statistic on the pay in private enterprises看不懂。on the way合適嗎?The Statist

22、ics Look like a Belle in a BikiniBackground: On July 29, the National Bureau of Statistics of the PRC (NBS) released the data of the average pay for the first half year. The statistics show that, in the first half of the year, the average pay of on-the-post urban workers in the country is 14,638 yua

23、n, with an addition of 1,674 yuan, or an increase of 12.9%, compared with that of the same period last year. If converted, the gain equals to a monthly pay of 2,440 Yuan. But the figure was questioned by the majority of netizens in China.Against the financial crisis, the rising housing prices and st

24、ock prices, had the pay really followed up? At least the ordinary people did not feel so. The latest data of the National Bureau of Statistics of the PRC show that the disposable income of urban residents increased by 11.2% year on year, that of rural residents by 8.1%, and that of on-the-post worke

25、rs by 12.9%. The interpretation of the data is that the income growth outnumbers the GDP growth for first time in nearly 10 years. In sharp contrast, the survey made by PRCs Central Bank showed that urban residents feel a decline of income in the second quarter of this year, and it dropped to the lo

26、west level in 10 years.Already, the discrepancy between the statistics and the reality is nothing unclear to the public, but such a large gap in between is too startling. “The statistics are like a belle in a Bikini, whose bared parts are important, yet her covered-up parts are all the more intrigui

27、ng,” to quote the popular words from a scholar. While the average income in the statistics presents a rapid growth, the Consumer Price Index is continuing a negative increase, though in a slightly slowing-down manner. Normally, that hints people can lead an easier life. However, the truth is on the

28、reverse. According to the survey made earlier by the Peoples Bank of China, the income that people felt they received in the second quarter this year was indexed by -8.6%, a 20 % sharp drop from that in the first quarter, and on the lowest level since the first survey in 1999. People who think the p

29、rices high have increased, and they embrace a pessimistic expectation on the future income.The National Bureau of Statistics explains the statistics currently covering the pay of laborers in employment in towns exclude private enterprises and self-employees. And the individual gross pay includes fun

30、ds of age pensions, medical insurances and housing funds, and payments of hourly wages, piece rates, bonuses, allowances, overtime pays, payments under special conditions and even payments in kind.In response to the criticisms over the per-capita pay in the statistics, Ma Jiantang, the NBS Director, has answered the bureau is going to improve the statistic coll